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Sequel to Princess No More, Hinoka now as a Pegasus talks to her partner in crime. And as they continued their discussion, she goes into heat now begging her to have sex with him.

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On the other stable however, her pegasus only pretended to sleep. He merely closed his eyes, still trying to process what he just saw before him. Feelings shuffled and ruffled against himself as he tried to justify his owner’s behavior. How could she… no, how could he do this to her? He tapped against the ground. His hooves clopping up and down, still closing his eyes. What should he say? What could he say? She probably hated his guts, now didn’t she? She went all this way back to save him, only for her to be changed into a pegasus… Hinoka meanwhile was oblivious. She let out neighs, flapping her wings and tried to fly out of the stable. Needless to say, she failed countless times. She didn’t mind sleeping with her pegasus; in fact, they did so numerous times during missions together. With her head resting on his body before dozing into slumber. The main problem was how she, the princess of this kingdom, was locked away in a dingy stable. The mere thought was enough to make her wings flap in fury. Right… She had wings now. “Hey…” She neighed at her partner. “Can you hear me now?” He continued pretending to be asleep. He didn’t deserve to talk to her. Not now at least. She clicked against her tongue. “I mean, you’re asleep now so why am I even saying this now? But…” She leaned closer to his stable, her maw touching against his back. “I’m so scared now…” Hinoka’s breath wavered but she continued, “What do we even do now? You don’t even have a rider. I’m not even human and now because of your curse, you might be quarantined. And all of this is because of me. I wanted to save you but instead doomed us both… I can’t even protect you now.” Tears were now on the brink of dripping down her fur. Hinoka’s pegasus shook his head as he glanced back at her. The guilt now weighing against his chest. “Haku? Were you… awake this whole time?” He nodded. Neighs that she once couldn’t understand now were regular words into her equine ears. “I… I mean I woke up from your crying.” “I’m not crying!” She pulled back, stepping back into her stable. “Just how much have you heard from me?” “From the start I guess.” “Check out.” She now pouted a little. “I’m still so sorry about this. Now that both of us are in-” He violently shook his head. “Sorry, what are you sorry about? You came back to save me, didn’t you? While you were saying how they were going to execute me for some curse. I mean, if anything, I… I feel terrible, causing you to change into this.” “But it's not your fault. Some wizard just used you…” There a long silence filled the room. Neither side knew how to continue this conversation. They had been training together since childhood but they never spoke to each other freely before. Usually, it would be her little vents and his replies of grunts or snorts. Hinoka also had the added bonus of becoming self conscious about herself. Maybe it was because they were now the same species or because they could talk but she was acutely aware that she was mare now. One that was mere inches away from a stallion like himself. Haku, on the other hand, was oblivious to this fact. His mind was still trying to justify her position. How could she blame herself for his mistake? If he hadn’t got struck by that spell… she would still be human. A human princess that led into battle. Though, it came with little relief. Now that she’s a mare, she wouldn’t… go into battle now, would she? She was constantly so head strong. Leading the charge, he would go along with her plans and charge forward to defeat their foes. Even at a young age however, he didn’t like that impulsive side of hers. Too reckless. Always wanting to attack and defeat their enemies. It came with too much risk. And because of that, a rift formed between the two of them. Causing multiple accidents to happen. But over time, he adjusted to her style. Not to say that he approved of it but due to her innate dominance, he merely went along with it. He still grunted and snorted whenever she planned out an attack but… he was the only one she got so guess he had to work towards it. “Haku… are you mad at me?” Hinoka suddenly asked, hanging her head low. “You always hate me whenever I do this, don’t you?” “Hate? I… I wouldn’t say that…” She leaned closer into him. “Stop lying. You always grunted or rolled your eyes whenever I’m too impulsive. And now this… This is the re-” “Because I’m scared. I’m scared of losing you Hinoka,” He said, before blushing. “I mean… we’re in battle and I don’t want my trainer to die. But thi… this is different. I… I really appreciate doing this for me.” “Oh.” Another silence filled the room. This time with less tension as Haku noticed the change in scents. Warm. Sweet and earthly… He had a whiff of this only occasionally but it was growing stronger itself. “So don’t blame yourself for this, alright Hinoka?” His eyes locked with hers. “On the bright side, since you’re a mare now, you would be safe now, right?” “Safe?” “Like you won’t need to go into battle or fight.” “But there’s people th-” He stomped on the ground, interrupting her speech. “I know this is selfish but… I don’t care about the other people.” His voice now stammering and shaking. “The only… person I keep thinking about is you. Hinoka… You’re my trainer and you’re my ev…everything to me. And so… even if th…this is selfish, I’m sure others can step in to defend your kingdom. I just don’t want you… to get hurt, alright?” The mare skipped a beat at his speech. On