Happy Bi-rth-doe
#18 of Adult Commissions
Romantic story of love and sexual exploration between two lovely characters that invert their roles (literally) for one night.
Happy Bi-rth-doe
Commissioned by: Spots Phinnigan from SoFurry
Written by: CrimsonStar
Her name is Anna, and she had always been just "one more girl". She was somewhat short, for a doe of her age, but otherwise completely common. She had big wide ears that perked and weaned according to her mood, and vivid smart eyes often kept behind the safety of her glasses. She had silky orange fur spotted by pretty little cream spots spread all over her, but on her belly and neck, her orange hairs have away to a cotton-like white fur crowned by a heart shaped tuft of fluffiness right between her breasts. The patch of white fur actually extended way past her belly, it ran all the way down her thighs, over her buttocks and to the tip of her tail completely uninterrupted. But very few people could give testament of that. Among those who had seen the entire splendor of her patterned fur, was Tom. Tom was... well, to her eyes, he was perfect, but to the eyes of the rest, he wasn't exactly an exemplar of deer masculinity. He was taller than her by about half a head, without counting his antlers, which extended about a palm above his head in a tangled pattern of brown. Between his antlers, he sported a messy kind of "mane" of orange fur, somewhat darker than the rest of his body, which was mostly a solid cinnamon color, except for his hands and arms, which gleamed with white stainless fur, making it look like he always wearing mittens. He had a shy smile and a white spot in his left cheek. They had met a few years ago; Tom, being a happy-go-lucky, casual stoner with an insatiable love for patterned scarfs, had ran into Anna, when she, wanting to get a new pair of headphones, had been on a scarf-knitting spree. At first, it was just business. Tom loved wearing scarves, and Anna loved making them. But with every scarf he bought, they got a chance to talk, and became an inch closer. Uncountable scarves later, they started going out, and just a few months ago, they were selling scarves together to buy furniture for their new SHARED apartment.
They had gone out to a local ice cream shack near the beach. Tom loved Strawberry, and Anna loved Blueberry, but their favorite flavor, was a mixture of both, so they always saved a few bites to mix together and share with each other. It was a sunny evening, and the day before Tom's birthday. The wind whistled happily past them, and Anna could feel her heart pounding inside her chest, barely able to eat her ice cream, fearing the butterflies in her stomach would fly away if she opened her mouth. Tom was kind, generous and funny, even if somewhat absent-minded and clumsy, and she wanted to give him a birthday gift he would never forget. She had everything planned, it hadn't been easy, but she had gotten something that was sure to give him the night of his life. But she hadn't told him yet and the wait was killing her. Would he be okay with it? Was it going too far? Sex with Tom had always been satisfying, they were very compatible and he was as open minded as her, but this still had the potential of freaking him out... She wanted to tell him right there, but she also didn't want to ruin the big surprise. Maybe it was better to just talk about it, in case he wasn't onboard with it...
Anna had been staring intently at her melting icecream while the tug of war raged inside her head. She took a deep breath rose her head to meet Tom's eyes and... and she found him staring at something on sideway in the other side of the street. She followed his eyes and found a jogging doe stretching next to a deer, who was making his best effort not to stare.
Rather than angering her, Anna felt a weight leaving her shoulders as he looked back at her mesmerized boyfriend. The doe was cute and kind of hot, but Tom wasn't staring at her. He was looking ever so slightly to left, to the gorgeous deer in trouble. He was tall, lean, with a perfect zigzag pattern on his well groomed coat and he moved as gracefully as a gazelle, with a pair of antlers that were bigger than the antenna of their satellital TV. Furthermore, the well defined muscles of his body, were only further made evident by his lack of clothing, the only thing on him was a pair of skyblue shorts, with a rather evident bulge inside them.
Anna giggled, which prompted Tom to look back at her and shrivel in embarrassment. He quickly stuffed a spoonful of ice cream into his mouth.
"You're so cute when you are naughty." Anna blurted between giggles.
"I... Sorry..." Tom muttered, his ears fading down.
