Captain's Evaluation

Story by Zelryem on SoFurry

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Here's a story commissioned by FA: criticalhit64 for FA: vertigo. A young gryphon assigned to a military spaceship gets his first evaluation from the captain of the ground crew. What could possibly happen in an office, in a one-on-one scenario, I wonder?


Private First Class Jay Tarun was nervous. There was no denying that -- the way the blue-feathered gryphon tapped his claws on a mess hall table betrayed his otherwise calm appearance. His reason for his anxiety was a bit different than the rest of the crew today.

It had been six months since Jay had first been assigned to the spaceship Regalis, and he had gotten to know the crew pretty well. However, his main focus was the captain. Ever since Jay had seen Captain Hadia Virote on the first day of his deployment, he'd been...more than interested in the older gryphon. When he passed by Virote in the halls, he did his best to sneak looks at the avian in his uniform. There was something about the way the sleek black uniform jacket rested on the bird's body, and how the brown gryphon carried himself through the halls... It had gotten to the point where he would take assignments close by to his quarters so he could get even a small chance to get a peek at the captain.

Which was the biggest reason for his nervousness. Today was the ground crew's evaluation, and Captain Virote was meeting with each member to discuss their previous experiences and what they could improve on. Along with the evaluation, this would be the closest Jay would get to the captain in a one-on-one situation. He sighed and shook his head, returning to staring at the matte steel tabletop, his claws tapping out a mindless rhythm.

Jay wasn't sure how long he'd been sitting when he heard his communicator buzz at him from his hip, and he nearly jumped out of his uniform at the noise. He swallowed, his claws going to the tech at his side and bringing up the screen.

PRIVATE FIRST CLASS JAY TARUN REPORT TO CAPTAIN VIROTE'S OFFICE

He stared at the words glowing on the screen for a few moments, taking a deep breath before closing the message. The blue-feathered gryphon stood up and walked purposefully to the elevator, waiting until the elevator closed before exhaling. Jay checked over himself, smoothing out any wrinkles in his uniform and willing his racing heart to slow down...and then the elevator doors slid open. Just a few meters in front of him stood the doorway to the captain's office and private quarters. Finding little point in delaying the inevitable, Jay stepped forward to the door and pressed the intercom button.

"Yes?"

The voice coming from the speaker made him swallow nervously again. "Private First Class Jay Tarun, here for my evaluation."

"Ah, good. Come right in and take a seat, I'll be just a moment." The door to the speaker's side slid open, and Jay passed through the door into Captain Virote's office.

Time had been good to Virote -- lavish pieces of furniture, even for an office not on a spaceship, filled the room. Finding good wood furniture was hard enough these days, and the desk that sat at one end of the office proved Virote's hard work. A couch, covered with pillows -- Jay could tell they were far nicer than anything he laid his head on -- and a small table also sat near the wall, and an open door to the private's left only gave a narrow view into the captain's bedroom, or at least what Jay assumed were his private quarters.

He slowly walked over to the desk, taking in the details about the room before sitting in one of the cushioned chairs. Captain Virote held some pride in his military service, judging by the medals lining the small frame. Jay's head turned to face the screen, taking a quick look at the image of a nude gryphon bent over the same desk, his tail lifted high, before turning the rest of his body to look around. He froze up the moment he realized what he'd seen, whirling around to look at the screen again.

"Good to see you, Private. This shouldn't take too long."

He jumped in his chair, immediately standing to face Captain Virote and snapping off a quick salute. "Yes, sir." His mind raced at what he'd seen on the screen though, and now that he faced the object of his desire, his only thoughts were trying to figure out why the captain had the image pulled up in the first place.

Virote let out a low chuckle, nodding at the blue gryphon. "At ease." His eyes narrowed, looking behind Jay, and he walked over to his desk, reaching over to tap some keys to close the screen. The brown gryphon sat in the chair behind the desk, leaning back and resting his claws on his chest. Jay quickly sat down again, sitting up straight and looking intently at Virote.

"I said at ease, Tarun. You're not in trouble, and this will only take ten minutes, tops." The captain tapped a few more keys, bringing up a document and began scanning over it. Jay gripped his knees tightly, sitting back, his whole body tense.

Virote nodded to himself, seemingly satisfied with what he saw, then turned his attention to the younger avian. "Private First Class Jay Tarun, joined the military eleven months ago, and already highly recommended by your superiors. Tell me, what did you do to earn such praise in such a short amount of time?"

Jay nodded. He knew that Virote already knew what happened, but it was all about how you presented yourself in these evaluations. "Sir. During a firefight on Hanides, our unit was pinned down. I managed to make it around to the enemy's flank and helped pull the pressure off our troops, with three confirmed kills. I was recommended by Sergeant Levana Finnian to be added to the ground team of the Regalis with her."

