Electivire vs Dusknoir

Story by Axel Silverwolf on SoFurry

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Electivire faces Dusknoir in battle, though would he be able to beat the ghost in a fair fight? Read to find out


As the match started, Electivire stepped aside as the other construction workers brought in something unusual, something that had not been seen… Or even heard from before, a relic of a bygone era.

“What is that thing?” Dusknoir asked, wondering what Electivire was plotting with the machine they were carrying.

The machine consisted of a large monitor, but most of it looked unusable from how damaged it appeared, but it looked like the construction workers, and seemingly some machinist enthusiasts seem to be taking a look at it in the middle of the match for Electivire.

“Oh that? Well, we saw its potential, and we decided that we will use it against you. After all, a relic of the past, is only fitting to be beaten by something from the past. Hey, all of you, don’t interfere with my fight, focus on getting this piece of junk working” Electivire said smugly as he turned towards his workers and the mechanics they asked to work on.

“Fool… Even if you did repair that thing, I will not be beaten by a broken piece of junk. I have power and magic on my side, along with my hexes that can break anyone’s mind if I willed it” Dusknoir scoffed at what Electivire said.

“Oh really? Well then let’s find out, and maybe I won’t even need to use this thing on you by the time we’ve fixed it” Electivire said as he brought out pliers, massive pliers with his tails hooked onto it, electrifying the tool in his hands.

“Hmph! As if I’ll let you get near me! Fall, and I’ll let you take Drapion’s place in my tentacle prison” Dusknoir said, intimidating Electivire by opening and tearing his whole body open, displaying the deceptive size and massive flesh prison waiting for Drapion again if he won.

“Hah! Looks like a whole new world for me to play with my tools if you ask me!” Electivire said as he started charging in and firing a massive jolt of electricity against Dusknoir as he kept closing the distance.

“You’ll get to know the world inside me once you’ve lost. I’ll make sure you and Drapion are not lonely by trapping you inside” Dusknoir said as he placed his hands on the ground, as several ghostly tentacles started emerging from the ground.

But as soon as the tentacles got close to Electivire however, they recoiled and retreated back, as if scared, or more likely being hurt by something.

“What the…!” Dusknoir didn’t know what happened, or why his tentacles had decided to retreat from where they emerged from.

“Heh, never heard of protective charms? Just means you are a ghost who can’t move on, who can’t even fathom you are not what you think you are!” Electivire said, as he leapt and grabbed the ghost with the gigantic pliers, and started electrocuting him.

The amulet was indeed protecting him from Dusknoir’s ghostly spells, and unless Dusknoir managed to remove it by hand, his magic would be useless.

“AAUUUUUUUGGHHH!!!” Dusknoir screamed as he felt jolts of electricity coursing through his body.

Electivire kept electrocuting him, intending to even end Dusknoir right there as he didn’t even intend to let him go.

“Whoa folks! Is this going to be a quick match? Our dear dusknoir seems to have gotten caught in a shocking turn of events!” Gliscor said as he watched what happened.

Dusknoir writhed and tried to open the oversized pliers, trying to open them, only for Electivire to tighten it up even more, and intensifying the electricity.

“H-Help… HEEEELP!!!!” Dusknoir screamed, writhing around and trying to escape.

Electivire felt like something was wrong… It felt a bit too easy… But still, if it was going to be an easy victory, he’d be glad to take it.

“Sorry, but it’s going to be my victory here, funny, thought you’d put up more of a fight” Electivire said as he slammed him down on the ground, before gathering a ball of electricity to gather above him, before discharging down on him.

As the dust settled, Dusknoir seemed to have lost consciousness, an easy victory…

“Unbelieveable… What a quick match! Let’s start the countdown!” Grumpig encouraged the crowd.

“10… 9… 8… 7… 6… 5…” The crowd counted.

But then something started happening to Dusknoir’s body.

Everyone stopped counting, and was shocked at what was happening.

Dusknoir’s body began to melt… Dissolving until someone familiar was in his place… It was Drapion!

“What the… D-Drapion… Then where…!” Electivire said, trying to look around him, wondering where the real Dusknoir was.

Suddenly, he felt a presence behind him, but before he could react, he felt a hand on his neck, and rip out the protective amulet he had been wearing.

“Did you think you can use this trick to be immune to my powers, mortal?” Dusknoir’s voice asked.

Dropping the heavy tool in his hands, Electivire tried to grab his wrench from his belt and tried to take a swing at Dusknoir, only for the same tentacles he fended off earlier to emerge from the ground again and held his arms and legs apart, making him drop his wrench in the process.

“G-Gih…!” Electivire groaned as he tried to use a thunder punch instead, but the tentacles were threatening to rip his arms apart.

Dusknoir floated in front of him, looking at the body of Drapion, steaming from the attack earlier.

“That fool was handy with distracting you. I promised him that I’d leave him alone if he acts as bait. But you… Yes… You will be a worthy vessel… Your strength and power, a second body to inhabit will make a fine addition to my power. To feel young and strong again… It’s certainly tempting. I will possess your body after I defeat you” Dusknoir said, before slapping him two times with just one hand, bruising Electivire’s cheeks.

