Watcher of the Vale

Story by ReynartWrites on SoFurry

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A mouse who makes a living doing errands and odd jobs for people much richer than she is, goes out to find herself a flower in a dangerous valley that just might get her killed, or at least she thinks that. It is there that she meets the gardener of the flowers that she needs and decides to make a trade.


An endless sheet of clouds covered the sky over a vale surrounded by mountains. The clouds seemed to end at the edge of the mountainous border even when the region just outside of the vale had nothing but clear skies. At times, the clouds would grow grey and let loose rain and at times they would grow darker and let snowfall, but they would never fade away. Trees grew all over the vale and grew tall enough to reach into the heavens and breach the great sheet of clouds where their branches split off and let great hanging leaves fall beneath just under the surface of the clouds. Down below in the vale itself a fog rolled over the ground that seeped through the grass and moved about in strange and almost unnatural ways. Off in the distance, one could hear the sound of thunder rumbling, but it was almost calm, like a gentle snoring rather than a roar. The thunderous vale was the name of this place and magic twisted about every tree and stone of the vale. Many rare and valuable things grew in the vale and it was home to strange creatures that lived there keeping to themselves. At the edge of the vale where the sea of heaven-born trees began, a mouse with dark brown fur and red eyes made her way through the foggy grass with a cloak held tight around her body and a bow at her back.

Ciela trotted through the foggy vale while looking around and up at the great trees. She had never seen anything quite like it and had never thought she would really. The mouse had a seemingly simple reason for being in the vale for the first time, and that was survival. Her livelihood was built on being a hunter and scout that traveled the land offering her services to find and deliver specific items to her clients. This client had been adamant about claiming a flower that grew only near the center of the vale where lightning could occasionally be seen striking. Even from where she was standing she could hear the thunder and see the flash of lightning striking down in that one specific spot. It was around that area that she would find the flower that her client had asked for and had already paid a good amount for. Usually, she might've thought to ignore this job since it was in such a dangerous place, but even she couldn't help but feel curiosity creeping up on her better senses, and so here she was.

Even though it was Spring, the air within the vale felt cool and crisp as if she were taking a walk on a cool Winter morning. As cold as the vale was, there didn't seem to be a heavy breeze, only the occasional brush of air across her fur. Stepping through the fog she made her way towards the sound of thunder where she knew she would find the flower. Occasionally her eyes trailed up to the sky where the clouds seemed so peaceful until their stillness would be broken by a crack of lightning flashing across the clouds before striking down towards the earth. It was a terrifying jagged cut of blue across the sky, but the thunder that was created by the strike seemed like the purr of a kitten to her. She'd heard much worse in storms outside of the vale and wondered how could something so powerful seem so peaceful.

Ciela's ears perked as she heard the rustling of bushes nearby and she turned her head and drew her bow. From the quiver, at her hip, she pulled an arrow to nock it, but when she took aim she found that there was not only nothing there, but that the bushes were already still. Strange. She felt her fur standing on end, but perhaps that was just the lightning, and perhaps it was her gut telling her she was in some sort of danger. Regardless of how she felt, she kept her bow out and an arrow ready just in case something dangerous showed its face and she moved on deeper within the vale.

Deep in the vale, the lightning struck a clearing where no trees existed. Ciela peeked through the brush and expected to see nothing but charred earth, but what she saw had her eyes wide and sparkling with awe. There were flowers blooming all over the clearing and when the lightning struck, the flowers seemed to absorb the light and rather than turn aflame, they began to glow for a few seconds with the same electric light before settling down. Ciela sat there in the bushes watching and she remained as still as she could manage as she wondered when the right time to go and grab a single flower was, but as she waited she saw something else strange appear.

From beyond the trees and cloaked in fog came a large reptilian creature on all fours with snow-white fur trailing down its back. It had a long tail that lashed about from side to side, but no wings so it couldn't be a dragon. She figured that the creature must be some kind of drake that only lived within the Vale and she watched with extra curiosity as it stepped to the center of the clearing to dip down low and press its snout against one of the many flowers. She heard the sky rumbling and thought to get up and yell for the creature to flee before they were nothing more but a stain on the flowers, but something kept her from moving and her red eyes were focused on the drake standing calmly in the center of the clearing full of flowers.

