The Doom That Might Have Happened
A what-if adventure in the form of a script, which kingop18 intends for use in commissioning a comic down the line.
Rufus, a dominant alpha male, decides to betray his party of self-absorbed human girls to a pack of gnolls, in order to save another beastfolk. The hyena-humanoids are more than happy to take advantage of their tasty prizes.https://www.patreon.com/gideonkalvejarvis is my Patreon account. Every dollar invested gives me that much more time for further writing.
The Doom That Might Have Happened
By Gideon Kalve Jarvis
Commissioned by kingop18
Author's Note: This story is a non-canonical "what if" version of a SoFurry-exclusive reader-driven adventure, which can be found at https://www.sofurry.com/browse/folder/stories?by=254&folder=34652. The story is what might have occurred between entries 3 through 5, if the main character, Rufus, hadn't been a good guy.
Characters:
Rufus - A tall, broad-shouldered, grey-furred anthropomorphic wolf. Muscular and shaggy, and also slightly scarred from various fights, though most of the scars are hidden under his fur. Wears earth-toned armor, a fur loincloth, and a fur cloak, and wears a bearded axe and a two-edged sword on his belt.
Marlene - The party leader. A beautiful teenaged half-elf with slightly pointed ears, long, supple legs, dark blue eyes, and wears her upper-back-length platinum blonde hair done back in a simple ponytail. Her ears are slightly pointed. Wears mostly cream-and-gold-colored clothes, and carries a crossbow and a spear across her back. Her body is perfectly smooth under her clothes, her skin lightly tanned, her bottom firm and rounded and well-suited to running and jumping, her breasts the second-largest in the party, after Regina - plump handfuls, but not really large by any means.
Deriny - A brash and perky human girl with long orange hair that she ties back into two long twintails that fall over her shoulders in the front, her hair going down to her waist. Normally she wears bright green robes, which match her eyes. She has freckles on her face. Without clothing, the freckles can be seen to run over her shoulders as well. Deriny's body is small and compact, without much muscle tone, and she has smallish breasts about the same size as Leta's - smallish, but nice-sized palmfulls. She trims her body hair short, so only has a little orange pubic fuzz.
Leta - A brown-haired human girl with short hair that just barely goes past her neck, and brown eyes. She wears tight-fitting, knee-length brown leather shorts and a tight white t-shirt that exposes her flat, firmly-muscled midriff with its visible "sixpack," and wears black suspenders, as well as fingerless gloves and heavy brown boots. Without clothes, she's slim, toned, and fit, with a slightly boyish look to her body, and smallish breasts, though they're clearly visible - about what you'd expect to fit in the palms of the hands. Leta doesn't shave, so she has more pubic hair than the other girls, though this still isn't a whole lot.
Morgan - A very fair-skinned human girl with bottom-length golden blonde hair (darker than Marlene's) and light blue eyes (lighter than Marlene's). Wears a red schoolgirl uniform blazer over a white blouse, and also wears a red knee-length pleated skirt, with white bloomers beneath. Carries a double-barreled shotgun on her back, and a rapier on her belt. Without clothes, Morgan is very petite and quite flat-chested, though her nipples are also quite visible, and look very suckable. She has an especially perky and squeezable-looking bottom and fairly short legs. She has only a tiny amount of pubic hair.
Regina - A black-haired girl whose hair runs just past her shoulders in two tightly-braided pigtails. Wears a brown nun's habit, which only barely conceals the fact that she's the most busty of all the girls, and round glasses. Carries a short flanged mace on her belt, and wears a fairly large golden ankh around her neck as a holy symbol. Under her clothes, she's also the most hairy, with a decent bush on her pubic region, and a shapely figure, while still being somewhat girlish, since she's the same age as the other girls, all of them in their teens.
