All's Fair - Part 22
**Part 22** A slight, cold breeze off of the sea ruffled my fur as I sat quietly in the leaves at the small cemetery, knees pulled up to my chest. It smelled like another storm would be rolling in tonight. Summer had ended quite abruptly at the end...
All's Fair - Part 19a
That went poorly. You'd think that, given almost a whole month to work on it, I could write one f#!king part. Apparently not - I was running behind anyway, and it turned out a lot longer than I planned (like always). Here's the first half. It's all I...
All's Fair - Part 19b
1. I guess I should quit trying to make promises about when I'll post, because it doesn't work at all. I sincerely apologize. Also, thank you so much to everyone who's stuck with me thus far; you've been wonderful. 2. I've retouched Part 19a. You...
All's Fair - Part 1
Foreword This is my first novel. I'd like to note that a lot of things change later on in the story because I didn't plan this all out in advance and that there are a lot of plot holes (stuff like how 'insane' my protagonist is - he started...
All's Fair - Part 17
I've reworked/moved most of the conversation with Dan and Halo from Part 16 to the beginning of this one. Thanks once again to [Tank Jaeger](%5C) for that suggestion. Anyway. Nick's bi, so read at your own risk. Feel free to comment/critique/any other...
All's Fair - Part 16
I hope you all enjoy reading this. By all means, please comment and critique; I love feedback. Nick is bisexual, and the story has some homosexual content. Don't read if that bothers you etc. Thanks! - Xi **All's Fair - Part...
All's Fair - Part 15
I hope you all enjoy reading this. By all means, please comment and critique; I love feedback. Nick is bisexual, and the story has some homosexual content. Don't read if that bothers you etc. Thanks! - Xi EDIT: Thanks to [Tank...
All's Fair - Part 13
I hope you all enjoy. By all means, please comment; I love feedback. If you don't like it, please let me know, preferably with an explanation; ditto if you do :). Nick is bisexual, and the story has some homosexual content. ...
All's Fair - Part 12
I hope you all enjoy. By all means, please comment; I love feedback. Nick is bisexual, and the story has some homosexual content. Don't read if that bothers you etc. Thanks! - Xi **All's Fair - Part 12** The icy sidewalk...
All's Fair - Part 11
Your comments, as ever, are greatly appereciated. Even (especially?) criticism - I promise I won't get mad at you :). Nick is bi. Don't read this if that bothers you. - Xi **All's Fair - Part 11** I found myself wishing that...
All's Fair - Part 8
I'm really really sorry I took so long on this one; I had other things going on, plus a nasty case of writer's block on all things related to All's Fair. I'd like to thank [Combustion](%5C) for his last comment, because that's what started me sparking...
All's Fair - Part 7
The story's main character is bi, so don't read if you don't want to. As ever, your thoughts and criticism are welcome so that I can get better. Are things moving too slow? Do I have enough detail? Are the characters fun and/or believable?...