The Cave
When a fox stumbles across his friend training in secret and an accident results in feelings being admitted a chance encounter happens that could change two lives forever.
This is a rewrite of an old story I wrote several years ago so it might sound a little different from my usual style. I'm trying to get back into writing more and figured a rewrite would be a good way to ease back into it.
*Obligatory warning*
This is an adult work of fiction, if you are not old enough to view this where you are or you don't want to read that go away. Seriously, I don't need anyone complaining about me including something they don't like. This story contains gay sex and adult themes. You've been warned. Oh, and this is a work of fiction, any names or such that happen to be the same as a real person are just coincidence.
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It was a bright fall morning in the village of Hirungeki, a small mountain village famous for its fierce knights and warriors trained by the great Master Fushun. On this morning almost everyone was either resting, recovering, or training as was common for students dedicated enough to be accepted by Master Fushun. Of those who were training, none was working harder than Marcus Revelfield, a lithe cheetah who was spending all his time practicing his swordsmanship, trying to become skilled enough to protect his village from harm. Meanwhile, a friend of his, a fox by the name of Chris Havenworth, was wondering about, taking a break from his training and enjoying the nice day.
Currently, Chris was wondering through a forested area a few miles from the Hirungeki, enjoying the nice weather. It was days like today that one really appreciated the beauty of Hirungeki, the sun was shining, there was just the lightest warm breeze, and the forest was calm, and peaceful. Up ahead Chris saw a cliff and decided to turn around and head back. Just as he did, he heard a loud crash behind him like a boulder smashing on the ground. He turned to look at the cliff, wondering just what could have caused such a noise. As he looked he spotted the top of a cave just above the treetops up ahead. Figuring that may have been where the sound came from he began to walk towards the cave to see just what had caused it. As he neared the cave he noticed that he could hear grunts and yells like someone fighting. He peered around the corner and was surprised to see Marcus standing in the cave with his energy swirling around him. He saw the entire cave littered with pieces of rock and stone and realized that Marcus had been training himself to cut through hardened materials and barriers.
Chris felt compelled to watch his friend train for some reason, something about him standing there attempting to master this technique reminded Chris of his own training, fighting tooth and nail to improve himself more and more. As he thought about that he heard Marcus talking to himself. Chris turned his head and tried to make out what he was saying. "...get stronger, I promise I will protect everyone. I won't ever let anyone get hurt you like that night. I'll become so strong that I can always protect everyone!" As he said this a tear slipped down Marcus's face and he raised his sword.
With a mighty yell he flew forwards and with a single slash he cut clean through three massive stalactites causing them to fall to the ground beneath. As he caught his breath his foot slipped off the edge of the cut stalagmite he was standing on. With a yell he began to plummet towards the ground. Without even thinking Chris rushed forward and caught him just before he hit the rock floor of the cave, the force of the impact causing them both to topple to the ground and slide backwards. "W-what the hell are you doing here?" Marcus yelled at Chris, although it came out somewhat less imposing since he was still slightly out of breath. "You shouldn't spy on other while they're training, it's rude."
Chris, slightly taken aback at Marcus's first outburst, became somewhat irritated at the way his friend was yelling at him after he had just saved him from crashing to the ground. "Hey, I was just minding my own business and walking through the woods when I stumbled across you training here!" he yelled back, "And besides, you should be thanking me for saving your ass from falling!"
"Why are you out here in the middle of nowhere anyway?" Chris inquired. "Couldn't you just train in the normal training hall?" "For your information I was trying to train in private." Marcus responded, feeling less annoyed now after having vented his frustration at both Chris and himself. "I didn't want everyone knowing what I was up to." He tried to glare at him but stopped short upon seeing the look in Chris's eyes. Rather than seeing playful teasing like he would've expected from him, he saw a deep concern in Chris's eyes. He realized that Chris understood what it felt like to have someone you were trying to protect hurt because of your inability to protect them and the desire to become strong enough to make up for it. After all, that's exactly what had happened with him and his best friend, and yet Chris hadn't acted like a baby when confronted about it, in fact he had openly stated that his goal was to get stronger so nothing like that would happen to his friends ever again.
"The reason I'm training right now is so I can protect my village, so no one will ever hurt anyone I care about again. You know what it's like. You're doing the same thing as me and you've never tried to hide it. Unlike me, who's too afraid of showing weakness to even train in front of others. I-I just feel like you can relate to how I'm feeling."
"You're right." Chris said, "I do understand. I understand how it feels to want so badly to protect someone that you'll go as far as you have to to do it. I also understand how helpless and weak you feel when you can't protect them. When Tess was taken from right in front of me and I couldn't so much as lift a finger to stop it I felt so weak and pathetic I couldn't stand it. I was sure that I was never going to see her again, that she would be killed and it would be all my fault. I almost gave up hope then and there."