The mouse then squeaked as lightning crashed down onto the creature, but just like the flowers the creature only seemed to glow for a moment before turning back to their regular shade of white, their horns sparking with the electricity that had just shot down on them. Her heart thumped firmly against her chest and she let out a sigh of relief as she took note of the fact that the new creature was perfectly fine. Her mouth shut tight then as she saw steely blue eyes looking in her direction.

At first, she thought to run, but then she heard the creature's bassy voice boom through the forest, "Be you friend or foe?"

Ciela had not expected the monster to speak, let alone for it to have a voice that seemed so kind and yet so full of authority. Running seemed like a wise option if she desired a quick and painful death. If that beast took a bolt of lightning to the headpiece then she'd most likely be blasted by some sort of magic or chased down in a few seconds. Out of the bush, she came with her bow on her back and her arrows secure inside of her quiver as to not appear threatening in any way.

Again the creature asked when he saw her, "Friend or foe?"

Ciela rubbed at the back of her neck, "I...I suppose friend! I really would rather not die to be honest, and uh, I really didn't come here looking to fight."

The drake's mouth pulled back to reveal an impressive row of fangs displayed with a grin, "I see. Honest that you'd lie just to live. What is your purpose here? Are you perhaps a poacher?"

The mouse took note that the word, 'poacher,' had been spat rather than just said. Lucky for her, she was no poacher and so she answered, "Not at all. I'm just here to grab a flower and leave. One of those there in fact. I'm doing it for compensation, not really for noble deeds, just y'know, need to survive."

For a moment she thought that answer might have been too honest, but the smile remained and the creature simply laid down with front arms crossed and piercing blue eyes appraising her. Its tail coiled around its back and flicked as it snorted, "I see. Survival is important and understandable, but you see, what if I told you that I spend a lot of time and energy making these flowers here?"

"You make them?"

The drake nodded, "Yes. This is my garden where I feed the earth my magic and cultivate these flowers simply because they are pretty. Are they not beautiful?"

"Well, yes, but I don't think you'd mind one being gone from your collection. Of course, I have no real say in it since you're y'know, a giant hulking drake and I'm a tiny mouse."

The drake huffed, "Rude child. I am neither hulking nor giant and my name is Sirun. Refer to me as such and perhaps request properly what you desire instead of just making assumptions."

Ciela resisted the urge to chuckle at the haughty nature of the drake and brought herself to stand at attention somewhat respectably. She took one paw and placed it against the opposite shoulder and inclined her head as she asked, "Please sir may I take one of your flowers and be on my merry way to earn my meal?"

When she raised her head, Sirun chuckled. She thought she had him won over, that is, until he responded with a simple, "No."

"No?"

Again he repeated, "No."

Ciela thought for a moment before sighing, "You want something in return."

Sirun nodded, "Is that not how trading works? I have something that I value dearly, and you must give me something that you value dearly."

Ciela snorted, "Well! I doubt you take gold and what I have on me isn't exactly something that you want I think."

The drake stared at her with a strange glint in his eyes that the mouse took note of. He smirked and leaned in close with that glint turning into a visible shimmer as he spoke, "So you might as well take off everything that isn't of value to me."

The mouse raised a brow and she crossed her arms, "Hm, if I did that then I'd be nude."

Sirun answered with a rumble that seemed to be mimicked in the skies, "Why, that is the point, isn't it? I offer a flower for yours. These flowers are just as rare as the presence of another living breathing creature. Normally I'm left with grinding against objects and my own mouth, but I'd much rather you."

Ciela felt her cheeks burn but she only smirked and brought up two digits, "Two flowers for my virginity. Not just one."

Sirun raised a brow, "Oh? A pure maiden."

"The purest you'll ever get out here probably! I've kissed and touched but never had anyone inside, so two flowers I think will do for that."

