Commission: A Long Revenge Coming

Story by dracologist on SoFurry

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#49 of Written Commissions

When Angel releases a few choice pictures of her long time rival to their favorite social media site the raptor, Fayt, comes to the T-Rex's gym looking for revenge. A hard fight, a strong opponent, and one very sensual sex scene that leaves the loser dripping in the winner's fem-cum, as well as another fluid to mark her claim over her. Come and read this amazing fight against two brutal dino ladies.

This one was a bit late mostly because I had no idea what setting I wanted it to be in. Honestly, the story is in response to another story where Fayt beat Angel during a sex fight in the Tournament on Monster Island series I wrote, and Angel's player came to me stating that Fayt has never beaten Angel to that date and hired me to write this adding a bit at the end because Fayt's player likes that. All in all, I love these ladies, their strong, tough, and powerful, just the kind of girls that a big dumb wolf could fall for.


A Long Revenge Coming

"Where is that bitch!" She roared out loudly against the crowd as the doors swung open at once. The burning fire of rage showing in her eyes as those within the building looked on at her in mid lift and distracted rep. Easily the sight of this red raptor, this skilled street fighter turned many of the men here white with fear as they had learned their name by heart for the number of times that they'd faced her in the fighting ring at the rear of the building. Each one of them looked between them, checking to see which among them would be the one signing a death wish in order to answer this girl, but as she drew her way from those double doors towards the men that stood there in terror of this raptor girl the sound of their savior called down across them from the slowly descending lift.

"Oh leave them alone, Fayt. I was the one that posted those pictures on the internet, and you wouldn't believe the following they've gotten." The rex smirked while her fingers strapped around the cage that lowered her down to that ground floor, an appropriate display given her name, but this bigger dino wasn't anything if not a touch poetic in what she did. The smile that showed on those scaled lips easily displayed those sharp white teeth, but it was the knowledge that her little show of the most recent photos from this raptor-ess's defeat was something that would get her running to this little gym of hers. It was a fun and constant struggle between the two, Fayt would try and fight her, and this rex would try and not beat her too badly so that she could come back again. Bullying? Maybe, but secretly both knew that this sexy raptor simply loved it.

"You fucking bitch! I'm going to tear your throat out for posting those pictures. 'Cunt Eating, Black-eyed Raptor, Must be a New Breed'? I've already got people calling me all this morning asking me if I was ok! I'm going to kill you, Angel!" She yelled to the woman that came up to step out of that lift, the raptor was already set to charge, already prepared to drive herself towards this T-Rex that was simply laughing back at her frustration.

The loud and bellowing laughter from that grey scaled dino left her shaking her head slowly from side to side with a happy and easy grin rolling over her lips from little more than just how riled she was able to get this red fighter with so very little effort involved. Most fighters Angel would have to ask for a fight, or demand it, or corner them and challenge them in different ways if she really wanted to test herself against them, but Fayt was something special to her, her always go-to fighter that she used regularly as her personal challenge to not only test her skills that she'd been developing, but also to see torn down in front of her in some of the simply cutest displays that a strong and tough raptor had ever been forced into at the end of a fight. Those large, heavy breasts swayed in every single step that she made, taking her from that lift towards the smaller dino girl that bravely stood unmoved considering their fighting record together. The pair of camo designed pants set with side pockets hung loosely around those large, perfect breeding hips even while her shirt existed just specifically to cover those towering tits and cut off just after them round mounds were complete. Those pert nipples even shown through the top, something for the guys to look at while they were sweating on those machines. Not a single bit of this stole away from her large muscled body that brought her over a full foot taller than this red girl, but those grey scales that covered her body did nothing to hide the strong figure of her frame. It was a woman's build that many women wished to someday achieve while and very few would ever be able to see made true. As she stood there that soft voice of hers could be heard, but if it was a growl or a purr not a single person in this gym would ever be able to tell.

