Corruption: Birth of The Sin of Wrath, Luis

Story by Natsuru on SoFurry

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Well, here's a story that was certainly offered me something new to do. This is my have of a trade with Pyry Cole (who - while he does have an account on here - he's mainly on FA as Siriusandpyri), where he wanted me to write a story based on a project he was starting that involved demon transformation. This is my first transformation story I've ever written, so hopefully it's good to please some fans of transformation.

Story written by me, and Natsuru Drake is ©

Luis and thumbnail/cover art ©


"AAAAAHHHHH! Gah...ngh... AAAAAAAHHHHHH!" Luis was screaming out in agony, as his body rolled around on the ground. His body changing; going through a tremendous transformation. Surrounding him were demons of different shapes and sizes; laughing at the poor unfortunate fox as they taunted him. Despite the pain, the canine tried to make an escape for it, but it was all in vain, as he could not leave the demonic magic circle. Try as he might, the only results he would get was some very painfully electric shocks, that would even burn his body. How did things come to this?

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An hour ago...

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Luis was swinging from vine to vine across the treetops, until he came to a complete stop atop one of the many trees. Searching his surroundings, he spotted a Mayan-like temple. Upon closer inspection of the temple's entrance, Luis sported a grin across his muzzle. He was angry, as he spotted the demons he was tracking down; "Those bastards! I'll make them pay with their wretched lives for what they did to my village."

The demons in question that the tiger stripped fox was chasing after, were the same ones who ravaged his village; laying waste to everything and killing everyone. Luis was lucky enough to survive the rampage; though not unskathed, as he sported three slash marks across his chest. Coming out of his thoughts, the canine felt nothing but rage and all he could think about was revenge. Clutching his spear, Luis swung from another vine and made a huge jump at the temple entrance. Once inside, he hid himself in the shadows; sneaking behind the demons he followed.

Coming up close to one of the demons, Luis didn't hesitate to stab his spear into the back of the creature's head; the pointed head coming out through the demon's forehead. The creature let out a screech of pain upon Luis thrusting spear out of it; the screech alerting the other demons. The creatures got into position and were ready to strike at Luis, but the fox proved to be too fast for them, as he ran up to each of them and stabbed his spear into each of their skulls; "You Hellspawns deserved that", the fox taunted. Luis gasped as his short moment of revenge was short lived by the fact that the demons weren't truly dead. The wounds they'd gotten healed up and soon enough, they were back on their feet; screeching out in anger as they eyed the fox.

Backed into a wall, the fox grinned in anger as the demons were bringing themselves over to him. What could he do; was his attempt at revenge in vain? One of the demons launched itself at the canine, and Luis - thinking quickly - slide his right hand above over the spear head; enveloping it in a strange green aura. He then quickly stabbed his spear into the ground; creating a barrier around himself. By the time the demon had made contact with the barrier, it rebounded off and hit the ground as it was set ablaze; it screeching and writhing in pain as its body burned away. Such a site made the fox blink, and he noticed when the other demons so much as touched the barrier, their claws would immediately burn up; this bewildered the fox. It was then that he remembered something that an associate of his had said to him.

"Only magic is capable of completely killing off demonsters."

Realizing that he'd just imbued his spear with magic, and saw the effects of it on the demons - no, demonsters - gave the fox some hope in his revenge ridden heart. He grinned as he removed his spear from the ground; dispelling the barrier around him. With revenge still on his mind, Luis rushed to the remaining demonsters and showed them no mercy, as he stabbed and slashed them all to death. This action of his only ended up alerting more demonsters his way, which didn't deter him from getting his revenge. He rushed himself forward into the oncoming fray; killing them all into a bloody mess. "DIE! DIE! DIE! DIE! ALL OF YOU HELLSPAWNS AND FUCKING DIE!" Slowly, the heart inside of Luis was slowly turning black.

"Well, it seems I've found me the perfect vassal of becoming the Sin of Wrath. Heh heh heh!"

Luis checked his surroundings; wondering where that ominous voice came from, but he all saw was nothing. It was just him; surrounded by the bodies of the demonsters he'd just finished taking. "Who's there? Show yourself!" Luis was growing tense; his hold on his spear had become firm.

"Such anger, such malice, such darkness in your heart. The way you just killed my subordinates; such brutality. You truly are the representation of Wrath."

Luis' eyes were lit ablaze; the fox furious was upon learning that those demonsters belonged to the owner of that mysterious voice. "SO IT WAS YOU", he growled; You're the reason my village was attacked, and everyone killed."