"It's okay silly. He IS pretty hot. Reminds me of the instructor from our yoga class, remember?" He was a very handsome hippie reindeer.
Tom's eyes widened, his fur and ears perked and he nodded softly while taking another spoonful of Strawberry ice cream. Their eyes met and Anna sketched a shill smile on her lips. Tom sided his head inquisitively.
"What?" He asked. "You are looking at me like that crazy shark lady from work."
"Have you ever been with a guy?"
Tom shared in Anna's smile. "Yeah... I told you about Sam."
"After 8th grade." She frowned.
"Mmm... We..."
"And I mean: BEEN with a guy?"
"BEEN with a guy? Like... sex...?"
"Yeah."
"Well, no?" Tom looked away, taking another spoon of ice cream.
"Oh, really?" Anna's smile widened even further. "Would... you like to?"
Tom's ears perked up and his eyes widened as if he had suddenly been placed in front of the xenon headlights of a truck in a moonless winter solstice. "Erm.. I.. You... Ah. I... I mean... I have you, so..." He tried to dodge the bullet.
"But would you like to?" Anna insisted. Her tuft of a tail shaking in excitement.
"I... Yeah. I think so. Yeah. Maybe."
"Great!" Anna squealed, the butterflies had now migrated from her stomach to her chest. "Then I'll give you your birthday present tonight."
"Tonight?"
"Tonight! Go watch a movie or something, alright? I'll wait for you at home after noon okay?"
"Wait, what?"
Anna stood up, sliding her chair and leaned on the table, first to give Tom a peek under her shirt and then to plant on him a sweet and passionate kiss. "Don't be naughty and come before noon, okay? I'll wait for you after sundown."
"Oki. Thanks Annie."
She winked and turned around, shaking her tail to tease him, and shortly after, she disappeared around the corner. Tom stared into the empty street for a few moments, while his brain processed what had just happened. Anna, had always been pretty liberal when it came to sexuality, but, if he understood correctly, she had just offered to have a guy in the bedroom for him. And he knew that was impossible. For as cute and open-minded Anna was, she was also as jealous as dragon. Looking and fooling around was okay, but anything more than that, and he would invoke her wrath. That fact, however, only made him even more excited for whatever she had in store for him that night.
The dreadfully long evening went by uneventfully. A few of Tom's friends called him to wish him a good day and his mother dropped by his work to give him a pack of cookies. But with every fading sunray, Tom's excitement grew louder and louder. When the moon finally came out he felt like a child on Christmas Eve as he rode the bus back home. When he found himself at the door, he could smell the sweet scent of a delicious dinner. He took a deep breath, brought out his keys and turned the knob, this was going to be an unforgettable night.
As he entered, he was greeted by the scent of of fresh fruit and fried mushrooms. His apartment was draped in the twilight of candles, faint music played in the background and helium balloons had been randomly spread all over the ceiling. His lips parted in a smile as he closed the door behind him.
"Annie?" He asked, as he walked further into the dining room. Their small plastic table had been covered with a white cloth, and two seats had been arranged with glasses of wine to accompany the food he had smelled earlier. Only two seats?
"Happy birthday!" Jumped Anna from the door that led to the kitchen.
"This is amazing love!"
"And we haven't gotten to the main course yet!" Anna moved closer, his his lips and then slid the chair open for him. "Take a seat and fill yourself, you're gonna need the energy." She winked.
The food was delicious, and they both ate briskly, eager to move on to the next part of the night. When Tom was done, he leaned back in his chair and let out a stuffed sigh as he feld his now bulging belly pleasantly stretched with food. The champagne had gotten him tipsy, and Anna was being cheerful and chatty as usual, so far it was already a wonderful night. But Anna still had a lot more in store. After a few seconds, the doe stood up and grabbed his hand with a shill smile.
"Are you ready for the next meal?" She asked, slightly biting her lip.