Fayt might be smaller than this large woman, but she wasn't shy on muscles about her red body either, the black tribal tattoo that rolled over her cheek was something from another time, before she had met another creature. While those yellow eyes looked on with her their narrowed gaze showed that she wasn't in the mood for Angel's crap, that she wasn't here to try and joke around after what this rex had done to her, the easy grunt that came from hearing that laughter only made her snarl out deeper to this girl. This raptor war her thick leather high cropped jacket, but wore it with no covering over her large and plump red tits that made up her chest. Strong, muscular, firm, this girl could take on most people without any problem at all, even wearing her cargo pants tucked easily into her boots to show that off, but among her most precious items that she carried on her at all times, items that even Angel didn't dare to take away from her, were five golden rings that she wore on a strip of leather that was tied together at the ends around her neck in almost a tight choker to keep them from swinging around when she was punishing assholes, and tearing into bitches like this one. It was clear that Fayt had come for a fight, just as Angel had planned, and how they were going to manage to finish such a thing was all up to the winner of that fight. Even as the two kept their eyes locked to one another their easy steps took them across the gym to the all too familiar ring that rested in the back, a ring that this raptor knew almost intimately considering how often she was made to kiss it.

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The shifting of the ropes leaned down easily at the push and pull of the two climbing into the ring, where Fayt moved under the top rope the Rex would push it down to pass over it leaving the two standing in this ring with their eyes locked on one another. Even now the fight had already started, and neither of them needing a bell to tell them when to start fighting. The raptor that charged in quickly roared out once more, rushing across this ring in a fast pace in order to close that short distance between them. Angel smirked to the attack, but quickly lifted her knee so that she could try and drive the fellow dino into the submissive pained stance that she was so used to seeing her in. It came as a surprise to the Tyrannosaur that those hands quickly whipped down to slap across the top of that thigh, to push back against the lifting knee and actually spring board off of it so that she could bring her red body at a higher point than that grey dino with her fist already drawn back and slamming forward in a fast and heavy blow right against the side of Angel's face. The rex was forced to the side, stumbling at the hit and quickly turning back in wonder at the display. She'd avoided her attack, and made a counter attack at the same time. The soft smirk that rolled over her bloody lips indicated her bit of joy that she might not have to go easy on the raptor this time around, not that she ever really did anyway.

"You've been practicing, I see." Angel quickly stated as she moved to lift her guard in her boxing stance.

The red dino smirked at the touch of praise she was just given, but couldn't help but explain her spike in talent that was just shown off, "Yeah, I found a pretty good training partner to practice with and he's just as big as you are. You'd like him, there's finally a guy around that makes you look like a woman."

The tease came by in a sting that widened those eyes quickly, the easy smirk that existed on those rex lips drew speechless from that sudden quip in the middle of their fight. This girl had been learning a lot, obviously, and that meant that Angel needed to find this guy and put a stop to that immediately. The last thing she needed was for her usual punching bag to start talking back to her and for that she was going to make this dino a bit more humble before heading off to find this person that was filling her head with hope, training, and make sure sure that what he was doing stopped. First she had to deal with this bad behavior that she was getting from her little raptor, a fight that she didn't mind putting forth, and even the idea of it forcing that smirk to grow into a horrifyingly toothy grin. When Angel stepped closer her fast strikes came in quickly with a left jab that the raptor immediately leaned to the side on only to catch a hard lifting hook into her side that made this girl bark out deeply. Fayt could feel that long lasting sting in her ribs, the pain lowering her guard just enough to defend that point while that rex continued to keep their distance. When that lower strike came into that crimson stomach it lifted that raptor off of her feet, widening her eyes and shaking her at her very frame so that when the fist was pulled back it wasn't the feet that landed on the floor, but those red knees that dropped to the canvas with those raptor hands wrapped around her stomach while she groaned from the force of the hit that filled her.

When Angel moved to wrap her fingers around that raptor skull the true size difference between the two became far more obvious, "Don't tell me that you've had enough already. Not after a comment like that. You better get back to your feet and keep going or I might just send this new guy you've been hanging out with the next set of pictures that I take."

Angel wasn't always this way, she wasn't mean like this to most people, but she knew that this was one of the few ways to motivate this raptor to improve herself. It was what drove the raptor to get stronger, to work with a trainer, and most importantly to have a trainer that had trained her for this kind of position where she was on her knees. With that hand wrapped around her head the red dino kicked against the ground, throwing herself into that girl's body. The grey t-Rex felt that impact of a shoulder straight into her stomach forcing that body of hers back, but those well grounded legs only gave just enough to dig back into that canvas and push back against her. With those feet firmly planted, though, the raptor moved into the second part of her strategy, a quickly swinging leg coming up straight into the outside of that shin with a hard and heavy strike. The blow itself forced that grey dino to call out loudly as her limb was beaten with a powerful kick, a kick that slid her leg inward so that her well grounded stance was no longer well grounded and her powerful hit allowed that pushing motion that they had against one another to weaken just enough that when she slid her other leg out of the way to change the direction of that push it would drive topple the great rex, forcing her to fall sideways with a roar that left her shoulders hitting the canvas and drew the eyes of all those looking on with a surprised shock.

