Commission: A Bullet Named Love

Story by dracologist on SoFurry

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#51 of Written Commissions

Michael and Elnora are similar in so many ways, they're both soldiers, their both strong and powerful people, and above all they love one another with a burning desire that leaves most turned to ashes. When Elnora comes home one day and finds herself upset it becomes Michael's duty to her to make her night as loving and passionate as he's able to. Can the desire of love quell the blazing rage that is this akita girl? Read and find out.

I tell people often that I never get to write romantic pieces, but this is one of those showing that proves that I can. I loved writing this and put everything I was able to into this work. It follows the commissioner's request and includes everything he wanted in it. I had a great time writing this and I hope to get more works like it in the future form many people.

Michael (c) BlackKnife12

Elnora (c) cobra175


A Bullet Named Love

The twist of the knob caught the husky's attention, his ear twitched to the sound of it while the easy smile that wrapped around his lips only helped him to continue to focus down on the spatula in one hand and the skillet in another. The sound of sizzling meat was something that this strong soldier of a canine, this master sergeant, had grown used to already making his ears slowly fold back at the scent of delicious chicken just before they perked instantly at the sudden call of the door slamming hard in place making him jerk in slice the skillet over to an off burner while he turned to look around the corner of the kitchen. What he saw made his heart sink, the sight of the woman he loved, the beautifully busty akita with a growl on her lips and a harsh toss of her leather document case being tossed down towards their dual owned couch. Already this angry creature was storming her way through the house, heading towards the back room, but with a hand moving out towards her wrist to catch her his white fingers wrapped around her cream colored hand to stop her in place and keep her still enough for her to dart that heated expression directly towards Michael with his ears back in concern and worry.

"Elnora, what's going on?" He asked softly, his breath speaking out to her in his deep tone, "I don't like seeing you like this."

At the sound of his words this canine female could calm herself, would look on at Michael while forcing an easy emotion neutral look across her face, "It's fine, Sweetie. Just a hard day at work."

Her hand even moved to lift, softly cupping the side of his face while his figures were twisted from around her wrist in order to slide between her own. That fully uniformed girl, wearing her standard issued multicam designed outfit was able to twist her wrist thanks to the rolled up sleeves and easily slide his fingers down around her own, gripping his hand in hers just as she pressed that uniform top against his body, crushing her large and impressive breasts against him. Elnora's other strong, muscular, and well toned body was brought in close, keeping her figure there with him while she leaned up just a bit to give him a soft nuzzle on his cheek and made a long and deep sigh to her loving partner, sorry for how she had just been acting.

"I'm sorry..." She said to him as she felt his hand release hers just so that he could bring his arms around her tightly, holding one strong and muscular body against another while her uniform was ruffled a bit under the presence of his hands sliding up and down against them.

He'd nuzzle back affectionately, even planting a soft kiss against the side of her cheek, his grey muzzled lips crushing against her brown colored cheek for a second while he wore his beige t-shirt and blue boxers just as a way of celebrating his couple of days worth of leave that he'd taken for the upcoming holiday. "You're alright, Elnora, there's nothing to be sorry about. Would you like to tell me what all of that was about then?"

It was a simple question to ask, but by the nature of her department within their joined level of service she had to shake her head slowly, "Don't worry about, Michael. Just higher ups trying to give me the business. A four-star was all over my C.O. Today about our last operation, and shit rolls down hill. Now I have to pass the shit on to the captains and make myself look bad while.." Her body was already tensing up again, the easy snarl lifting the curled her lips and that narrowed gaze coming just before Michael would squeeze her down again.

"It's ok..." he said to her in almost a soft coo to help calm her down. The husky could feel her already tensing up again, but knew that as long as he held her in his arms he could help keep her calm. There wasn't much that he was allowed to know about her operations, but he was there for her anyway, blissfully ignorant of the deeper parts of her delta force world while keeping himself perfectly planted inside of his own ranger unit as a squad leader.

