Rumble Gets Tumbled

Story by draconicon on SoFurry

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Commissioned by FA: Sanmer as a sequel to the story Rumbling Reports (Found here: https://www.sofurry.com/view/1147391 ) we have the results of Doctor Fox's decisions, dealing with an asshole hero that's decided villains didn't have rights. Well, neither does he.

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Rumble Gets Tumbled For Sanmer By Draconicon

"Heh, yeah, you better run, you fucks!"

The rhino laughed as the miscreants started running off, fear writ large on their faces. It was always a pleasure to see them understanding how outmatched they were, knowing that they had no chance if he got anywhere near them.

Not that he would be going after those kids. They weren't doing all that much, after all - just spraypainting the side of a building - and besides...his tastes didn't swing that way. He preferred people that wouldn't be believed when he had his fun with them.

Heh, like that rat, yesterday, he though with a chuckle. Nice tight ass, plenty of squirming going on...I bet he got one hell of a stretch by the time I was done.

Rumble Rhino smirked as he fondled himself, not at all caring if anyone saw. After all, someone with his strength operated under a different set of rules from the rest of society. He was bigger, stronger...better, for lack of a better word. He was allowed some liberties.

And besides, it wasn't like he was fucking other heroes or civilians. The only ones that got fucked over by him were the criminals that had it coming anyway. If they weren't ready to accept some extra consequences for their actions, they shouldn't have been running around and causing so much trouble.

That was how he saw it, anyway.

Unfortunately, the rat had been the only break he'd gotten for over a week, and he hadn't done nearly enough to empty his balls before the station had called him in for a status report. He would have wrecked that hole a good five more times before he'd turned him in, if there'd been time.

Well, here's hoping that there's someone else causing trouble today...

The rhino pulled his hand away from his crotch, adjusted the bright green spandex he wore, and started walking down the street. A pity that he wasn't assigned to the poor parts of town today - they were always filled with problem people - but he figured that he'd find someone eventually.

If there was one thing that was certain, it was that crime never stopped.

Except, apparently, when he wanted to find one.

Rumble Rhino grumbled to himself as he punched the sidewalk, sending cracks up and down the whole length of it. Several people walking their dogs were forced right off by the vibrations, and they started yelling at him. Nothing that a glare didn't stop right in its tracks, though, as he walked on.

"You gotta be kidding me. Where's all the fucking thieves, and muggers, and everything else this city is supposed to have?"

Probably on the other side of the city entirely. While there were plenty of rich targets and houses in the area, he would just bet that they were stuffed with just as many security devices. The criminal trying to rob that would either have to have a ton more gear than the average crook, or be much stupider than normal, and the stupid ones might just try and report him, rather than keep quiet.

The rhino stomped off, barely keeping his own strength in check as he made his way down the street. The whole point of being a hero was to break down the criminals, but when there weren't any criminals, what was he supposed to -

Wait.

He saw a flicker of light down one alley. Too early in the day for that to be a flashlight, and too late in the day for it to be some sort of fire going on from overnight.

The rhino walked over to the edge of the alley, looking down it, and grinned.

Oh ho, jackpot.

Another hero - Paladin, he thought the unicorn's name was - had apprehended some sort of fox. White-furred and tiny, from the look of him. Probably someone that had just grown up and started to cause some trouble, from the dirty looks that he was giving the hero. Someone that was not too well off, either, from how his clothes looked.

And a fox, for that matter. Rumble Rhino had had a number of rodents, and even had some time with a wolf in the past, but he'd never had a fox before. Heh. He doubted that the little slut would even complain once he got his cock past those little ass cheeks.

"Hey, Paladin, right?"

The unicorn turned, still covered in that weird light armor of his. He looked down his muzzle, shaking his head.

"What do you want?"

"Hey, I got some free time. Why don't you let me take that fox in to the station for you?"

"Why would you want to do that?"

"Well, if I remember right, your patrol route's all the way on the other side of town. What, you end up chasing him all the way here?"

"Something like that."

"Hey, I'm right here, you know. Talk to me, not above me."

Rumble Rhino chuckled, turning his head to look down at the fox.

"You want me to talk to you? Fine. How about we talk about how you're going straight to the station and getting locked up?"

