Becoming a Demon Ch. 1
(This is the first story I have ever posted. So forgive any problems I'm open to suggestions of where I need to improve. All characters are copyright to me. Any resemblance to real people or other characters is purely coincidental thank you.)
'Run, run. Don't look back' the words ran through my mind over and over as I ran down the street. My old tattered shoes beating along the concrete. My heart was racing, my blood pumping, my amber eyes wide with fear. 'It was there, it looked at me.' I said to myself in a hushed voice as I panted out and then tripped. Stumbling down onto the road. I scrambled back to my feet and looked back down the dark street. My eyes slightly aglow from the poor lighting from the street lamp so oddly placed along the dark road. There was nothing. It was empty.
I gave a sigh of relief, but my mind was still on edge. Something instinctual told me that something was still not right. I had been walking home from a friend's house, I'd decided to take the side road that ran parallel to main street to get home. To do so I had to pass a storage yard. You couldn't see in there unless you where near the front gate to it. Sadly I was and when I passed I looked over lazily into the yard.
That's when I saw it. Atop a stack of crates so close to the gate I could've reached through and grabbed at it. It was a lump with a blue tarp over it. I wouldn't have thought anything of it, if it hadn't been for the fact that the lump moved, what looked like a head under the tarp turned and stared at me. I bolted, and that's how I wound up like this.
My chest still heaving and stared down the road a few moments before slowly turning around and continuing on home. I was 6' 2" tall feral muscled 16 year old human with pale white skin, amber eyes and dark brown hair that hung down my back. My clothes, an old white t-shirt, black hoodie, tan cargo pants all hung loosely on my body, my pants held up with a belt. I was poor so all my clothes where hand-me-downs and sadly the only family member who was as tall as me was fat, so all the clothes I got where too big.
When I finally got home, no one was there. I began to look around, "hello?" I called out as I went through every room of the doublewide trailer. It was empty. I went to the back door and opened looking outside, both cars where there. I walked back in closing the door and locking it moving to the front door locking it as well. "Is anyone home?" I called out again, once more met with only silence. I looked around and then slowly started for my room.
I froze as I entered the side room that lead to my room. There in the middle of the room was a towering dark shape. The pale outside light from the street lights had an eerie affect on the shape, though still inky black, it had a dimension and look of being solid. It seemed to turn and what looked like a face could be seen, pure white skull of a face plastered to the 'head' of the thing. The canines of the skull where elongated giving a fang like appearance to them.
I gulped and slowly stepped back my eyes fixed on the thing as I bumped into something, in reaction I jumped forward and twisted by head round as my body turned slight to see what I hit. It was another of the things, identical to the first I saw. My breathing began to hasten and become unsteady as I looked around, from the shadows more of the things seemed to just fade in almost gliding along the floor as the room filled with them and they moved closer towards me.
My eyes shimmered, wide in fear as the closest one lunged forward at me. Then my world went black, my breathing stopped, and I felt my heart beat its final beat. The world dimmed and my mind slipped away.
A scream let out as a women walked into the room. Her eyes fixed on a body laying there in the center of the room. "D-Daniel?" She stuttered out looking at the motionless 16 year old. There was no response from the boy. My face frozen in a look of pure terror. This is how I was found, my death a mystery to his family. What caused it and how would never be known.
I opened my eyes. I felt weird, cold. I slowly sat up and looked around. I could see nothing, only a vast emptiness stained white. I slowly stood up then looked down, it felt like there was a floor but I couldn't see it. I gave a soft sigh as I then looked at myself and blinked, I was in white pants, slimmed white boots and a white form fitting long coat that had black trimming. "W-what the hell is this? Where am I?" I asked looking around.
I took a step and my foot fell through and I fell then stopped. I was floating there and I blinked before looking towards my feet then forward and taking a chance moved to step again and found myself walking. It was a vary disorientating feeling. He shook his head before looking around; "I need to find a way out of here." I thought and then blinked as a black door appeared in front of me, then a grey door next to in then another, the emptiness filling with hundreds of different colored or shaded doors. I wondered what these doors where then started to 'walk' around looking at the doors then stopped seeing one that looked like my old bedroom door, I grabbed the handle and tried to open it. It wouldn't. I found the same thing happening with a few of the other doors. I sighed and walked to that black door I first saw. "Should I go through? Or should I find a different door?" I pondered aloud, after all who could hear me right?
I then slowly reached up towards the dark handle and began to turn it. The door opened, an abyss within. I took a breath and steeped in.
I shot up, sitting up right, panting and sweating. I whipped my forehead as I sighed softly. I was in bed. 'It was all just a dream' I thought to myself before blinking and looking around. This wasn't my room, or my bed. The walls seemed to be carved granite with a gold bar stripe running around the top. I pulled the blanket off and sighed, I was dressed in that same strange outfit from the other world. At this place had definable shape and colors. I thought as I looked at the door. Before I could get up the door opened and in walked a strange canine like creature. It looked like an anthropomorphic hellhound female dressed in a white black trimmed dress. She stops, looking at the human and tilts her head, "Umm.... who the hell are you and what are you doing in my home?" She asked tilting her head looking at him.