Sometimes it seemed like they were of two completely different worlds, unable to even start to step foot into one another, but where their jobs forced them apart it was that separation which helped to bring them closer. The truth behind this was that Elnora would probably have been out of service a long time ago, if she hadn't found her handsome and strong ranger that was able to calm her down after a long and hard day with little more than a kiss to her cheek and a soft spoken set of words into her ears. When she relaxed against him she nuzzled down into his shoulders, giving off the best attempt at a purr that her canine throat was able to while allowing her eyes to close and the stress from the day to simply wash off of her now that she'd escaped those people and allowed herself fold into his strong arms. If nothing else it was time for this girl to clean up, get the grime of the day off of her body so that she could forget about her hard work and relax over the weekend with her handsome lover. When she finally pulled away and turned from him to head for the room where she could take that uniform off the canine would jump at the sudden feeling of a hand swatting her rump, even making her head turn back over her shoulder at the husky who was still pulling that hand back only to smirk at him while she rounded the corner.

* * *

While Michael went to continue preparing the dinner for the two of them Elnora made her way towards her closet in the bedroom in order to pull down some clothes that were quick to put on. She'd found a pair of pants, but then smirked and turned towards the dresser to pull free from it a shirt that wasn't hers. Wanting to give her caring mate a little treat for having been so kind and caring to her even on her worst days. Pulling his favorite t-shirt from the drawer she'd turn towards the close by mirror in order to hold it against herself, even giving a soft giggle while she smiled to how it was just a bit baggy on her thanks to him being taller and just a bit wider with muscle than her well structured body was. She was very strong herself, but Michael had the advantage of size on her giving her room to move while she swayed back and forth against the cotton fabric of that shirt. The very touch of it felt on the curves of her uniform while she smiled to the sight of it. Even with him in the other room the shirt itself reminded her of him, made her want to be around him even more. They'd spend the evening together, they were still an entire shower away from being able to do so, which left her to scooping her panties and pants into her hands while racing towards the shower, hoping to get it out of the way quickly. The water being turned on was easily enough, and as she hummed to herself this akita would toss her pants and panties down on the back of the toilet while she'd make sure to delicately place his shirt at the edge of the sink, taking special care of it so that as she started to remove her uniform top and bottoms and then the shirt and underwear, this girl would be able to step right into that quickly running water.

The sound from the shower filled her ears, blocked out all other things while she focused on the feeling of her fur being matted down against her figure, her breath taking in the heated air allowing it to fill her lungs so that as she exhaled the sensation of her troubles would flow from her very being. The beating water that pushed on her, that washed through her fur helped to hit her muscles, massaging her figure as it beat the stress from her body. The very feeling of that tension being pulled from her down towards the drain below made her moan, her hands moving up through her cream colored hair so that as she shifted and adjusted herself the very feeling of that warm water could rub over those massive breasts, pouring off of them like a faucet. This feeling, this almost magical experience of her body being forced to relax after a day of stress and yelling had left her to lean that other hand against a wall, just holding herself up so that her knees wouldn't give out from under her thanks to her relaxed state. Elnora's head leaned back directly into the stream of water, letting it pool down over her, through her long tresses, and past her brown and cream colored coat, to rub over that muscular figure just before this beautiful akita would turn her body, shifting her stance and rolling herself in this shower in order to allow it to once again run down her front. With a soft sign finally washing through her body the canine felt perfectly relaxed even with her tail swaying slowly side to side. This sensation was one that she could get used to, but one that Elnora knew that she could never afford herself too often, not in her line of work. Instead her world was one of stress, or constantly looking over her shoulder, and most importantly of staying at the ready for anything that could happen.

Arms came around her quickly, suddenly, her body losing that relaxed state and she'd immediately tense up just as her ears folded back. The sound of the constantly running water had blocked off any noise of someone coming into the bathroom, but when she felt those arms wrapping around her body this delta soldier had no choice but to tense and start her rhythm to attack. It was only with strong willpower that she stopped her well trained pattern, preventing her body from following through so that common sense could over take her for the person that it had to be who was gripping her. In a way Michael was grateful that she'd stopped herself, but more importantly he didn't even know that the attack was coming. The only thing that he knew was that her body jumped a bit at the surprise movement of his hands gripping around her cream abs, rubbing them softly while the other gripped onto her large and luscious right breast to squeeze it down and feel the texture as that soft melon folded between his fingers easily like pudding against a screen.

"You're way too tense, beautiful. Let me help you with that." He offered to her, smiling into her line of sight while she looked back at him over her shoulder with a soft giggle on her lips.