Sirun grinned, "Until I'm satisfied?"

Ciela huffed, "Please! I don't know how many times that would be."

With a flash of light, the creature was suddenly right next to her, his head craned and near her own and his side pressed against the back of her head as he spoke, "Four flowers for as many times as I desire, any hole, no pulling out should I wish."

Ciela felt her throat run dry. She knew that she might as well be resigning herself to not being able to walk for quite some time, but the mouse also figured that the more flowers she got back the more commission she would earn for doing a good job, and so she took the clasps of her cloak and worked them apart to toss it off along with her belt and equipment.

"Four flowers for my virginity and we keep going until you're satisfied."

Another flash of light appeared before her eyes, except this time she found that her own body had been moved to the center of the clearing where she was now lying back against the softness of the flower petals. When she tried to get up, her nose met the tip of the creature's cock and her eyes moved to see that he had positioned himself right over her.

A purr rumbled from the drake's throat, "Lip service first."

Ciela had already agreed to the act, but she certainly felt intimidated by what was right in front of her eyes. She gripped onto the shaft and looked it over, her heart beating faster by the second. It was a thick thing that her paw could only barely grip. It was a bit thinner towards the tip but much fatter towards the base with a slight knot that made her tremble and wonder if she could actually fit all of that inside of her when the time came.

She squeaked as she felt the beast thrust against her paw so the tip poked up against her nose. Ciela could understand the message and opened her mouth to plant her lips on the tip to suckle gently while she stroked back and forth. This, she had done before. She had to admit that she wasn't the purest of maidens. She had often gotten on her knees to earn a bit of extra coin and now she was doing that for a flower. It shouldn't be so hard, except for the fact that she had never handled something this big before.

With both paws on the shaft, she worked to stroke it as softly as she could manage while she began to bob her head back and forth. She felt his cock brush against the inside of her cheek as she brought her tongue around it. The drake let out a low rumbling purr that urged her to continue and she felt his cock start to twitch and throb against her tongue which was most definitely a good sign.

Part of her eager movements was the fact that she wanted to do a good job to earn a hefty compensation, but another part of her found some sort of excitement in handling such a big thing. She could feel the weight of his cock pulsing against her tongue as she bobbed forward. Thick pre had already begun gathering at the back of her tongue and she swallowed the salty substance only for more to flow and she had to wonder, how big would his orgasm be? She couldn't help but tremble as she thought of him plowing her with such a big tool and it drove her to drag her mouth further and further down his cock until she started gagging at around halfway.

The drake grunted as she stopped and he began moving his hips and whining, his need clear as his cock dipped deeper into her mouth and against her throat. She could have brought her paws up to tap his side to let him know that what he was doing was to much, but instead, she remained still while he began to rut her mouth as if he were fucking her. Slow thrusting turned to violent and furious pounding in no time at all and Ciela found her mind growing foggy as she brought her paws away from his cock to dip down between her legs and grip at her crotch. Two digits found her slit and parted her cunt to press inside slowly while her other paw pushed and searched for the clit. It was getting harder to breathe, but feeling the force of his cock against her throat made her fixate on the fact that all of that strength would be used to break her in and use her for the first time. What would have spawned terror in most only seemed to bring her pleasure as she continued to suck down his every single thrust without recoiling or pushing away.

Sirun's vicious pounding did not cease but through his moans, he was whimpering, "Forgive me, I can't stop myself!"

While the drake seemed intent on apologizing while he continued to pound at her throat and senses, Ciela was content with pressing her digits deep inside of herself to work and stretch her cunt to prepare for the fat cock she was hungering for. While her digits worked and her mind was stuck in a cloud, she felt the drake's member start to twitch inside of her mouth violently. Her eyes opened wide as she felt her mouth and throat flood with hot cum, his cock twitching with every new release of hot cum that poured down her throat. She could feel the warmth trailing down her throat and sinking down into the pit of her stomach where it laid. Ciela found it hard to believe there was so much, but when he finished it felt as if she had eaten a full meal. The drake slowly brought himself away from her mouth so his cock slipped out with a little pop and Ciela sat back with a deep gasp and gulp of breath as her mind slowly returned to normal, her digits still working between her legs.

