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Road Rovers: Walkies

A comic script by Gideon Kalve Jarvis

Commissioned by BLADEDGE

Author's Note: Road Rovers and related characters belong to Warner Bros. The author makes no profit through this work.

Page 1 :

Panel 1:

The scene is a beach, with the sun almost over the horizon in the background; it will soon be dark. The camera starts far out, so that two figures can be seen as outlines against the setting sun, their bodies in profile as they walk along the beach from left to right. A short distance behind them, the view is obscured by a dune, so that it is impossible to see if anyone is following them, while being subtle - the reader should not realize that the pair are, in fact, being followed.

Panel 2:

A closer view, now close enough that we can see that the pair walking on the beach are Hunter and Colleen of the Road Rovers. They are still in profile, walking side by side, with Colleen staggered very slightly behind Hunter, to better show off both characters' bodies. Colleen is wearing a Union Jack-print bikini, while Hunter is wearing a set of plain red swim trunks and a black leather jacket (he's not wearing a shirt underneath). They are both smiling, and have their eyes visibly turned toward each other. Both characters are wearing their typical red collars, and, barely visible, have leashes running off behind them, trailing offscreen to the left.

Panel 3:

Hunter and Colleen now have their heads turned slightly toward each other as they speak. Their hands are starting to reach for each other.

Colleen: See? A lot better than going for walkies.

Hunter: I guess so...

Panel 4:

Closeup on Hunter and Colleen's hands - they are now clasped.

Page 2 :

Panel 1:

Closeup on a cylindrical robot's head with a single blazing red eye, with a targeting reticule at its center. Hunter and Colleen are visible from behind, reflected in its eye. The targeting reticule has focused on their clasped hands, but this may not be so visible thanks to distance. The robot has an exclamation point above its head, and may have motion lines to indicate its alarm.

Panel 2:

The robot's perspective, the entire world with a red filter, little lines of data on either side of its round viewing lens. Hunter and Colleen are seen more clearly from behind (outlining their rumps through tight-fitting swimsuits would be especially nice, as their tails turn to the sides, entwining with each other), as is the targeting reticule focused on their clasped hands. The words "WARNING! INTIMACY DETECTED!" can be clearly seen along the top of the robot's screen.

Panel 3:

Focus on Hunter and Colleen's faces, which have comically-distorted features to make it very clear that their leashes are being pulled upon, their hands tossed up into the air with the shock of the hard tug.

Robot (from offscreen): YOU WILL CEASE INTIMATE BEHAVIOR AT ONCE!

Panel 4:

A focus on the upper halves of Hunter and Colleen, facing from the front (Hunter on the right, Colleen on the left), the two now far enough apart that the robot's upper half can be seen behind them, holding their leashes. Colleen is rubbing her neck, her eyes closed, teeth visibly clenched, and Hunter is rubbing his head, looking sheepish, with a big, silly grin and closed eyes. Hunter has an anime-style sweatdrop on his forehead.

Hunter: ...It'd be a lot more fun without the chaperone, though.

Page 3 :

Panel 1:

A full-body shot from the side, with Hunter now approaching the robot (which is a humanoid with flexible limbs and a cylindrical head with a single red eye, and an antenna sticking out of the top of its head to one side), one hand outstretched in a friendly fashion, his expression equally friendly - he is obviously trying to reason with the machine. Colleen, meanwhile, has her arms folded, and is pouting as she glares at the robot from behind Hunter.

Hunter: C'mon, 'bot. Why don't you just go back to Master? We don't really need a chaperone. After all, we're both grown dogs.

Panel 2:

The robot's position hasn't changed, but Hunter's and Colleen's stances both have. Hunter has his ears perked, mouth open, eyes wide, tail out in surprise (not comically so, however - more realistically). Colleen, meanwhile, is looking away, her folded arms turned to hugging herself, her cheeks deeply flushed in embarrassment.

Robot: Affirmative: you are both healthy adult canosapiens. Since Colleen has entered estrus, I am here to ensure no unauthorized breeding takes place.

Hunter: B-breeding?!

Panel 3:

Focus on Hunter and Colleen's upper bodies, as Hunter looks back at Colleen, who doesn't meet his eyes, still blushing deeply. Hunter looks concerned for his teammate, while Colleen looks deeply embarrassed.

Hunter: You're in heat, Colleen? Why didn't I smell it?

Colleen: Our noses don't work as well when we're canosapiens, Hunter. You'd have to be a lot closer to notice.

Panel 4:

Focus on Colleen's face, as she now looks earnestly at Hunter (presently offscreen).

Colleen: But I trust you, Hunter. I know you wouldn't do anything to me that I didn't want.