The easy movement of her body leaning back into his hold, letting Michael feel over her figure, rub at her, and enjoy the soft feeling of her fur that covered her tight and strong figure. If anything Elnora felt that she could relax around him above anyone else, but she trusted him, loved him, cherished what she shared with him above most other things. If emotions were what compromised soldiers then this akita was completely exposed, but at least she was only exposed to him which was exactly how she wanted it. If she was compromised by him, then there was no reason not to surrender herself to him as well.

* * *

The brown fur of her shoulders ruffled easily as her back pressed against the strong and muscular grey and white chest of her lover, the feeling of his protective arms holding her, defending her against that bad day of hers making her murr softly deep in her throat. A hand lifting to wrap around the backside of her head to grip hold of his and pull him forward more against her, allowing this canine to grip her freely while she turned her head towards his. With Michael turning his back to her they shared their first long and deep kiss of the night, an easy press of their lips together, feeling the presence of warm breath from their nostrils brushing over the cheek of the other just as moaned to the sensual feeling of his finger clasping around her already pert nipple. When his hand tightened more her lips quivered, her breath shattered, her eyes faded into a deep shut and she'd slide that hand over the length of her leg to brush her nails through the fur of his thigh. Her lips no longer pressed to his, but his continued on with hers leaving her to fold those ears back and just looking on at his face with her loving gaze that left her shivering. Elnora didn't even feel the presence of water rushing over her figure anymore, but instead turned her full attention to the man that held her, that kept her, that cared for her so deeply that he'd dedicated his life just to have her in his arms night after night. To repay being such an amazing man her large and plump rump would push out, arching her back to lean on him while she rubbed her rear invitingly against his hips in small circles. It was an invitation that he was happy to take, one that he was happy to slide a hand from her abs down to grip at those strong thighs just so that he could hold that muscular rump against his already thickening sheath.

When her hips popped back again his own moved forward at the same time, feeling her hips crush to his and sending a hot shiver through both of their bodies at once. Elnora no longer gripped back of his regulation length head-fur and instead brought those hands forward so that she could brace herself. Those large and cream colored tits bobbed side to side while her body formed easy circles with her hips against that rump, egging him on, driving that thick dick from his sheath inch by inch until the fool hot length of it was completely exposed and rising over the curve of her hips. Those eyes turned back to him, watching him, not begging but demanding that he gives her what they both one while the water from the shower head cascaded down the length of her back only to run over those hot rump curves, delivering a small vibration in her rump through that all while he brought that thick dick back. The movement of it slid down the crevice of her rump all the way until the very tip was pressed straight to that swollen and needy cunny, dripping with both water and desire as she waited for him to deliver it into her. Time almost froze around them, the sudden realization that if they'd start this then there wouldn't be an end. The sudden realization came over them that once they started it was going to be their full night, and with an easy smile passing over their lips neither felt that such a night was going to be a waste at all. This wasn't something that you just jump into, though, with that look staring back at him in a perfect expecting look that soon ended when this canine-ess felt the presence of his hot and dripping dick working to slight into her tight body. He wouldn't push it in all at once, such would cheapen it, but instead started the two of them off in this shower with a heated moan and only the head pressing in for now.

Elnora no longer looked back at Michael, her breath shaking with a heavy moan as her face was thrown forward to the sensation of her tight, gripping, walls being spread by his doggy meat that was sinking deeper and deeper into this feminine, army-forged, body. Those lips parting, that jaw working to hang open, and her eyes clinching down rightly to the sensation of his length filling her little by little. Oh how this husky tortured the poor akita, drove her breath from her body with an deep and easily vibrating moan that shook her to her very core. Fingers tensed, gripped at the wall in front of her, that wet hair falling down over her shoulder just before her body was jerked forward with the sensation of his full cock finally meeting the end with his hips pressing to her soft and squishy butt. There was a strong layer of muscle in there that shown itself well as her body was made to tense up once more, but as he pulled back, slid that length out of her to draw her needing fluid from the depths of her tunnel this girl finally felt the ability to fill her lungs again entering her control. It was a control that she'd soon lose when he pushed right back in, this time a bit faster, and landing a little harder, jerking her body closer to that wall just so that his strong and muscular arms could pull on her thighs, bringing her butt against him. Elnora felt the soft whimper rise to the tip of her throat, but stifled it down. A powerful Major like her doesn't whimper and whine, even for the dick of her lover who was delivering it so well into her body that there was little for her to tell if she had already ended up whimpering for him or not.

