Times & Tribulations of a Sucumouse Pt 11
#11 of The Succumouse
*This is an adult story if you are not 18(21 in some evil places) I must ask you close this now (ya I know not going to happen but my ass is covered)* Times & Tribulations of a Sucumouse Pt 11 Lucky I love you "I am a demon, cursed with a hart, and the need to feed!" The fox stopped by again last night, I'm getting unbelievably tired of him. To think ill be stuck with him for the rest of time. If only he had come for something simple like a night cap, instead he was here to deliver a ultimatum. Eliana he said, this little obsession of yours is becoming extremely bothersome. Its true succubi are naturally persistent actual obsessed with getting what they want this must end now. I'm going to give you three days to solve the problem, I have visited her and made an offer she will decide in the same time frame, unless she dies. My deal is simple you will never go near her again as long as she lives, emphasis on lives. I know you have experience with bargaining your self. your thinking of keeping me away from her, and its true I cant touch a sole that's not mine not directly anyway. I will advise you if you cant win her over to kill her, otherwise I will insure your never near her again in this life or your other don't interfere, do you understand Eliana, I may not be omnipotent but I have my ways of knowing what's going on. If there's one thing I'm getting good at. Its reading beyond what he is saying and seeing what he is thinking. I can't use my mind tricks on him I'm just too weak, however he would not make such a show out of this if he didn't actually want me to go. I can only speculate on why, perhaps he had a bit more difficulty with the whole priest grabbing me then he let on. Or maybe he needs Nara but she shot him down like I should have, he could be using me then again when is he not using me. I have to go and I don't like it, Nara did turn me over to be destroyed but she is confused and scared. I learned a great deal about what transpired between her and the priest, in his last moments as the last of his life force slipped into me I was able to get into his mind it was not easy and her words were garbled but his were clear he had said he could save me he never told her about killing me or sending me to the pit to burn. Then again he believed I was a true demon not just a converted furson. Its too complicated, it all makes my head hurt if I try to think it out, that should be a hint I'm a seat of the pants kind of girl, go with the flow I miss being implosive, in fact screw this book I've got flying to do. "Jaden, cover for me I've got something to do." "cover for you? How the hell am I supposed to do that. Dose any one still remember you exist out side of Nara and Markus, you cleared out the memories of every one at your school, your parents are pretty much zombies when your around...shutting up." "Good boy"
My change, is a most pleasant thing, no, truly orgasmic. I start by undressing ripping my clothing is not something I enjoy it's a waste, and I do too much mind jacking anymore. I find I enjoy watching myself turn, it's a kink I can do it with out it. Yet I just can't help feel excited when I watch. I take my place before my full length mirror beside my dresser and place a finger on my clit. Slowly I draw my paw up my stomach and chest until it stops at the violet dot right between my breasts. My fur tingles and I feel the fire burn through me. I let the change go slowly so I can enjoy it fully, and it's just too intense to let go all at once. The fire of pleasure moves slowly from the violet spot in the center of my chest. It rushes over my small breast concentrating under my shoulder blades. I feel the hard lumps begin to grow below the tight skin. I look at myself in the mirror as the lumps grew and lengthen. They spread and from, four finger's curve off each wing with three joints each. Between them a thin layer of skin grows, linking them together. The leading edge of the wings tingles as the violet fur starts to cover it. The skin that connects each of the fingers like ribs of my wings darkens until they are as black as the night sky if every star went out. I can feel them, move them. I run my paws over them slowly they are so sensitive that it makes my whole body pulse and shiver. I let the fire moves its way up my neck and back around to my jaws. My teeth slowly change to pointed almost k-9s. My tongue streaks out like its being ripped from my mouth it lengthiness painfully and the tip splits in two I'm rewarded with a flash of pleasure, forked it returns to its pointy home. My round ears curve and into long points, they are still in the same place and there size dose not changed just the shape. My head fur, that I've always wanted to dye since it's the same gray as the rest of me, flushes jet black. From my head fur line two slender red horns slowly follow the shape of my skull leaving just about two inches underneath, until they are just behind my ears. I guide the fire down my chest again letting it concentrate just above my sex in truth I love this part. The sheath I'd taken from that poor boy I killed on my first night grew in to its place still sore and useless. Finally the tip of my tail slowly flattens into the classic spade and the whole thing turns black, its blade like edge shins as the light strikes it. The fire builds across the whole of my body as my muscles and every other bit of me takes its