Page 4 :

Panel 1:

Closeup on Hunter's face. His mouth is slightly open at Colleen's revelation, and it's obvious he's processing what she's just told him. There are the slight lines of a smile at the corners of his mouth, though, making it clear that he's not unhappy with this new information - at all. He has a slight flush to his cheeks.

Hunter: I would not have predicted this.

Panel 2:

Side-view, upper-body focus. Hunter is now addressing the robot, hands out, obviously trying to be persuasive. The robot, however, appears as unmoved as a robot possibly can look. Colleen is to the far right of the picture, arms folded, a nonplussed "What" expression on her face as she glares at the robot.

Hunter: C'mon, robot. You've got better things to do tonight, don't you? After all, walking a pair of dogs is one of the most boring things in the world.

Robot: NEGATIVE. CHAPERONING IS MY PRIMARY FUNCTION.

Panel 3:

Hunter now has his arm around the robot's shoulders, and has a big, cheesy grin on his face as he tries to fast-talk the machine. Colleen, meanwhile, has turned, so that only her tail (and perhaps a bit of her rump) is visible as she walks offscreen, perhaps with some motion lines to make her movement more obvious.

Hunter: Buddy! Robo-pal! Can't you see we'll be just fine without you? There's no need to worry about us getting into any trouble.

Robot: NEGATIVE. YOU ARE HEALTHY CANOSAPIENS. THE MASTER IS UNINTERESTED IN PUPPIES AT THIS TIME. MY PRIMARY FUNCTION IS TO ENSURE YOU BOTH REMAIN...

Panel 4:

Hunter's eyes are _huge_and his jaw dropped as Colleen shoots past his face with a full flying kick, his arm still where he'd had it when the robot was still under the arm. Colleen has just smashed her foot into the robot, her expression one of bared, gritted teeth and full frustrated fury. The robot is tumbling back, nuts and bolts and other parts flying everywhere, its arms flailing, releasing the leashes in its hands.

Colleen (sharp-edged "explosion" word bubble): MERENGUE!

ROBOT (the words trailing off in an arch as the robot falls): CELIbatdrrrr...

Page 5 :

Panel 1:

The scenes to follow are still from the waist up (or perhaps slightly below). Hunter is still standing where he was, eyes wide, jaw dropped, arm upraised as though still resting on the robot's shoulder. Neither the robot nor Colleen are presently visible.

Panel 2:

Hunter is still where he was. Colleen is now back on the screen, a smug smirk on her face, both leashes in her hand as she walks toward Hunter.

Panel 3:

Colleen sweeps Hunter off his feet, kissing him passionately. Hunter's eyes have turned to big hearts now.

Panel 4:

Now Hunter takes control of the kiss, reversing their positions so that he's on top.

Panel 5: A puff of motion-line smoke is visible, as Colleen and Hunter both drop off the bottom edge of the screen, and out of sight of the reader. Two little hearts float up on the ends of lines from the no longer visible characters.

Page 6 :

Panel 1:

A scene from the shore. In the foreground, the head of the robot is lying next to Colleen and Hunter's discarded swimsuits (and Hunter's jacket) and their leashes. In the background, the now-naked canosapiens (except for their red collars, which are still present) are playing with Hunter's tennis ball, though they are only just visible as silhouettes at this range, with the setting sun behind them. Hunter has just thrown the ball to Colleen, and it is just about to land in her hands. Until further notice, both Hunter and Colleen are completely naked except for their collars.

Panel 2:

Focus on Colleen from the rear, who has a baseball pitcher's stance, the tennis ball in her hand, one leg raised. Hunter is visible in the background, eagerly waiting for her to throw the ball, his tail wagging.

Panel 3:

Colleen throws the ball, her breasts visibly swaying as she bends forward to do so. Hunter can be seen running to meet the ball in the background.

Panel 4:

A focus on Hunter from the front. Hunter jumps to catch the ball, snagging it in his mouth, his sac and sheath clearly visible, and likely bouncing a bit, as he hangs in the air at the moment of capture.

Page 7 :

Panel 1:

Now it's Hunter's turn to get a rear-view focus as he bends forward like a competitive baseball pitcher, smiling as Colleen while she waits in the background, slightly crouched and ready to move.

Panel 2:

Hunter throws the ball, while Colleen snags it in her hands in the background.

Panel 3:

Rather than throwing it back, Colleen starts to run off with the ball with a wicked grin, turning to face away from Hunter as he stares after her, open-mouthed.

Hunter: Hey!

Panel 4:

Focus on Colleen as she runs, the tennis ball in one hand, grinning widely. Hunter's hands and one knee can just barely be seen on the left side of the panel.

Hunter (word bubble coming from off camera): Come back here!

