Roads of oportunity
Authors notes: Well, I've finally got a story to submit. As a new author, I'd like as much input as any one can offer. Things I'm interested in getting feed back about: Story composition, Is it a good story, does it keep your interest? Gramar and Syntax, Any obvious errors that detract fromt he story? Character composition, Are they believible, real to you as you read? And any thing else you can think of to help me write better. I've actualy got a few other stories started as parts of series, all fury. I'd love to hear what you think, as such encorages me to write more!
This is pretty vanilla, just FYI.
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Roads of Oportunity
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The lightning crackled harshly, lighting up the night sky like some scrolling banner for her pain. As the water pored down onto her already soaked fur, Leandra stifled the impending sobs as she trudged along the dirt road, marching through the mud. The mephit hung her head, watching ribbons of water from the cool summer rain dribble from her hair. It was all she could do to keep her sopping wet tail from dragging in the mud behind her. She suddenly stopped, trying to stave off the wave of sadness as her hands came up over her eyes, hoping to staunch the tears. The first few sobs rocked her petite body as it overcame her reluctance to be so obviously hurt out in the open, even though no one was watching.
"I can't believe he did this to me."
Leandra shook and in a broken breath managed to voice the complaint that had rattling her mind for the last three miles.
"That bastard!" she shouted, lifting her muzzle to the sky.
She tried to get a handle on herself, taking a deep breath and trying to wipe the tears away from her face futilely in the rain. All the details kept running through her head and kept it spinning. The trip out to the country, the somber tone as Brian told her about the other girl... All over a lovingly prepared lunch for a romantic evening out in the country side, in the grass by the old tree where their initials had been etched six months prior. She couldn't blame him for being angry at her. The way she blew up on the way back was pretty bad, even her own ears where still ringing from the screaming, but it really didn't help her disposition to be left in the rain by the side of the road as he sped off.
She shook it off once more and began walking towards town, it was only a few miles back but in the rain and through the mud it seemed like a few hundred. Leandra's shoes where soaked, her sweater was hanging off her shoulders in a sodden mass, and her jean shorts were hugging all the wrong places and rubbing the rest raw. All she could do was walk down the dirt road till she got to the main streets; it wasn't likely that any one would be driving out this way on a Sunday.
Leandra swore to herself that it was truly over, echoing Brian's only words as he had slammed the door and taken off down the road. She was going through all the phases rather quickly, blame, regret, denial, and finally acceptance. Some how that last phase wasn't registering just yet, and she kept on walking along almost numbed by the constant rainfall, both mind and body.
She looked blankly into the distance and just kept one foot moving in front of the other, hoping that at some point she might wake up from all this and be happy again, else wise she figured to be hopelessly unhappy for quite some time. She always seemed to pick the wrong guys; Brian the fox obviously was no different from any other fur she'd dated in the past..
She sighed softly, brow furrowed and kept walking. The storm showed no sign of stopping and it was getting darker and colder. All of this was just too perfect for her mood, she almost felt like flopping into a mud hole and letting the water wash over her body till she drowned, her mood momentarily dropping into the morbid. Maybe she could run through the field, trip and hit... HONK HONK!
Leandra nearly jumped out of her fur, she didn't even see the car pull up next to her. In fact, she had been so drawn into herself and her dwelling sadness that she hadn't heard the struggling engine grumbling as the car coasted next to her on the shoulder of the road. She cupped one hand over her brow and looked through the window of the tiny Ford Festiva. A handsome cougar was waving her inside was smiling warmly, and it looked a hell of a lot warmer inside than out. She reached over and tugged at the door. It screeched slightly as she ducked to look inside.
"Little wet out there, care for a ride?" The cougar called out over the rumble of heavy rain drumming out on the rooftop.
"Yea, I suppose I could. I'm a little wet, you sure you don't mind?" Leandra responded, looking him over.
The cougar looked pleasant enough, still dressed for the warmer spring weather. A simple white tank top and blue jeans and even a par of flip flops covered his foot paws. He continued to wave Leandra in, smiling.
