My Winged Lover
This isn't my first story, but I did find the characters to be lacking depth. Conctructive critisism is greatly welcome.
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My Winged Lover
Pale moonlight shone over my head. It almost killed me that this was the only time I could be out dressed like I was. However nighttime is not the time for a young girl fox to roam around the city.
Yet, I was a fox boi, I still got hit on though. I had on a black skirt that almost showed off my pink panties. A black corset sat on top. It was tight but I knew I looked hot in it. I use to wear high heels when I went out too, but those are hard to walk in so I eventually stopped. The black boots worked just as well, I especially like its purple lace around the edges. I liked looking like a Goth girl, I'm not sure why. I even had on black lipstick.
I couldn't stop looking at my hands though. I loved the look of my hands in fingerless pink gloves. They went up to my shoulders and had little black bat wings on the wrists. I loved the way the color went with my brown fur.
There wasn't much for a fifteen year old to do after dark, but I loved walking around. Sometimes guys would pick me up and we would make out, but I always stopped things before they got to serious and my secret was revealed. I'm jus glad that the waistband of my panties was tight, otherwise everyone would see my erection I had all the time.
This night though, everything seems too quiet. No guys had checked me out so far, I was probably going to head home soon. Well I was going to head home but there was a handsome bat heading towards me.
He had both his ears pieced four times. His bat wings made it so he couldn't wear a shirt and I cold see his chest, it wasn't muscular but it was slim. He had a pair of thick black pants on and his feet were bare.
He stopped in front of me and smiled. "Hello there young lady." He said.
I blushed under my fur at young lady. "Hi." I replied.
"What are you doing way out here at this time of night?" He took a step closer and made me realize just how tall he was.
"Just, going for a walk."
"Why walk when you can fly." The bat set the thumb of his wing on my shoulder.
"Well sir, I don't even know your name."
"You can call me Zach. But what's the name of a pretty girl such as yourself?" He leaned in, and I looked up into his eyes ad was enchanted in that moment. I could feel is breath on my face and I inhaled deeply his scent.
"I'm Chuck..." My eyes got wide as I realized what I said only after had said it. "It's short for... Charlotte."
"Hmm..." He smiled, "I like Chuck better." His other wings thumb sat on my other shoulder. "So how about that flight Chuck?"
"How would you carry me with out your wings?" My hand caressed one of his thumbs.
"Just wrap your arms around my neck and we can go Chuck."
With a smile on my face I put my arms around Zach's neck and said, "Where would we be going?"
"To my place, it's just a few blocks away Chuck."
"Well okay, maybe for just a little while."
I wrapped my arms tighter and he started to flap his wings. As my feet lifted off the ground I squeaked as I realized I had never flown before. "Just relax Chuck, find a place for those feet and make your self comfortable." I wrapped my legs around his and we were off. I could feel air moving below me and I shut my eyes tight.
I focused on his body against mine. My fingers ran through the thick light brown fur around is neck. I could feel the bulge in his pants pressing up against my crotch. His body heat warmed me as we flew through the cold night air.
"Where almost there Chuck." Zach shouted over the wind in my ears. I could feel us slowing down and lower to the ground. We landed and I got down and looked at the apartment complex we landed in front of. It was a red brick building with a dim light flickering over the front door. "This is it Chuck."
He set a wing on my shoulder and guided me to the front door. "I'm on the first floor Chuck. Right this way." Zach opened the door with his wing and we went in and down the hall. My heart thumped in my chest as I tried to thin of a way out if I had to leave.
He opened his door and we went in to his apartment. "Why don't you sit on the couch and I'll join you in a moment."
Zach went somewhere else in his house as I sat on the couch. I looked around the room, he had bookshelves along two walls just stuffed with boos. A TV sat across from the couch and various game systems sat around it. A few games sat on the coffee table in front of me.
"Back." Zach said walking into the room. My heart stopped and my eyes got wide as I saw a wine bottle in his hands. Seeing my reaction he said, "Don't worry its sparkling cider. I don't like alcohol myself." He set it on the coffee table with two wine glasses and poured cider in them then handed me one.
"So," He said sitting close to me, "What were you doing out there Chuck?"
I smiled and gave a little laugh, "I really was just taking a walk."
"Well, I believe you then." He leaned in really close.
I leaned in too, his flat nose rested against mine. "Well thank you for believing me."
