Latrans' adulthood ritual
A brief story that came to mind. I love the tribal theme and all the mystique around initiation rites. Also, a friend recommended that I expand the story to add one more scene (the one with the four coyotes) and I took the opportunity to experiment with a more extended form of storytelling.
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In the ritual hut, dimly lit by a few twisted candles, two male figures occupied the center of the room. The younger male was on his knees, with his back straight and his eyes closed, completely naked. The other male was an old man, hunched over, with most of the hair on his chin white, cuts on his ears, scars and ornaments of great prestige.
At last the long awaited day had arrived, today Enapay, along with other youngsters, would be transformed into an adult. After having survived eighteen winters in this world, the members of the coyote tribe of the Ixshte Valley celebrated a ritual to become adults; First they had to be prepared by the shaman of the tribe who filled their bodies with ceremonial marks and enervated their spirits with a secret concoction, then the initiates would run naked in a trance through the valley to the meadow of the 'tribute', the tribute is another member of the tribe who voluntarily offers his body to copulate with whoever is enduring the ritual, finally the next day the new adults would be recognized and a modest banquet organized by the families of the participants would be celebrated.
The shaman finished painting the young man's naked body with oil paint and then approached a table with herbs on one of the walls of the circular hut. "Nervous?" asked the old man.
"A little...I don't know," replied the young coyote, without opening his eyes.
"Do you know what you have to do?" the shaman asked again, as he crushed a handful of herbs in his mortar.
"Get intimate with a girl?" said Enapay, still hesitant about what the experience would be like.
"Have you done it before?" continued the old man, at the same time as he stuffed the paste he had mixed into a cloth to press it.
"No! That's forbidden," the young canine hastened to reply.
"It is forbidden to do it with women until you are an adult, but with other men... " clarified the shaman.
"I-I haven't done it with other men either..." admitted Enapay.
"What a shy boy. Years ago, when we were young, your grandfather and other boys spent our days exploring our bodies and playing in the waterfall," the old man recalled.
"Well...maybe we explored a little with some friends, but nothing as serious as this," the coyote admitted.
"No one knows a male's body better than another male, don't forget that," the shaman advised.
When the old man finished the mixture, he put it in a wooden bowl and diluted it with water, then whipped the liquid with a small carved bone until it formed an opaque yellow substance, strong smelling and somewhat thick.
"Stand," the old man ordered, approaching the naked youth again, presenting the bowl with both hands.
Enapay rose from the ground immediately, opened his eyes and took the bowl with extreme care.
"Drink it all and run to the place you chose. Remember that you won't have much time until you lose control," said the old man.
The young coyote nodded, brought the bowl to his mouth and drank the contents without hesitation. The thick liquid ran down Enapay's throat, burning everything in its path until it settled in his stomach and filled him with energy, producing a strange tingling sensation throughout his body.
The shaman opened the door of his hut and the young coyote ran down the hill, through the village, the corrals and the fields, and into the forest. With each step he took, everything around him buzzed, with each breath his vision blurred, the outside world disappeared and slowly only instinct remained.
In the same forest, a group of four coyotes of the same age were devouring some ripe fruit they had just harvested from the trees. Each bite soaked their snouts and caused juice to drip down their chins and throats, until it stained the fur on their bare chests.
"We should be carrying this fruit back to the village, not eating it alone," one of the youngsters said worriedly, as he finished chewing a mouthful.
"Don't bother Iukta, the baskets at my home are full of fruit, no one is going to miss the ones we're eating!" replied the largest of the group, wiping his muzzle with his arm.
"Besides, tomorrow is Enapay's coming-of-age party and surely his father is going to offer plenty of meat, no one is going to want fruit," said another of the coyotes.
" Lucky me...I'm still a season away from my rite of adulthood," complained the fourth of the youngsters.
"But you practice it every day with Emnara!" replied the older one, laughing loudly.
"Ha ha! It's true!" nodded Iukta.
"Ooh Emnara's boobs are the best fruit in the valley!" another of the coyotes.
"And his pussy...that one is soft and squashed," added the last one, thrusting his pelvis in the air, moving the bulge that had formed under his loincloth.