"Not at all, I couldn't think of leaving you out their in the rain. Besides, I'm sorta lost and I need some directions." He chuckled lightly as his smile got a little sheepish.
Obviously the only reason he was on this road was because he didn't have a clue how he got there. Leandra managed a slight smile and quickly hopped into the car, taking a seat and slamming the door shut behind her. She leaned back and let out a long sigh of relief as the warm air began to warm her soaked fur. She leaned back slightly and pulled her tail into her lap, trying to contain the stray drops as they continued to drip from her fur.
"Thanks, I really appreciate this." She said.
She looked strait forward as the Cougar pressed on the gas and pulled away from the shoulder of the road.
"Not at all, it's getting nasty out there and dark, I couldn't leave a damsel in distress now could I?" he chided.
Leandra noted the west coast accent behind the deep husky voice. Looking behind her, she noticed that the back seat was filled with various clutter. Well maybe not clutter, they looked more like suitcases. Just then the cougar spoke up again.
"I'm here for an estate settlement. Seems my aunt Sarra died and left me with a little something. Don't know what just yet, but that's why I'm here." He paused for a moment and looked over at her, then back towards his suitcases in the back "There might be a towel in the duffle bag on the left if you care to look," jerking his thumb over his shoulder towards the back with a light churr. "I hate to ask, but can you tell me exactly where I am? I thought I was turning onto a shortcut, but I haven't seen a sign in the last 20 miles, I was about to turn back but then I saw you walking."
Leandra nodded and smiled, reaching back with some difficulty and pulled back the zipper on the black duffle bag shoved behind the Cougar's seat. She reached in and felt around, soon her hand ran across the fluffy fabric of a towel and she quickly pulled it out. As she leaned back in her chair once again she felt her cheeks grow warm under her fur, the cougar's gaze had been obviously staring down her sweater, the soaked fabric hanging low away from her neck. She blinked a bit and hugged the towel to her chest, slightly unsure how to feel about it.
"Oh geeze, look I'm really sorry, I didn't mean to stare, I mean I.. er.." the cougar stammered.
He ran a hand through the fur on top of his head, obviously feeling a bit ashamed for his actions.
Leandra shook her head.
"Don't worry about it.." she managed lightly.
She brought the towel up to begin rubbing it through her jet black hair and begin to migrate it out from in front of her eyes. That was all she needed, she thought to herself, to break up and get caught up with another f-ed up fur in the same day. She rebuffed herself and hung her head slightly, quickly letting the towel soak up the water from her fur where it could. By the time she got to her tail there wasn't much room left in the towel and she was still pretty wet all over. She shivered slightly, still cold from the rain, knowing the chill wasn't doing her much good.
It was bad enough she hadn't worn a bra that day and now her nipples where stiff as little eraser nubs pressing against the sweater, which the kind cougar most likely had gotten an eye full while staring down her shirt. The cougar reached over and pressed a button and soon the air warmed a bit more, blowing hotly from the vents.
"So about those directions?" he asked softly, smiling at her again as he glanced over once again.
"Oh, yea that's right. You're really only a few miles from town, down this road and then you'll hit Arm's boulevard, from there its strait into town. Or at least my home town, Texton. Was that where you where heading?"
"Oh damn, not really. I was heading towards Revington..." the cougar sighed and frowned.
"Oh, that, it's the next one over, about another hour away," Leandra replied, smiling softly as she felt the chill warmed from her coat. "Thanks for the heat." She tried softly.
The cougar nodded and smiled back at her "No problem, I know how it is to have wet fur. It can be a real pain." He looked again, smile growing wider. "You know, I hope you don't mind but I really would like to say that you're rather pretty for a mephit." The cougar's voice turned soft for a moment, searching out in the silence for some connection with the Leandra. "My name is Brian by the way, what is yours?"
Leandra blinked, stunned for a moment. Both by the compliment and also by the name and suddenly the previous events came flooding back and assailing her. She tried to choke it back but it was too late. She lurched slightly as the breath forced itself from her chest in the first of a series of sobs. The towel hid her face as she cried, terribly embarrassed to break down in front of a total stranger.