Page 8 :

Panel 1:

Now both Hunter and Colleen are fully visible, Hunter closing fast on Colleen as he chases her, one hand outstretched to grab her. Colleen's expression is lighthearted and teasing as she glances back at Hunter, while Hunter's expression is mock-angry with a big grin revealing his true feelings.

Colleen: Catch me if you can, Hunty!

Hunter: Oh, I'll catch you, all right!

Panel 2:

Hunter has just grabbed Colleen's arm, and the two canosapiens are in the process of coming to a sudden halt, starting to tumble forward as Colleen is turned partway around, now mostly facing the reader thanks to the sudden grip to her arm. Both characters still look happy, Colleen especially.

Hunter: Gotcha!

Colleen: Eeeee!

Panel 3:

Both characters are lying on the sand, Colleen underneath, facing up, and Hunter on top. Hunter rests one hand to Colleen's side, while the other grips both her wrists, holding them above her head. The tennis ball has fallen out of Colleen's hands, and is lying nearby on the sand. Their expressions haven't changed yet.

Hunter: Now you're all mine.

Panel 4:

Now both characters' expressions have changed, growing more uncertain, more shy, their cheeks flushing as they realize the potentially sexual nature of their position.

Page 9 :

Panel 1:

Focus on the upper bodies of the two characters, Hunter's muzzle now very close to Colleen's. Colleen looks just a little bit uncertain of herself.

Colleen: Hunter?

Hunter: I can smell you, Colleen.

Panel 2:

Hunter and Colleen kiss passionately.

Panel 3:

Colleen's head is tilted up, biting her lower lip and gripping the sand beneath her as Hunter licks her cheek. One of Hunter's hands is squeezing Colleen's breasts.

Panel 4:

Now Colleen's mouth is open, and she is obviously crying out in passion, as Hunter kisses the side of her neck. Both his hands are now actively mauling her breasts.

Page 10 :

Panel 1:

The view shifts to the side as Hunter crouches on the opposite side of Colleen from the viewer, kissing his way down her body. In this panel, he is in the act of licking one of her breasts, his broad pink tongue right in the motion of stroking across her perked nipple.

Colleen: Ah!

Panel 2:

Hunter is now kissing Colleen's flat tummy. One of his hands is stroking the rest of her stomach. The other is just starting to stroke between her legs, hooking into the cleft of her cunny.

Colleen: Hunter!

Panel 3:

Hunter has one of Colleen's legs lifted, and is slowly licking the sensitive spot right behind her knee, holding it up with one hand. His fingers on the other hand have started to visibly pump into Colleen's very juicy sex. Colleen's back is arched, her breasts thrust upward, her eyes closed, mouth wide open.

Colleen: Oh Hunter!

Panel 4:

From Colleen's point of view, we look down her body, to where Hunter is now kissing her inner thigh, just a scant distance from her slit, one hand still holding her leg up and parted to the side. Colleen is visibly gushing juices now, obviously having a squirting orgasm as Hunter's fingers on his other hand stroke her insides.

Page 11 :

Panel 1:

Dutch angle with a view of Hunter's head as he presses his tongue up against Colleen's quim, both his hands now gripping her inner thighs, holding them apart as her inner labia start to visibly distort, parting around Hunter's steady tongue pressure. Colleen's tailhole is visible from this position, and her hips are arched upward.

Colleen (from offscreen): OOOH!

Panel 2:

A closeup on Hunter's face from the top as he squeezes his muzzle tightly against Colleen's cunny, obviously having thrust his tongue deep inside of her. His eyes are squeezed shut, and Colleen's hands have grabbed his head, while the toes of her outthrust feet are curling, her legs thrust straight out in the throes of an absolutely intense series of orgasms.

Colleen: HUNTER!

Panel 3:

Now it's Colleen's turn. The scene is pulled out a little, so we can see all of both characters Hunter is kneeling on the sand, his legs spread apart, his body facing toward the viewer, hips slightly outthrust. Colleen has her hind end and absolutely soaked sex pointing toward the viewer as well, her tail raised to give a very clear view of Hunter's handiwork. Presently, Colleen is cupping Hunter's large sac, while she licks his erect penis. Hunter's eyes are half-closed, his mouth just slightly parted, obviously moaning in pleasure.

Panel 4:

Hunter's point of view as we look down at Colleen. She is looking up at Hunter with an eager-to-please, hopeful expression, her hand wrapped around the base of his penis, while she takes most of the rest of his shaft into her mouth, her cheeks hollowed out as she sucks on his cock.

Page 12 :

Panel 1:

Focusing the view on Colleen's body, with Hunter's lower part visible. Colleen has her head pressed all the way down on Hunter's cock, his balls up against her chin, while she grips his inner thighs with her hands. A bulge can be seen in her neck as she deep-throats Hunter.