It wasn't a hard session, it wasn't a devastating fucking that would beat the stress of the day out of her, but instead was soft, easy, powerful in the slowest possible motion so that while it didn't shake her body from one end of the tub to the other it would still leave her legs quivering, it would still shake the very earth under her feet. This session was sensual, loving, caring. It didn't crack away the day like a hammer, but instead melted it like ice trapped in an oven, and every single beat that his hips landed against hers would softly pat her shaking hips and leave her leaning that head back in a loud and deep call of love and devotion that he had shown her so many times already.

"M... Michael.." she called to him, speaking his name while he pressed in once more. The deep grunt of her voice showed that she wasn't here to finish some statement, just speaking the name of the man that had accepted the heart she'd given to him and worked it so well.

This husky didn't need to respond, loving it when he heard the soft squeaks of her voice during their sessions. The running water keeping him from seeing her face, but still allowing him to know exactly what she was doing. Even when her hot cunny muscles gripped down around the length of that shaft she felt the ache of her walls being spread right back out while the akita crushed down against them. Elnora's eyes were fully shut from this, her mouth hanging open, her breath in deep and long pants, and while he wasn't giving himself to her in heavy beats of hard crushing thrusts, his slow and devastating pace that he delivered to her worked her down slowly. He wasn't beating down any walls, but slowly chiseling them away little by little like water corroding a stone over time. The depths of her body felt his presence even when he was pulling out and just as he slid his way back in the deep groan of that heated akita sounded out deeply with a loud cry of strain from where she was trying to hold herself back, not wanting to release just yet and even clenching her eyes to wait for him first. Her entire figure was ready to give in, the feeling of her swaying breasts shaking freely in the air, the movement of her arms trying to hold back her body every time he bottomed himself into her, pushing the tip against her back wall. Just as Elnora's body was about to give out, just as she felt herself needing to release this husky did the cruelest of things that she could even imagine. His cock completely slid from her body. The ache to cum was still there, her breath was still in hot and longing breaths, but even while her body started to calm and her figure began to lift all she knew was that she wanted him to finish her, to complete their session. It was when his arms came around her, wrapping her in his strength and warmth that she knew that was exactly what they were going to be getting. For now, this shower was complete, but already while she turned it off and reached for a towel the figure of her body would shift and turn, leaving her clothes behind in the bathroom so that her figure could make it's way towards that bed, hoping he'd catch the clue and follow her willingly.

* * *

Dinner had turned into a missing thought, the very idea of it lost to both of them while they turned the corner to leave the Caesar salad to grow cold, chill in the room's current air, with the two skipping it in order to find their way towards the bedroom. That king-sized bed beckoned to them both, called out while the brown and cream colored canine rested down onto it. The towel that she had at some point was no longer around her, no longer wrapping her body so that now this air-borne fighter could see the display of her strong and powerful body. Her knees together lifting her legs up to her side while her shoulders were pressed easily into the backboard with her arms spread wide across the surface of pillows that were here. Those panting breaths were still touched on her lips, and her half closed, sultry, eyes never went away while she waited him to approach her, to step his way towards the girl with every single movement. The show of her power, of her strength, of her need, drew that strong and muscular body closer to her, even as he watched that tongue of hers trace across her lips those grey hands of this husky came down easily onto the edge of the bed, gripping at the blanket with a simple gesture that pulled his knees up onto it as well. A hand gripped down on those thighs, holding them, taking them, and soon spreading them like opening a book. She spread her cream color filled thighs, showing off that dark cunny while the girl huffed and watched on expecting to have her toes curled in only seconds of their interaction. When he looked down towards that pussy his arms lowered his body, delivering a single lowering push-up that soon was brought onto his elbows, giving his snout the perfect position to run his tongue across the texture of her delightfully juicy slit. Those hands that released the bed soon folding around the underside of her thighs, wrapping them in his strong grey grip while he pulled her body to him, forcing this queen to move from her throne as he dragged her to his tongue that forced the akita girl to cry out loudly in a deep and earthy call up towards the ceiling and any heavens that happened to be listening in.