Gnolls - Spotty-furred hyenalike people. Notable gnolls are: Urta, a tall and muscular female with an enlarged clitoris, which looks like a penis (based on real-life hyenas), and the leader of the gnolls; One-eye, a stoop-shouldered gnoll with numerous scars, and an eyepatch; Horse, an obviously stupid gnoll who is also the biggest of them, with a penis to match. Most of the gnolls are male, except Urta, and while Urta's false penis is pink in color, most of the other gnolls have cocks that are a very dark red or various shades of brown. For all of the gnolls, their default expression is a sort of wicked good humor, grinning toothily, with their tongues often slightly extended.
Adel - A small, petite chipmunk girl (she is fairly flat-chested, but has a very cute butt) with large blue eyes. She looks a great deal like Princess Sally Acorn, except with dorsal stripes, she wears armor and carries a sword and shield, and her hair is shoulder-length. Adel is only roughly half Rufus' height.
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Panel 1: A long, thin panel along the top of the page, showing thick woods and tall mountains, giving a clear impression of the wild terrain.
Panel 2: A top-down shot of Rufus at the head of the party, leading the five girls through the forest.
Rufus (in caption): Most guys would think being hired to guide five hot teens into the wilderness would be a dream come true.
Panel 3: A frontview shot, with Rufus in front, his expression sour. Behind him, the girls look cheerful and not very attentive, talking and laughing with each other.
Rufus (in caption): Maybe if I was human, I'd agree.
Panel 4: A shot of the girls around a campfire at night, enjoying a meal and talking to each other, while Rufus is to the side, carrying a large bundle of firewood.
Rufus (in caption): But as it is...
Panel 5: Shot of Marlene pointing a finger at Rufus during the day in the woods, obviously lecturing him, while the other girls snicker in the background.
Rufus (in caption): ...being ordered about like I was a slave...
Panel 6: Rufus, facing the reader, on the ground, a heavy branch broken over his head. Behind him, Leta is dusting off her hands, obviously having just been the one to hit Rufus with the branch. Near her, the other girls are in various states of undress, having been changing near a lake, each screaming and doing their best to cover themselves.
Rufus (in caption): ..and pushed around at every opportunity...
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Panel 1: Focus on Rufus' face, his expression angry.
Rufus: I'm about ready to snap.
Panel 2: Rufus is standing at the edge of the group's camp at night, his pack on his back, weapons in his hands. The girls are moving around behind him, finishing setting up camp. Marlene is looking at Rufus from where she is finishing setting up a tent.
Panel 3: Rufus has slightly turned his head, looking at Marlene as she approaches from behind.
Marlene: Where are you going?
Rufus: Scouting ahead, same as every night. This is gnoll territory, and they don't like intruders.
Panel 4: Shot of Rufus from behind as he walks off into the dark forest. He speaks without turning his head.
Rufus: Be sure to post a watch: these woods are dangerous.
Panel 5: Sideview of Rufus walking through the woods at night, focusing on his top half.
Rufus (thought bubble): Of course those stupid girls won't pay attention. Another sleepless night for me, babysitting these would-be adventurers.
Panel 6: Focus on Rufus' head, which has turned, his expression concerned. There is firelight from the direction he is now facing, slightly lighting one side of his face.
Rufus (thought bubble): What's that?
Word bubble from offscreen: Heeheehee! Ahahaha!
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Panel 1: A large image taking up much of the page. At the bottom of the image, Rufus is looking out through some underbrush, which he holds apart with his hands. Before him, a large tribe of gnolls are gathered, giggling and laughing maniacally, with Adel on her knees before a throne of bones. Most of the gnolls, who are largely male, are either naked, or wearing just scraps of bones or armor which don't cover their genitals. She is naked also, with her wrists bound behind her back, her armor and sword and shield lying nearby, obviously having been stripped off recently. Behind and to either side are One-eye and Horse, standing guard, holding her shoulders. On the throne is Urta, her legs crossed, concealing her false penis.
Panel 2: A full-body shot of Urta seated on the bone throne, legs still crossed, showing her teasing, flirtatious expression as she looks at the viewer.
