Faruk's Story Ch.1(Unrevised)
#1 of Unrevised
Ok, maybe I lied in my journal. There will be some yiff in this part of the story. Yay for some, nay for others.
This is my first version of the beggining chapter for those who were wondering.
"What a wonderful day", Faruk said to himself as he padded over to the river. When he got there, he took a few gulps from the river, then sat down and looked at himself in the water.
He was an Arcanine, and a very good looking one at that. He had an orange pelt and black zig-zagging stripes all over his body. His mane being cream colored along with his tail.
Once he was done looking at himself, he started heading back to the den, where his mate, Vira, was waiting. As he padded inside the den, he was welcomed with the familiar scent of heat, as well as his mate, who was cleaning herself.
"Is there anything I can help you with babe?" he said as he padded up next to her.
"Hmm...Could you maybe help me out with this spot back here," she said as she turned around and lift her tail up for him to see her nether lips, "I can't seem to reach it."
Instantly aroused, he said "Well, I can't just leave you hanging, now can I..." He moved closer to her and started to lick her genitals. She let out a little moan as he kept licking it. Enjoying the taste of her juices, he put his muzzle in her cunt and started to move his tongue around inside. She moaned with pleasure as he expertly started to explore her cunt. He kept going deeper and deeper, exploring further, until she couldn't hold it any longer. With a scream of pleasure, she came hard on Faruk's face, as he drank as much as he could of her juices.
Pulling his muzzle out and licking his lips, he said, "Well, is that clean enough?"
"Well, I think there is one more thing you can help me with." she said, nodding at his length, now fully erect.
"I would be happy to oblige." he said as he was mounting her. Once he had positioned his length on her cunt, he started to slowly enter her, making them both moan in delight. He kept going until his knot hit her lips. Then he pulled out a littlie, only to go back in, her natural lubricant making it easier with each thrust. He eventually picked up the pace, thrusting faster and harder into her warm, tight pussy. Just as she was about to climax, Faruk suddenly stopped and pulled almost all of it out. Before she could question why he stopped, he thrusted all his length inside her, knot and all, tying them. That was enough to send them both over the edge, as they climaxed in unison.
Both of them, panting hard, fell to the floor, with him still inside her. "I love you Vira..." said Faruk.
"I love you too." She said, as they both fell asleep from exhaustion.
Faruk awoke suddenly to a noise outside the den. As he started getting up, he heard a twig snap out there. He shook his mate to wake her up.
"Ughhh...What is it dear?" she asked, yawning at the same time.
"Shhhhh....I think there's something outside. I want you to stay here while I check it out." he said, heading for the den entrance.
"Be careful." she said as she watched her mate leave the den.
When he got outside, he heard another twig snap. He looked around to find were the sound came from. Then, all of a sudden, a person jumped out of no were and threw a net at him. Reacting just in time, he leaped to the side to dodge the net. Then he built up fire from within him, and unleashed it, making an inferno of fire that would have normally scorched anyone in it. But the attacker easily dodged the fire attack, and then tried throwing another net, which he, again, evaded.
Meanwhile, while that was happening outside, Vira was standing in the back of the den, wondering what was going on. She wanted to go out and find out, but decided to stay inside like her mate said.
"I'm sure everything's just fine." She thought. If she knew any better, he had just scared off whatever was out there and making sure it was gone. That was, until she heard him yelp outside.
At that, she started running to the den entrance. As she got outside, she suddenly felt something fall on her. She tried to bite through it, but was starting to get weaker and weaker. The last thing she could do before she lost consciences was to yell out her mate's name.
Faruk was beaten up pretty bad, and blood had started to fall out his mouth. His attacker had pulled out an electric baton that jolted him every time it hit him. All he could do was try to avoid the attacks as his attacker gained ground.
"FARUK!!!"
When he heard that, he turned around and looked in terror as his mate was being dragged away by another person. Furious with rage, he started to run after her, only to get wrapped up in a net. He tried to break free with all his might, but was starting to lose energy quickly. And the last thing he saw before he lost consciences was his mate being lifted up in a white van that said P.D.