Sirun let out a deep rolling sigh before he jolted back with his eyes level with hers as he uttered his concern, "I didn't hurt you did I?"

Ciela found his new demeanor to be humorous. She chuckled and found herself grinning from ear to dear as she leaned back with her legs spread showing him her wet digit still working at her cunt as she let out little puffs of breath, "Does it look like I'm not okay? I can handle rough big guy...And in fact, I want you to use all that strength you were using in my mouth to break me in here. That is what you wanted right?"

The drake's eyes flashed with a mixture of disbelief and hunger, but rather than question her any further he moved over her body again so his cock was sliding between her legs and against her thighs. Slowly, she brought her paws to take hold of his cock to bring the tip against her cunt and edge it in slowly. She trembled, she moaned and she grinned like an absolute idiot as she said was perhaps either going to be a mistake or the best time of her life, "Don't hold back."

Paws slide off of the drake's cock just as the white-furred beast snarled and dug his claws into the ground to bring his shaft deep inside of her with one thrust. Only about half of it fit inside of her Ciela felt a literal shock coursing up her body. She squealed and gasped, her feet kicking and her paws reaching to claw his underside as she felt his throbbing cock stretching her wide. Pain struck her hard and pulsed from her stomach on up along with little bits of pleasure that started to grow along with her excitement. That actual shock had come from someplace unknown and she almost wondered if she had been struck by lightning, but when she looked at the drake she saw that his body was brimming with visible static charge.

Ciela watched with equal parts terror and excitement as he brought his hips back only to thrust back towards her with all of his strength. He shoved more of his cock inside of her this time and she squealed as she felt her insides being spread apart roughly. With her head swimming in sensation she could barely hear his voice asking, "Are you well down there?"

The mouse said with a trembling voice, "Yup! Never better big guy!"

The drake took her words to heart and soon began to push in and out of her. At first, he was forced to move his hips slowly since she was far too tight for his size, but as she stretched for him he began to press in faster. Every thrust brought another wave of sensation crashing against her skull and she tried her best to remain sane underneath such powerful assault to her mind. Inch by inch he fit more of his cock inside of her with every thrust until the lips of her cunt were kissing his knot and he was desperately grinding and pushing his hips to her to try and fit it all in.

Unable to get more of his cock inside of her, the drake paused allowing Ciela to get a break. She breathed in and out, trembling as she inhaled and exhaled and tried her best to steady herself now that the beast had calmed down. Of course, she was ready for more, ready for everything he had to give, but it was nice to be able to get a little breather. Suddenly, her body was pushed forward so the creature was poised to thrust directly down inside of her pussy and her eyes grew wide as the drake suddenly began to press down on her to start forcing his knot inside.

Ciela watched, gasping and letting out weak moans as she felt her insides being stretched further and further, but the knot just wouldn't press inside of her. Finally growing frustrated, the monster pulled out all the way to let her hips drop, her legs spread and her body trembling as she felt that maelstrom of sensations color her mind. Again the beast began to rut her, but this time he didn't stop even as his knot only kissed her cunt. Instead, he kept on slamming inside of her, pounding against her cunt and senses as the mouse squeaked and moaned.

From her work on her cunt before, she could feel her own orgasm already starting to near. Every thrust brought her just a bit closer to her climax and her toes curled before spreading out in response. Soon she brought a paw over her mouth to start letting out a series of muffled squeaks and breathy moans while her body arched as she felt her orgasm coursing through her body along with another strange shock from the creature's body that twisted up her spine and sent shivers through an entire body. The shocks were an oddly gentle thing that did little but vibrate her body to amplify whatever pleasure she was feeling and she cherished it as she rode out her orgasm while accepting the constant pounding of the beast inside of her. She could feel him throbbing, feel his cock pulsing against her inner walls and she tried to remember if she could get knocked up by drakes or not and somewhere in her mind she remembered that magic made no sense at all and perhaps this creature's seed would have some strange effect on her, but she absolutely could not care less. She hooked her legs onto the creature's sides as best as she could and held on tight as she felt a rush of cum start to fill her. Ciela squeaked and trembled as hot cum flooded her insides with such great pressure that she felt like she would surely be pushed away by the force of his cum entering her alone. When his orgasm died down, he slowly pulled out of her cunt and let his firm cock out into the air where she could still see the fact that he was still fully erect and twitching.