Electivire shifted his eyes to the big screen monitor that his crew had been tinkering with, thankfully Dusknoir wasn’t paying them any mind.

“Look at me when I’m talking to you!” Dusknoir said, grabbing his face by Electivire’s chin.

“Didn’t think you’d be the jealous type. Sorry, but this body of mine is reserved for my crew, and everyone who loses to me” Electivire said.

“Then I’ll play with your body and spirit” Dusknoir said, holding his hand out to the side.

One of Dusknoir’s followers stepped in, and gave him a doll… A doll that resembles Electiivre.

“I figured that I would use a doll that looked more like my slave who you fried to a crisp with your attack. He wasn’t worthy with how he was broken with him under me. He didn’t last a single day, and I doubt you will… Do you know that he asked me to leave him alone? In exchange for anything? So I had him as a decoy, and now he’s a broken toy. But you, your mind is still fresh and intact. I will be all too glad to see how careful I should be to see how long you’d last inside my flesh prison” Dusknoir said as he then began massaging the crotch area of the doll.

Electivire gasped as he actually felt someone… Something on his crotch, before he looked down to see himself getting hard.

“You… How… This is…!” Electivire said as he moaned from the feeling.

“Yes… I placed a curse on you while you were busy with my little slave you’ve been busy fighting with. You didn’t even notice me emerge from the ground before I started imbuing you with a hex and connecting your receptors with the doll. Unless you destroy this, you are at my mercy… Or maybe I should pass it around to everyone hm?” Dusknoir deviously said, before moving on to stroking the doll’s twin tails.

“Gragh…!!!” Electivire gasped as he felt his tail area being massaged.

He remembered it… That’s why he had a bad feeling when he was busy electrocuting the decoy, that was the time when he got hexed.

“So that time… You… You did…!” Electivire said, but before he could finish, more tentacles emerged and started slithering inside his clothing.

“You don’t need to speak anymore, you have lost, it is inevitable” Dusknoir said, as he commanded the tentacles.

“Guwaaaghhhh!!! T-They’re all over m-me… Stop… Make them stop…!!!” Electivre screamed as he felt the tentacles writhing in his clothes, feeling them slithering all over him like worms and stimulating every inch of his body.

He felt one tentacle each open up near his pecs, small mouths emerging from the end as they simultaneously latched onto his nipples and started sucking him hard.

“AUUUUGGHHHH!!!” Electivire screamed, as he looked at the large monitor opening up behind him, before shutting down almost immediately, it was not yet even ready…

“That relic of a device that you think will save you… I can tell you’re desperate. I’ve seen many of those since I’ve existed, and none of them worked. Nobody has repaired or gotten it to work. Your struggle is futile. Here, allow me to give you more” Dusknoir said as he tossed the doll into the air, and opened the mouth in his stomach and caught it inside.

Electivire’s eyes widened and he writhed around even more, feeling as though he was the one inside the mouth, and felt slimy all over. He felt a giant tongue start coiling around him like a snake, running it’s slimy saliva all over him, with the added benefit of being in the open air.

The tentacles in his clothes all decided to pull hard, ripping his construction uniform to pieces and swiping his hard hat away, leaving him naked and hard as he was publicly molested in front of everyone.

“Augh… G-Guh…!!! A-Ack… You cheap bastard… This isn’t even a fight…!!!” Electivire said, feeling tears of pleasure start to come out of his eyes, the pleasure driving him insane with the sensory overload he was receiving.

“You should be happy, you’re letting Drapion there off the hook. How noble of a leader like you to relieve his burden” Dusknoir said as he looked to where Drapion originally was, but his decoy had seemed to disappear, taking this moment to escape.

“Tch… He escaped… No matter… I will have my own fun with him, with this stronger vessel’s body” Dusknoir said, turning back to Electivire.

Electivire tried his hardest to pull on the tentacles holding his arms and legs wide, he slowly was gaining control… Until the tentacles defiantly pulled hard, suspending him in the air, his legs in a perfect split, along with his arms stretched wide.

“G-Gaugh… N-N-No…” Electivire said as his eyes uncontrollably teared up, his tongue hanging out and saliva dripping as he involuntarily thrusted in the air, while a tentacle wrapped around his cock, all the while he could still feel a giant invisible tongue going around him.

Five more tentacles that were more phallic shaped emerged from the ground, and prodded his hole at the same time.

“Let’s commence with your punishment now, why don’t you say?” Dusknoir said as the tentacles started pushing in.

The monitor that was being tinkered with suddenly whirred to life, having turned on finally.

“Boss! We got it working now!” He heard one of the workers.

Dusknoir tightened the tentacles’ hold on him, even if he wanted to, he couldn’t escape on his own.

“No matter, that device won’t even help you, so what’s the point?” Dusknoir said as he smirked evilly at him.

A group of robed pokemorphs walked behind Dusknoir, ready to lend their master a hand.