Panel 3: A full-body shot of Adel, seen from the side, the angle of the shot tilted just enough to show off her dorsal stripe and small, adorable bottom, as she glares at Urta (offscreen), her teeth grit, obviously still defiant. This image should have a cut-section shot right afterward, showing a closeup of Adel's eyes as they grow huge with shock.
Panel 4: A long, narrow shot across the bottom of the page. Urta is now standing, grinning smugly at Adel, who still looks shocked. Urta's false penis is now clearly visible, standing at full erection.
Urta: Surprise!
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Panel 1: Smaller panel, cutoff to focus on Adel. Seen from the side, Urta is gripping Adel's head, grinning toothily, rubbing her penis against Adel's cheek, while the chipmunk girl has her head turned to one side, looking disgusted and defiant.
Urta: You'd better eat me, meatgirl. Or else we're gonna eat you.
Panel 2: Smaller panel, cutoff to focus on Adel. Obviously reluctant, Adel has just barely wrapped her lips around the tip of Urta's pink penis, looking up at the cruel hyenababe with her large blue eyes. Urta is looking down, her expression smug, her hand still on Adel's head.
Urta: Good girl.
Panel 3: Smaller panel, cutoff to focus on Adel. Urta has just slammed Adel down until the chipmunk girl's chin is pressed against her groin (to reiterate, she has no testicles - just a hyena female's false penis). Adel's eyes are opened wide, tears streaming out of their corners, looking shocked as she is choked on hard hyenacock.
Urta: Mmm, nice!
Panel 4: Larger panel, to show off more. The scene is from above at a slight Dutch angle, to better show off Adel's bottom and dorsal stripe. Now bent over, Adel is still choking on Urta's penis, but her head is partially turned, her eyes panicked as she looked behind her. Behind her, Horse has grabbed Adel's bottom tightly, squeezing it in one large paw, while he presses his massive cock against her anus with the other hand. The broad tip of his dark-colored penis is just barely starting to stretch Adel's tailhole open.
Panel 5: Smaller, square panel at the bottom of the page. Closeup of Urta's face from the side, panting as she looks down at Adel (offscreen), her eyes heavy-lidded with pleasure.
Urta: You're good enough, we might keep you as a pet.
Panel 6: Second smaller, square panel next to the first. Urta's eyes have widened, her mouth partially open in shock. Rufus' hand is visible, holding his sword's edge up against Urta's neck.
Urta: Yipe!
Rufus (from offscreen): I'd let her go if I were you.
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Panel 1: Seen at a slight angle from above as Adel runs, arms still bound, to Rufus' side. Rufus is still holding Urta hostage, his axe held out by his other hand, but low enough that Adel can reach it. The gnolls are starting to crowd around, fingering their weapons, many of them drooling in anticipation.
Urta: You know you won't get out of here alive, right?
Panel 2: Focus on Urta and Rufus, with Adel slightly to the side, turned away from Rufus as she uses Rufus' axe blade to cut the rope on her wrists, her expression serious and determined. Rufus is grinning, and Urta looks intrigued.
Rufus: I figured we could make a deal.
Panel 3: Adel and Rufus running through the woods, the firelight at their backs. Adel is now dressed and has her sword and shield in her hands. She is looking back worriedly, while Rufus is focused forward.
Adel: Are you sure they won't follow us?
Rufus: Oh, I'm sure. After the deal we cut, I think they're going to be...
Panel 4: Scene of the camp Rufus just left. The girls are all tucked into bedrolls in their tents, the fire out, no watch on duty - they were expecting Rufus to do all the work, as usual.
Rufus (caption): ...busy.
Panel 5: Marlene is lying on her side, her eyes closed, sleeping.
Panel 6: A hairy hand has clamped over Marlene's mouth. Her eyes are open wide in shock.
