The Enclave
This is an excerpt from a story I am writing, not the whole thing. I would just like some comments on the yiff scenes. Important: The name Temeraire has nothing to do with the Temeraire series of books by Naomi Novik, this story has nothing to do with her work! Your comments are appreciated as well. And also, if you're under 18, don't read this.
Here's some background info:
This is a story with dragons and humans co-existing in a small (for lack of a better term) "academy" where they live, learn, and work. The "academy" is called the Enclave and is in a savannah like terrain. It is many years in the future and dragons had been re-discovered. The Enclave is a small project to see how dragons would interact with humans, though very few in the Enclave itself know this. But then information leaked out about a nearby city and the project, and the Masters that knew of this tried to kill off the ones who had learned of the conspiracy. Many ran into the surrounding area. A few of those were the main characters of Temeraire (Tem for short, a dragon, black in colour), Ecko (another dragon, light blue and lover of Temeraire) and Shard (yet another dragon, white in colour and a long time friend of Temeraire) Now, as you might be able to guess, Temeraire and Ecko are in season...
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"Ecko..." Temeraire moaned and clutched Ecko tighter.
"I'm sorry, Temeraire." She whispered softly to him and pressed herself harder against his soft belly," I can't do it this time. They will smell you." Ecko wouldn't be able to sate his need with her hand as she had done before in their room, since now there were plenty of people around and they would easily be able to smell Temeraire's seed.
Temeraire groaned again and thrusted his hips slightly into Ecko's. Her scales on his arousal relieved him little; he desperately wanted to take her as his own. It wasn't just his lust; he loved her and needed to be one with her. "If only there weren't those stupid rules against her getting egg-heavy." He thought.
Ecko could feel the incredible heat of Temeraire's arousal; she desperately wanted him inside her, to feel his strong yet gentle frame overpower her own. She whimpered slightly.
"Love, am I hurting you?" Temeraire whispered to her, his voice full of worry that he had somehow hurt Ecko in his thrust.
"No, I just wish we could...wish we could..." Ecko's voice was choked and tearful. In Temeraire's desire, he could still care for her, she knew he loved her. All of the times he could have flung himself upon her and mated her, he never gave in to his body's temptations. Even in his yearn for sex he still cared if she was okay, she wished she could satisfy both of their hearts and bodies.
"Wish we could mate?" Temeraire finished her sentence for her.
"Yes." Ecko gasped. Temeraire looked deeply into her beautiful sapphire eyes, they as well as his own were full of love and sorrow for the other. He smiled slightly and licked away her tears with his tongue, then Ecko turned her head and locked jaws with him and thrust her own tongue deep into Temeraire's mouth. Together they moaned into each other's maw, furiously running their tongues along their mouths.
Then Temeraire broke the kiss and embraced her, Ecko tossed herself onto her other side and dug her head into his muscular chest and sobbed.
"I love you Ecko, I love you so much." Temeraire said to her over and over and held her close in his arms.
"I don't care about the rules anymore." Ecko thought," Take me Temeraire!" she cried into his chest, unable to bear it anymore. She ground her hips against Temeraire's, begging him to enter her.
"Are you sure?" Temeraire whispered to her.
"Yes, fuck me Temeraire!" Ecko cried again.
It took every ounce of willpower Temeraire had not to start rutting into Ecko right then and there," I can't here, Love, the others."
"I don't care!" Ecko whined, and tried to shove herself onto Temeraire's erect spear.
"No Ecko! For our own sake and the others, we must take this elsewhere." Temeraire reasoned, grabbing her shoulders in his hands and looking into her eyes.
"But you will...?"
"Love, I have wanted nothing more than to feel your love, to make love to you, to be one with you." Temeraire said to her lovingly, he stroked her soft stomach scales," But, are you willing for offspring?"
Ecko nodded," Yes. For us to have a family and maybe, just maybe, if the city is real, we can all live there."
"But for now there is us only, and our love." Temeraire said.
"And our love." Ecko repeated in a purr.
Tem smiled," Let us go and have each other." He said to her, he stood up, followed by Ecko. He led the way out of the camp, weaving between the sleeping dragons and humans. Before they left the camp, Temeraire looked around and saw a faint white object on the other side of the site; he knew instantly it was Shard and could see the light glinting off his eyes. He had spotted them.
"What is it?" Ecko whispered to him.