“Ah good… Deal with those nuisances. I’ll deal with this” Dusknoir said as the tentacles pushed harder to enter, while Electivire gritted his teeth to try and tighten up.

Suddenly, one of the robed pokemorphs brought out a purple, gold tinted warhammer, and swung his hammer around, knocking the other followers out and putting them out of commission.

“What!?” Dusknoir was surprised by the sudden betrayal, before he felt the follower swing his hammer up into his belly, making him cough up the doll.

Due to Dusknoir’s concentration being disrupted, the tentacles had disappeared, letting Electivire drop onto the ground.

As Electivire got up, the follower removed their robes, revealing itself to be Nidoking.

“Unbelievable… Nidoking came to aid Electivire in his match!” Grumpig said, astonished by Nidoking’s actions.

“And here I thought he hated his guts!” Gliscor added.

“You…! But why!?” Electivire was shocked that the noble had decided to help him for some reason, knowing that this guy hated him.

“Why? I’m not doing this to help you. I’m getting rid of stronger competition, and this one, will be a nuisance for me should he survive all the way down the tournament. If you want to return the favor, forfeit the match when you face me, and I’ll consider us even” Nidoking said as he picked up the amulet that Electivire was wearing earlier and started running.

“Come back here! I will torture you both!!!” Dusknoir growled, seizing him with more tentacles, which disintegrated as soon as they touched him.

Electivire grabbed the doll and ran towards his crew, the monitor roaring to life completely as it barely showed any options in the cracked monitor.

“Is it ready?” Electivire asked his crew.

“Yes boss! The adjustments and parts have been installed while you were busy dealing with that ghoul!” One of the workers said.

“Heh, good job. I knew I could count on you guys” Electivire said, dropping the porcelain look-alike doll of him, and destroying it with a single stomp.

“Nobody has made this thing work, what makes you think you can!?” Dusknoir growled before smiling as his shadow extended, trying to take Electivire with him in case the device fired a deadly beam.

“You think that scares me? I don’t intend on hurting you Dusknoir, I intend to own you for myself” Electivire smiled back at him.

Everyone in the crew started holding a giant hose that was hooked up to the monitor, as a bright light shot out, heading straight for Dusknoir.

Dusknoir didn’t know why, but an imminent sense of danger filled him as he tried to possess one of his followers, trying to avoid any damage from the beam of light.

Dusknoir felt a sense of relief as soon as he was inside one of his unconscious followers… Until he felt the beam of light begin sucking him out of the follower’s body.

“NOOOOO!!!” Dusknoir tried to escape, but no matter how incorporeal he made himself, the beam kept sucking him in.

“Hell yeah! Don’t stop and keep the pressure!” Electivire urged everyone, as the beam of light began sucking Dusknoir inside even harder, making it harder for everyone to hold the hose.

“AUUUUUUUGGGHHHHH!!!” Dusknoir screamed as he was sucked directly into the monitor, before everything was silent.

Everyone looked at the monitor as a picture of dusknoir was trapped inside, looking all chibi as he started banging his fists onto the monitor.

“He’s… He’s trapped inside…!” Grumpig said, realizing that the ghost was not entirely defeated, but trapped.

“Start the countdown people!” Electivire told the crowd.

“You heard him folks!” Gliscor said in agreement.

“10… 9… 8… 7… 6… 5… 4… 3… 2… 1… 0!!!!!!!” The crowd cheered as they finished the countdown.

Electivire had won, though not able to overpower the enemy, he still managed to subdue him. And having this ghost at his disposal, it might be handy to see if he could force him to share his power with him.

Grumpig and Gliscor went to Electivire to ask him questions about the fight.

“So… How exactly did you capture Dusknoir? Did you know that this thing was going to capture him?” Gliscor asked Electivire.

“Heh, well you see, I asked Slowbro myself personally. Being a scholar himself, he did read up on something about it. It can capture nearly hundreds of pokemon inside this thing. Except most of these… Peesees or something, are broken and unusable, until we found this thing a few days ago before the tournament. So we thought of reverse engineering it. Though it’s most likely going to break knowing it’s not meant to be used this way once we free Dusknoir” Elecitivre answered Gliscor.

“And what about Nidoking? Why did he help you?” Grumpig asked.

“Heh, I never expected him to help me. Though it was for his own benefit. He would have a hard time fighting Dusknoir if he did end up winning the loser’s bracket. Though truth be told, I won’t let myself forfeit a match against him. Because it would be disrespectful, but from this point forward, I would go easy on my daily use of him” Electivire said as he answered Grumpig this time.

“You got it from Electivire here folks! Honorable and respectful enough to appreciate his own slave” Grumpig said as he avoided staring at Electivire’s naked body.

“With that said, let’s not keep the guy waiting, let’s get on with the punishment, right everyone?” Electivire asked the crowd.

The crowd cheered as the punishment was about to start.

Thank you for voting guys! These are the results of the fight! I am sorry for the massive delay, I was doing commissions for other people at the moment

Electivire - 29

Dusknoir - 9