"Oh, did my subordinates do that? I wasn't really aware; nor do I care. For me, it just another simple day."

Luis had gritted his fangs and his grip on his spear had grown tighter; to the point that blood was drawn. He growled before he let out a roar; COME OUT HERE, YOU BASTARD! FACE ME, SO I CAN KILL YOU!"

"My, such an impatient creature, you are. Very well; if you truly wish to face me, then come to the center of this temple. I'll be sure you'll see me there, heh heh heh."

With no time to spare, Luis ran off into the direction to the center of the temple. On his way there, the fox found it strange that this mysterious person didn't have anymore demonsters coming to attack him; it was just a very quiet trek to the center. By the time he made it to the center, Luis didn't notice that once he entered, he'd also activated a magic circle. Not surprising, since there was only one thing that was on Luis' mind; the fox stood in place glaring at the creature. The creature; assumed to be the same one that's been speaking to him, was a tall, hulking being. Its entire body was shrouded in a black aura; the only thing of it that could be made out were its sinister glowing eyes. The creature let out a roar that slightly pushed Luis back a bit. "What's this, can't talk anymore", Luis taunted; "Whatever, you don't need to talk, since you'll be dead very soon."

Luis was the first to take action, as he charged forward towards the creature. Getting within the creature's range, the beast sent its right fist downward at the fox in an attempt to smash him, but Luis was quick to dodge by jumping to avoid the attack. With an opening his sights, Luis made a slash at the beast; striking at the creature's arm. The beast roared out in pain, and then used its left hand to swat the fox away. Despite the hit, Luis only took some minor damage; surprisingly having a small cut on his forehead. Nevertheless, it was going to keep him from exacting his revenge, as he resumed charging at the beast.

The beast wasn't just going to let the fox stop it, so it went on the offensive. It sent both of its claws at Luis, of which the fox managed to dodge, and retaliated by shooting out magical blast from his spear. The beast roared out in pain, as the magic blast made contact with it, and in response to the attacks, the beast shot out its own energy blast; seemingly from its mouth. Seeing this, Luis was quick to stab his spear into that ground; bringing up that barrier to protect himself from the energy blasts. Despite being protected by the barrier, this only served to further anger Luis, as the barrage of blast attacks were keeping the fox from killing the beast; he was thinking about dispelling his barrier, and take a risk to make a stab at the creature's heart.

When the barrage of energy blast had died down, Luis had noticed that the creature was charging up for a bigger blast; this was the risk he was hoping for. Removing his barrier, the fox made a dash towards the beast and discovered a new attack coming from the beast. What appeared to be tentacles from the beast's backside, were sent directly at the running fox. Seeing this, Luis dodged the incoming attacks of the tendrils, and retaliated by fighting back; slicing them half whenever they came at him. This was all; of course, just a diversion on the creature's part, because with the canine distracted, the beast was able to fully charge up its attack. Sending its head forward, the beast breathed a beam of energy at the fox, and since Luis was already preoccupied with the tentacles, he didn't have time to react to the laser beam; his whole body got enveloped by it, "NGH!"

Feeling that it did its job of killing off the fox, the beast ceased its breathing attack, and was surprised to discover that the canine had survived. Apparently, Luis was quick enough to bring up his barrier again. The beast was stunned by this that it appeared to have backed away a bit. Seeing how vulnerable the creature, Luis dispelled his barrier and ran up to the beast, and within its range, the fox sent his spear forward; "NOW DIE!" His spear pierced through the creature's supposed chest, and that was left was dead silence, until the beast groaned out in pain.

"Heh heh heh! Magnificent! Truly you are blinded by thirst for revenge; so blinded that you didn't even realize who you just killed."

That ominous voice had returned and had brought confusion to the fox; surely that voice was referring to itself as being killed. However, upon that black aura fading away from the beast's body, did Luis realize who he just took down; his eyes had gone wide from the reveal. The body before him was a green and scaly dragon; its appearance very beastly, as if it had been corrupted. Luis recognized the dragon and held the look of sheer horror on his face, "N-natsuru!"

"Oh, was this dragon a friend of yours? See what happens when you are so blinded by your rage, and hunger for revenge. You end up becoming the thing you despise the most. Heh heh heh!"

Luis' body started to tremble, as he took his hands off from his spear; backing away slowly from the dragon. "N-no...this isn't what I..."

"What you didn't want to do? On the contrary, this is exactly what you wanted. You wanted revenge, and this is what you got. You can never take back what you have just done. And those subordinates of mine you so heartlessly slaughtered; who is say that they were your own tribe."