own part in the change. The pleasure ripples through ever muscle, my skin burns and every inch of my fur stands on end, finally panting lightly it subsides I am ready to fly. Tight gym shorts and a red vest with collie tail for trim, a small gray furred bag on a lanyard around my waist. What I've needed some place to keep my keys, them gym shorts pockets are tiny they would jab me in the leg all night. Around my neck I drape the necklace that may just bauble to help Nara understand this time. Carefully I step out on the ruff, To fell the wind on my wings, bathing in the light of the moon I fell nearly complete. I can only hope that the missing peace of my hart will be put back in place tonight. I love flying I will truly miss it when my time on earth is done. I know this hole town form the sky, there the ally half way to Nara's, if I was not in a hurry id stop for memories sake, first kill first time I met Jaden, first sole id taken. Hmm so my memories are not as nice as other furson's I love them none the less. Dark windows, it dose not look like she is awake. Not surprising, it is four in the morning. I wonder if my key will still work? ~ click~ good I did not want to have to break in. I remember this house every room every peace of furnisher. Nara's fathers chair, still as comfortable as always, and just so satisfying to drop into it again. Her old man lets no one sit in this thing yet I do it every time I can't help it. Right no more playing around beater make sure her parents stay sleeping incase this gets nosy. How many times have I stood in front of there bed, I remember the last time was the day before Nara met the real me. I was making a deal with them if they stayed asleep they lived to see morning if they awoke during the night they would die, was I that hungry then, why did I not see it. Ok that's done now for Nara she is going to freak I can fell it in my whiskers. Her doors locked, well that's a pain in the ass, o well guess its time for a little soul magic. I've always wanted to try this, lets see I focus on the destination, her closet. Then step on my own shadow. Woo still a rush, that sensation of falling and then just popping up. Now lets try this door nope no lock on the closet door. This room makes me fell all warm inside she is so cute when she is asleep, I remember just lying next to her all night just happy to be near her, I want that felling back. This is such a bad idea but I have to wake her up beater drop the demon look first that will just make her piss herself, she may do it any way. "Nara, wake up. Nara, it's ok." "~still asleep~ not now Eliana...tired. ~bolt upright~ Eliana!" "Good morning sleepy head. Had any strange visitors lately." "It's a dream, a nightmare, I'm still sleeping. I just have to wake up and she'll be gone." "A fox came to you, he offered you something you can't accept it. What he is offering is not worth it." "~pinch~ ouch, shit, I felt that, I'm not dreaming. I locked the windows and the doors how, why do you want me, dame it, why?" "I, I can't really answer that. It's not something you can just describe. It's a felling, a need, an emptiness that only you fill. Plus it's not important right now. The fox who came here, you know who he was?" "What do you care! I can do what I want it's my life." "Nara listen to me! I know what he is shilling out and its far more then a life you need to worry about, that's small game. He is after power, plan and simple your nothing but a means to and end. If you accept, you will be nothing! Just like me." "Then stay away from me!" "I can't, you're the only thing that makes the pain go away, you don't see it, do you? The things I've done before have you ever given any thought why I'm not doing them anymore. Ever since you I can't stomach death, I'm afraid. I'm slipping away, and the only thing that keeps the real me from vanishing into the darkness is you. I have not spoke to you like this in so long, no controlling tone, no tricks, no fear tactics. That's all been doing since I tired to set you free. It hurts so..." "Shut up! He said you would come. He said you would beg, give anything for me, and if you couldn't have me then you'd...You'd kill me to make sure no one could have me. I want to live, I want to grow old, I want to happy and I...I...I just can't can I! He said, he could force you to leave me alone. You would never come back, never. So what's the truth Eliana! With you I die, with him I live..." "Live how? I am what I am because of him, is my life what you want? You want to live you know how many ways I could twist that request, and he has had the whole of time to dame good at twisting things. Hill grant you life, the life of a slave, living as you are told to live. How many things could he turn you into to serve him beater on this earth think Nara! This is a game to him, and normally there's only two ways out o it your lucky you get three." "What are you talking about? God, why must you do this to me. It hurts Eliana, it hurts and I want it to stop. Cant you understand that or are you to far gone?" "Please watch what you say, it was not directed at me so it did not hurt. However it makes me very uncomfortable, like worms crawling under my skin." "Dame it, answer me!" "Fine, but I warn you your not going to like how I do it." "What? No please don't" Letting my eyes shift I tour into her mind pulling her soul into a place few can go, some were I know Jaden is screaming he will have to endure this for me. * * *