As the tears came down, further soaking her wet fur, she gladly accepted the warm embrace as the cougar slipped his arms around her and pulled her over against his chest. To tired and exhausted to care, she leaned into his shoulder and sobbed softly, one hand clenching his tank top into her balled fist.
"Hey, what's wrong, what did I say?" the cougar tried plaintively sounding worried, patting Leandra along her side and rubbing her arms. "What did I say?"
Leandra shook her head, as her sobbing settled slightly "No, nothing.. It's nothing you did it's just.." she hesitated. "The reason I was out on that road was because my boyfriend left me there... His name was Brian too."
She looked up, suddenly finding comfort in the big golden eyes of the cougar. Looking around a bit she realized that they had also stopped again, resting by the side of the road while the cougar comforted her. This was a bit of kindness that made her all the more lonely, seeing something that she wouldn't have again for some time. She suddenly felt jealous of it, wanting more, wanting it for herself.
"Oh well.. I see I..rrmmmph!"
The cougar choked on his words for a second as Leandra's lips pressed against his. She could taste the slight salty tang of her tears as she pressed her tongue between his lips. It was a sudden impulse, much more impulsive than she would normally be lead to do with a total stranger, but she felt just a little out of sorts today, a little crazy. Maybe she just felt lonely and now there was a caring stranger who wasn't afraid to hold her, or maybe she just wanted a little more than comfort in the arms of another. Either way Leandra didn't intend to stop. Somehow this seemed right, felt right.
Her heart began racing in her chest as she continued to kiss the reluctant Cougar, who was being silent and still save for the soft rumble of rhythmic purring that seemed timid at the moment. She gently nipped at his lips for a second before pulling away, her voice chittering softly as she looked up into Brian's eyes. Laughing for a moment afterward in a nervous fashion as she noticed Brian's eyes where fluttering half lidded. As those eyes opened again, a full body shudder rolled through the Cougar's body.
"Uhh.. Wow.. Just wow. Um could I ask, what did I do to deserve that?" Brian asked, looking like he had just awoken from a daydream.
"Shhh."
Leandra lifted one hand, one finger extending to press against the cougar's muzzle, pressing his chin up before gently sealing his lips. As she slipped that hand up to rub over his cheek, she sighed softly
"Just let me do something hu? I know we just met, but it's been a really really long day and I need something to help me forget it." Leandra continued, fighting the urge to balk. "My name is Leandra, by the way."
Leandra smiled softly as Brian nodded and managed a weak smile. He was obviously as nervous about this as she was, that at least comforted her some. Leaning back into her seat, she reached down while crossing her arms. Grabbing the hem of her sweater, she pulled the wet mass up and over her head in one fluid motion. As her breasts came into contact with the warm air, the still damp flesh of her nipples instantly hardened with the chill of evaporation. She shuddered softly.
"You like them?" Leandra asked, studying Brian's expression for any sign.
Brian nodded, "Yes, there beautiful just like you."
Leandra instantly blushed, her thick tail curling around her shoulder to hide her face. She Cooed softly amidst the harsh hiss of the vents warming the small car, Leandra pulled her tail back and looked down. Yea, they weren't perfect C cups (slightly smaller really), neither were the breasts proportionate. But such a comment made her feel adored, perfect in a way. It made her body tingle and her senses begin to spin. How a stranger could do this with such simple words, twist her soul and body into a tingling ball of fire was mind boggling at that moment though it strengthened her resolve to move on.
"Thanks," She whispered.
Leandra's fur was still slightly damp, making the task of removing her shorts especial difficult in the cramped car seat. She managed though, with a bit of a struggle. First unclasping the button at the top, and then slowly pulling down her zipper. She watched Brian watch her, following his eyes as they traced the course of her body down to her thighs as she slowly tugged the denim down her legs. Brian didn't move, even though he looked ready to jump out of his fur for the chance. As Leandra pushed the sodden fabric off her feet into a heap under the dash, she kicked her shoes off under them as well, leaving only her pink panties with the white straps to cover her.