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Panel 1: A larger panel, the camp in the background. In the foreground, Regina has her mouth and eyes open wide behind her glasses. One gnoll holds her arms over her head, while One-eye tears open the front of her robes, baring the black-haired girl's sizable breasts. Nearby, slightly behind where Regina is being stripped, Marlene is struggling on her stomach, her teeth grit as she is visibly fighting as hard as she can. Her top is already ripped to shreds, while one gnoll crouches on her back, binding her wrists, and Urta has pulled her pants down to her knees with one hand, and is gleefully ogling her, her other hand rubbing Marlene's bare elven bottom, spreading it apart so she can get a better look, her pink penis erect. In the far background, the image blurry, Deriny, Leta, and Morgan are standing back-to-back, gnolls closing in around them.
Panel 2: Focus now on Deriny, Leta, and Morgan. Deriny has her arms spread, fire burning on her fingertips. Leta is in a combat stance, and a gnoll is already lying at her feet, clutching his wounded head. Morgan has her double-barreled shotgun out, and is glaring as she holds it ready. All around them are the gnolls, eager for a chance to get at the girls. All three girls have defiant, confident expressions.
Panel 3: One gnoll has grabbed Deriny's wrists, and has forced her hands up, making her shoot fire into the air, rather than at the gnolls. Another has caught hold of the front of the redhead's robes, just about to tear them off. Deriny's expression is one of anger as well as shock. On the opposite side of the three girls, Horse has knocked Morgan's shotgun from her hands with a spiked club, Morgan's expression now one of confusion. Leta, in the middle, is now surrounded by three gnolls, a second gnoll having joined the first on the ground, clutching his stomach. One gnoll has grabbed Leta's leg, while the other two have grabbed her arms, though one of Leta's arms is almost free despite the gnoll's grabbing hands. Her mouth is open, and she is obviously yelling loudly in defiance.
Panel 4: The gnoll who was holding Deriny's wrists is now standing to her side in the background, holding her wrists fully up with one hand. The gnoll that had been gripping her robes is now holding their tattered remains in one hand, leaving Deriny naked, while he gropes one of her breasts with his other hand, and the gnoll holding Deriny's wrists squeezes her butt. On the opposite end of the three girls, Morgan is now on all-fours, facing in the opposite direction from the last panel, reaching toward her shotgun with one hand, though it is obvious that it is out of her reach. Her clothes are in tatters now, exposing most of her body, and leaving her bloomers visible. Horse is laughing as he pulls her back, away from her shotgun, with one hand on her ankle, the other on her bloomers, which he has pulled down to expose half her pink bottom, his spiked club lying nearby. Both of these two girls look frightened rather than confident now. Leta, in the middle, is now on her back on the ground, her legs held in the air by the gnoll that had her leg grabbed before. This gnoll has pulled her shorts up to her ankles, trailing her suspenders behind, letting the viewer see her pussy quite clearly. One of the gnolls that had Leta's arm in his grip is now holding the tatters of her shirt in his hand, having just torn it off, while the other is tying Leta's wrists behind her back. Leta's expression now is still defiant, but not confident.
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Note: All the girls in all future panels on all future pages are naked. Regina still has her glasses, and those girls with their hair tied up in various styles still have whatever keeps their hair in place, but that is all.
Panel 1: Focus on Regina, on her back, looking up at her captors with large, sad eyes. One-eye is squeezing her breasts tightly together, while thrusting his cock between them, while the other gnoll is greedily lapping the black-haired girl's quim, holding her legs up with his hands. In the background, Marlene can be seen on all-fours with Urta in front of her and another two gnolls behind.
Panel 2: Now focusing on Marlene as she is forced to suck Urla's penis, while the two male gnolls kneeling behind her rape the half-elf girl's anus and vagina, one kneeling to take her pussy, while the other straddled Marlene's bottom to thrust almost straight down while he sodomizes her. In the background, Regina can be seen, and the gnoll that was licking her is now thrusting into her, his tail raised, showing off his spotty rump.
