Night Visitor (Vore Story)

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A commission for Fizzle. The kitsune sneaks into Neil's bedroom, and gets a little too zealous while hunting down something shiny...


Neil was a snorer, there was no doubt of that. Incredibly loud, mouth always open sawing logs throughout the night. But, besides the occasional raspy throat or annoyed partner, nothing really ever seemed to come of it. He didn't find himself waking up in the middle of the night or anything, gasping for breath. At least, until some outside forces got involved in the middle of a particularly loud night...

This is where Fizzle came in. The orange, micro-sized kitsune was no stranger to sneaking around the houses of his more normal-sized contemporaries at night, but he had never actually slipped into the bedroom of a sleeping giant before, especially one that was as loud as Neil was being...the harsh, raspy noise almost enticed the kitsune, though, eventually getting him to slip through the slightly-ajar door into the room for any goodies he could get his little paws on. With how loud those snores were, he had the license to be a bit louder himself as well, taking a few more risks with how he conducted himself as he clambered up the side of the bed that the deer was sleeping on. The giant stirred in his sleep every now and again, but he didn't make any sudden movements that might end up with Fizzle squished underneath his body, allowing the micro kitsune to make his way all the way up the mattress until he was essentially face-to-face with the long, gray muzzle of the deer. Those lips constantly opening and sucking in air with brackish snoring only to exhale it a second later...

Fizzle still wasn't entirely sure of what had drawn him to the deer's bedroom in the first place, but he now had something concrete that lured him: a shiny that glimmered in the moonlight on the top of Neil's headboard! Unfortunately for the micro, it seemed like the only route up there was on top of the deer's head, clambering on top of the antlers and then taking a big jump towards the wooden slab above. Unlike the leg of the bed, there were no crevices that he could cling to, no sheets that he could grab onto. It was hard to think with the constant assault on his ears that was coming from only a few inches away, sounding more like a jet engine roaring past him than the result of a blocked airway...but he had already come so far, and he would only need to be on top of the deer for a couple seconds, anyway. And riches awaited! Sweet, shiny riches!

Fizzle took a moment to steel himself before he stumbled towards Neil's open mouth, attempting to use the movement as a sort of lift to get him higher up on the deer's head, maybe even clamber up on those antlers...as his jaws closed following another loud, abrasive snore, the kitsune took his chance, grabbing onto the deer's lips and clambering up the side of his muzzle as quickly as he could! When he managed to make it to the top, Fizzle just sort of flopped down for a moment, intensely afraid that he had just woke Neil up...then intensely relieved as he heard that guttural snoring coming from below him now! The kitsune looked back up towards the shiny that had caught his eye, seeing just how much closer he was just with that one bit of climbing. The hard part was done, now he just needed to scrabble his way up...

The kitsune struggled to get back to his feet as the ground beneath him constantly shifted up and down, along with the constant vibration from Neil's loud snores! He just needed to maintain this balance for a few more seconds, though. The deer's antlers were just barely in his reach, and if he could grab a hold of them, it would make things go that much faster. He had to wait for that mouth to go up, get on his tippy-toes and then reach out as far as he could...

His fingers did manage to scrape by those bony, velvety protrusions for a split second, though not for nearly long enough to grab a firm hold of it before he felt the ground beneath him lowering once more. A relatively minor setback, but what was far greater of a setback was the fact that his foot had slipped right off of Neil's snout and sent him careening down in the process! Fizzle winced as he expected to fall quite a long way down to the plush mattress, but he was somewhat surprised when he felt himself landing somewhere a bit squishier and warmer instead. Not quite inside of Neil's closing mouth, but more along the inside of his black lips...nestled firmly between his lip and a row of flat, white teeth!