The car was quickly getting steamed with the growing warmth in the car and Leandra's wet fur. The thick scent filled the tight space, filling her nose and probably Brian's as well as she climbed over into his lap, squeezing in between the steering wheel and his warm body. Brian stared back at her, looking confused, excited and curious above all. Leandra guessed it wasn't often that he picked up furs who stripped naked infront of him and suddenly crawled into his lap.
Leandra leaned in, nuzzling Brian's cheek again, murring softly into his ear and then nipping the tip softly before settling into his lap. As Brian shuddered again with a groan, she smiled feeling him beneath her, his girth was already hot beneath her, already beginning to stiffen against the fabric of his pants, tenting against it and her crotch.
Leandra's thick tail curled around and over her shoulder once again, the tip of it hanging inches from Brian's nose. Brian snapped playfully at the tail tip and churred back at Leandra with a wide smile. Leandra smiled back and leaned in to nuzzle those tan lips and playfully nose at him. One of Brian's hands came up, resting gently against her side. Leandra reached down and gently tugged the Cougar's hand up to her left breast, pressing Brian's palm against her flesh and moaning softly. As the hand began to gently explore her chest, Leandra kissed Brian again. She kissed him hotly, passionately, letting her tongue explore into his mouth past those whiskered lips and predatory teeth. What the hell right? Better to take your pleasure and run... That's what they always seem to do.
The cougar's tongue tussled back with Leandra's and with a grunt she wrapped her hands around his head. Her hips jerked against Brian's crotch, sending chills up her spine and a growl of pleasure from Brian's lips. She continued the gentle thrusting, feeling the turgid shaft grow solid beneath her. It began to press the fabric up between her nether lips and the warmth radiated directly against her sensitive folds. She moaned, murred and pulled back from the kiss to nip softly at those lips. Brian growled back, his fingers finding her nipple and tugging on it softly while he nipped gently at her cheek in return.
Leandra could feel her cunny becoming wet, though with the wet panties this could hardly become evident beyond much. Though the combined wetness was soaking through Brian's pants as well and now the warmth from both of them was very evident. Leandra mused that they might as well been naked while doing it. However this felt just as naughty, grinding against some stranger on a dirt road with the steady drumming of rain surrounding them in obscurity. She shuddered softly and yipped in a breathy huff, then leaned up wards. Her tail tip pressed against Brian's eyes and she leaned up to his ear.
"I know what you want... I want it too." Leandra whispered.
Leandra let one hand gently run down Brian's shirt, gripping the fabric and pulling it away from his waist. She gently rubbed her hand over the cougar's belly, finding it taught and toned compared to her more gently rounded features. She moaned softly into his ear, reaching down with that hand and slipping it into the waistband of Brain's shorts. Brian was purring loudly now, the rise and fall of his chest reverberating through Leandra's body, arousing her senses further. He made no effort to remove the tail from his eyes while Leandra's hand continued to slip further down. The radiating warmth engulfed Leandra's hand as it came in contact with his turgid length and wrapping her fingers around it.
Brian growled again, long and low, huffing afterwards and straining his hips against Leandra's hand. She cooed softly, her muzzle still pressed into his left ear. She licked and nibbled that ear; letting Brian hear every breath, every hot little moan as she gently rocked on his hips.
"I can smell you," Brian whispered. "Your as excited as I am, gods I barely know you and I want to taste you!"
Leandra smiled, her right paw reaching downwards to find Brian's left, then drawing that hand between them and pressing it against her panty covered cunt. She moaned hotly into Brian's ear as his fingers instantly curled into the valley of fabric pressed between her lips.
"Use your fingers, stick them inside me and you can taste me on them. See how wet I am, taste me, be my lover for this moment." She cooed softly into Brian's ear.
Leandra moaned again as Brian's fingers tugged at her panties, pulling them aside. Leandra's hips quivered involuntarily as the deft digits found their way around her panties and pressed into her moist folds. She panted softly, nibbling at the cougar's ear as the fingers sought entrance into her most private place. Two fingers slipped inside her, igniting the fire that had been only smoldering before. She grunted loudly, her body pressing against her warm rainy day lover. Leandra huffed herself at that point and tugged at Brian's cock, her fingers surrounding his sheath and stroking it in the tight confines of his pants.
