Caprice
Alright, so here's chapter two, it's a bit more verbose, which is hopefully a good thing. As before, please look for things that could be better and comment. I'm still finding my style as a writer and learning the mechanics of fiction writing, I'd...
Out in the country
So this is my first go in a long time at writing fiction. I really do enjoy constructive feedback, so go ahead, tear my work apart, I'll learn from it. This is the first part of what I hope will become something larger, so stay...