Virote smiled, letting out a short amused huff. "Sergeant Finnian. I remember her. Strong woman, and one hell of a shot."

"Yes sir. She told me that my quick thinking and shooting helped save our unit." The younger gryphon hoped that the personal recommendation Finnian had given him would help impress the captain.

"Hopefully you're not a quick shot all the time, Private. Sometimes you need to take it slow." He smiled again, scrolling past some sections in Jay's history, before stopping and scrolling back up a few lines. "It says here that you joined on the recommendation of your friend. Can you tell me what he said about you?"

Jay blinked at the captain's words, almost swearing what he said was...a bit forward for an evaluation. Nonetheless, he nodded and smiled at the memory of his friend's enthusiastic support. "Yes, Captain. He always told me I'd been extremely willing to help others, almost too much."

"Is that why you were willing to follow Sergeant Finnian's orders in that firefight?"

The blue avian nodded. "I didn't want anyone else to die, not after Doug--" He blinked, feeling his voice catch. He cleared his throat and continued. "Private Douglas was shot. I didn't want to lose anyone else."

Virote leaned forward, resting his head on his claws and looking intently at the younger gryphon. "That's a dangerous mindset to have in the military, Private. Men and women die every day."

"I know, sir. But if I did anything less than follow those orders to help my team, I'd be ashamed of myself. Nothing less would satisfy me."

The two stared at each other for a few moments, Jay starting to get nervous at the captain's stare, before Virote leaned back in his chair again. "I'm sorry to bring up bad memories, Private. I needed to see how sincere you were." He gave a warm smile, reaching over to close the document. "I'm glad to say that I'm immensely satisfied with your history, Tarun. I think we're done with the evaluation."

Jay nodded again, a bit sad that the meeting had ended so quickly. He rose to his feet, giving a quick salute. But Virote gave him a pointed look. "You're free to leave if you wish, Private. I said the evaluation was done. But I'd rather not be done with you yet."

Jay stood in confusion for a moment before sitting back down. Virote continued talking as he sat. "I have to say, reviewing the footage from the firefight, you're quite a good shot. If you'd like, I could show you how good of a shot I am right now."

"...sir?" Jay's eyes had grown wide as Virote spoke. "I...what do you mean, sir?"

"You know what I mean. You're a good soldier but you're not a good spy. You think I haven't noticed the looks you've been giving me in the halls?" The blue gryphon looked mortified as the captain went on. "And the many chores you've taken up here are rather obvious as well. I'd rather not have you tip-toe around the issue. So." Virote stood up, walking around to the front of the desk and leaning against it, his claws resting at the top of his uniform pants. "Private, how would you feel about a personal assignment from me?"

"Per...personal? Sir?" Jay quickly added the sign of respect, almost forgetting who he was talking to, his eyes locked on the captain's claws.

"I can make this an order, if you wish. You are good at following orders, correct?"

Jay nodded, his eyes wide in shock. "Then stand up." The captain's voice carried the emphasis of a command, and the blue gryphon immediately stood up, his back straight and his arms at his side.

"On your knees, Private." Virote's voice came out a bit lower than before, slipping a claw inside his pants and popping the button at the top. Jay's eyes immediately flew down to the captain's waist, watching the claw slowly descend as he pulled the zipper down to the bottom.

"On. Your. Knees."

Jay felt his knees hitting the floor a moment later, his head now at eye level with Virote's groin. He looked straight ahead, watching the claw slowly pull aside the cloth to reveal Virote's undergarments, already seeing a bulge forming under the material. "Do you have any experience, Private?"

Jay blinked, looking up. "A little, sir." Virote nodded, giving the private a small grin. "Good. Then just watch the beak." He gave a slight nod down, directing Jay's eyes back down to his now-exposed shaft.

The younger avian sat and took in the sight in front of him. Virote's member was more amazing than he could've ever dreamed. The red shaft throbbed in the air, starting out thick at the base and tapering out, the distinct head ending at a pointed tip. Jay leaned forward, getting a small whiff of the older gryphon's musk, almost licking his beak. He put his tongue to better use, flicking out a few times to taste the tip of Virote's member, simply enjoying how it felt.

A tap on his head made his eyes glance up, seeing the amused expression on the captain's face. "This is nice, but you'll have to do better than that, Private." Jay focused back down on the cock in front of him, a claw going up to grip the base and begin stroking over it, his tongue now beginning to bathe over the tip and head.

A pleasured sigh came from Virote's beak, leaning back onto the desk more. The kid wasn't bad, but Virote would have to see how he did once he was finished with the oral service. A grin formed on the captain's beak, glad that he was able to draw this side of Tarun out. He could tell that the private was enjoying himself, and the way he'd been dancing around for the past six months had almost been too much. Virote had been having difficulty waiting until today to bring Tarun into his office.