Then our lips brushed together and a wave of excitement went through me. We kissed then we kissed again hard. His tong worked its way into my mouth and mine pressed against his. They embraced each other and my tong was pressed down and his explored my mouths secrets.
My hand let go of the wine glass and it fell to the floor spilling the cider. Both my hands found new homes in his neck fur. I wrapped it around my fingers, one hand got loose and started to glide down his chest. My index finger started to trace circles around his nipple. His sent and taste seemed almost too much for me.
Then his wings thumb hooked itself on my skirt and started to pull down.
Things started to excel too quickly and as much as I wanted too, I had to stop. And I wanted to stop and pull away but it was too good. I just wanted to wait a moment more before stopping, just savor the taste of him in my mouth. The skirt was around my thighs and his thumb was inching up to the panty line. I had to stop. I pushed Zach away from me. "I got to stop there."
"It's okay Chuck." His thumb rested on my bulge. "I-" He looked down and smiled. "Oh, I see. Well this is a surprise, but I don't think I care Charlotte."
He embraced me with a kiss as he undid my corset. Zach slid it off of me and whispered in my ear, "Lets go to the bed, Charlotte." He got up holding my hand with his thumb, I let my skirt fall to the ground.
We were going to go all the way, I told myself, I was going to do it. We went into the bedroom and he said to me, "Why don't you help me with my pants Charlotte?"
I smiled and undid the button letting his pants letting it fell off of his slender frame. His white underwear bulged out and started to tent. "So Charlotte," His wings thumb brought my chin up to look at him. "Is this your first time?"
I blushed, "Yes." I sat down on the bed and looked up at him hooking my panties with a thumb and he did the same. We both pulled down and I saw his cock, it was larger tan I thought, definitely larger than mine.
"I'll have to go slow then."
His hard cock stood straight out as he walked up to me and pulled my panties the rest of the way down. He gently flipped me around and I laid on the bed belly down. His cock head pressed against my hole, and his wings thumb played with my already hard cock.
Zach slowly pushed his bat cock forward on my ass. I cried out as he stretched my virgin hole out for the first time. His thumb played along my shaft sending waves of pleasure though me. He continued to shove inch by inch into me. Gasped as he got in all the way. My heart was thudding in my chest again and pre leaked from my own cock.
The bat started to pull out. Every centimeter was wonderful. Than he thrust back in, slowly pumping as we went. I moaned as I felt pleasure wrack my body and I could hear Zach breathing out hard on every thrust.
"So, Charlotte," He spoke through thrusts, "Are you, a pretty girl?"
"Yes, oh yes." I replied, his thumb was curled around my cock and stroked it hard.
"Are you, my little girl?"
"Yes, of course!" I gasped in pleasure.
"Does that, make me, your daddy?"
"God yes!"
"You promise to be my little girl, forever?"
"Yes Daddy! Yes!"
With one final thrust he cummed inside of me. I felt him filling my up with hot seed. I was close to cumming myself, but Zach's thumb left my cock and he rolled onto the bed still inside of him so I was laying on his chest.
He started to stroke me cock again and asked, "Who am I?"
"My Daddy."
"And who are you?"
"Your little girl.
"And what are little girls good for?"
"Being pretty."
He slowed down and stopped again. "Close, what are little pretty girls good for?"
I knew the answer and said it slowly, wanting to say it and not wanting to at the same time, "Being Daddy's, Fuck toy..."
"Good girl Charlotte."
His thumb wrapped around my cock again and started to pound hard. I felt it coming, but held back, I didn't want this to be over. My breath got stuck in my throat as it all came out shooing onto my chest. His wings wrapped around me and I fell asleep in his embrace.
When we woke up we just sat there and cuddled. Zach told me about how he had seen me a few nights ago and how he had planned the whole thing. He told me I was even more special then he thought I was. He told me that he was proud of his little girl for doing what I did.
Later, Zach dropped me off at home. On the way home we had stopped and picked up some things from the store that he gave me at the door. He gave me a whistle before he left. He said that any time I wanted him to give him a call with the whistle and he would come, as long as when he wanted me he could take me. I told him that he could take me whenever he wanted. Last thing he gave me was a collar to wear and remember him by.
It was pink with dark purple frills along the edge and a black bat on the front to go under my chin. It also had a large black ribbon on the back, he said it was to make me look even prettier. The tag said Daddy's little girl.