The fox looked back at him, and for some reason, he almost seemed to smirk. Rumble Rhino put it out of his head. Probably just some cocky kid that had no idea of what he was getting into. Most of them usually didn't. He shook his head. What was he doing?

Right, talking to Paladin.

"So, why don't you let me take him? Ain't gonna get away from me, and you can get back to work."

"I suppose that would work out."

"Yeah, it will. Now, gimme."

He held out his hand, and after a few seconds, the unicorn passed the hard-light cuffs on the fox's wrists over.

"Make sure he gets there quickly. He is a tricky one."

"Don't worry. I'll get him there as fast as I can."

As the unicorn left the alley, the rhino chuckled, pulling his crossed fingers out from behind his back.

"Not."

"You gonna keep talking to yourself? Talk to me."

He slowly turned, looking down at the fox again. He was almost twice the runt's height, not to mention almost twice as thick with all his muscle's and the fox's natural slenderness. The rhino chuckled, pushing the fox against the wall.

"You got a smart mouth on you, boy. You think that you can just mouth off to me?"

Ignoring the strange tingle that went down his back as he talked, he brought his free hand down to the fox's pants. They were barely more than loose jeans, and they went down fast enough. They were as good as shackles with the fox's hands pinned together, and he chuckled as he started groping that fuzzy ass.

"Hey! What are you doing?!"

"Treating you like you deserve, you little bitch."

Smirking, he pulled those ass cheeks apart, grinning as he saw a tight but slick little hole. Not a virgin, this fox; probably had been whoring himself around or something. Wouldn't surprise him in the least, considering how horny these fucks were.

He slid a finger up that hole, and the fox gasped, arching his back.

"Ah! What...get that out of me!"

Why not? There were better things to put in there, anyway. He pulled his hand back, grinning to himself as another tingle ran from his head to his toes, his cock starting to get rather hard in his spandex shorts.

"Alright, foxie. You know what's gonna happen now?"

"You're gonna take me to the station?"

"Heh...I will, but not before I get some fucking relief."

"...You're kidding..."

"Be grateful you're lubed, boy. Otherwise, this'd hurt a lot more than it will."

It only took a second to work the zipper of his outfit down, letting his cock flop out. It was a good ten inches long, and thick as his wrist as he started stroking it. The tip was already damp from looking at that foxy butt, and as he shoved the runt's head against the wall, he got a good view of that tight little pucker.

He ground his cockhead against it a few times, feeling the heat there, and the tightness that was just waiting for him.

"Heh...looks like you got a bit of practice taking dick, huh? Well, let's see you take mine!"

Rumble Rhino shoved himself forward, groaning as he felt that ass just open for him. It didn't rip like the rat's did, but damn it was tight, squeezing his cock all the way from the tip to the base. He leaned forward, resting his hard chest against the fox's back as he started thrusting, dragging his cock in and out.

The little bitch's whimpers faded pretty quickly, just as he thought they would. Foxes were all little sluts and bitches; he'd just bet that this was a reward for the little criminal.

Heh, well, you better take it, you fuck. You think that this is going to be just one round? I'm gonna fuck you right into the ground, he thought, grabbing the fox by the back of the neck.

"You want more, bitch? Beg for it."

"Fuck me!"

The rhino slammed forward, groaning at the tingle that went down his back, his cock harder than ever. He chuckled, slowly pulling back -

"Ram it in, please!"

Another thrust as the fox begged for more. But...was he the one to slam it in? Why -

"Keep on fucking me! Slam it in, make me bounce!"

Even though it was exactly what he wanted to do, Rumble Rhino groaned, feeling his mind going a bit colder each time he followed the order, his thoughts and his need slowing down, replaced by something...something else. Something was -

"Again! Fuck me! Fill me up!"

One thrust after another, and one command after another, each one followed by an increasingly fading tingle that robbed him of a bit more of his thoughts. Yet, despite that, Rumble Rhino's cock never went down. If anything, it got harder and harder, oozing more and more pre into the little fox.

He slammed in hard enough to lift the fox off of the ground, and the little bitch wriggled down on his cock, slamming his ass up and down from the tip to the base. The rhino could only stare, his hands paralyzed.

"Don't think!"

And he didn't. All his curiosity faded, leaving him with just one instinct, to keep on fucking the fox. He slammed in and out, in and out, his hips moving like pistons as he used the little slut. In and out, in and out, fucking that tight hole, filling him up with everything that he had, his balls smacking off of those white-furred cheeks, the tail pressed against his chest to the point where it was almost getting crushed.

