Commission: City Fog

Story by ReynartWrites on SoFurry

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There are many dangers out in the fog for a scout looking for salvage. A female looking to improve the life of her people with a job that would both benefit her and them finds herself at the mercy of a monster of the fog. I wonder if she will escape, or even want to.


Tall crumbling buildings stood among mossy streets covered in a thick expanse of fog that seemed to pour into even the most intact structures. Moss grew along the streets, sidewalks, and buildings themselves in great amounts with little flowers blooming here and there where nature would allow. A few buildings stood undisturbed by time except for rust or moss, but most were shadows of what the city once was. Sunlight filtered through dark clouds but was obscured by the thick mess of fog. Among the fog, a figure walked wearing a tattered cloak and heavy leather. At their belt, they had a pistol and in their arms, they held a rifle with the trigger squeezed by nervous digits covered by gloves. Two canine ears twitched in the fog, listening for anything that might be approaching from behind and a bushy tail remained still as if at any moment they would need to bolt. As the figure approached a building that seemed somewhat safe, they lowered their gun and flicked their hood off to look around with pink eyes.

So far, so good. Nothing had followed Tani from where she began her little scavenging mission and nothing had bothered her on the way. With a sigh she brought her rifle back up and started towards the door, eyes scanning the area around her before she turned to the door to try the knob. As luck would have it, the doorknob simply turned for her without any struggle and the door barely creaked as she pushed it open.

Any noise could and would attract monsters from all around and she didn't think that she wanted that kind of attention. There was still food and medical supplies in the ruins only because of the dangers keeping the common raider away. Tani had accepted the task, but damn did she wish there was some better payment in doing this than just a few extra rations.

The entrance of the home looked just as good as the outside, that is to say, not at all. Tani brought a paw through her red hair to keep it out of her eyes and she took a calming breath before raising her rifle and starting down the main hall of the old home. Most of the walls were crumbling and falling over and foliage had begun to grow within the building. There were flowers sprouting here and there that smelled far too sweet, but it soon became difficult to make out what was on the ground due to the white fog that rolled in from the outside. Tani shivered as the fog moved past her ankles and slipped deep into the home spreading to every corner and even rolling up the dilapidated stairs into the second floor. With one paw she drew her cloak closer to her as she started up those steps after a quick inspection of the bottom floor. There hadn't been anything there except a few old appliances that didn't seem to have anything salvageable.

Upstairs, her search seemed to go similarly, but the second floor was more intact than the first. The rooms were still separated and the foliage wasn't as thick here. She found herself at the end of a hallway where a string with a handle was attached to the ceiling. Tani gulped as she eyed it and began walking towards it with each step creaking on old rotting floorboards that seem to grow louder and louder as she approached the string. Slowly, she holstered her rifle and pulled her handgun out of its holster to point it at the ceiling while reaching for the handle. Gripping onto it, she pulled it down and the mechanism groaned in protest as she pulled a set of stairs down from the ceiling that led all the way up into a cellar room. Eyes alert, gun pointed at the darkness, she started her ascent up into the attic preparing for the worst.

The worst turned out to be dust bunnies. She found her nose itching constantly as she searched through the dim attic looking for something worthwhile to set a tracker on and get the hell out of there. Her heart just couldn't take any more of this tension. A brief moment of relief struck her when she saw a metal box. She knelt down and opened it and a small curve of the lips touched her features as she found herself a little cache of medical supplies. Disinfectant, bandages, gauze, and a few other choice things.

Tani shut the box and pulled a tracker from her pocket and carefully set it on the box and tapped it to start the red light flickering before she got up to leave the attic. The tension had driven her to start walking a bit faster than she'd normally and her steps creaked and cracked against the wooden floorboards and struck down hard on the wooden steps until she was back to the first floor where the fog was its thickest. She paused at the bottom of the steps as she noticed that the fog had seemed to rise from the floor making it harder to see what was in front of her. Tani remember to take it slow, to take it easy and most of all to be safe. She found her way back to the entrance and peeked out of the door before holstering her handgun and getting her rifle back out. That was the cleanest scavenging she had ever been a part of.