Marcus was somewhat taken aback, he never would have guessed that Chris had doubted himself that much. Marcus had been sure that Chris never given up hope of anything for a minute. This new revelation made the him feel a sort of bond with Chris. Here was someone who seemed to completely understand how he felt. But there was more to it than that, Chris had managed to push past the doubt and fear and had found the courage and power to overcome the impossible odds and rescue Tess, and more than that, he had fought hopeless battles and he always found a way to keep his faith in himself and his friends.
Marcus was so caught up in his thoughts that he missed Chris saying something. "What?" he said, berating himself for getting so distracted by his own musings. "I said, would you mind getting off my lap. You seem to have caught your breath now and you're starting to make my legs fall asleep." "Oh, sorry." Marcus responded, having completely forgot that he was sitting in the other boys lap.
As he went to push himself off of Chris he accidentally put his hand on his crotch and his hand brushed up against Chris's dick. Marcus froze as he realized what had happened and then blushed as he realized both that his hand was on Chris's dick, and that it was partly erect. Neither of them said anything for what seemed like hours, Marcus's hand pressed up against Chris's dick and Chris to stunned to do anything, let alone move away.
After what seemed like an eternity Marcus finally regained his composure enough to pull his hand away and stand up, apologizing profusely. "I... I'm... I'm so sorry, oh my god. I... I was just trying to push myself up and... and I didn't mean to put my hand there and... and... and... W-why the hell were you half hard you idiot?!" He managed to get out. Chris meanwhile was busy with his own thoughts. "Shit, shit, shit, shit, shit. I can't believe that just happened, and what's worse, I was still half hard from earlier. Shit, shit, shit. He's gonna kill me." He was snapped out of his train of thought by Marcus's remark.
"I... I... I..." He sputtered, "I was still a little hard from earlier." He admitted without thinking. Seeing the look in Marcus' face at this he lowered his ears and continued. "When I saw you training you just looked so amazing and then I started thinking about all the battles I've fought and... I'm so sorry Marcus. Please don't kill me, I-I..." He closed his mouth and just stared at Marcus, trying to decide if he should make a break for it or take his chances. After a few tense seconds Marcus asked a question so quietly, Chris almost didn't hear it. "You got hard watching me train?" Marcus asked softly, "You seriously got hard just from watching me training?" he repeated in a slightly louder tone. "Well... Kinda?" Chris cautiously replied, preparing himself to make a break for it.
Marcus looked thoroughly annoyed for a moment before he took a deep breath and relaxed. "You know," he began, "a little bit ago I would have kicked your ass so hard you'd end up in the infirmary, but..." he trailed off. "But what?" Chris asked, feeling a little less worried, but still keeping himself ready to dart out the mouth of the cave if need be. "But," Marcus continued, "I realized during out conversation that I might be starting to have feelings for you." he admitted embarrassedly. "Honestly, I don't mind as much as I normally would." He continued in a slightly louder voice. "In fact, if I'm going to be honest I might as well admit it. I was starting to get a bit, uh, worked up myself." The last part barely above a whisper, the cheetah's cheeks ablaze with embarrassment. "I was thinking about how much we're alike, and then I started thinking about how you've overcome so much and never given up on yourself and, how amazing and confident you seem and, uh, it made me start to get a little bit aroused too." He admitted, cheeks growing brighter with every word.
"Wow, Marcus, I never expected you to feel that way. Well, as long as we're being honest I might as well say it. There's just something about you, and maybe it's like you said, because we're so much alike but, I've liked you for a while now. I thought I'd just forget about it and let things go back to normal, but as long as we're admitting it I figured I'd tell you." The silence that permeated the air for the next few moments was tense as they both debated what to say next. It was Chris who broke it, grunting lightly and addressing the equally nervous captain in front of him. "I guess... I mean, as long as we're admitting this and all do you... do you maybe, you know, want to do something?"
Marcus blinked once, twice, and then shook his head as if trying to re-engage his brain. "W-what? Are you seriously asking me that?" Marcus responded. "Well, yeah. I mean, we're both here and excited and we both just admitted that we have feelings for each other so..." "Oh, what the hell," Marcus thought, "Chris's right, as long as we're here and admitting we feel this way we might as well do something about it. Who knows if anything like this will ever happen again. If I don't act now I'll probably end up regretting it." And with that looked at Chris and began to take off his shirt. Chris, quickly getting the idea, began to strip as well and soon the two of the stood facing each other, completely naked. Surprisingly, it was Marcus who made the first move, stepping forward and wrapping his hand around Chris's cock.