The older coyote reached out, grabbed the loincloth and pulled it off, leaving the other young man naked, causing everyone to laugh as the naked coyote continued to wiggle his pelvis, causing his balls to sway and the tip of his penis to spit little spurts of precum.
"Ha ha! Careful with that, it's coming out of you!" shouted one of the guys, pointing his finger at the canine penis that already had its half out of its sheath.
"Guys! Guys! Wait a minute!" shouted the biggest coyote.
"What's up?" asked another of the canines.
"Who volunteered as tribute for Enapay?" asked the huge male.
"Hmm...I think Emkhala volunteered," said one, not quite sure.
"Yes! It's Emkhala, I heard my mother say so yesterday," assured Iukta.
"That's not fair! Emkhala has her little flower intact, Enapay doesn't deserve to have her as a tribute," growled one of the young men and punched the ground.
"Calm down... I have an idea. Let's go to the tribute grounds," said the larger coyote.
The other youths nodded, except for Iukta who wasn't too convinced of his friends' plan. The four coyotes put away the uneaten fruit and left.
When the young males arrived at the tribute glade they were immediately met by the watchman, a veteran warrior who was in charge of ensuring the safety of the ritual participants.
"What are you guys doing around here? The Enapay ritual will begin shortly," the warrior said in a gravelly voice.
"We have come to speak with Emkhala, it will only take a moment," replied the older of the young men.
"Good, but hurry up. I don't want Enapay to come and get confused," the watchman clarified, stepping aside and letting the guys pass.
The young female was kneeling on soft leather, adorned with flowers and completely naked. Emkhala's eyes widened as she saw the group approaching her, she smiled and stood up.
"Hi, guys, come to see the ritual?" asked the girl.
"Hello, Emkhala! We came looking for you to have some fun before the ritual," said one of the young men.
"Yes! We want to be the first to use your little flower," said another, reaching out his hand to caress the female's vulva, making her shiver.
"B-But I must be here when Enapay arrives," the girl replied worriedly.
"Don't worry, we'll be back soon," assured the coyote who had been naked for a while now.
"Besides, you can tell your friends that you were taken by a group of males your first time, just like the matriarch Emtheli," assured the older of the young men.
"Just like the matriarch..." murmured the female, remembering the great prestige Emtheli had brought to her family and all the cubs she had birthed and raised for the tribe.
"That's right, we go away for a bit, leave our seed inside you a couple of times each and then you come back to help Enapay," the larger coyote offered, resting his hands on the girl's hips.
"F-Fine... " the female accepted.
The young men celebrated and set off to leave the sacred clearing with the girl. But, no sooner had they set foot outside the tribute area when the watchman reappeared, blocking the passage.
"What are you doing? Emkhala, go back to the glade center, Enapay is about to arrive here," the warrior ordered.
"Easy, we're just going to eat some fruit and then come back," said the larger coyote.
"No. You know the rules: there must always be a tribute in the clearing," objected the veteran, crossing his arms and glaring at the youngsters.
"But we'll be back quickly, I promise. Look, here's some fruit for you," the young man tried to persuade, offering the warrior a few fresh fruits he had stashed in his haversack.
"I accept the fruits, but Emkhala stays," the veteran sentenced, grabbing the haversack and setting it on the ground beside him.
The older coyote of the youngsters thought for a moment and then said, "What if someone else takes Emkhala's place, could we leave?"
"If someone voluntarily accepts the tribute's position, then yes," the warrior clarified.
"Perfect! Iukta will stay," affirmed the big coyote.
"What, why me?" complained the young man.
"Because you like boys over girls, Iukta," replied another of the young men.
"Yes! Remember when you sucked all three of us off at the waterfall," added another.
"Iukta, do this for the team and I'll make it up to you, I promise," the larger male assured, resting his huge hands on the hesitant young man's shoulders.
"Fine... I'll stay," Iukta agreed, blushing as he looked down at the ground.
The other three young men celebrated again. The watchman nodded and let the three males leave with the girl, then indicated the new tribute to take his place.
"There are some vases with oils and flowers to lubricate and perfume you if you wish," the warrior offered.
The young coyote accepted, took off his loincloth, dipped his hands in the oil and began to run them all over his body, sinking his fingers into his anus gently, preparing to be taken by another male for the first time in his life.
