Smokin (Story only Version)
WARNING: IN DEPTH SEX SCENE. IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT DON'T READ IT.
I'm going to put it in Mature but if you thing it should go into adult please let me know.
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and the story can be found in the comments there too
**On a starry night like this...how could I stay in? There was some incentive that caused me to return to my room that night. I heard a crash and I returned to the house, expecting a mess. Instead I found a trail of petals. Red rose petals. I picked one up and smelled it. Rip, just picked and as it filled my nostrils with its beloved smell I suddenly felt tired. Ignoring my doziness, I followed the trail of petals through the house. Across the hall, through the dining room, candle ablaze, their sweet sent momentarily taking my mind off the petals, momentarily. I continued my trek and found myself at the bottom of the stair case, a petal every other step. Following it, gradually some music became audible. Louder and louder, it crescendoed. It was a soft jazz song, with a beautiful sax.
"Background music," Azoth said as i entered my room, rose in mouth and his shirt strap hanging from his shoulder. His cigarette still burned and it let out a sweet smelling red fog, coating the room in mystery. Behind him was a table with candles set in the shape of a heart, the flames glowing bright, clearing way to the bed behind.
"Come, my love," He said in a soothing voice. "The night is yet young and my body ripe for the picking." I listened to his deep soothing call, and as he held out his hand I took it in mine. A gentle tug and i was in his arms, moving to the bed. He laid me down on my back and climbed over to me and lay down on his side. He always liked the left side. Pressing my body up against him, I felt his crotch push up against mine; I had not noticed his fly had been down.
"Lead the way," he said as i took off his shirt and he pulled off mine. His pants then my pants, his boxers, my bra, and finally he took of my underwear. Rolling over on me, i lifted my legs in a submissive pose and parted the way for him. He lifted his penis and nudged me gently in the pussy. When he felt that he was in position, he let go of himself and slowly moved his one arm around my body and the other bent behind my neck so he was angled down, ass in the air. Slowly he started, pushing in me and then slowly pulling out, my muscles tensing around him as he started thrusting. He kept up the pace for awhile then stated to speed up. Faster and faster, harder and harder. His grunts and groans coupling my moans and screams as he thrusted deeper into me. He stated to shake; he wrapped both his arms around my body and dug deep within me. I screamed and he went ball deep in me, shaking harder he released a rush of warm semen in my body. He held me there, my arms around his neck, panting and heaving great breaths. He wilted and rolled off me, slowly pulling out, his cum still slightly flowing.
"I love you," I moaned into his neck and licked his muzzle. He chuckled and i knew this was only the beginning.
"Anch'io ti voglio bene mia dolce" he said, his smile smoldering and eyes gazing into mine. I felt the intensity of his love right there. A never-ending cycle.**
This mini story is one of my first ever detailed sex scenes. I know i sound like a broken record but, PLEASE tell me your thoughts on this story. I love critique but please. If you don't like sex then don't hassle me.
The characters that star in this mini are: Azoth and Zi. Both are in their early twenties and both are in love, though they are willing for a third party (aka Demetrius)
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Characters, story and art (c) Killerwolf1020