Jay sat back a bit, licking his way to the base of the shaft, then back up to the head. His tongue licked up any precum that gathered at the tip, savoring the taste before swallowing. His beak went lower again before bumping into the captain's sac, and he pointed the shaft up before sticking his tongue out to give a lick up from the bottom of Virote's balls to the base of the cock. The gasp that he heard made him start licking the balls fervently, and he felt some precum slicken the claw stroking over the member. "Good...good job, Private...you're doing quite well."

The blue avian covered every inch of the captain's sac with his tongue, feeling the heat coming off the elder's groin. He blushed when he felt more precum slide down onto his beak, finally moving his tongue back up to the base of Virote's cock, making his way up to the tip again. Jay hesitated for a moment, then opened his beak wide and began lowering his mouth onto the shaft, turning his head slightly so the tip of his beak wouldn't drag along the flesh. Virote's claw found its way to his head, gripping lightly but firmly, and slowly pushed more and more of his cock into the private's throat, only stopping when Jay began resisting.

Apparently a "little" experience meant more than Virote thought, sighing out as he felt his shaft entering the private's throat. He rubbed over the avian's ears, letting out a grunt of pleasure when Jay swallowed around the flesh, and let the younger avian go as far as he wanted, remembering less enjoyable experiences with a slight grimace.

Jay breathed around the member in his mouth, his tongue licking around as much as he could reach, slowly bobbing his head back and forth. The captain wouldn't let him go too far back, the claw holding him when he pulled back too far and gently pushing his head back towards the downy feathers at his groin. The pre flowing down his throat never seemed to cease, and Virote started pushing Jay's head back down more firmly.

Soon Jay felt the captain's other claw hold his head in place, the cock in his mouth throbbing twice before shooting a rope of cum down his throat. The blue gryphon jerked his head back through the claws, almost scraping Virote with his beak as more ropes shot out of the captain's member, covering Jay's face and black jacket with streaks of white. Virote reached down to stroke himself through the rest of his orgasm, a few more spurts leaking out over his claw, letting out a pleasured warble.

"...very good, Private." Jay looked up, the captain smiling down at him. He raised a claw to his face to wipe off some of the cum, but Virote's expression grew stern. "Did I say you could remove that?"

The claw froze, inches from Jay's face. "N-no, sir." It fell to his side again.

"You're to leave that there until I tell you otherwise. On your feet, Private. Hands on the desk, face away from me." Virote stepped to the side, letting Jay climb to his feet and slowly place his claws on the wooden desktop. "Lean forward."

Jay jerked his head back, looking nervously at Captain Virote. "Eyes forward, Private. I'm not going to hurt you." He looked for only a moment more, then turned to face away from Virote again. He jumped when he felt the claws on his rear, squeezing and kneading at the cheeks. "Easy, easy..." The captain's voice was right by his ear, whispering soothingly. Jay shuddered, letting his claws slide forward a couple feet.

Virote could certainly tell that Tarun was a virgin from his reaction, massaging the private's rear for a little bit before releasing the private's rump, moving around to the other side of the desk. Looking down at Tarun showed how much he was trying to hide his grinding against the edge of the desk. Virote fished around in a drawer for a moment, removing a small bottle of lube and a condom, walking back around the desk and placing the rubber near the private's claw, popping the bottle open and coating a single digit with the lubricant. "Good. Didn't move from your position."

Jay felt the captain's weight on his back, pressing down on him as he leaned more and more forward, a claw quickly undoing his own pants and pulling them down to his knees. Soon his chest was pressed against the cool wood of the desk, his rear soon completely exposed as Virote pulled down his undergarments. A random thought about the seed on his jacket ruining the wood crossed his mind, but that was pushed away when he felt the digit near his tailhole, instinctively tightening up. "Relax, Private."

Virote slowly pressed the tip of his claw into Tarun's entrance, slipping inside and enjoying the sound of the private's gasp at the penetration. His digit continued forward until it reached the knuckle, gently poking around Tarun's insides. "Good..." He cooed into Jay's ear, slowly pumping his digit in and out for a minute. "How's that feel?"

"It...feels good, sir." Jay moaned out when he felt the digit rub over a spot inside him, his whole body shivering. The claw was soon removed, along with the captain's weight from his back, and he felt the claw reach between his body and the desk, grabbing his own erection and pulling it out so it pressed up against the front of the desk. Already he could feel precum leaking out of his cock and down the wooden front.

He heard the tear of a wrapper, followed by the rustle of the condom being rolled out. Jay shivered again when he felt the cool gel on directly on his entrance, the digits rubbing it in and around his hole. Finally he felt the hot lubed length resting between his cheeks, slowly grinding up and down against his entrance. He let out quiet moans at the sensation, his claws almost digging into the desk.

