One Clean Cop, Chapter I
Welcome to part two of my series. I hope the first story arc was a good read. That one and this arc go together to create the backstory for the third act of this whole series. Please let me know what you think! I can't write better stories without...
Torpedo Run Chapter 26
Hi everyone! Welcome to SoFurry 2.0! Celebrate with comments :D Chapter 26 Blood and iron filled the air, as the Ix'kat war party swarmed from the open hallway, straight through the front line of enemy defenders, and swooped down on the...
Torpedo Run Chapter 28
Hi everyone! As the battle goes on, our intrepid heroes' mission gets difficult. Please comment if you like the story and let me know what you think about the pacing, action writing, characterisation, and so on :) Also, don't worry! Porn on the way in...
Torpedo Run Chapter 27
Chapter 27 One of Clicks' warrior drones exploded, as a coherent energy beam lanced through its center with a terrible crunching curdling noise, instantly atomizing its viscera and detonating its shell, chunks bouncing off the armored walls. SSGt...
Torpedo Run Chapter 25
Hi everybody. The saga of the Fist of the Nascent Dawn, her brave crew, and a few others continues. Please let me know what you think of the story, the writing style, and so on :) Thanks! And thanks for reading! Chapter 25 Chaos reigned in the...
Torpedo Run Chapter 24
Hi everyone. Not sure how I feel about this chapter. It came out kind of forced, to my mind. Anyway, give me your opinions on it, if you'd be so kind? Thanks for reading! Chapter 24 A Marine brought his bullpup rifle around, ignoring the...
Dreaming
As promised, here's chapter two! Let me know what you think. The next chapter is going to be darker, and probably have less nice stuff in it :P If you're underage, don't read this. Also, go read "Asleep" first if you haven't already, or else this...
Torpedo Run Chapter 23
Hey everyone :) Sorry for the delay, Xmas break threw me off my game a bit, and this chapter didn't start writing itself until halfway through. Anyway, comments and critique are very much welcome! Chapter 23 Tenh growled, a low basso rumble...
Torpedo Run Chapter 22
Comments and criticism are very much welcome :) Chapter 22 Olliver lowered his massive, invisible armored shoulder and plowed straight through his second building in less than ten minutes, grinning with angry satisfaction as he took out his...
Torpedo Run Chapter 21
Comments are extremely welcome. In particular, let me know if the action stays exciting, the characters interesting, and so on. Thanks for reading! Chapter 21 Void Shadow grimaced, in his virtual world, as a near miss almost melted his wing...
Torpedo Run Chapter 20
Comments welcome! Let me know if the story is seeming to drag, or if this is exciting and maintaining your interest :) Thanks. ----------------------------- Chapter 20 With fire whipping up the nose cone of his fighter, Void Shadow prayed to the...
Torpedo Run Chapter 19
Chapter 19 Like shoals of piranhas swarming through an endless black sea, the two armadas swarmed toward one another at immense speeds made ponderous by the sheer emptiness of space. Captain Leith watched, heart thundering with the...