(The space between minds and worlds) "You want to see, you want to fell Nara? You want the answer look!" We are both standing in a room iv seen in my nightmares, this small circular room with its warm red walls and polished black stone floor. Nara is screaming, I've pulled her into a place were time dose not exist. Here I can do anything this is my mind I am God here. I have dressed my self in the finest red satin blouse and skirt, and a lovely pair of mirror polished dress shoes. Nara on the other hand being that her body in this place is created by her own self image, and being it is not part of me and I cant modify it. She curled up naked on the floor, much as I had been, when the fox had brought me here the first time, so long ago. "Amazing isn't it? We could be here for years and only a second will pass outside. You can get up off the floor anytime I'm not even a succubus here. This place only exists in the space between are minds, you can do any thing I can here. For starters if you wish you could create some cloths, id rather you didn't myself. I've been day dreaming of you naked for well since that night I let you go. Dame listen to me I sound like that dame fox, please dress." "Bitch, What the hell is wrong with you? Let me out of her now!" "Can't." "What do you mean you can't? stop screwing around with me, how the hell is this supposed to make me not want to take his yiffen offer Eliana. You said no tricks, no scare tactics!" "This is a level playing field. I can't do any thing you can't. If you want to leave go ahead, all you have to do is relax and think of a door and it will be there. You wanted to know if I'm, that far gone, as you said well here is the place to see. You can pull apart my memories day by day if you wish I can't stop you here I'm not a true demon. I warn you if you do start looking in my head, its not going to be like watching a movie you will be me, fell all I was felling hear all I was thinking first hand, want to know how I felt when I raped you wan to hear my soul scream and try to stop it, go on look. But when you do I will relive it, every thing you see will be like the first time to me be gentile and stay away from the other times I was starving, I don't want to relive what I did to my parents please just leave that memory to out." I looked away and on the spot a chair precisely like her fathers appeared. If I was about to let her mind jack me I was going to be comfortable first. She was giving me the most powerful what the hell look for a good fifteen minuets before she spoke. "I...I don't want to see." Her voice shook, she was nervous. I could understand that this is not something most furson's will ever experience. Ill have to jump start her then. "Well if you wont look, I will. How about what really happened to what's his name Cliff something. Something about that place did not fit with your story, and Id love to see you in your first kill, I'm sick I know but it gets me all hot thinking about it." "No please, not that. Don't make me relive that Eliana" "ok I have a beater idea any way. All I have to do is think of the day." * * *
(Some time ago) "Eliana! Wait up! ~giggling~" "~jokingly~ How can the head of the track team be out paced by a tiny mouse? Woo, shit, ow." I had tipped over a stick and landed head first in to a hollow, decaying, stump. Getting my shoulders stuck. "~surprised laugh~ That's what you get for not looking were your going, course country running tricky have to watch your step. You know with your ass up in there air like that you look adorable." "Ha, ha very funny going to help me out or just stair at my lovely rump all day" "Do I have to its such a nice view." "I'm stuck, come on its dark in here, and I know there's like a dozen bugs I cant see crawling right in front of my muzzle." "ok ill help just hold still, whoops." Her paw slid my tight running shorts down about my knees. She slips two fingers deep inside being careful of her claws, as I mown and shiver inside the damp stump, I can only think of the extreme unfairness of this whole thing she beater not expect me to return the favor I'm still stuck. "~mown~ No fair. ~pant~ your evil! ~mown~ Gasp, don't stop." "That's my dirty little mousey. Cum, for Nara now." * * *
(The space between minds and worlds) "O my god, I can't believe I did that. ~laugh~ shit how long did it take me to get you out of the stump after words." "Like twelve minuets" "You loved it, don't lie." "Of course I loved it, why do you think I made us relive it up until the whole twelve minutes in the dame log bit." "You were stuck really good, and I know I didn't get you out. You brook yourself free, and gave me credit I know your way strong enough to rip doors off hinges that log was nothing." "Ya, I did, I was getting a little creped out in there." "~laugh~ creped out come on." "If you don't think so we can swap sides, and you can see for your self. Come on your know you want to. Aren't you dieing to know how good that felt to make me forget I was stuck in a stump?" "Ok, ok so how do I do this? I just think of the day and..." The mummery replays and this time we are seeing it form the eyes of the others prospective. I was right this opened her right up. Just had to take her away from the fear and realness of it all, this is my version of the classic movie date. Relive your yiffest moments swap sides fell the joy of your partner some times I'm too smart, wow she was getting worried when she realized