The kitsune cursed under his breath as he attempted to get back to his feet, the squishy, somewhat-damp interior of the deer's mouth making it difficult for him to find his footing. Despite how bad the situation was for Fizzle right now, though, it was still at least somewhat under his control. He just needed to pull himself out and get back to square one, then he could work his way back up the mountain, even if it was quite scary to be trapped inside of Neil's mouth for a few seconds as his lips closed once more!

A second or two of silence. A bit longer than it normally was between the deer's snores. Fizzle's breathing suddenly stopped as he heard a small groan from the deer, a deep rumbling around him that could not signify anything good for the kitsune. If he stayed completely still, though, maybe the sleepy cervine wouldn't notice anything and fall back asleep in a few seconds time...but, of course, that wasn't what happened. The unlucky kitsune heard the noises of something moving to his right, before Neil's thick, probing tongue suddenly splattered down onto him, absolutely soaking him in sticky drool! The powerful muscle quickly warmed its way underneath Fizzle's tiny body, picking him up and curling around him before dragging him into the deer's mouth proper. The kitsune's orangish-yellow fur was almost immediately matted by thick deer saliva, Fizzle casually being tossed around by the thick, powerful muscle underneath him as Neil subconsciously tasted the kitsune. Gross and unpleasant, for sure, but Fizzle still held out the hope that this was just some kind of sleep thing, and if he stayed still for a long enough, eventually the deer would fall back asleep...though the threat of him waking up, or worse, physically being pushed to the back of the deer's throat and gulped down were still present!

The former of those two threats turned out to be the one Fizzle would have to deal with. Gradually, as he was flipped and flopped and curled up by Neil's tongue, the kitsune could start to hear some sort of sleepy mumbling from the deer. And then, all of a sudden, everything stopped. Neil let out a "wuh?" as he snapped back to consciousness, suddenly very aware of the furry micro that was stuck inside his mouth! There was a sort of standstill for a few seconds where Fizzle continued trying his best to remain completely still, but as Neil smacked his lips and started to rub the kitsune around inside of his mouth a little bit, Fizzle knew that he had been caught. The kitsune expected the tongue underneath him to effortlessly push him to the back of Neil's throat and send him down into the slimy depths of the deer's body, but that wasn't what happened...

Instead, he heard a wet squish from behind him as Neil's fingers entered his mouth, the deer grabbing a hold of Fizzle by the tail and slowly pulling him out from between his lips, letting the micro just sort of dangle in the cold night air! "...what on earth..." the deer said to himself as he held the kitsune up, still far too groggy to really understand everything that had happened up to this point. He didn't know who Fizzle was, or what the micro wanted to do, but he did know a toy when he saw one. And, well, Fizzle was the absolute perfect size to play around with! Without saying anything, Neil opened his mouth and dropped the kitsune right back in, immediately nudging him into one of his cheeks and suckling on the tiny guy like a piece of hard candy! Fizzle scrambled around inside, trying to turn around so that he could potentially pry open Neil's lips in an escape attempt while also trying not to get any thick deer slobber in his own mouth in the process. And, well, he wasn't really doing a good job of either of those things, honestly...

Neil wasn't planning to just eat Fizzle, though. It was the middle of the night, after all, and he wasn't really feeling a midnight snack. No, instead, he was just lubing the micro up for what he truly had in mind. Already, Neil was busy using his other hand to slip down the undies that he was wearing, rolling over on his side in bed to get in the perfect spot for what he had planned next! And after another minute or so of rolling the kitsune around in his mouth, he once again grabbed a hold of that tail, pulling Fizzle out and once again giving him a chill as he went from the slick, hot interior of Neil's mouth to the cool outside world again..he wouldn't need to wait too long before he was warm again, though~

"Well...good thing I woke up a bit horny, I guess." Neil said rather matter-of-factly as he swung his arm around behind him, Fizzle feeling cold air whooshing around his entire body before the hand that was still holding him came to a fast, unexpected stop. It was far too dark for the kitsune to make out where he was or what was in front of him, but, well, he wouldn't have to wait too much longer to find out. The deer soon reached behind himself with his other hand, gripping one of his fat, gray cheeks and peeling it apart, just enough to where he could stick something right into that steamy, flexing pucker if he wanted...and, today, that something would be Fizzle! The deer unceremoniously shoved Fizzle forward between his cheeks, feeling the warm, slime-covered fur rub up against his sensitive hole. A little shiver ran all the way up the deer's spine in the process, snapping him right out of his sleepiness and causing his shaft to throb against the underwear that it was still partially contained by!