Hiding among the trees in the thick forest, the small group of coyotes had already moved far enough away from the ritual site and felt safe in the shelter of other tribe members.
"Hmm...you smell very good, Emkhala," the large coyote stated, taking the young woman by the arms and bringing his muzzle close to her shoulder, taking deep breaths.
The female stretched her neck to the opposite side, allowing the young man to do at his pleasure as she laughed.
"Yanai is not used to good smells, I'm surprised he can identify the scent of ceremonial oils," teased the coyote who had been walking around without his loincloth for quite a while now, the tip of his penis outside his sheath.
"Lonan, Nakai, shut your snouts and come attend to the twins," ordered the larger male, grabbing both of the female's tits with his hands and pointing them at his friends.
Both young men grinned with their tongues out of their muzzles, eagerly approached and carefully hugged Emkhala from the front, hunched over and began sucking on her nipples, licking the delicate skin. Lonan, the coyote who was naked, frantically moved his hips in search of the female's small vagina with his canine tip that kept spitting precum on Emkhala's abdomen. Nakai, who was a bit quieter than his buddies, untied his loincloth and attached his genitals to one of the girl's legs, making calmer movements than his friend's, while still sucking on the nipple that had touched him.
Meanwhile, Yanai settled behind the female, giving her shoulders soft bites, flexing his knees and spreading Emkhala's buttocks apart to rest the tip of his thick canine sheath, making a gentle circular motion, trying to find the girl's anus.
Emkhala's legs trembled, the new sensations of the guys' tongues on her nipples becoming stronger and stronger, taking her thoughts instantly back to a few days ago, when she told her friends that she would offer herself as tribute. The female's nimble, delicate hands positioned themselves back and forth, hastily grabbing the genitals of two of the males who clung to her like hungry puppies to a piece of meat, just as her friends had recommended. Yanai's testicles were significantly larger than Lonan's, though both were equally warm and soft to the touch, generating a secret pleasure for her as she felt in physical possession of the young men's manhoods.
Lonan was quick to moisten the female's hand that held his manhood, returning the favor to the girl by bringing one of his hands to Emkhala's genitals and gently plunging two of his fingers into her. Nakai released the nipple he had been sucking on with much passion and straightened up, bringing his muzzle up to the female's, sniffing her and colliding their noses tenderly, begging for her to open her mouth and grant him her tongue.
The huge male grunted as he felt the foreign hand touch his testicles, Yanai was very wary of his masculinity and did not hesitate to punish the female for her impertinence by pressing his thick erection with the virgin girl's little back hole, who only gave a gasp and moaned at the coercion of the big coyote who established his dominance over her small body.
Emkhala inhaled deeply and redoubled her bet, pushing her ass back until she forced her sphincter to accept the big male's thick penis, enduring a burning she thought would be less. The female hunched over and grabbed the young male in front of her by the face with both hands to support herself, it really didn't matter who it was, Emkhala simply opened her muzzle and began kissing the shy Nakai, plunging her delicate tongue into the male's mouth.
Lonan continued to suck on the female's nipple, biting it gently and letting his hands roam over the female body without care to touch the other males. The vigorous young man was already getting desperate from the physical contact and the smell of the other coyotes' fluids, wishing deep in his head to penetrate the virgin girl in front of him.
As he began to enjoy the taste of Emkhala's tongue, Nakai relaxed slightly, entering a trance he had never felt before. Slowly, the young male took up his full position in front of the female, leaving his partner aside, making his small canine penis, which was not yet fully erect, touch the girl's immaculate vagina and spurting his transparent male juice on the female, who allowed the male to advance on her.
The huge coyote smiled at the sight of the other two kissing. Taking his chance, Yanai rested his muzzle on Emkhala's shoulder, held her by the hips and, already having a good portion of his penis in the female's anus, began to penetrate her with his thick penis at a slow but hard pace.
The girl opened her eyes slightly, enjoying the look of pleasure on the young male's face as he kissed her. Emkhala also saw how poor, uneasy Lonan had been left out of the fun.