Michael smile to the feeling of her delicious cunny quivering over her tongue, shaking to the desire of that thick and wide tongue spreading her depths in a completely different way that his cock had back in the shower. The movement of it wasn't just in and out, it wasn't just up and down either, but moved in what she could describe as all directions. The very feeling of her pussy being painted with that mouth brush left her mewling, moaning, trying to hold on, but knowing when she had to just give in. Every inch of her heated pussy was left touched by this tongue, every movement that he made inside of her stretched and curled her toes while she let out a deep groan that worked to arch her back, and jut out those perfectly shaking tits forced to shift and churn under the pressure of a loud breath was completely outside of her control. With her dam already damaged from the shower it only took that tongue alone to break it down entirely, the waves kicking against it finally forcing it to collapse so that her muscled body would tense up deeply and her already delicious akita cunny would grow a brand new flavor across it. His tongue lapped at the escaping juices for a second, but soon permitted them to run free while he'd move to climb up the length of that body. His chest crushing down against hers, pressing over her while her panting lips looked up at him, those fingers wrapped hi cheeks, and with a fast and immediate pull this Major drew him deeply into a long and hard kiss, forcing that tongue into his already parted lips in order to rub her canine mouth muscle across his own, tasting herself on him, but loving the flavor of his breath as it filled her maw. Soft smacks echoing across the room, deep moans flowing in dual tones as these two rub and feel their damp bodies over one another in hot delicate desire.

"Michael.. I love you. I want you." She said to him in her soft alpha tone, almost sounding like a mewling pup while his lips rode down the side of her cheek and against her neck with an easy suckling that left her body with a heavy shake an a deep series of claws running down the muscular back.

When he heard her words, though, he'd lift his snout off of her, looking her directly in the eyes with his own loving and lusting gaze, "Roll over," he said to her in his deep voice, feeling her body already starting to life while he'd bring himself up off of her and feel her crushing her large tits against the mattress and presenting that fine brown and cream colored rear up in the air for him to claim.

He wasn't slow and gentle this time, his thick dick shoving itself into her already cum juiced pussy, stretching it's walls instantly and leaving her to cry out while her back arched against that bed, fingers gripped at the top of the mattress and sheets to pull them away all while she moved to grip a pillow and toss it from the bed entirely when she felt it starting to close in on her. The force of his hips crushing into hers, slamming hard with an audible smack left the girl to jerk her body forward, leaving her to cry out loudly once again on every single thrust that he delivered into her perfectly presented pussy. That throbbing cock inside of her having worked her well before, and now it was working her even better, but where it now throbbed and shook it showed that Michael wasn't limitless and his own limit was rising up quickly. The beautiful creature wrapped around his cock was someone that he loved, someone that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with, but he didn't want to finish himself inside of her while she was face down like a pup in heat. He wanted to look her in the eyes when he released, so with his need at it's peak the ranger pulled himself free from her body, sliding himself out of her and stopped his instincts to shove back in only so that she could look back over her shoulder to him.

"Roll over." he told her again, ordering her this time while gripping her hips and almost forcing her to move in the way that he wanted her to.

Getting her head propped up on a pillow Michael wouldn't waste any time at all, his hot shaft being shoved back into her immediately, covering itself once again in her sensual fluids while her voice echoed over the ceiling and his lips coming to silence her instantly with a deep and long kiss that not only muffled her moans, but forced them down his throat into his lungs. He panted back to her, feeling her strong and muscular body against his own while every movement of his hips drew him closer to that release, brought him more against her. Her large breasts crushed down to his massive chest, pillowing out to the sides while he rode that cock in and out of her with a fast and slamming pace that delivered his meat thoroughly through her amazing tight body. With a staggered breath he'd finally release the kiss from her, looking directly into her eyes while his mind lost the ability to speak at all. She looked back on, her eyes heavy pants showing off what was expected from her as well and with a single and final eruption from his hot canine cock he'd shoot a heavy load of his potent seed straight through into her body just as her own fluids crushed back out, spraying hard across his balls and hips to leave both of these perfectly designed combat canines to need a minute before they could have a chance to continue ignoring the dinner that Michael had worked so diligently to make.