Chris let out a moan at the treatment and Marcus took that as a sign to continue. He guided Chris to sit down and began to slowly stroke him from base to tip. As he did this, Chris's hands found his way to Marcus's shoulders and he pulled Marcus towards him. As their faces drew level, Chris leaned forward and kissed the surprised cheetah. At first, Marcus was to surprised to do anything, but as he felt Chris's lips on his and the cat's tongue teasing his mouth he began to return the kiss in full. The two of them stayed like that, tongues wrestling in each others mouths, for quite some time before they both had to pull away for air. "That... was... intense." Chris panted, trying in vain to catch his breath. "Yes... It was." Marcus replied, equally out of breath. He looked Chris in the eye and gave him a lustful and devious smile before quickly leaning forward and, without warning, taking Chris' shaft into his mouth.
Chris cried out at the sensation, not having expected to suddenly find Marcus's mouth encircling his throbbing shaft. His hands found their way to Marcus's hair as the cheetah began to bob up and down on Chris's impressive length. He had trouble taking it all the way but, eventually, he managed to reach the base, the head lodged snugly in his throat about 2 inches. The moment Chris felt Marcus's throat open up and the end of his dick slide in he knew it wouldn't be long. He laid back and tried as hard as he could to hold off him impending climax. Unfortunately for him Marcus wouldn't have any of that. He pulled back for just a moment to take a breath and then pushed forward as hard as he could opening his mouth to its limits and reaching out his tongue. Just as he thought he couldn't go any further his tongue reached Chris's smooth balls.
Marcus smirked as best he could with Chris's dick lodged firmly in his mouth and gave one final push while pulling Chris's balls towards him with his tongue. The result was exactly what he'd hoped for. Chris's balls joined his dick in Marcus's muzzle and Chris tensed. Marcus swallowed mightily around the hot, thick meat in his mouth and throat as his friend let out a strangled cry. Marcus felt the first shot of thick cum blast straight down his throat before he pulled up and took the rest of them into his mouth, tasting Chris's delicious cream and savoring his essence. He continued to suck as best he could as Chris came down from his climax and pulled off his dick with a slurp.
He opened his nearly overflowing mouth, having already swallow some to make room, and showed Chris some of the massive load he had fired into him, all that his mouth could hold without spilling. Then, as Chris watched, Marcus tipped his head back and the pool of cum in his mouth disappeared, a large bulge sliding down his throat. He licked his lips and addressed Chris with a slightly happier than normal tone. "That was delicious. I'd love to try it again sometime if you'd care for it." Chris could only nod, still not having regained his breath. "You came like a fountain, I didn't think I'd be able to swallow it all, and as it is I don't think I could have gulped down much more. Now, if I'm not mistaken, it's my turn."
No sooner had the words left his mouth than Chris pounced him and stuffed Marcus's dick into his mouth. He licked, slurped, and sucked with a vengeance, determined to return the favor at least as well as the cheetah had given it. He noted with a slight inward chuckle that, despite being fairly short height-wise, Marcus was definitely not short down there. Chris had to take at least three inches into his throat to reach the base, not that he was complaining. To him, Marcus's dick tasted absolutely wonderful and he sucked on it like a piece of candy, thoroughly enjoying if taste. After blowing Chris, Marcus was nearly ready to burst himself and he had to focus all his willpower to hold back from cumming the moment Chris started to suck. It certainly didn't help that Chris seem to be a natural at this. With the fox working him as hard as he was Marcus wasn't sure just how long he could hold out.
Just as he was about to tell Chris to back off for a sec, the fox decided to really push Marcus over the edge. He stopped sucking for just a moment, surprising Marcus and then quickly resumed trying to inhale the cheetah's dick. Suddenly, Chris inserted a finger into Marcus's virgin ass, followed quickly by a second. As soon as this happened Marcus tensed up and began to shoot his load right down Chris's throat. Following the white haired boy's example, Chris quickly pulled his head back and let Marcus cum in his mouth. He too had to swallow several times to keep the hot, sticky cream from spilling out of his mouth.
When Marcus finished spurting, Chris pulled off and savored his mouthful of cum before slowly swallowing the delicious liquid. Afterwards, he flopped down next to Marcus to catch his breath. "We really ought to get going." Marcus said, "Just look, it's going to be dark soon." "When do you think we can do this again?" Chris asked, "I really enjoyed it." Smirking, Marcus decided that he wasn't quite done either. "How would you feel about sneaking back to my room and spending the night with me? It's mostly sound-proof and no one should bother us there" Marcus asked, albeit with a bit of a blush. "I think we ought to get going then," replied Chris, "we have a long night ahead of us."