Hey all! I'm still not really sure how much I want to post this first scene of chapter five (this is only like 750 words. Not even close to what a third of this chapter should be), but I really like how it turned out and I wanted some feed back on...
Hospital, Human, Mathias Shaw, Pokemon, The Other Side, confusion, recovery
You are mathias shaw of dewford. now, tell me about yourself."
_i knew my bag was better than that cheap one joy tried to give me._ mathias said to himself with a smile on his face.
Action, Adventure, Arcanine, Hospital, Human, Mathias Shaw, Pokemon, Story Progression, Story Series, The Other Side, leafeon, recovery
Before it lifted itself off the floor again, the jaws of oblivion had closed shut around mathias shaw.
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Action, Adventure, Clean, Dog, Mathias Shaw, No-Yiff, Non-Anthro, Pain, Pokemon, Story Series, The Other Side, Violence, chase, leafeon