Buizel vs Luxio

Story by Bagelxp on SoFurry

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Do due to my recent obsessions with pokemon/pokemorphs I've decided to try my hand at writing. Here is a short snippet detailing the last moments of a battle between Laura Pratt (Luxio - F) vs Jacob Pierre (Buizel - M). Laura is borrowed from my friend (the legendary) Poiu's cast of characters, while Jacob is my own OC.

I know that some of you may notice the moves I use may not be available to certain types. Sorry I'm not exactly a pokemon master, but I will try to be accurate using Bulbapedia. Just imagine naked anthro pokemorphs duking it out in a stadium, no human trainers.

Please enjoy!


Here's some images to help your imaginations.

Luxio: By ThePokedexProject or By Fr0sT

Buizel: By buizelmaniac (He takes off the glasses before battles. Yes I realize it's a silly picture.) or By rickeyguy

Laura barely manages to shift her entire body to the side, but it wasn't enough to completely avoid a hit. Jacob managed to clip her shoulder with the aqua jet, sending her reeling. The force of a glancing blow was still enough to knock her tumbling backwards. As she fell, Laura stuck out wildly, a loud crack of electricity was heard as she made contact. Jacob's eyes bulged as her foot impacted against him while he flew over her. She had landed a glancing blow as well, except the electric type managed to hit him right between the legs, impacting harshly against his exposed testicles.

Normally the tough buizel would've fought through the pain of being hit in the groin and continue fighting, but this time was different. The luxio had discharged a small amount of electricity through the low kick, causing a pulsating pain to radiate slowly from his loins. He landed heavily on his side, sliding to a stop against a rock jutting out on the field. The water weasel's breathing was ragged at this point, his chest heaved in and out as he desperately tried to catch his breath. He needed to get up fast and defend against his opponent's next attack; any pause would render him defenseless here. Clawing at the rock and painfully dragging himself onto his feet, he braced his back against the hard surface.

A short distance away the lioness lay prone on the ground, motionless. Jacob's short ragged breaths evened a little at the sight. It was over, it had to be! There was no way she could continue. Looking up at the lights above, they appeared to be fuzzy orbs of brightness far away. Just as the he was about to slump down in relief, a small movement was caught in the corner of his vision.

As if the universe just had to be against him, the luxio moved ever so slightly. "No, please stay down..." he muttered. The female pushed herself onto her knees with one arm, her other arm was draped limply against her side. Now she was trying to stand, her legs buckled as she fell back to her knees. In all honesty it was a pitiful sight to watch, but he was not in any condition to argue. "Yes, don't get up..." The buizel prayed to the gods for the match to end.

The luxio again attempted to rise. This time, slowly but surely, she staggered into a standing position. Clutching her limp arm with the good one, she slowly staggered towards him. His heart began to sink, but the crowd cheered in approval. Shit this was bad, he was paralyzed and she was getting closer. At this point, the only thing keeping him standing was the rock against his back.

She limped closer and closer, until he could see his own face reflected in her golden eyes. Those eyes were clouded with exhaustion, but still glinted with defiance. Her lips were slightly parted, revealing a set of fangs clenched in pain. Like him she was also at the end of her stamina, but she had enough for one last attack.

Releasing her hold on her injured limb, Laura breathed out for a moment, then brought up her good arm and clenched her fist. Sparks flew from her paw as she charged up a thunder punch. It was obvious this was all she had left, betting everything on one final attack. The match wouldn't end until one of them fainted. Knowing perfectly well what the crowd wanted, Jacob could only watch through half closed eyes for the inevitable. She drew back her first and launched it towards his center; it was what the audience came to see after all. From his position it was unavoidable, the buizel braced for the worst.

But as fate would have it, the electric lion seemed to falter slightly as she swung her arm forward. The attack lacked its intended strength, but her paw still impacted hard against his stomach. A surge of electrical discharge burst as her fist sunk into his soft belly. Jacob felt the air escaping his body with one big woosh as the blow knocked the wind from him. Suffering from type weakness, the electricity tore violently through his insides.

In an instant, the attack subsided. Jacob coughed softly; crimson flecks escaped his lips and splashed against the luxio's face. At this point he couldn't feel much of anything; the electric based attack had finally numbed his senses. Her outstretched arm propping him against the wall was the only thing that kept him standing. Using the last bit of his strength the buizel gazed painfully into his opponent's face, almost to ask why. She did not return his look; in fact her eyes were not focused on anything. No way! Did she really just...?

Further thoughts dissipated from his head as Jacob finally lost his balance and slumped forward. No longer able to stand, the buizel braced his limp weight against her. Laura did not offer any resistance; she crumpled onto her back with Jacob sprawled on top. Dust swirled slightly from the ground as they fell together in a heap. Jacob felt his head resting against two very soft mounds. He smirked slightly noting how plush her ample bosom felt, snuggled so close against his cheek.

Despite the new position he was in, the water type wasn't in any condition to enjoy it. Something felt very wrong; he wasn't able to draw breath. Working his mouth much like a magicarp out of water, the buizel tried desperately to suck in air. Gurgling weakly, the taste of iron quickly filled his mouth. Warm red liquid trickled from the corners of his lips, staining the plush blue fur beneath him. He vision began to haze over as he saw the referee frantically signal an end to the match. The crowd leaped to its feet screaming wildly, but he couldn't hear their cheers anymore. The sight of medics rushing onto the field was the last thing Jacob saw before his view faded.

  • Thanks for reading! I know my writing abilities blow, but any helpful comments will be greatly appreciated.