"Ahh!" she huffed, leaning down to nuzzle Brian's neck "That feels so good!"
"I want to see you," Brian asked softly between breathless grunts and growls.
The tail moved slowly, easing its way from Brian's eyes. Leandra muzzle bumped him, chittering softly and growling a bit with desire as his fingers gently pumped into her cunt. Leandra's hips jerked spasmodically, thrusting against Brian's fingers, trying to drive them deeper inside her. Every moment her cunt became hotter, wetter. She could feel her wetness soaking Brain's fingers down to the third knuckle.
"Taste me," Leandra whispered softly.
Leandra grunted, hips still gyrating. She looked into Brian's eyes, her own glazed with lust and seeing the same in the bright amber orbs that peered back at her in the dim light. Leandra hissed softly into Brian's ear as he slowly withdrew his fingers from inside her, moaning as the digits traced her own wetness upward through the valley of her sex and over the hood of her clit. Leandra shuddered against the cougar, giving his cock a few spasmodic jerks in return for the skilled digits. She leaned back slightly, her eyes easily adjusting to the dim light (being nocturnal and all by nature) and watched Brian lift his paw to his lips.
Brian sniffed at the fingers first, his whiskers twitching back and lips curling. Leandra smiled, knowing what that scent was doing to him, the scent of sex driving her lover wild. She could smell it to, more than that she could feel the heat between her thighs building, begging for more than just a mere touch, she wanted more and she felt she had the solution in hand so to speak. As Brian suckled one finger into his mouth, he grunted and growled. His right hand was at her hip, trimmed claws slipping forth and pressing into Leandra's thigh. As he feasted on the essence of her arousal, her own hands where now quickly working at his zipper, tugging it down in the darkness.
"Do I taste good?" her breath hot in Brian's ear again.
Brian nodded, moaning softly as his hips jerked suddenly to the cool air washing around his groin. Leandra pulled the fly away from the cougar's sheath and pulled the waistband of his boxers under his balls. The thick scent of his pre quickly filled her nostrils, enough to let her taste it on the air. She licked her lips softly and nuzzled at Brian's neck. Brian responded in kind, nuzzling up under her cheek and nipping softly at the fur there. His hands where almost trembling as they swarmed over her furred hips, fingers pulling at her, pulling her over his throbbing erection.
Leandra's hands washed over his chest, gently kneading at it through the thin shirt. She moaned softly, letting herself slip down at Brian's urgency, her body trembling as well as she could feel the head of his cock nuzzling at the nest of her cunt, bared only by her panties.
"Hurry! Please, I want you inside me, rip them out of the way if you have too! I don't care any more. Fuck me!" Leandra hissed, pressing her hips down.
Brian grunted, nodding and soon Leandra could feel him slipping his fingers up around the straps to her panties. She felt them grow tight around her waist, and then with another grunt from Brian, the thin straps gave way and tore on one side. With the panties free on one side, Brian simply pulled them down the other thigh, away from her crotch. Now there was nothing holding them apart.
Leandra shuddered, feeling his cock slip between her lips, the cried out as Brian's strong hands suddenly drew her down on to his cock, simultaneously thrusting his hips and forcing his thick member deep into her warm wetness. She whimpered then, suddenly feeling very full and filled, her cunt stretched around a thick rasping member, starting fires inside her body as it relentlessly drove its way to her very core. She could only guess how long that shaft was, eight inches, nine? Either way, it was pressed deeper than she had felt any cock before.
The rain lightened its heavy drumming on the roof of the car as it became replaced with a rhythm of another kind. Leandra grunted as Brain pulled at her hips, pulling her up and then down again roughly. She had worked him up alright, he was right randy and he seemed intent on ramming her as best he could in the tight space. Her head was already rubbing against the ceiling as he lifted her again and rowled loudly as his hips sent his cock slamming into her rapidly descending body once again. The car rocked and the shocks squeaked as they rocked against one another. Her tail began to wave wildly, sweeping the air beside her and occasionally bumping the horn while they fucked.