Tom giggled and nodded while she pulled him up and led him to the bedroom. Before he could ask about the new purple curtains or the plushie on the bed. Anna pushed him against the wall and began to passionately kiss him. Slowly at first their lips danced and mingled, sharing the hit of champagne and spices with each other. Anna started pushing harder against the wall, her kissing became more primal, feral almost, as her hands wandered down Tom's chest and caressed his crotch. He was already hard, very hard.
"Are you ready?" She purred, as she raised her hands and slid his shirt over his head.
"I'm always ready for you Annie." He continued, returning the action, and unclipping her bra, revealing her perfectly white breasts, also perked in excitement and her heart shaped tuft of fluff.
"But today's special, remember?" She continued, unbuttoning her jeans and sliding them down. Revealing a delicate pair of violet panties, with a barely visible stain between her creamy inner thighs.
"Oh?"
She pulled back ever so slightly. "Get undressed, I'll be right back."
Before he could say anything, she hopped back and disappeared through the door back to the kitchen. Trying to undo his jeans' button made him realize he was a bit tipsier than he had thought, but after a bit of fumbling he managed to bring them down, boxers and all, to reveal his bouncing manhood beginning to cover itself with crystalline wetness.
Anna returned almost immediately, with a glass of champagne in one hand and what seemed to be two small blue candies in the other. When she entered the room, his eyes met Tom's and slowly slid their way down his chest , his navel and onto his penis.
"Well... aren't you eager?" She bit her lip again.
"Are you going to roofie me or something?" He asked looking at the pills.
"No silly. Remember you said you'd like to be with a guy?"
"More like you made me say it..." He muttered. "But yeah."
"And remember how you said you already have me?"
"Yeah...?"
"Well, you're getting both tonight."
"What?"
"Or maybe I should say: 'Taking it' tonight?"
Tom's heart began racing. If those pills were what he thought they were... Without saying anything else, Anna put one of the pills in her mouth, took a sip of champagne and planted a deep kiss onto Tom's lips. He felt the warm liquid and the pill being slipped into his mouth.
"Oh." Tom said taking a step back. "Was I supposed to swallow it? Because..."
"Yep." Anna interrupted him. "And it's not the only thing you're supposed to swallow tonight." She winked and took the remaining pill while downing the other 90% of the champagne. She was probably a bit nervous too.
They stared at eachother for a few seconds, in silence.
"Erm... So... You sure they weren't roofies?"
Anna frowned and put her hands to her naked hips. But as she opened her mouth to complain, they both saw a brief spark of violet light shine between them. Then another one, to their side, that one was pink. And another one, and another one. Before they could make anything of what was happening the room was filled with pink and purple sparks that swirled around them like a swarm of shapeless fairies. Soon, dashes of a myriad of colors were swirling around! One of the streams of light shone brighter than the rest and it began circling Tom, but it was doing more than shining light on him. As the colorful stream touched his feet, Anna noticed that his fur perked and every so slightly changed in color, it became a lighter tone of cinnamon. His feet, also seemed to grow smaller, more delicate, similar to her own and as the lights continued to touch him, his body changed further and further. He had his eyes closed and a faint smile on his face as his fingers became longer and his arms thicker. His messy mane grew longer and his usually flat chest, slowly bulged as the colorful enchantment passed through it, his hips became wider, his butt more pronounced and when the lights converged on his manhood, it receded in bath of light, as if dissolved by the magic, until all that remained was a perfectly shaped slit between his legs, still wet as his penis had been before.
The spell immediately jumped to her, splashing against her chest like a swarm of butterflies. She felt a warm current spreading through her body. Her breasts receded and faded as her chest became wider, her hands rougher and arms wider. Her legs stretched and shaped themselves to be more bulky, her muscles better defined under the now somewhat darker coat. When the light converged on her crotch, she felt as current of pleasure surge through her body as her rose and white slit reshaped itself into a hard and long instrument. As the spell finished it's task and the light faded, Anna rose her eyes to find Tom, now in the delicate body of a girl, staring at her new manhood.