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Panel 1: Deriny is crying out, her hands shoving ineffectually against the chest of the gnoll in front of her, her mouth open wide as she screams loudly. The two gnolls that captured her are standing up, redheaded Deriny between them, both of them crammed into her quim at the same time.
Panel 2: Morgan is being forced to ride Horse, his huge cock visible as a bulge in her stomach. Her eyes are huge and tears are streaming down her face. Horse is leaning partway back, one hand gripping Morgan's wrists, holding them behind her back, while the other holds her hip firmly, forcing her to keep bouncing up and down.
Panel 3: Leta is on her back, a gnoll gripping her arms as he thrusts up into her bottom, another gnoll sandwiching her, thrusting into her vagina. A third gnoll is in the rear, forcing Leta to tilt her head all the way back so that he can thrust into her mouth, his balls bouncing against her forehead.
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Each panel on this page shows the girls being cum inside by gnolls. The gnolls, unless described otherwise, are edited out so that they appear as an outline rather than a completely drawn-in figure, to better show the girls.
Panel 1: Regina's legs are spread wide, as it her mouth, and she is obviously screaming as the unseen gnoll cums inside her. One-eye is visible, squashing Regina's breasts together as he cums on her face and glasses.
Panel 2: Seen from the side, Urta has her penis slammed all the way into Marlene's throat, her head tilted back, eyes squeezed shut, sharp teeth bared and clenched tight as she has an orgasm (no cum is visible, since Urta's "penis" is really an enlarged clitoris, even though it looks like a penis). Tears are streaming down Marlene's cheeks. In the rear, spurts of cum are visible as the gnoll cums in Marlene's pussy.
Urta: Oh yeah!
Panel 3: Seen from below at an angle, as Deriny screams, her anus and vagina spread wide open as the gnolls cum inside her.
Panel 4: Morgan is facing the viewer, her expression one of anguish as one hand claws at the ground, the other reaching forward in desperation. Horse is visible behind her, both hands squeezing tightly into Morgan's bottom, his mouth a tight "o" and his eyes squeezed shut as spurts of his cum are visible.
Panel 5: Also seen from the side, Leta's whole body is tensed, her back arched as she lies on her back, as she is filled with hyenacum from all sides, all at once.
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Panel 1: All five girls lie on the ground, their naked bodies smudged with dirt and bruises, their eyes closed. They are all leaking cum from their anuses and vaginas. The feet of the gnolls can be at the edges of the image around the top, obviously surrounding the girls without obscuring the view of the reader's view. It is now light out, so there are no more darkness effects needed.
Caption (at the top of image): Many hours later...
Urta (off camera except for her feet): Take them back to the village.
Panel 2: Focus on Urta's face, with some gnolls, Horse and One-eye among them, behind her. Urta is grinning wickedly as she licks her chops, while several of the gnolls do the same thing, one even rubbing his hands in glee.
Urta: We're going to have a feast.
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Panel 1: A pussy-eye view of Marlene as she dangles from a pole like a deer (more-or-less the view from the gnoll behind her). The gnoll carrying the other end of the pole is visible from behind, the pole resting on his shoulder. Marlene's eyes are open, and she is staring at the viewer in horror, a gag in her mouth keeping her quiet.
Panel 2: A view from the side as the girls are carried through the woods by the gnolls. All are tied up in one way or another, and all are gagged. Marlene and Deriny are dangling naked from poles on the shoulders of the gnolls, seen in the background; Marlene is conscious, but Deriny is not. In the foreground, Horse carries Morgan under one arm, the blond girl unconscious, her arms and legs dangling limp and bound at the wrists and ankles, her bottom facing forward. One-eye, slightly behind Horse, has Regina, conscious but sad-looking and not resisting, slung over both his shoulders so that her bottom is facing toward the viewer, her wrists bound behind her back, her ankles tied together. Urta is in front, Leta slung over one of her shoulders, awake and defiant-looking, but with her wrists bound behind her back; Urta grips Leta's bottom tightly as she walks, to make sure the brown-haired martial-arts girl doesn't get away.