Even when he came, he couldn't stop, his hips moving faster and faster, the discomfort a faint sensation compared to the need to follow orders. In and out, in and out, his hips moving as fast as they could possibly go, his balls swaying painfully between his legs as he felt himself losing everything.

"Stop."

And just like that, he did, leaving only the head of his straining cock inside of the criminal beneath him. The fox slowly slipped off of him, his cockhead making a pop as it slipped free, and then dropped down.

At the edge of his consciousness, he realized that the hard-light on the fox's wrists were gone, and he only knew what that meant when he felt a much bigger set of hands working the spandex costume the rest of the way off of him.

As the fox pulled his pants back on, Rumble Rhino felt himself being positioned, leaning forward at first, and then pushed down to all fours. He groaned as he was left sprawled out, his head pulled back to look up at the fox.

"I would have some sort of advice for you, Rumble Rhino, but I think you'd just ignore it. Like you ignored every other sign of danger here. But I suppose that's the sort of hero you are. All brawn, no brain. Of course, there is a need for that, but not so great a need as you might think."

The fox chuckled a bit.

"Of course, I don't think you're understanding me here. Brainless as you are, you didn't have much to lose. Let's change that. Obey, but think."

The tingle ran through his body like some sort of electrical current. Rumble Rhino jerked, but couldn't move. His muscles below his neck wouldn't do anything, no matter how he pulled. They just didn't obey.

Obey.

His eyes went wide, and he looked up at the fox.

"You...who are you?"

"I'm just a doctor. A doctor that tended to the rat that you wrecked yesterday, as a matter of fact, and someone that didn't particularly appreciate being pulled away from what he was doing to make him feel better."

"Why -"

"Because you're an idiot, and because I can't afford to have someone like you running around and causing trouble."

He couldn't believe this. Outmaneuvered by some slut of a fox. He was able to look back, and saw Paladin standing behind him, but not in a way that he had ever seen the stallion before. The unicorn's lower armor was gone, and his cock was out...and throbbing. It was fucking huge, bigger than his by a third at least, and more than large enough to wreck...

"You've been fucking him?!"

"I'm rather thankful for that, I admit. It meant that I barely felt your cock."

"Hey!"

"Just the truth, Rumble Rhino. But let's see. You think that your victims need that sort of punishing, do you? Let's see how you handle a proper 'stuffing' of your own."

"Wait, no, please, we can...we can talk about this!"

"Shut up."

The tingle hit him, and his mouth shut before he could do anything else. He even wanted to shut up, which terrified him. How did this fox do this? It was like magic, almost, making him not just obey, but want to obey.

A white-furred hand stroked his head, and he felt thick fingers grabbing at his ass cheeks, pulling them apart until he felt something warm and slick pressing against his hole. The rhino had never, ever, ever taken anything back there, and having seen what the unicorn was packing, he knew this was going to -

"Enjoy this."

The cock slammed in, and he gasped, his eyes rolling back as he felt his hole pulled open by the thick horse cock. It spread wider and wider, and he moaned and whimpered...and he started getting hard. Somehow, someway, that cock was actually making him get an erection as it forced its way past his ass cheeks, pushing itself deeper and deeper inside of him.

Rumble Rhino groaned, whimpering past his clenched jaws, but he couldn't do anything to stop it. The unicorn mounted him without the slightest bit of trouble, and he could feel that cock getting deeper, deeper.

It didn't help that the fox was slowly jerking off in front of him, a thick red pillar of flesh dripping just in front of his nose. Every breath he took was stained with the scent of a horny fox, and he couldn't get away from it.

"Open up, but don't talk."

The tingle forced his mouth open, and he tasted the cock in addition to smelling it. A soft musk, but powerful, ran up his nose into his brain, and the salty taste of pre flooded his mouth. Slightly metallic as well, making it impossible to ignore.

The pair of them started thrusting in tandem, rocking him back and forth as his cock was forced erect, harder and harder as the fox kept telling him to 'enjoy this.' Every time he heard the phrase, his cock throbbed to a greater height, and his balls seemed to find more to force through it as a drip to the alley below.