The creature tried to back away but she gripped the tip of his cock firmly and looked up, "Hey now, you're not done already?"

Sirun grunted, "I...I was considering the fact that you might be tired."

Ciela giggled and rolled over to get on paws and knees, raising her hips high into the air and coiling her tail around the beast's cock to edge the tip against her cunt, passing it up and down her slit while she spoke, "Are you kidding me? After all of that I feel charged, literally! So, sparky, are you telling me that you think I've earned four flowers already?"

Sirun's entire form seemed to tremble as he opened his mouth to say something, but instead groaned and thrust against her tail to grind the tip of his dick against her pussy. He was absolutely backed up but at this point, Ciela felt like maybe she was more into this than he was, but she'd be damned if she wasn't going to get her fun and payment out of this.

The drake pressed inside of her slowly as he mounted her and the mouse's tail slowly uncoiled from his cock. She felt every inch spreading her again and pressing into her already filled cunt. His seed was pushed deeper inside with some spilling out the edges of their carnal connection. Ciela let out little excited breaths as she felt his knot sliding against her cunt before she gasped as he pulled back suddenly to begin thrusting inside of her.

There was little to no pain this time. Ciela could fully embrace the pleasure that was running through her body and she let out a happy moan as she pushed her hips back to the beast's cock pounding inside of her. She jolted forward with every push but somehow kept her strength enough to keep herself up and keep herself braced against the constant pounding. Ciela felt so strangely invigorated by the act and it seemed so weird that she only seemed to be gaining strength rather than losing it.

Again she felt her insides being stretched far apart as his knot began pushing against her cunt. She could feel him throbbing already and twitching as if his rapid actions had already brought him so close to an orgasm. She cherished the feeling of being so full and she pushed back to him to try and grind his knot inside of her cunt, but it just wouldn't give. The drake above her was panting, his tongue lolling out and his body shaking as he kept thrusting into her, but she noticed that he seemed to be slowing down.

The mouse smirked and brought her hips back firmly, "Hah, getting tired big guy? Here I thought you were going to get your worth out of me! And now I'm finding that I'm the one who wants more."

Sirun growled and dug his claws into the ground and let out a huff, "If rough is what you want then rough is what you'll get. I still have enough for one more shot so don't get so haughty."

Ciela was about to continue her taunt but her body was jolted forward violently as the beast began to pound inside of her with renewed energy. She squeaked as her arms collapsed and she fell forward. She tried to hold herself up but every thrust made her arms weaker and weaker until all she could do was lie there and pant while her insides were being absolutely destroyed by the massive cock grinding against her inner walls.

Again his knot refused to enter her pussy, but soon the torrent of cum came flooding her insides from the tip of the beast's cock and she let out a loud gasp as he continued to thrust inside of her even as she overflowed with his hot seed. She could feel his cock turning flaccid inside of her and slowly slipping out, the creature falling on his side with a huff. Ciela herself tried to get up but found that she was far too fatigued to even attempt standing, and so she simply laid there with a sigh and looked over at the panting drake.

"Another round?" Said the mouse with a small grin.

Sirun answered with a sigh, "I'll give you an extra flower to let me sleep instead."

Ciela managed to get up on her feet, stumbling before moving over to him, "Mind if I take a nap with you then?"

The drake rolled onto his stomach and looked at her with narrowed eyes before shrugging and laying his head on the bed of flowers. Ciela took the invite to sit against his side and shut her eyes. She was messy, sticky and absolutely going to feel every bit of pain when she woke up, but at least it had been fun. That and she was gonna get paid damn well.