cue, she felt her body warm up as her cunt puffed up and produced much more pheromones in the air. Her hooves twitched. Stomping up and down, a bright blush surfaced on top of her face. “Then if they could chan…change me back, what would I do now?” “I don’t know. Just be a regular princess or something. You can even just ign…ignore me and I would be happier, seeing you safe like that.” He remarked. “Bu…but if I’m being completely honest, you look… hot like this.” His face glanced away; his mind soon caught up that he had basically confessed his feelings for her. Words got stuck in her throat. What was she supposed to say here? Her eyes gravitated down to his hung cock… oooh fuck, the tingles around her pussy grew stronger into a burning ache inside her folds. “Oh th…thanks Haku…” He took another sniff in the air. “Are you alright? You look… very uncomfortable. Is it something that I’ve said…” “No. It… Ah~” She stomped onto the ground, feeling terrible about herself. She couldn’t be thinking of possibly doing this with her own pegasus, right? The aching soon became an urge. A need to pound within her mind. And she couldn’t shake out of it. “Please… Haku… I feel so…” The stud flew up from the stable. “Just let me know the word! I’ll find he-” “Horny~” Haku blinked down at her completely red face. She hung her head low. “Please… just fuck me…” “I mean… are you sure?” “Yes! Now!” She begged louder with brays and snorts mixed in between. Haku glanced away for a moment, thinking about how she was in heat. But with all of her pheromones in the air, he couldn’t help himself but get erect. Landing within her stable, he stacked his heavier body on top of her. Her smell was turning him on and he wasn’t going to say no to a beauty like her~ “You ready?” He whispered into her twitchy ear. “I might not be the most gentle one out there.” “Yes! Please! Fuck me, Haku!” He slammed hard into her. Critters from the woods immediately scrammed upon hearing her loud moans. And inside her tight pussy, his cock throbbed and twitched. This wasn’t his first rodeo. In fact, they had plans of making him become a breeding stud if Hinoka and him continued to not cooperate with each other. And after knocking up some of the other mares, he soon got bored of them. Hinoka, on the other hand, drew him in for her fiery personality. “More! More!” She cried out. His dick stretched deep into her pussy, hitting all the right spots. Shame coated around her pleasure but at least it relieved the ache from within. Pulling out slowly, pressure was now stacked within his shaft. He gasped for air. Never in a million years would he think, he could be fucking Hinoka — his own partner in war. But, with how submissive and docile she sounded, he felt like he had the jackpot. Another thrust came in. Harder than before and this time stayed longer inside her. On Hinoka’s side, overflowing ecstasy was flowing through her veins. She was hooked. Addicted to his large cock. Male suitors of the past (that her parents had set her up with) all couldn’t compare to Haku’s longer cock. It came in cycles. One count smashing into her hips. Four counts of staying and twitching inside her pussy before pulling it out. And a final count of pulling it out. Hinoka adjusted to it quickly, now catching glances at her partner. Snorting, he smashed into her once again. The pressure was killing him. Now begging for the release. But… this might make it permanent… He hesitated for a tad moment. “Ha…haku…, what’s wro…wrong?” She said between breaths, noticing his slower pace. “I… Shouldn’t do this…” “C…cum in me big boy.” She winked back, now realizing how much of a catch Haku was. Images of failed dates flashed in her mind. All of them wanted money. Wanted the fame of becoming a prince. None of them were interested in her. “Please.” “Alright slut,” He leaned in, cooing into her twitching ear. With a final thrust deep inside her, cum gushed out like a geyser as both mares neighed through the night. The orgasm that soon followed froze their minds and drowned them both in the waves of pleasure. His seed promptly fused with one of her eggs, fertilizing in an instant. Dismounting off of her, both of them gasped for air. Cum still dripped out of his cock and her pussy. And with a final lick against her cheeks, he went back to his stable, saying, “L…love yo…you, Hinoka…” “Lo…love you too.” Fast forward in a couple months, the kingdom had just officially announced Hinoka to be missing. During this chaos, Hinoka and Haku both flew away into the woods (with Haku teaching her the basics of flying). The adjustments weren’t easy for the former princess: eating grass now, walking on all fours and learning how to live without being hunted down as prey. But with Haku by her side, everything seemed easier. Though she still worried about her kingdom, she would fly back, seeing how they were doing. Just like what Haku said, others stepped up and defended against threats. Some of them were doing a better job than she ever did. And suddenly within the days, she felt a kick against her belly. Glancing down, she noted how much bigger her breasts and belly was like it was bloated. Was it something she ate? “Haku… I feel a little sick.” “Wait, what’s wrong?” He neighed before spotting the changes. Leaning down, he licked against her belly, “Let me guess… is it because of this?” She nodded. Haku instantly licked against her cheeks. His eyes curving into an arch, “Thank you so much Hinoka. For making me the happiest stallion alive.” The dots soon connected as she began crying tears of joy. “Oh my god, I’m going to be a mother.” “A wonderful one no doubt.” Hinoka twirled her tail around Haku’s before kissing him once more. Another addition to this couple.