The fucking was jerking, spasmodic and restrained, the tight space making it all the more urgent and wanton. Each fur seeking satisfaction any way they could. Leandra's hips ground down against Brian's, her wetness soaking his sheath and only being added to by his own secretions that now made their matting a fluid gliding motion. Each upward thrust sent a jolt through Leandra's body, her still damp fur swaying as if to conduct each sensual movement. Soon the car was filled with the small car was filled with the sounds of two voices grunting, growling and moaning.
Each one of those eager thrust made Leandra's breasts heave against Brian's broad chest, making her trill and moan against him. Her fingers curled into his the fur around his head and neck. Her breathes became short grunts of ecstasy. With the position that she was in, his groin and sheath where both grinding fiercely against her clit with each lunge of his hips. Already that little pearl was becoming stiff and hot, electricity seemed to be shooting through her body from that singular point. It melted with the pleasure of that thick prickly cock grabbing at her walls and tugging and pulling with each thrust. She bit her lip and whimpered again.
"I'm going to cum!" Leandra managed between whimpering breaths.
"Not.. umgahhh.. far behind..." Brian retorted exasperatedly.
Leandra felt one of his hands slip up behind her left shoulder. The thick fingers wrapped around her shoulder and began to pull her hard downward into each thrust. The one on her thigh lifted her upwards for the next thrust downward. The sounds of moist body parts slipping and squeezing suddenly gained volume as the wetness jumped a notch in preparation for the coming orgasms.
Leandra shuddered and her voice quivered as she let out another moan. It became a repetitive utterance, slipping from her lips with every breath as that fire suddenly burned brightly. Her body heaved; every breath became harsh and rasping. She clutched Brain's body close to hers as the orgasm overtook her, rolling over her body with about as much grace as a backhoe with spiked treads.
Some where in the back of Leandra's head, she registered Brian's clenched teeth and the fierce growling that was reverberating inside her ear. As Leandra came, she cried out into Brian's ear, a loud broken moan filling the cougar's ear as she shuddered against him. Her cunt twitched, muscles clamping down around Brian's member with rhythmic undulations milking the length of his cock as it pressed inside her. In one last ragged thrust, she felt that thick cock grow thicker still in a sudden lurching as it launched its hot load right into her spasming channel. She shuddered again, the first orgasm fading as another came to replace it, the heat from the thick seed churning into her body, warming her chilled frame with sudden waves of ecstasy.
Leandra came again and again till every nerve ending was buzzing with hum of high voltage. She was crying again, this time from utter joy and pleasure, filled completely, exhausted and feeling surrounded by sights and sounds made only familiar by the hypnotic plane of orgasm. She began kissing Brian's neck and cheek, he was panting and purring, lazily trying to return those kisses and nuzzles. His arms circled around her and he rowled softly into her ear.
"Gods.. If I ever manage to cum that hard again, I think it would kill me!" Brian managed between labored breaths.
"Damn hun, I can't say myself I've had much better." Leandra whispered back.
She sat there, gathering her strength, panting softly and kissing him along the neck and shoulder. They stayed together like that for a good ten minuets longer, grinding only softly on over stimulated nerve endings, savoring the power of it all and feeling connected in a way that idle conversation could never do. This would have been all good and well, however as the engine began to sputter and die, Leandra cringed and looked at Brain concerned.
"Fuck! I'm running out of gas! I meant to get some at a gas station soon... but I'd been on this road so long and then I saw you..." Brian smiled though. "I think it was worth it though."
The engine sputtered again and died finally, the warm air stopped flowing and all the lights ran dim. Leandra looked at Brian, feeling comforted by his smile.
"Well then, I was walking into town, Care to join me?" Leandra churred into his ear.
"Maybe tomorrow morning, it's dark now." Brain began, "But I have blankets in the back, they will keep us warm for the night."
Leandra leaned up again, gently nipping at his ear. "Naw.. I know another way to keep warm."
Brian smiled back at her in the darkness, purring "Sounds good."