I was stuck good. "How was it?" "Well other then realizing you were guiding my paw to just the right spots, it was amazing." "No fair, I used my talents to just the same the other way around. Listening to were you wanted me to go every time." "I know it! Always thought it was some trick of yours but I just could not understand it out thought you picked up on it, didn't really think you were pulling it out of my head." "Thought that would freak you out for sure. What else did you happen to fell will you were me?" "You...you were, thinking about making sure you made me cum twice as hard for leaving you in the stump and not just doing it in the grass like you plan a few yards down the path in a clearing." "See, I'm not that evil. Was there even one thought about hurting you?" "No. In fact, you were absolutely wishing you would never have to leave me. You were afraid of losing me. But what about when you feed, show me that." "I can't you have to bring it up from me, I only was able to do that last time because we both had the memory. If you want to see me feeding I recommend you look into thoughts that have Luis in them. I had nothing agents him if you pull up Stacy or, Kevin you will see only hate." "All right, so I think about Luis and...Woo, how many times did you, I mean there was so many they flashed by." "Focus on one, and it will pull you in, it will get easier the more you do it." "Ok, Luis, always thought he was a cute little guy..." * * *
(Some time in the past) "Good evening Eliana." "Sweet little Luis, you don't look well, how are you feeling" "No, no I'm fine; I just got over a little cold that's all." He is lying; his body can't take much more. His fur is dull and his eyes are not as bright as they once were. It can't be helped, I need to feed. Nara's free of me I let her go; Luis is all I have right now. I'm sorry Luis, if we could have...If only I were free. "Are you ready? I need you Luis, I need you know more then ever before. I'm so alone." "It's ok Eliana, ill be fine just like all the other times ill be tiered for a day. I have high grads they can take a day of me sleeping in class. Now hurry up, I haven't touched myself, I want it to fell as good as you can make it." His muzzle meats mine as his paws rap around me, gently they work there way up my back touching the start of my wings he quickly brushes the violet fur on there edge. "~mown~ You really getting to know were to touch" "I know how you prefer it, ride me again Eliana, please. I want to fell you in me; I like it so much more." I slowly slide my self out of the gym shorts I always were when changed, rubbing my paws over his soft fur, brushing over his sheath only passing, he dose not like it being touch he likes to cum with it in the open air from the preacher inside. Gently I push him back upon his bed, he watches as I rub the juices from my cunny over the stolen wolf shaft that pulses with my hunger. His mown of pain are soon replaced with yips of joy as each of my thrusts makes his untouched member swing below him. I sift through his mind picking out what he wants and giving him his every desire. He builds swiftly, and with one more hard press down on his prostate his still had swinging member pups forth his last drops of seed as his life is drawn in to me, I listen to his mind his very soul begs for more and then slowly I begin to lose it. The sound of his mind grows faint and then still. I stayed there holding his still form most of the night, holding back the tiers I would shad for him latter for now I could not leave much trace of me on him. He would be found still in his bed sleeping, eternally. * * *
(The space between minds and worlds) "Why did it have to be that time? Why not one of the times he would wake after word and smile...why? ~shudders and holding back tears~" "I'm sorry, I...I didn't mean too, it was the strongest memory and..." "It's ok Nara, I just need a moment. Please just give me a moment." "I'm really sorry, but he died peacefully right? Do you...I mean could you tell were he went?" "I...I tried to follow him. I tied to watch but, there was a light that stopped me it hurt and forced me back, from that I think I could give a safe bet were he is now. And that ill never see him again. Its beater that way he was far too nice." "I'm ready." "Ready for what, Nar?" "Don't call me Nar, were not on the buddy, buddy terms just yet demon girl. I'm ready to see what you were thinking that night, the first time you...you really feed from me." * * * (The mummery plays as it was told before, Eliana's needs driving her to extremes that nearly cost Nara her life so long ago. This time however the minds of the two are switched and they are allowed to see the event from the point of view of the other. As the mummery fads away Eliana is left naked and sitting in a heap on the floor of the empty room the chair and cloths she had manifested her self lost with the fear her own actions had instilled in Nara's mind, Nara as well sat thinking over what she had heard in Elianas mind during the event) * * * "Your right I'm a monster. ~sobbing~" "No, no, Eliana stop crying. You...poor thing you fought and pulled that's the only reason I'm alive any one else you would have killed, I'm alive because you loved me so much you could not take all you wanted, needed." "~sobbing~ I didn't do enough! I thought what I did to my parents was sick but I...put the images of Kevin's and Stacy's...God, I'm going to be sick. Out, I