Most of the surprise came from the rex that now found herself on her back. How many times had she been tied up with Fayt before and always managed to push the girl back into a corner or the ropes to open her up for some well placed hammering blows and yet now it was Angel that was on her back on the canvas with that raptor already moving to straddle her lap with a few heavy strikes downward against that quickly lifted guard. Angel managed to save her face, at least a little bit by sacrificing the backside of her arm and shoulder, but that didn't help her to get back out of here and when she saw those dangling and hanging rings her hand quickly darted up to wrap around the choker, the feeling of a leather snap against the backside of that red neck allowed those golden rings to drop down into that grey palm and the raptor to back off of her just too slow to stop those rings from being held in the grasp of her opponent. Fayt gasped quickly, immediately changing her strategy from beating on the Tyrannosaur to trying to crawl over the length of that grey scaled body in order to reach out for those precious rings of hers.

"No! Give those back." She said quickly as she reached for that hand gripping them.

The rex was without mercy, though, and while holding those rings in one hand her other would reach up for that raptor jaw, twisting on the spot to roll the two of them together and place that red dino on her back giving Angel the moment that she needed to lift away and look on at those rings with an easy smirk across her lips. This rex wasn't some coward, she wasn't some mindless brute, and she wasn't some weakling that needed to use tactics like this to win a fight. If she'd known that these rings were so important to her opponent then Angel would never have touched them at all. Easily she'd toss them down across that red body and back away, giving the raptor time to scoop them up in her strip of leather and quickly tie them back down against her neck again. A sigh of relief coming over that smaller dino as she secured it down, even being given the room to get back to her feet again just before she lifted her guard and looked over her opponent. The easy smirk that ran across Angel's lips though showed that she was happy that this girl's precious rings hadn't come to harm, or got lost at all. Sure the rex had given up a pretty great position that could have won her this fight, and a tool that she could have used to bend this raptor at her beck and call, but that wasn't how Angel wanted to win things. She didn't need gimmicks, she didn't need underhanded tactics, she could beat this girl without any of that and when she was sure that the raptor was ready this rex would prove that by stepping in towards her with a hard and powerful blow straight against that chin that would jerk Fayt's head upward just before the return hit from the other hand came in against that smaller dino's cheek dropping the red raptor down onto her crimson side.

"Come on, Fayt. You wanted this fight, lets do it." Angel coaxed her, kept that guard up and watched this girl as pull herself to her feet with a deep growl over her lips, "Maybe I should find this guy you have and show him what a real woman can do."

That was it for the raptor, she was done hearing about this rex talking about taking her man, her canine, her lover, she was finished listening to the gym trainer always trying to cut her down and with a quick step towards her would lift her rear leg for a hard and devastating stomp inward towards that grey thigh, her long leading toe claw even moving to cut into the leg as she did this and forcing a deep snarl from that rex as her leg was cut so quickly by such a heavy stomp, but when that muscular grey arm moved to hook around under it that foot was lifted high over Fayt's head, leaving her easily opened for a well placed smashing punch straight into her side while her ankle came to find a knew home on that rex's shoulder. Fayt jerked to the side, calling out in pain from the attack, but that arm immediately hooked around the back of her shoulders this girl could feel those large grey tits pressing down against her own. These two were rather equal when it came to roundness and how pert their big breasts were, but Angel was the larger creature so when the raptor was crushed into her she could feel those big grey breasts under that white top pillowing out and almost wrapping around the big squished crimson tits. Without any footing what-so-ever the raptor had to try and struggle to fight back, had to try and push against the rex, had to try and beat her knuckles into that grey figure, but any attack that she'd make against Angel's body didn't have the power before it that she could have had with both feet against the ground. Instead she found herself feeling a different kind of attack and that her already dripping slit was having the fabric of her pants pushed against it to leave her moaning out loudly while the rex's own powerful cunny crushed down against hers through their very clothes.

