just a test of a single scean
this is just one scean from a story i am in middle of writin sorry about the spelling and grammer but like to know what you think.
There were only moments that were brief calm feelings as all ways he new he was bennet he kept saying that to him self but it was all ways pushed aside to be that what had taken over by the chaos of being black dragon he had become as its nature overrides all feelings and a burning hunger as he eyed those few humans left with burning lust to eat as the blood flowed over black lips as his tongue flicked after the people he had eaten already as he watched the pitiful humans cower before him as graham was all that stood before him and as the first flash hit him from graham as has a blinding light erupted from graham knocking bennet to the flour as magic from graham as we were to find out graham was not
graham we were to find out a bronze dragoness now was looked with in his body and for the real graham we could not say were he was he might be dead I can not say just that a the sight of a black dragon eyeing us with hunger written in its eyes and they were cold eyes burnt us.
A flash of what I call magic as graham or that which is in his body used something to bring calm to the black dragon and bring out that part which was human buried with in its mind as we found out it was bennet and even if he was calm for the moment that would not last.
I am asked asking a daft question is there any thing we can do for bennet as I don't want to be eaten by him even fro he is a friend? Yes please help me I am feeling strange its like there's anther thing in here with me anther mind and far more powerful then me what ever you did can you keep it there'
I don't know graham body said as I am not what I use to be and finding my self now human is a sickness I care not to keep!' but you have to if you don't help us you will end up as a meal to a dragon just like us you may not be human but your in the body of one now so live with it!.
Graham shied it seems if I have no choice my magic will keep you friends mind in place for awhile but we need to undo what ever has effected us I truly don't know what to do I just know its not safe for us here.
How did all this happen and where the hell are we I thought dragons to be a myth. "Ya well look at me bennet it said do I look like a myth to you " indeed well at any rate I know your not graham so who are you? Me well you could not say my name but with the memory's in this body and seeing as I am what you call male call me john! It is so limiting being a human week flesh and bailey usable mind'