Tani sighed and her body relaxed as she stepped back out into the open. She turned to her right and then her left before looking at the air in front of her. Nothing seemed to be going wrong, but of course, nothing could ever go too right in this damn city. She heard something cutting through the air, but it was too late. She dove and turned but her back was slammed into the concrete and her rifle was knocked out of her paws and slid across the floor. Tani yelped and tried to struggle, but she felt something strong coiling around and around her body and when her eyes finally focused she could see that a blue-scaled naga had its long body around her.

Its eyes were a deep purple, its maw was open revealing two fangs that were sharp and a rattle began shaking at the end of its tail that caused her ears to fold back from the strange sensation that coiled up her spine. The only thing she could utter at her defeat was a simple, "Fuck."

When she tried to pull away, she found that her strength was fading away from her body and fast. A strong hand gripped her chin and the serpentine monster leaned in to flick his tongue against her cheek while it hissed, "Be still sweet scavenger and listen to my song."

Tani tried a retort full of venom and fire, but her mouth didn't want to move and her body began to feel heavy as she heard the strange creature whisper to her. His voice, his voice seemed like some sort of sickeningly sweet honey that dripped over her ears and forced her mind to turn just as foggy as the area around them. It was at this point that the world around her seemed to fade away along with any noise except for the voice and rattle of the naga holding her in place. His hands seemed so soft as he stroked her cheeks and his voice and rattle seemed almost melodic in nature. Tani was almost caught but she shook her head and everything started to clear up. She could feel the fact that the monster was pushing his presence into her mind through that noise and she tried her hardest to block out the sound of his voice and the rattle, but it was so hard to resist.

Before she could really understand what was happening, the naga was uncoiling from her body. She found herself standing up straight and with her arms free she reached down to grab her pistol, but she couldn't draw it. Her eyes were narrowed and her fangs were showing as she snarled, but her body just wouldn't obey. Tani kept trying to tug at the gun but only found it harder and harder as the sound of the rattle grew louder and as the serpentine monster slowly began to circle her.

His voice started and the panic in her heart began for a few moments before it was smoothed over by his words, "Hush now. None of that violence. Why would you ever need that when I am here for you? When your lover is here for you? You are safe, protected, and most of all loved."

Tani doubled over and gasped as his voice sent shivers from down her tail all the way up to the back of her neck. She tried to shake it off, but that shivering sensation had rung out inside of her body and told her that his words were true. Tani knew better than to believe those words, but it just felt so right to listen and to obey those words. Her lover was a naga, a monster of the foggy city that made its game by toying with scavengers and scouts and she knew that he was trying to lure into some sort of trap, in fact, she was probably already in that trap but her mind could not think about it properly.

Again the Naga spoke and this time she felt herself melting towards that voice, her body slumping as she brought an arm around her from behind, "Relax...Take your paw off of the gun and strip for me. We have so much to do for our livelihood. Our children must be made to continue spreading my brood. Is that not what you desire as well? Is that not what you need?"

Tani shook her head, but her paws were moving across her body to start gripping at what she was wearing to yank and tug them off. Even as she was stripping down to nothing she found the air around her growing hotter and hotter for some reason. She tried to stop stripping knowing that she needed her equipment, but she kept on thinking about her mate, her lover and how he had desired this so direly and how he needed her so much. Tani whined as her paws trembled at her clothes and her lover's hands suddenly came to start helping her strip with the gentlest of touches. She wanted to say no, wanted to push him away, but the feeling of his hands against her body brought her such happiness.

When every piece of her clothing was off of her body and discarded to the side, she stood there with her arms crossed over her chest and her eyes half-lidded. She leaned back against the monster and she shivered as his mouth crossed over hers so their lips could part and their tongues could coil and twist together as they shared a kiss that only lovers could only share. It seemed to strengthen the thought bubbling in her mind that this was okay, this was right, even if she felt somewhere in her gut that nothing was right about this situation.

Again his voice sounded out and again she was pushed deeper under his influence and directly into the arms of his control, "Bend over for me sweetie, we'll have our fun out here once before I take you home with me, doesn't that sound nice?"