"Hey!" She called with eyes wide open and a huge smile. "My antlers are up here." She pointed at the thick ornaments that had sprouted from the top of her head, each as tall as her head and with four different branches on each side.
"Annie?" Tom asked, and immediately covered his mouth with both hands. His voice was sweet and melodic now.
Anna took two steps forward and brought her face down to the level of his now-shorter boyfriend. "Don't worry, it's only lasts until sunset." She said, ruffling his now antler-free head and mane. "So you're all mine until then." She said, her voice now gruff and stern. She liked her lips when he saw Tom smiling like a fool below his hands. She leaned closer to one of his perked ears. "And I'm going to fuck your brains out." Immediately Anna jumped back and flutter her no rather-heavy hooves on the ground. "Yeeeeey. I always wanted to say that."
Tom burst out in laughter and shyly began speaking. "I love you, crazy doe."
Anna leaned closer, sliding her hand down to Tom's crotch. "It is... Crazy DEER for tonight..." She purred, as one of her fingers circled Tom's entrance. He let out a moan, which Anna silenced with a deep kiss. Anna was savage, Tom had seen her like this before, whenever they tried something new Anna went beast-mode and ravished in sex like there was no tomorrow. But this time she seemed even more intent on draining every single drop of life from his body before the night was over.
The new sensations he was feeling, number his every thought. Anna liked playing with his nipples but having her fondle his breasts felt completely different. Every time her fingers brushed the tip of his nipples, a current of pleasure shot down his chest down his belly and up to the base of his skull. Anna moved away from him, putting a hand on the wall next to his face.
"Get on the bed and spread yourself for me." Ordered Anna trying her best to make her usually polite demeanor match her currently alpha-male body.
"Are you sure?" Replied Tom shyly.
"Yeah, like we always do." Anna pushed him slightly and slapped him below his bushy tail.
"Oh... But... That's how we always do it... Shouldn't I be on top then?"
She sided her head for a second. "Ahhh... Yeah... You right, it's kind of uncomfortable the other way around." She pounced on the bed and rolled to her back. "Come here baby."
Tom excitedly moved onto the bed, climbed on top of his partner, kissed her lips and then turned around to face her new dick. It gleamed under the candlelight and as he moved his face closer, the inebriating musky scent made his own crotch warmer in anticipation.
"Do it like I do it to you." Anna ordered.
"I know. I know... You don't have to tell me everything, yo..." Tom's complaining was cut short with a sharp moan, as anna drove her nuzzle to his outer labia.
Tom closed his fists on the sheets below him and lowered his head to the side of her penis. He was breathing heavily and another sharp moan escaped his lips when Anna touched what he could only guess was his clitoris. The mere warmth of her breath spreading through his thighs was enough to drive him insane with every pulse, but he mustered as much of his willpower as he could to bring himself back up over Anna's dick. It was bulging with a delicate pink color, and its skin had already mostly receded due to how hard she was.
Tom put his tongue out slowly and began to lick Anna's dick very delicately at first, only flicking his tongue. He then kissed it, several times, running form the base to the tip, while slowly using his hands and fingers to form a ring around her cock, brushing it up and down and spreading her wetness all over her shaft. He started to moan too, it was strange to hear her moan with such a gruff voice, but he couldn't help but feel even more turned on. He had to take short breaks to steel his arms, as every time Anna increased her speed her biceps turned to jelly, but he increased the pace just like her. When she bit him softly and made him screech, literally like a girl. He decided to take it all in. He opened his mouth and began to pump Anna's shaft as far as it would go. As he increased his speed, it was Anna who now had to take short breaks to arch her back and feet. He sucked and slurped; the salty and slimy flavor was very similar to her usual taste. He went faster and faster, until he could feel Anna's instrument gorging with blood and tingling with anticipation. He then stopped, swallowed and cleaned his mouth with the fur of his arm.
"Why did you stop baby?" Anna protested.
"Weren't you about to cum?"
"Well yes!" She rebutted. Even just when speaking, her warm breath made Tom giggle in pleasure.