want out, let me out, let me out, le'me out! ~hysterical crying~" "How, how do we get out, Eliana pull your self together you're the only one who knows how this works. Eliana, please your scaring me, please, I...I forgive you." "For God's sake don't say that. I'm nothing, just a beast and a killer. For what some pranks, that's all Luis ever did, he only pulled them with Mark because he liked me and wanted me to notice him, and I killed him. Stacy so she was a bitch did she disserve her tail being ripped off, shit I can't even image that pain, and I caused it all. All of it!" "You forgot Kevin." "Screw him, he did this, if he never I...He disserved it that sick son of a...God I'm tuning in to him." "But you know you can fell you care, granted your not perfect, but you tried, doesn't that mean your trying to not be like him. You saved me, you spared Jaden. Plus you help the world by kicking two kiddy rapiers off it, and, and you got the girl right." "You can't be series." "I am. It's yours, if you promise never to feed from me or any one who is not a total piece of shit from here on." "Till the day I die?" "Till the day she dies indeed, greetings ladies." The fox sat at his desk just behind us when he had arrived I could not say. I was too caught up in the shock of, what Nara had been thinking at that moment. "Go away, you heard her she is off limits, you can't hurt her, not now, not ever!" "Eliana dear, calm down Nara is just as important to me as you are. She completes you after all; with out her you would be just as useless as any other furson. She makes you special a demon who can love, a black soul with a core of light, that is what you are. I must say I am impressed with this however, to think you though of bring her here. However there is a small matter left you forgot, you have her word but that is easily broken latter same with Jaden in fact. Why don't we get him here too, I'm sure he will be glad for the moment of extreme pain to be over" "What dose he mean Eliana? How dose this hurt Jaden?" "This took a lot of power more then I have on my own I'm using his soul to power it...it fells like some one has a knife in his hart, it would only last a second a quick ow shit that hurt that's all. That's why he needs souls, the more he has the more powerful him and his realm become. I took Jaden off his list, if id killed him he would be fueling the dark powers of ever demon in creation." "Artful description Eliana, and very true. There is no real torment just constant soul fuel, burning away for all time, self regenerating energy from the creator himself, the lucky few like Eliana here Nara work deals, and get a pass to bypass being a fuel source. However she is worth a trillion dark souls now, I could see the prospect in here from the start. Now as soon as you sine this Nara you will be safe from my touch and Eliana will become the fourth most powerful being in existence, and my personal emissary to the higher plan. All you have to do is reach your paw over this desk the papers will do the rest. O and before I forget, sumonus." "Shit, ow! O great were the hell am I now, iv got a house to...holy shit! Well I'm finally dead and probably totally screwed." "No Jaden this is just the conference room its between worlds not in hell or any were for that mater. And don't worry about the chores I understand lead demon pulled you away it's his fault you dint finish." "And um I'm sorry about calling you a jacked up mind slave you know last time." "Right, if I was not a nut less bunny soul slave I'd think this was a strange day, but this is about normal for me anymore." "Enough! Lets make the deals between the three of you all nice and binding so I can get back to ruling all evil, ok? Good!" He snapped his claws and both Nara and Jaden dropped through there shadows and popped back up in front of the desk. "You bonny, this here by documents your agreement that Eliana dose solely own your soul and in trade for it you bypass the never dieing torment of fueling the fires of hell. It also stats that you will continuous serving her for the reminder of her existence witch will son be infinite, if you want out of that deal this is the time but remember your only alive because of it. Decline now and you can stamp unleaded on your ass now. As for you Miss. Tigox. This stats that you willingly exchange your soul to your love to bind the two of you together for the rest of time, normally matrimony crap dose follow but I'm summarizing. If you agree hold out your paw, if you like to back out then step back just one step." I stood helpless watching the proceedings as time, or at least what I passive as time ticked by. Nara and Jaden were all I had and I really dint care about any of the other crap he was spotting at the moment, even if some hoe this did make me the forth most powerful being in existence, witch I highly doubt. Right now my eyes were on Nara and Jaden, I tried thinking about losing one of them and all I found was an emptiness, I need them to fill, was that the core of light my soul supposedly had? Finally after what seemed was days, even though Nara swears it was only a few minutes of getting the courage together to raise her paw, both Nara and Jaden looked back and me and then at each other, together they placed there paws over the desk, as it had done to me back when this all begin the sheets of paper shot up and sliced a deep cut in both there paws, me and Nara awake in her room the moment after that.