"Shard." He explained, and watched the white dragon. Shard blinked once, and then twice, he seemed to be thinking if he should let them go or keep them here.
"Those two need to do it; they're getting worse every night." Shard thought," Sex is their only outlet for that energy, and if I deprive them of it, they couldn't possibly regard me as their friend. I just hope they don't get caught and get me in trouble." He turned his head away, implying that he will let them go.
"Thank you Shard." Temeraire said mentally to his friend. He turned to Ecko," Let us enjoy each other now." He said to her. Together they walked away from the glowing fires of the camp into the darkness.
They padded along beside each other for some time, their eagerness for each other growing each minute.
When they could no longer see the camp Ecko crouched low beside Temeraire and drew her tail up between his hind legs and over his erect cock. He moaned loudly in pleasure and moved to mount her.
Ecko stood for him and moved her tail to the side, revealing at long last her hot wet vent to Temeraire. He slavered a little, anticipating Ecko's tightness, before finally climbing onto her.
"Go Temeraire, make us one." Ecko said to him. He squeezed her entire body before he plunged his throbbing cock into Ecko's virgin sex.
At first Ecko felt pained by Temeraire's cock inside her, stretching her walls, but pain throbbed away into rapture and they moaned in unison.
The tightness of her was mind blowing around Temeraire's member, and her heat incredible. He pushed himself in further until his entire length was hilted inside her. He hissed as felt himself wedged inside her.
Ecko moaned again as she felt Temeraire reach his full length, she loved the feeling of fullness inside her. Then she gasped as she felt his cock retract from her. Then, as the head of his dragonhood was about to leave her, he pushed back in to the hilt and Ecko moaned again.
He thrust into her repeatedly, he held her neck in his jaws, each time going harder and faster. Then Ecko's smooth walls clenched around him as she reached climax, she screamed in ecstasy as a wave a pleasure so huge hit her that her entire body was clenching and spasming. Her juices engulfed Temeraire's meat and sent him over the edge. He could feel his climax rushing up his member and he gave one last great thrust and buried himself deep within her as he roared deafeningly as he sprayed his seed inside her as they orgasmed together.
Ecko milked Temeraire's cock for all he was worth, forcing another jet of cum from his dragonhood. He roared again and thrusted even deeper into Ecko as he filled her to the point where their fluids were leaking past Temeraire's member and onto the ground.
Temeraire did not pull out of Ecko immediately, enjoying her still clenching slit. Their breath came in great wheezes from the exhilaration of their coupling. Then, Temeraire pulled himself out of Ecko's sex and fell to the ground in a heap, all of his strength gone." Ecko." He managed to say.
Ecko laid down next to him and cuddled close to him, feeling much of his previous strength gone from his muscular frame.
He hummed softly and laid a wing over her and his hand on her arm." We are mates now." He said to her.
"Yes." She said and smiled, she ran a talon over Temeraire's face, tracing the outline of his features.
"You are quite good." Tem commented to her.
"You are too." Ecko said with a suggestive purr.
Temeraire chuckled softly and nuzzled her," You want more of me don't you?"
Ecko purred again and flipped Temeraire onto his back and laid down on his belly.
"I can't Love, I am spent." Temeraire said to her.
"But there is something else you have." Ecko said slyly.
Tem laughed quietly," I know what you want."
Ecko slid herself over him and laid down on the ground above him, he turned onto his stomach and his nostrils were filled with her scent. She had her tail held high in expectation, and Temeraire felt eager to oblige her. He started to lick the lips of her slit, teasing her slightly. Ecko moaned and bucked her hips into Temeraire's face. Slowly he pushed his tongue into her and ran it along her smooth walls. He explored every nook and cranny within her, making sure he left no spot untouched.
Ecko moaned again, loving the flexibility of his tongue. He thrust his tongue into her to its fullest extent and suddenly Ecko bucked her hips, shoving his muzzle into her sex. His senses were overwhelmed with her scent and furiously worked his tongue around Ecko's cunt. Ecko yelped in ecstasy as she orgasmed into Temeraire's open muzzle, he moaned as he drank her cum with eager abandon, loving her sweet taste.
Then Ecko's neck collapsed onto the ground in exhaustion, Temeraire withdrew his muzzle from Ecko's vent. He walked around to her front and sat in front of her, starring at her motionless form with loving eyes. He laid down next to her and curled himself around her. He studied her face before whispering quietly in her ear," Good night my Love."