"Well you can't cum yet! You're the DEER tonight, remember? Do you really want to take a break so soon?" He asked, looking down at the space between them, to see Anna open her eyes as the realization dawned on her.
"Well... You're right about something..." She continued, rolling to a side before standing up.
Tom scrambled to lay on the bed, turning around to face her. "About what?"
"I AM the deer tonight." She said with the smile of a lion. "So spread open and bite the pillow!"
"That's not how deer talk honey..."
Anna brought herself down over her prey. "Then I'll make sure you can't listen to anything anymore." She threatened, licking Tom behind his left ear.
That was his weak spot, and the transformation hadn't changed that. He let out a muffled moan as she kissed and sucked his ear, then his neck. She kissed his chest, and began sucking on her left nipple. She pulled and pushed with her lips, and used her right hand to fondle the other breast, massaging it and tending to it like fresh dough. She then climbed back to face him and passionately kissed him while she opened his legs and positioned her penis on his entrance.
Their tongues danced and mingled, to the rhythm of their love.
"Are you ready?" She asked softly while parting their lips, a thin strand of fluid dripping down as she did.
Tom noded.
"Could you... guide me in?" She asked shyly.
Tom moved one hand between them, took the chance to stroke Anna's penis once more, and directed it to the entrance to his core.
"Ready." He whispered.
"I love you." She answered.
"I love you too, my crazy deer."
The next few moments were washed white by a wave of shared pleasure. As Anna entered Tom, hi warmth wrapped and pulsed around her, while his shaft made his way shrouded with surges of pleasure at every step. She felt warm and seemed to fit perfectly inside him. When he was able to breathe again, he opened his eyes to find Anna looking over him like a hungry predator.
"Do you like it?" She purred.
He nodded. "Do you?"
She nodded. "Want me to move?"
She began pulling out without waiting for an answer. Tom closed his eyes and let himself sink into the waves of pleasure. She pushed in again, deeper this time. He moaned. She moaned. Again. Tom was pulling on the sheets below him. Anna started biting his neck. Again she pushed in. They locked into a passionate kiss and Anna started fondling his breasts, applying just the right pressure to enhance the already hypnotic state in which he was already knee-deep. As they moved in unison Anna started to subtly but steadily increase the speed of her trusting. She started breathing heavily. Tom let out short but rapid moans every time. He could feel her weight over her and her pubis hitting his every time. He moved his hands down to her butt. That was their secret code. It meant: "Come inside me."
At that moment she went into a frenzy. She bit his neck as she started to move even faster. Deeper. The bed started squeaking under their weight. HE could barely breathe. She couldn't stop moaning. Again and again she trusted, until neither could help back any longer. Together they exploded in a burst of pleasure and love. They screamed so loud that afterwards they would worry the neighbors may call the police. But during that brief flash of pleasure, there were alone and together. As the blinding pleasure subsided, they found themselves next to each other, panting, barely breathing. They ran a marathon together last year and even then they didn't find themselves so exhausted. When Anna opened her eyes, Tom's met hers immediately. Even if their bodies had changed, their eyes had remained the same. Those were the eyes of the deer that made her fall in love. He smiled and kissed her forehead.
"Nothing beats having someone come inside, does it?" She asked while sitting and fanning herself with her hand.
"Except coming since the person you love." He corrected.
She smiled. "I'll go get us something to drink and eat while I regain my 'stamina' alright? You get ready for round two too."
"Wait what?"
She giggled. "I told you, you're mine until sunset. Plus, we haven't done your favorite position yet. Or mine." She winked.
He nodded and let out a sigh that came straight from a heart in love. She walked around the bed and leaned in to his his forehead. "Happy birthday, birthday doe."
He hugged her by surprise and softly kissed her lips. "Thank you my love. You're the best." He finished, letting her go.
When she was gone, Tom stood up, entered the bathroom, and took a few moments to play with his own breasts, while he refreshed himself for round number two. The second, of the many that night had in store for them. His stomach growled. Not before having some food first though...
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