Panel 2:

Colleen pulls her head back, her tongue out, a line of saliva connecting her tongue's tip to the tip of Hunter's penis. She is obviously coughing a little. One of her hands is still on the base of Hunter's penis, squeezing it firmly, but not painfully so.

Panel 3:

While Hunter is still kneeling where he was, his face almost awestruck as we pull back enough to see all of both characters again, Colleen is now in the act of getting onto all-fours, facing away from Hunter. Her head is turned so that she can look back at him, even as she points her bottom towards him, her tail raised high. Colleen's cheeks are deeply flushed, and she is panting, dripping almost as much from her tongue as from her wet cunny, which is visibly dripping onto the sand.

Colleen: Mate with me, Hunter. I need you so bad.

Hunter: B-but you'll get pregnant!

Panel 4:

Hunter's point of view, with his penis pointing straight at Colleen's absolutely soaked cunny, her tailhole also visible right above. She is looking back at Hunter with an expression of sexual desperation, her tongue lolling out as she continues to pant.

Colleen: I don't care, Hunter! I want your puppies! I want you!

Page 13 :

Panel 1:

Shift to a side view. Hunter grips the base of Colleen's tail with one hand, and grips his cock with the other, pressing the tip up against the folds of Colleen's sex. Colleen is looking over her shoulder at Hunter, her eyes wide, bright, and eager. Her fingers are splayed out on the sand.

Panel 2:

Hunter starts to squeeze his penis into Colleen, about half his length inside her now as he continues to kneel behind her. He is still gripping the base of her tail, but one of his hands has gone to her presented rump. Colleen is now facing forward, her mouth open in an obvious cry of pleasure, her head tilted slightly upward, her fingers gripping the sand beneath tightly.

Panel 3:

Hunter's hips visibly slap against Colleen's bottom (perhaps with a drawing to indicate the action of impact), both his hands now on her bottom, squeezing it tightly. He is slightly hunched forward, his teeth grit tightly, his eyes also squeezed tight shut. Colleen's front half has fallen forward, while her back half is presented eagerly, her tail turned to one side of Hunter's hips (the side opposite the reader's viewpoint, so it's not in the way), the leg closest to the viewer slightly forward, to give a good view of where Hunter is filling her up. Colleen's face is one of sexual bliss, her tongue lolling out, her eyes rolled heavenward.

Panel 4:

Now that he's stretched her out, Hunter starts to hump Colleen, with visible motion lines. Colleen's breasts and Hunter's balls both bounce with the impact, their moving bodies creating a blur effect.

Page 14 :

Panel 1:

Hunter's point of view as he looks straight down at Colleen's bottom, his cock pulled halfway out of her cunny, visibly glistening with her juices. Her tailhole should be clearly visible in this position.

Panel 2:

Impact lines come off from where Hunter's hips slap Colleen's rump as he thrusts his cock into her right up to the hilt.

Panel 3:

A view from behind Hunter, showing both him and Colleen, with a focus on Hunter's bottom, raised tail, and clearly-visible balls as action and impact lines make it clear that he is pounding Colleen with all his might. Hunter's face is visible, his teeth tightly-clenched as he is hunched over her, and he is obviously right on the edge. Colleen's face is also visible, her head up, mouth open, still obviously wailing loudly as she is still being wracked by almost constant, nonstop orgasms.

Panel 4:

A view from the front, focusing especially on Hunter's and Colleen's expressions as Hunter arches his back, his head lifted now, spurts of white semen visible to either side and underneath Colleen as Hunter finally reaches orgasm. Colleen's mouth is still open, while Hunter's mouth has also just opened, his head tilted slightly back as he is obviously crying out in his own peaked pleasure.

Page 15 :

Panel 1:

A scene from behind, as Hunter sits on a slight dune overlooking the ocean, with Colleen resting her head in his lap, one of Hunter's arms resting on Colleen's shoulder. Both are still naked, except for Hunter's jacket, which is wrapped around Colleen, and mostly in shadow thanks to the low-hanging sun, which has almost set. Their bodies are sufficiently visible to give the viewers a decent cheesecake butt shot all the same.

Panel 2:

A view from the front, with a slight diagonal-downward tilt to the camera, to look down on Hunter and Colleen as they hold their same position from Panel 1, but from a different angle, and with more light. Hunter's penis is still out of his sheath, but soft (though still glistening with Colleen's juices), while Colleen can be seen to be leaking copious amounts of cum from her cunny. Both are facing out to the ocean, happy, contented smiles on their faces.

Panel 3:

Hunter smiles down at Colleen, who is looking up at him, her mouth open as she speaks.

Colleen: That was wonderful, Hunter.

Panel 4:

Closeup on Colleen's beautiful, afterglow-flushed face. Her expression is lightly mischievous, and also lightly seductive.

Colleen: Ready for another go?