The captain soon stilled his hips, grabbing his length with one claw and lining the tip up with the private's tailhole. "Private Tarun...I promise to start slow. But feel free to beg for more." Once he wedged the head against Jay's hole, his claws went to the private's hips, holding them firmly before pushing forward hard. After a moment of intense pressure, the head popped inside, making Jay cry out, his eyes clenching in pain. Virote's claws moved up to the private's back, rubbing gently. "Easy...take a breath and relax."

Jay nodded, taking a few quick breaths as the pain slowly lessened. Once there only was a dull ache, he turned his head slightly to look behind him."I'm good, Captain." The claws on his back slowly dragged back to his hips, gripping them firmly again. The sensation of the condom-covered cock pushing inside made him moan again, his tailhole clenching down as Virote continued to push his hips forward steadily. Soon enough Jay felt the warm feathered hips pressing against his rear, panting lightly as the pleasured feelings of being filled fought with the pain of the private's first penetration. The weight of the captain on his back pressed him into the desk again, holding him beneath the older male. "I want to hear you call my name right now, Jay." Jay shivered at the growls into his ear, feeling an arm slip under his chest to hold him close.

Hadia held his hips still for only a few more moments, before lifting his own rear up and gently thrusting back into the twitching avian below him, starting a slow rhythm to let Jay get used to the new sensations. Jay let out some more quiet moans at the member buried inside him, unable to move much while Hadia's hips gently slapped against his rump. His own shaft twitched against the desk, more and more precum leaking out.

"Cap-- Hadia...please, a little faster, sir..."

The brown gryphon above him pumped his hips steadily for a few more moments, before lifting his chest up off of Jay's back, standing up straight behind the younger avian. He began thrusting faster, his balls beginning to slap against Jay's sac as well, pulling out over half his shaft before driving himself back in.

Hadia smirked when he heard Jay moan loudly below him, and decided to help out the private. A claw traced its way down the avian's hip, moving along the back of his leg before going up to Jay's shaft, beginning to stroke the back and pressing it against the desk firmly. The way Jay's tailhole tightened around Hadia's shaft made the captain moan quietly himself, thrusting a little harder as he continued to masturbate the twitching bird.

"Oh...oh god, f-faster...harder!" Jay cried out, his arms stretching out to grab the other edge of the desk hard, his claws digging in to the underside. The older gryphon held onto Jay's hips, slowing down until only the head of his cock was inside, then hunched forward and slammed his hips into the blue bird's rear, his pace now intense as the slaps and sounds got louder and louder. Hadia leaned down again towards Jay's head. "Cum for me, Jay," he grunted into the private's ear. Jay moaned in response, his face clenching as Hadia began to roughly jerk off the avian below him, enjoying the twitching and squirming body beneath him.

"Ngh...fuck, Hadia...I'm..." Jay inhaled sharply, his whole body tensing up. Hadia felt the shaft in his hand twitch, then the constant throbbing as Jay began emptying his sac onto the desk and floor, coating the wood with white and making the thrusts into his tight body very difficult. Hadia continued to push his way inside though, his humping growing erratic as his claw went back to Jay's hips. Only after a few more deep thrusts inside, Hadia slammed home one last time and held himself as close to Jay's rear as possible, shivering and letting out a long moan as he emptied himself for the second time. Only his hips twitched as he pumped the condom full of his cum.

Jay gasped as he could feel the warmth of Hadia's seed even through the rubber, releasing his grip on the desk as he started enjoying the afterglow. Hadia held himself against Jay for a bit, panting lightly before slowly pulling back, the head soon popping out of Jay's hole. He patted the avian's rear gently, then rolled the condom off of his softening cock. "Well done, Private. I'll be right back so you can clean up."

Jay heard the footsteps walking off towards the bedroom, while he laid on the desk, catching his breath. After a few moments, he pushed himself up, looking behind him to see Hadia walking back with a towel in his hand. "Here you are."

The younger gryphon nodded, taking the towel and slowly wiping himself off. "Uh, sir...about the desk..." Hadia waved a claw dismissively. "It's fine, I can take care of that myself. How are you feeling?"

Jay wiped the last stains of seed off his face, dropping the towel to his side and pulling his uniform pants back up gingerly. "Pretty good, sir. Thank you."

Hadia smiled, pulling the private close to him to nuzzle his neck. "You're welcome. If you'd like, you can let me know if you'd be interested in this again. It might be a bit difficult to get the opportunity all the time, though."

The private nodded, slowly wrapping his arms around Hadia. "Of course, sir. I understand."

"Good. Now, Private Tarun. If you'll excuse me, I have some cleaning to do. I'll need to meet with you after our next ground mission in three days. We'll have to discuss your...performance."

Jay smiled, saluting again. "Yes sir, Captain Virote."