Panel 3: Seen from the front, Urta in the foreground, One-eye to her left, Horse to her right, their naked girl captives clearly visible in this position. Marlene and Deriny are also visible, their carrying gnolls staggered slightly to give the viewer a better look at the girls. Urta is smirking at what she sees.
Urta: Home sweet home.
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Panel 1: Deriny, Leta, Morgan, and Regina are inside a wooden cage, all tied up. They are looking outside the cage in horror, which happens to have them facing toward the viewer.
Panel 2: Side view of the gnoll village, showing everything at a slight distance, so it can all fit. The wooden cage where the girls are kept is to the far right of the panel. Near the far left, two gnolls are packing wood into a large brick oven (which lacks a front door, so it is possible to see inside). In the middle, slightly in the background, other gnolls are starting fires beneath a spit and a large cauldron. In the middle in the foreground, slightly closer to the left side is a large wooden table with a girl-sized roasting pan. Marlene is presently kneeling in the pan, her wrists bound in front of her, her ankles bound as well, and apple shoved in her mouth. Urta is standing next to the table, one hand on Marlene's shoulder.
Panel 3: Closeup on the table, as Urta shoves Marlene down onto all-fours in the roasting pan with one hand, the other squeezing Marlene's butt. Urta is licking her lips as she eyes Marlene's bottom.
Urta: Such tender, juicy meat...
Panel 4: Now with a rope added to pin her arms, and her ankles tied to her thighs, Marlene has a deeply flushed face, her eyes wide. Urta uses one hand to sprinkle a pepper shaker over the half-elf girl, black flakes already covering the girl's back and bottom. With the other hand, Urta is rubbing Marlene's pussy, the girl's juices visibly dripping into the pan.
Urta: Seasoned to perfection.
Marlene: Mmm!
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Panel 1: In the background, two gnolls carry the roasting pan with Marlene in it toward the large brick oven on the left side of the panel. Also in the background, on the right side of the panel, is the spit, with a fire already crackling under it. In the foreground, two gnolls are holding Morgan in front of Urta. Urta is squeezing Morgan's small tits, making Morgan blush deeply.
Urta: Cute.
Morgan: S-stop it!
Urtan: But you'll look even cuter squirming over the fire.
Morgan: Noooo!
Panel 2: Urta is standing in the background of this large image, pointing with one hand toward the large pot, which is filled with steaming broth now, the other on her hip. One gnoll is shoving Deriny in front of him, two more right behind are carrying Regina between them, arms under her shoulders and knees, and a final gnoll has Leta tossed over one shoulder while she does her best to struggle. All have been gagged with apples in their mouths.
Urta: I hope you girls like your bathwater extra hot.
Panel 3: The scene is of the gnolls with a darkened background. Urta is in front, with other gnolls staggered behind her, One-eye on the left, Horse on the right, while the rest are mostly in shadows, their eyes gleaming, all of them holding knives and forks, which also gleam. Urta does not hold these utensils, but is sharpening a butcher knife on a knife sharpener. All of them are drooling, tongues out as they wait for dinner to finish cooking.
Urta: Delicious!
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A final shot of each girl as they cook.
On the upper left: Marlene squirms in the depths of the oven, looking over her shoulder at the viewer as though begging to be saved. She now has a carrot sticking out of her butt, and there are various vegetables visible around the edges of the roasting pan. Her body drips with sweat.
On the upper right: Morgan is presently upright, bottom up as she's tied to the spit (_not_skewered - this allows for the possibility that she might still be saved, since she's still alive). One gnoll is turning the spit while another is brushing Morgan's smooth body with savory oil.
On the bottom (the largest image): In the pot, the water bubbling now, Deriny, Leta, and Regina are all looking at the viewer, their breasts just barely above the waterline, their lower halves visible below the waterline thanks to a cutaway view of the cauldron. Deriny's expression is one of fear, Leta's is one of defiance, and Regina's is a "poor me" expression.
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