Might just scrap this.

Story by Pyro Fox on SoFurry

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I have read some comments. Yes, this IS shitty work. I know it is. I can do better than this, I just threw this together from what I thought of. It wasnt really suppose to be a story, but notes of a sort. Though I do need to put more detail into my characters and everything else, This I know. But anyways, thanks for ready and letting me know what you think. You should expect a better, more flowing story formy next few uploads. I DO know that I am NOT the best writer, Im actually quite bad in my opinion, so if you have anything that you think will help me become a better writer or help my story or new ideas, just let me know. Thank you, Pyro

Chapter Five (What the fuck?!)

Me and Bulldog were seated in Boss`s office awaiting what was to come next. I shifted in my seat as Boss started yelling at the both of us for our actions. I sat only half listening as Bulldog kept hold of my hand and kept squeezing it tighter and...

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Chapter Four (Day two and the risky choice)

I awoke in a cold sweat, tears still streaming from my face. Was it all dream? I checked the date and time. It was April 14th and the time was twenty-three hundred hours. I had two hours before I had to go teach the cherries how to shoot. I also had to...

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Chapter Three (The Loss)

I awoke with A set of unknown hands shaking me. "What the fuck do you want!" I rolled over looking into a blurry face. The face responded. "I`m sorry for your loss." I saw the red cross on his arm and burst into tears. The medic left my tent,...

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