It was the shattered breath between them that left the Tyrannosaur to smirk down at her prey easily with a very clear and defined use of words, "I win, or do you want to keep going?"

"Fuck you," She said quickly and immediately felt the rex's swinging hand crush down against her side again. The easy smile that passed over those rex lips showing themselves when her hand ended up on top of that knee and started to pull it downward against her figure. With a panic the raptor tried to find a way to pull her leg out, but she was completely stuck. The choice became obvious, surrender or lose her leg entirely. "Ok ok, you win. Just let me go..."

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The defeated tone of that raptors voice showed her disappointment even while that leg was allowed to fall free from that shoulder in one piece. Fayt didn't really believe that Angel would have broken her leg, but risking such a thing on a bet was just something that this strong fighting raptor wasn't willing to do. She'd been forced into submission, forced to give up her victory, and while she looked on at the rex who towered over her already her pants were being pulled down over that red tail. She didn't struggle, though, in a gym like this there was only one answer for losing a fight, and that was that the person who was forced to submit was forced into submission. The only question on her mind this time was what this girl was going to do to her, what would this raptor have to do for the rex that had won her. While she looked on at Angel their bodies continued to press down against one another, those red fingers moving up slowly to wrap femininely around the backside of that grey head while she surrendered herself to Angel's will. Fayt had trained hard, but if she wanted to overtake this Tyrannosaur then she was going to have to train even harder. It was the shock of those grey lips leaning down towards the red mouth and delivering a heated kiss that drove this raptor to moan towards her winner, to relax against her body and feel her pants drop down to the floor at her feet just before the rex pulled her own camo designed pants off as well. With both leaving such garments behind the raptor was taken, escorted towards the corner of the ring and sat down, forced to rest there where she had no escape, but instead forced to look on at the amazing display of a beautiful dripping t-Rex cunny that she had become well acquainted with a number of times in the past.

The grey hand that moved to the back of that raptors head easily guided her forward, bringing her towards that heated rex slit that the hungry red dino started to lick it. The flavor of that womanhood that had overtaken her ran down her throat, over her chin, and even running across her chest with an easy display of this thirsty red trying to swallow down that natural lubricant while that thin tongue snaked its way deeper and deeper into Angel's dominant cunny. The very imagine of it in front of her left this raptor to feel her finger across her own lower lips, to easily guide herself on with slow circles that soon turned into her middle finger pushing into her own delicate slit. The feeling of it deep inside of her left her panting out against that rex cunt, licking it further, pulling and pushing her tongue in and out of her as she drank down the heavy flow of warm and smooth fem-juice that managed to drip free from her hard and full nipple down onto her lap blow. Fayt was on her knees for this rex, not a position that she was new to, but not a position that she had wanted to be in at the end of their fight. It taught her, though, that she needed to push herself harder, to find better ways of attacking this larger opponent, to find a way to win the next time she came up here. When the rex huffed deeply she'd lean her head in further, driving that tongue into her and locking her lips around that hot slit while the winning dino released her deeper cunny juices down the length of that throat and into the stomach below feeling the shuddering call of the raptor so close as well just from this t-rex's heavy creaming.

"So you got yourself a man..." She said easily to the girl down below that looked up at her with an almost angry expression, "Oh don't worry, I'm not going to steal him away from you, but I think you need do a reminder of exactly who YOU belong to."

This was usually the point where Angel stepped away, gave Fayt the room to retrieve her pants and go, but this raptor wasn't done with herself yet, and that bigger dino above her hadn't released her face yet. With this red scaled creature looking up at Angel, she couldn't see that face over those large breasts in order to tell what she was planning, but while her nose was there pressed against that slit she could easily smell it. The hot, steaming trickle of that golden fluid started to release from the space between the clit and the cunny, and while eyes widened at the sight of it running over her snout and down her shoulders to cover her body the easy wave of fluid that covered her, marked her as this dominant girl's territory, left that raptor moaning out deeply and fully with her already tight depth squeezing down around her own finger just as she cried out to feel the heavy flow of her own cum splash over the floor in order mix with the rex marking that was already there. It was a day that left her panting, worn down, sore, and now smelling like the property of a very territorial woman that felt free to claim her not just now, but anytime.