"Ugh, gross!!..." Fizzle groaned as he was smeared up against Neil's musky tail hole, the tight, fleshy ring already threatening to clench him away in one quick twitchy movement! At this point, he was almost kind of wishing that he just fell down the back of Neil's throat once he was noticed, if this was going to be the alternative...Neil's hand poked and prodded around back there with the kitsune's head, trying to find the perfect spot where he could just puuuuuush his little wiggly toy right on in. Slickening his pucker up with a little bit of leftover saliva in the process, until he found just the right position. Neil took a moment to relax his insides the best he could, before giving Fizzle a good shov-

*SHlk!*

It didn't make much noise to Neil, but for Fizzle, the transition from the inside to the outside world was absolutely deafening. In the snap of a finger, he could suddenly feel and hear every little thing Neil's body was doing. The thumping of his heart, the rhythmic and powerful breathing, and of course, the slick, squelchy noises of the slimy, musky walls around him as they suckled and tugged on his tiny, vulnerable form, more than ready to help him get lost inside of the deer's body. Already, Fizzle's entire head had slipped through that ring into Neil's anus proper, the tight flesh almost acting like a collar as it squeezed and worked over Fizzle's neck with decisive power. Oozing over the kitsune's tight shoulders, threatening to swallow him up at any moment!

And then, Fizzle felt Neil starting to pull him out. A deep moan rumbled around the kitsune, then disappeared as he was pulled almost entirely out of Neil's ass, given a merciful moment of breath from the deer...but it was just that. A moment. The kitsune was plunged back into that tight hole immediately afterwards, Neil gasping as Fizzle slipped in all the way up to his waist! "OoOhhHhhh yeah, keEeEep wiggling right there..." Neil demanded as he swirled the kitsune around inside his rectum, Fizzle pressing up just perfectly against his prostate in several different positions...mmf! The deer was stroking himself off madly at this point, more than ready to make a mess all over his bedsheets with how good it felt to use the micro like this. Fizzle himself was completely dazed at this point, unable to keep track of where he was inside of Neil as the deer started to pump and push and pull the micro in and out, in and out. It almost became a bit boring in its rhythm, honestly, as weird as it was for Fizzle to think such a thing...

Thankfully, Neil's orgasm was more than enough to shake things up back there. Neil groaned loudly as his grip faltered, his innard's pulsing and his cock throbbing as it shot out a few wads of warm deer cum out onto his sheets, those same powerful muscular contractions also SHLORPing Fizzle right up inside of Neil's ass! It was so fast, Neil didn't even realize what had happened at first; but Fizzle certainly did. The tiny kitsune suddenly went into full panic mode as he felt the tips of his toes instantly get swallowed up by the deer's pucker, but he was quickly finding that it was far too crushingly tight around him for the micro to...well, do anything, honestly. The deer's colon had slurped him right up like the little morsel he was, and now the only way he was getting out was if those walls started pushing him the other way...and, well, that didn't seem like it was happening anytime soon~

Neil lay there for a good minute or so, letting the last of his load dribble down onto his bed as he panted and enjoyed the afterglow of a great orgasm. He reached a finger back around to his ass, wiggling between those cheeks before pressing up against his pucker and realizing that Fizzle had perhaps gone a bit too deep. "Oops~" was all that the deer had to say about that, as he rolled over onto his back and quickly started to fall asleep. The sheets could get washed tomorrow...