What was just said made Luis' eyes become even wider. The canine clutched his head and his trembling had become erratic; he was in a panic. Was what that mysterious voice said true? Had Luis been killing his tribe this whole time? The fox stood there doing nothing, as he was left in a vulnerable state.

"NOW, NATSURU!"

With the command, the dragon's eyes glowed and he sent forth tentacles from his back to capture, and bind the fox. Luis was shocked to see that the dragon, know as Natsuru, was still very much alive; easily removing the spear from his chest and throwing it aside. "Nats..." by the time the fox had dared to open his mouth, another tentacle had went down his throat; causing him to gag as he felt tendril going further down inside of him. The fox struggled to free himself, but it was all in vain, as the tendrils' hold on him were firm.

"Your friend is no longer what he used to be. He is now my general Sin of Lust, just as you'll soon be my general Sin of Wrath. Heh heh heh!"

After those words were said, it had come to Luis' attention that dragon before had sport a big and long limp dick; he was so stricken with grief from assumedly killing Natsuru, that he didn't notice until now. But his focus on the crotch had quickly gone by, upon feeling some liquid-like substance being squirted within him; it most likely coming from the tentacle. This made the canine's eyes bulge, as if they were going to pop out from his sockets any minute now. His struggling had grew weak and his face was starting to become pale; with the tentacle blocking any air coming to into his mouth, he looked ready to pass out. Luis didn't have to worry forever, however, as the tentacle soon exited out from his mouth, and the other tendrils had loosen their hold on him; dropping him to the ground. "Wh-what...did you...just...", Luis was unable to finish question as he felt a burning sensation, and his heart began racing.

"And so, it begins."

The fox started to scream out loudly in agony, as he rolled himself around on the ground. That burning sensation he was feeling was excruciating, as his insides felt like they were melting. Not only that, there was another feeling; a feeling of transformation was happening to him. He swore he could feel his body changing on him; was this what that mysterious voice meant by being the new Sin of Wrath? His ears twitched as he could hear that voice laughing at him; "Who...ARG...are you?"

"My name is of no importance to you; not now anyway. Just accept your fate as the Sin of Wrath. Hah hah hah!"

No sooner, more demonsters started to make their appearance; coming out from the other entrances of the temple, or even from the ground. They didn't attack Luis, but instead chose to laugh at him too; just like the mysterious. Seeing this, the fox could tell he was being mocked, but there was nothing he could really do about it. Whatever strength he had left, Luis managed to get himself to crawl, as he made an attempt to escape,but found out the hard way that escaping wouldn't be possible for him, as he experienced something similar to an electric shock upon making contact with something not visible. It didn't long for him to realize that he was trapped within an invisible demonic barrier; this was the unfortunate end for him.

"AAAAAAHHHHH!" The pain that Luis was experiencing was becoming unbearable, that it made it impossible for him to even move. No sooner, tears began to spawn from the fox's eyes, but they weren't ordinary tears, as they were tears of blood; all the while his eyes had a lava-like glow as they had changed. The canine's body started to grow; Luis could feel his limbs stretching, and they felt like they were going to be ripped apart. Not only that, but his muscles appeared to grow as well; his body becoming a lot more buffer than before. As his body gradually changed, the loincloth he'd been wear couldn't hold on any longer, and it was soon torn off. There, the fox's penis had grown a bit and changed to a more canine looking penis.

The fox soon felt a sharp pain coming from both his shoulders and his forehead, and the reason for the pain was because spines were growing out from those spots. Four spines - two on each shoulder blade - had fully burst out from his skin; burning blood following suit. Likewise, the spines that were sprouting from his forehead had grown into two large horns, with smaller ones grown on each side; the same boiling hot blood had seeped out from where the horns sprouted from.

His fangs had grown bigger as well, and they became a lot sharper. His tongue had transformed into a more reptilian-like one, and the saliva that was produced was as hot as lava. Lastly, his orange fur had become a much darker shade of red, and by the point his transformation had finished. With his mind now more beastly, Luis was nothing more than a wild animal now; he got onto his feet and let out a mighty, angry roar. As the new Sin of Wrath, he violently attacked and killed most of the smaller demonsters; demonstrating his new found strength.

"Hah hah hah! Oh how excellent; the transformation is complete. With two Sins ate my disposal, that only leaves five more. Luis, Natsuru; let us be on our way, and find more unfortunate, sinful souls to give birth into new Sins. And soon, this entire world will be nothing more, than a demonster infested paradise. Hah Hah Hah!"

End!