They started dragging him back and forth, forcing him down to the base of the fox's cock, and then down to the base of the unicorn's, making him grunt every time they hilted. The wet smacks of their bodies against him, the feeling of being full, was...horribly satisfying, and he didn't want it to be.

Rumble Rhino was losing himself, and he couldn't stop it.

"You know, Rhino, I think that you should remember this for a long time. I doubt that you could even forget this, but I want to make sure that you remember this lesson. There's something to be gained from controlling other people, but you didn't remember this part.

"You make sure that nobody can find out what you've done."

He shivered. He thought he'd covered that, but he never reckoned on someone having this sort of power, this ability to draw someone's cooperation past any sense of self-preservation. Who would have thought that someone would find out?

He looked up past the cock in his mouth, staring at the fox as he kept talking.

"Here's your first command, then. You feel how hard you are now? You will never be that hard again, unless you're sucking a cock. Suck cock, get hard. Fuck cock, get off. Understand?"

Rumble Rhino shivered, almost feeling like that was being pressed into the back of his mind, forcing itself to be part of him from now on. It was impossible, though. Nobody could just command -

"Pull out."

The phrase made no sense, but he realized that it was being said to Paladin. The two of them pulled out, and for a moment, Rumble Rhino felt some sort of relief. They weren't fucking him anymore -

But then he felt it. The sudden sagging down below, his cock falling flat before slowly retracting. It was going softer faster than ever before, but...but the feeling of need was still there. He gasped, groaning as his hole started twitching on its own, clenching on nothing, and he felt himself start drooling as he looked at the fox cock just a few inches away.

What did...he can't have...

Yet as the fox stepped forward, grinding his cock against the rhino's face, Rumble felt his cock shooting right back up. The taste of the shaft, the feeling of it sliding into his mouth and sliding over his tongue, left him harder than ever. He could feel it smacking against his belly, throbbing and desperate to cum like he had in the fox's ass just a bit ago.

Even so, he couldn't move, even when the horse pulled himself in close again. The thick cock still terrified him, yet the pleasure was all too real as it slid back into him, spreading him wide. He arched his back as he was told to, and shivered as they started fucking him faster than ever, forcing him up and down their cocks, the fox's knot slapping against his lips.

"Orgasm isn't possible for you until you've made your partner cum."

He felt the tingle, his body obeying even as his mind begged for it not to be the case. He groaned, his eyes closing tight as he felt his own need locked down. It was right there, the chance for climax just out of reach, and he wiggled his body for some sort of relief.

It didn't come. Not until he felt the dribbling of cum into his hole, and tasted the fox blowing down his throat. As soon as he felt their seed entering him, his own orgasm just...exploded.

Rumble Rhino came harder than he'd ever cum before, his back arching and his balls pulling up tight against his crotch. His eyes rolled back in their sockets, and he shivered as he squirted against the ground again, and again, and again, each shot of cum almost as much as he would have shot during a normal orgasm.

It felt like he was being drained of everything that he had, his entire body wracked with bliss and pleasure. He kept cumming and cumming, his cock throbbing up and down, slapping against his belly, painting his face with cum, his chest, his costume, the alley floor. Everything in reach was splattered, and the only reason he didn't hit the fox was because he was still just out of reach, standing out of the way.

He came, and came, and came, until there was nothing left in his balls, and even then his cock kept twitching for about half a minute.

"Very good, Rumble, very good. Return to the station in one hour, and I'll give you a check-up to make sure that you are still in good health."

Station...check-up? He's the...

He shivered, his slow brain gradually fitting the pieces together. This fox had to be the doctor that he kept hearing about, the one that kept putting people back together and was so good at his job that nobody remembered why they were there...

He must...he probably had the whole station under his control. That's what Rumble would have done, if he had this power. If that was the case...

I can't say anything. Nobody will understand.

"You won't talk about this. Ever."

And even so, the fox wasn't taking any risks. He felt the lockdown, the tingle that sealed the order. Rumble lowered his head.

"I'll let you remember this. And I will watch you, see how you handle it. If you're good, I'll see to it that you are given cock from time to time. If not...I'll have to take stronger measures. Wait here for ten minutes, then get dressed. I'll see you in an hour."

He nodded, listening as the fox and horse got dressed and walked away. When the ten minutes were up, he did as he was told, and then leaned against the wall, trying to pull himself together.

How...how do I...what can I even do?

The End