Lonan had had to let go of the girl and even stop sucking on her nipple, as his friend now occupied the entire front of the beautiful female. A few seconds later, the young coyote's eyes met Emkhala's, who looked down leading the male to follow her gaze. The naughty female had brought her dainty hands to Nakai's ass, holding and lifting the young man's tail with one while stretching one of his buttocks with the other, exposing the boy's small, virgin anus.
A painful pressure on his anus woke Nakai from his trance, making him groan and squirm to try to free himself but he was immediately embraced by Lonan's strong arms, who was pushing deeper and deeper his canine penis. Before the young male, who was being penetrated for the first time, became completely desperate, the gorgeous female grabbed his genitals and rested the tip of his penis in vagina and kissed him again. Nakai gritted his teeth and thrust, making the girl tremble as he deflowered her with a precise thrust.
With the steady eruption of precum in the girl's tight bowels, the penetration became increasingly pleasurable, causing the huge Yanai to sink his nails into the female's legs. When Lonan's muzzle rested on his shy mate's, both male coyotes were facing each other, their muzzles just inches apart. Yanai realized at that instant what was happening, smiling lasciviously and making the other young man blush and immediately look in another direction, but the huge male did not let this pass and reached up his neck a little more so he could kiss his friend, inviting him to enjoy the fruity taste that was still present on his tongue.
The burning inside Emkhala's genitals and anus slowly disappeared between frantic movements of the males and their juices that now flooded her insides. The ritual oils that moistened the female's virginal body had also permeated Nakai's fur, sharing the aphrodisiac fragrance that seemed to indicate to the other two males their shared 'tribute' status.
The first to ejaculate was Lonan, who filled his young partner's bowels with several spurts of semen, but was not rough enough to sink his thick knot into Nakai's tiny hole. Despite this, after a resounding moan, he continued kissing the huge coyote, who also couldn't tie his knot to the female's ass, the size difference was too much to achieve with such a frantic session. A muffled grunt from Yanai announced to the other three coyotes that the big male was unloading his sperm in his chosen spot.
A curious tingle made Nakai's legs tremble as he felt his anus rapidly being moistened by a warm, thick liquid that worked its way from his loins and dripped down the back of his legs. This strange, masculine stimulation brought the young male to orgasm, plunging his little knot into the female's vagina and shooting four spurts of potent sperm deep inside the fertile girl.
As Nakai's canine knot sealed Emkhala's entrance and began to grow, the young female felt a new, exasperating pain that quickly turned into an explosion of pleasure, this time causing her legs to squirt in front of her abundantly until the male's knot swelled enough to prevent any leakage.
The four young lovers lay on the grass, panting exhausted from all the physical activity. Emkhala and Nakai stayed attached for a long time, while Yanai massaged Lonan's tired shoulders.
"I hope you don't try to run when it's your turn," the huge coyote whispered in his friend's ear, discreetly lowering one of his hands and barely sinking the tip of his index finger into Lonan's anus.
The young coyote moaned and almost jumped as he felt something caress his virgin skin. His face flushed, Lonan swallowed saliva and tried to conceal a new erection by crossing one leg over the other so the others wouldn't notice.
The first footsteps of the wild Enapay in the glade sank his paws into the damp earth. The young coyote spotted the small creature kneeling in the middle of the sacred clearing, the fear emanating from his prey and the sweet aphrodisiac scent of the oils occupied his nose and mind.
Iukta watched the other male enter the glade, hunched over, almost on all fours, his muzzle drooling, the wild, primal image of his dear friend made the young tribute shiver. The coyote had known Enapay since they were cubs, they had never been very close but life in the tribe brought them together every few days to share different activities.
Enapay growled, baring his fangs, and leapt at the tribute ferociously, throwing the terrified young man to the ground. Droplets of drool fell on Iukta's face, who looked as if he was about to burst into tears for fear of his companion biting his face, leading even the watcher who kept himself hidden to consider intervening in the ritual.
"Enapay... it's me... Iukta," the young male whimpered.
The savage male fixed his gaze on the frightened eyes of the tribute and inhaled, detecting a familiar scent. Enapay plunged his muzzle into the other male's moistened chest and sniffed, arousing a pleasure that caused him to wag his tail in bliss.
Iukta sighed in relief and brought his hands to his mate's head to stroke him. The alienated male calmed down but never stopped drooling or sniffing the young coyote with passion.