Tani tried to say no, but her will was already eroded and the shackles of the creature's spell were firmly around her. Without a word, she brought herself down on all fours with her tail raised on high. Already her cunt was dripping wet and her insides were ready for him to enter and when she turned her head she felt nothing but excitement as she saw his two cocks slipping out of his genital slit. He practically purred as he grabbed onto her rear and spread her cheeks so he could plant the tip of one of his cocks against her rear and the other against her cunt. She trembled, remembering that she wasn't too much of a fan of anal, but she also remembered that she would do anything for her lover.

The tip of each cock slipped into both holes rather easily. She found herself strangely relaxed and there wasn't even a spot of pain thanks to her lover's influence. Tani only found pleasure rocking through her form as those twitching cocks slid deeper and deeper inside of her while the creature's hands gripped at her hips.

Inch by inch the serpentine creature's double cock dipped into both of her holes. Occasionally he had to pause to shove and push inside, but other than that it was easy going. Tani trembled as she felt his thick shafts sliding through her rear and cunt. She gasped as he gave her rear a slap and she jolted forward as she felt him thrust deep inside of both her holes. Tani felt nothing but pure bliss and pleasure as the creature began to pull back and forth to fuck her and while at the back of her mind she felt like something was wrong, her body refused to acknowledge that fact. His voice had stopped singing to her and instead she heard his groans and little hisses express his pleasure as he pounded inside of her.

Every little bit of pleasure pouring from his mouth was another shock of pleasure to her spine and satisfaction. She loved hearing her lover pleased and loved feeling the fact that her body was serving him properly. Her tail swished from side to side as she moaned while feeling both of his cocks dip as deep as they could manage inside of her while he yanked her hips to bring her body closer. Pleasure struck through her body and she wanted to tell her lover she wanted more, but her mouth was busy moaning and her every motion was made to try and bring more pleasure to her lover.

It wasn't long before any little piece of will she had left and any inclination that she had that something was going wrong was gone. Her mind was entirely the monsters and her eyes were clouded over and shaded by fog. The monster had one hand around her neck and the other at her hips as he plowed deep inside of her without care for how she was feeling. Tani could only feel pleasure in her mind, but her body still experienced and felt the pain of being plowed so roughly through both holes even though her mouth was open and she was panting and whining her pleasure.

The monster's rutting had never been kind, but now his body was moving in a way to slam his cocks into her rear and cunt with a wild beast would. There was only one thing in the mind of the naga as he fucked his new slave senseless and that was to breed her. Tani accepted the breeding with as much grace as a thrall could. She moaned and begged her master for more, her body attuned to the needs of the monster more and more as the minutes past while they fucked in the middle of the city ruins. There were other creatures that could come and spot them and the naga recognized the danger in this and so there was an extra layer of desperation in his rutting of the whore beneath him.

Both cocks began to swell and the naga hissed violently as he dug himself as deep as he could with every single thrust until hot cum began to pour out from both cocks. Tani gasped, her own orgasm hitting her as a result of the mind control, her body forced to full pleasure as she felt his seed pour out inside of her rear and cunt. It felt as if his seed was already on its way to her womb and she knew that she would surely give her lover a lovely brood of children with this amount of seed. When the monster pulled out, she found it impossible to hold herself up and collapsed on the ground panting.

The naga watched her with cool eyes as he whispered, "Sweet girl, sweet lover of mine, would you like to come home with me forever, to forget the home you once had and live with me out here in the wilds and be my broodmate for life?"

Tani brought herself up to her knees slowly, her eyes still clouded by the mind control and her body trembling as she turned her head to look at the great monster that was her lover and master. At this point, she knew the trap, she knew the game, but her mind was too far gone to care as she simply registered it as an invitation from her lover. With a silly smile, she nodded and answered, "Take me home lover, make me yours and bring me to a place where no one will ever find us. I don't care about what will happen to me or what will happen to the other people where I live and I would gladly offer them up as yours as well should they ever come wandering around here."

The naga reached down to take her up in his arms and he hissed pleasantly as he felt her clutch close to his body. He slithered away, leaving her equipment behind and the home that she had once raided. The scavengers that would come next would surely find signs of her here and in the house, but they would be long gone and nowhere to be found. Both the naga and the girl would be hidden deep in some nest with their brood ready to pop from the girl's body. They would be home deep inside of the city ruins covered in fog and Tani couldn't be happier.