I just stared at her for a moment, looking over her body, I'd heard stories of demons during my life and what such creatures where suppose to look like but, she was beautiful, a good 6' 10" she was larger then me, but she was beautiful, a lush set of D cup breasts and a smooth reddened skin. I then shake my head, "Oh umm sorry, I'm Daniel or at least that's what I was called. As for what I'm doing here, well..." I went on to tell her the strange things that had happened.
She rolled her eyes when I finished. "Great, well I'm Shelith and boy, I hate to tell you this, but you're dead." She says as she sits down next to me on the bed.
"I-I'm dead?" I say my eyes widening slightly. "But... I mean...." I shake my head as I try to think, "What the hell happened and what's going on?" I say in a frustrated tone as I grip my head.
She shook her head and stood up again, "Well...I'm going to have to talk to someone about that, I think I know what happened and well...it wasn't suppose to happen to you." She said. "I'll be back in a moment, don't leave the house." She then walked out of the room heading down the hall.
I stood up shortly after she left and walked to the door looking out into the hall, I was about to lean back in when I heard something, it was the creature, it was yelling at something. I slowly and quietly stepped out and heading closer to the noise the hear what she was yelling.
"I told you to bring me someone powerful, instead you brought this human?" Her voice yelled out. "They're pathetic, anything made from them is always week, their spiritual energy is too weak." She yelled.
I peired around the corner of the hall and saw her. She was yelling at what appeared to be one of the shadow things that had ambushed him in his home.
It quivered and slunk back away from her as she yelled. "You things are incapable of even simple tasks." She yelled and sighed, "and you've wasted my chance." She hit the thing and then sighed, "Get out of my sight." She growled at it and is quickly glided away.
I shivered and then quickly but silently slipped back to the bedroom and sighed, "So either I'm a mistake or...." I tapped my chin then looked up as the door creaked open. "So...what did you find out?" I asked looking up at her.
She sighed and sat down on the bed looking at me. "Well, it was a mix-up, or rather my inkts weren't able to stick to an order. I gave the criteria for a partner for me. Do you know how my kind gets their mates? We must make them, in order to do that we need a spirit to give the body life." She looks at me. "Humans are rarely used because your spiritual energy is weak and creates weak demons regardless of the kind. Sadly once we have a spirit at our disposal we aren't aloud to repack for one millennium." She continued then paused for a moment, "Since it's such a long time to wait and you are here. I will change you into a fellow hound, but you may deny me that and leave if you wish." She says then looks away.
I looked at her, then looked her up and down and sighed. Granted my whole life I'd wanted to be anything except human, I'd even wished for it, I guess you should really be careful what you wish for. I looked at her, she was beautiful or in my mind she was, I guess it wouldn't be to bad to be her partner. I then nodded, "Alright, I'll change."
She gets up, "alright, I'll see if I can fi-" she stops, it seemed she'd expected me to say no. She looked back at me, "You're serious? You will?"
I nodded, "that's right...so how am I changed? Some sort of ritual or something?" I ask chuckling slightly.
She grins and then begins to disrobe, "You change by taking your new female." She says as she reveals her naked body. Her body was strong, thin and feminine but muscled.
I blinked and blushed hearing this, and then it darkened as he saw her body.
She got back into the bed laying on her and slowly spreading her legs reveling her glistening sex. I was slightly amazed at its appearance, it looked like a human's pussy but something in my mind told me that the look was where the similarities ended. However the effect of her naked form mixed with the site of her ready sex and the smell of her arousal showed on me, my pants where tented uncomfortable and I quickly stripped out of my clothes and got into the bed before getting over her and kissing her muzzle's lips the best I could.
She blinked and attempted to kiss back, this gesture new to her, perhaps because of her species' normal choices in partners affectionate acts like this where uncommon.
I smiled and broke the kiss as I pushed my cock head against her folds and let out a soft groan from the heat before slowly starting to push in. Her walls where so tight, seeming meant for a different shaped cock. She moaned and smiled nuzzling me as her vaginal walls began to ripple around my cock as I push in till my pubic hair pressed against her sex, my pubes tickling at her clit making her moan. I panted and then started to pull back before pushing back in, beginning to pump my cock in and out of her ready sex. I moaned as she did as I continued, my eyes closed before I let out and whine of pain as I looked down, her walls where heating up as they grew wetter and it was starting to burn. I closed my eyes and began to thrust faster trying to get it over with now as I panted my cock still rock hard and plowing into her oven of a sex. She moaned and panted as she gripped my back and held me tight against her warm body and I groaned and panted in both pain and pleasure, as I slammed in harder. I soon thrust all of my cock into her. My member burning as I came hard, my warm sperm spurting into her ready sex before I passed out feeling her orgasm around my burning cock.
She smiled and rubbed my back as I began changing. She slowly pulled my length from her and laid me down beside her before nestling against my changing body before she fell asleep.
(The end of part one. Please comment.)