Enapay began to nudge the other male's side with his muzzle, signaling him to turn over, eager to possess the tribute he deserved, while his erection spurted little spurts of precum on his mate's abdomen.
The young male understood the gestures of the savage Enapay and, careful not to make any violent movements, Iukta rolled onto his stomach on all fours, raising his ass as much as he could.
Immediately, Enapay put his hands between the legs of the 'tribute' as his feral ancestors used to do when it was mating season, and began to make desperate thrusts with his canine penis, trying to find the hole offered by the other coyote.
"A little lower Enapay... " moaned the submissive male, trying to communicate with his friend.
The wild coyote continued to ram blindly until by sheer luck he managed to drive the tip of his penis in making young Iukta squeal as he felt the rough love of another male for the first time in his life. Enapay's thick canine phallus continued to work its way into his partner's bowels, spitting spurts of precum in its way until its swollen knot collided with the other male's tiny anus.
"AAAH! We did it... Whew... it hurts... a little more... Enapay," Iukta gasped with difficulty, straining to resist the burning.
Enapay paused for a moment and licked his partner's back, then arched his back and rested his muzzle on the submissive male, gripping tighter onto the 'tribute's legs and beginning again to ram the other male, pulling his meaty, swollen canine spear deep in and out, opening and barely allowing the abused young coyote's sphincter to close.
The submissive Iukta's face slammed against the floor each time the other male thrust, renewing the burning in his anus. The alienated coyote's balls slapped endlessly against his perineum, as copious precum overflowed from inside Iukta and dribbled down between his legs.
"You must... we must stick together to perform the ritual..." the young coyote moaned again.
Iukta knew his duty well, so he tried to calm down, he brought his hands to his buttocks and spread them as much as he could while pushing back each time a new thrust of the wild male on top of him approached.
Enapay did not understand a single word the other coyote said, he was now a beast that moved by the simple male instinct to inject his seed into a female willing to accept it and, despite already having his canine knot quite swollen, the ramming continued, even harder, leaning with all his weight on the other male's ass, longing to achieve something almost impossible.
Suddenly there was a wet, resounding 'plop' followed by a loud scream that disturbed the relative silence of the clearing.
"OOOOH FUCK!!!" cried Iukta loudly as he was tied up for the first time in his life. A couple of tears streamed down his face as the young man gritted his teeth.
Enapay's penis began pumping warm, thick semen, occupying the bowels of the submissive male who slowly got used to the situation and his pain simply turned to discomfort.
With a sigh of relief, the watcher put aside his weapon and began to eat some fruit, without taking his eyes off the two young men who had remained completely quiet.
After a while, the effect of the substance that the shaman had given Enapay to drink faded. The young coyote regained control, with a severe headache, dizziness, and numbness all over his body, his fur was sticky from the ceremonial oils and sweat. With a slight movement, the young man's penis disengaged from inside Iukta, resulting in an avalanche of semen that drenched his fur even more.
When the submissive male raised his head, his gaze met Enapay's and they both stared in silence for a moment.
"I-Iukta?" asked the young coyote, rather confused.
"H-Hello... Congratulations on making it through the rite, Enapay..." muttered the boy.
"Is it all over now?" asked Enapay again, holding his head in his hands.
"Y-Yes, you're an adult now," replied the submissive male.
"I thought the tribute would be a girl..." admitted the coyote.
"They were all too busy and I volunteered to take the spot," Iukta hastily made up a lie as he tried to stand up on shaky legs.
Enapay leaned on the other young male to get up, everything was spinning and his heart was pounding.
"Thank you, Iukta... " the coyote said sincerely.
"No problem, that's what friends are for," Iukta stated, smiling.
"Maybe... maybe we could do it again tonight at the waterfall," said Enapay, bringing his snout close to the other coyote's ear.
"M-Maybe... but... let's get something to eat first," the young man hastened to reply, still feeling the uncomfortable wet burning in his butt.
"Iukta..." whispered the exhausted male.
"Yes?" asked the submissive young man.
Without another word, Enapay kissed his partner's cheek causing the other male to blush, smile and lower his gaze. The two friends, at a slow pace, returned to the tribe to celebrate in honor of a new male who had transformed into an adult.