Slag new draft.doc
So I'm changing a bit with my idea, the characters are the same and can be found on my FurAffinty page: http://www.furaffinity.net/user/randomman29/
I hope you enjoy my new version.
Slag New draft part one
In a Castle located in a cold desolate environment a red haired gargoyle female starts serving herself some food her current master had prepared. She half-heartily scooped some of the chilly, she was grateful that Slag gave her freedom, and the chance to torture her former captor, but it still couldn't undo what was done. Nothing could undo what was done to her, and what she was put through, but not having to worry that she would be smashed in her sleep during the day was nice, he had two spells to protect his land since he turns to stone during the day as well. She was glad to be out of that life but never thought it would be a villain that got her out of there, even though it was because of them she was in there in the first place. It was also the way he found the place she was cadged, he fell into the castle she was enslaved at and once he saw that it was full of slaves he warped them all out of the castle then proceeded to destroy it. They were both surprised that she ended up in his castle but then he set the destination to be the place they wanted the most and she wanted to be in the room of her former captor as he was tortured. After the torture he offered to let her stay under if she knew how to play Rummikub.
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She agreed even though it was an odd request, but then after meeting his friends and sister she realized it was a way of gaining protection, and she would stand out too much with her head-shield. It didn't take her long to learn it and was made an honorary member of their family complete with tracking device disguised as a family ring. She was given free rain of the castle where she learned man forms of magic. No matter how hard it would be, it was better was better then the life she had, at least here she wasn't treated like a slave. It was beyond anything she could describe to get her freedom back, she was always going to be a slave by law but thanks to him she learned magic and after mastering an illusion spell she was able to cover the scares on her body soon she could change her whole appearance. Her appearance spell worked so well that she was offered a job at a strip club. It was nice to look at herself every night and not have to be reminded of what she was put through, she still wondered how in all possibilities there was, why was this the only one she had.
She walked out into the dinning hall after garnishing her meal, not giving a smile to Slag, not because she didn't respect him, it was because she respected him that she didn't give him a showing false happiness, he could tell when she was faking it, if he bothered to look up from the newspaper he was reading. He was a bit simple on some things like the reason he enjoyed her company was because her hair was as red as his armor, he still thought things out and was never caught off guard. She glanced over at the basket of eggs next to him and she sat down across from him as one vanished, knowing it was going to be another one of those days.
She didn't think too much about the body under the red armor, it was clear what he was he was a gargoyle like her. With the head of a Triceratops, large wings and tail it was obvious. It did seem dumb to have is wings armored but then he doesn't need to use them to glide it was put them in armor or remove them.
She began to eat her meal, he's a good cook, and it would be bad to waist it. She was still adjusting to her new life; she had truly horrible masters before, but with him was just insane.
BOOM
Mosk comes bursting though the castle wall on his riding lawnmower shouting "SEVEN"
She didn't react to the intrusion or when the dragon with an "awesomeface" mask took the armored humanoid Triceratops out the opposing wall, this was a normal start to the night's activities. She simply continued eating after saying, "Idiots."
There is some variation to his activities but they're few and far between, the most recent one was as odd as it was fun. He convinced her to stand on a pallet jack and whip him as she shouted, "mush" while he just went though everything in his path. He did create a lot of destruction that night but it was harmless for the most part.
Lilith does her best to try and sneak up on but after her training she could start to tell when she was coming "I know you're there so just get it over with." She says as she puts her silverware down.
"Oh you're no fun." The pink haired naga says as she gives Clarice a big hug. "You need to lighten up and stop insulting our masters."
She was still uncomfortable being hugged, but made an exception for Lilith since it was her way of greeting others and she was the slave of Slag's friend. She did have her job at "The abandoned warehouse" strip club but she was allowed to attack anyone that tried to touch her, she was still not over her old life. "Why should the spirit get to and not me?"
"Because it's my job!" a disembodied voice says, "Remember?" then a scroll unrolls in front of them.
The spirit of the castle was the only other one that resided there, it did all the cleaning that was needed and in exchange it got to insult anyone in the castle.
"Yeah. Yeah." Lilith says and tries to push it away but her hand goes though it, "I know about your whining clause." She then goes to the kitchen to get some food for herself.
Outside.
Slag held onto the hood of the mower with one claw and tapping it with the other, "So don't you have something else to hit me with?" He asked.
"Nope!" Mosk says proudly.
"Just thought I'd ask. This has gotten a little stale." He says then slams his feet down causing the mower to flip up and over him.
Mosk didn't abandon his seat he just lets it flip fully then after it lands on its wheals, it's still in one piece but the landing still killed the engine "Well I guess it's time to take my vengeance, my villainous friend." He says as he got off the machine and padded his blue suit.
"Okay but you should have expected that."
"Who the hell expects a bag of exploding panties?" Mosk yells. "I'm still called a pervert for that."
"And?" He asked sarcastically.
"Lilith is deferent, there's nothing wrong with sex!"
"Sure there isn't as long as you do other things from time to time." Slag says causing Mosk to roar and punch him enraged.
Back at the castle
"So want to do wagers on who will win?" The castle spirit asks the two females after they finished eating.
The look at each other and shrug as they both say, "Okay why not?"
Author's notes.
So this was all I have for the start of the new direction of "Slag" I'll have more soon this was just the idea I wanted to start a comic with but got no interest so I'm just putting it up as a story. It would have been better as that purely because it takes place in a Virtual realty game world and how insane I'm trying to make it. I'll take any thoughts you have on it I'm also going to try and do more of this crap no matter what.