[Commission] Camping Gone Wrong

Story by Oniric on SoFurry

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This story was commissioned by tyranno-tycoon from Fur Affinity, who wanted to see some pigs getting eaten by a bizarre monster.

Content warning: this story is darker than my usual and contains some sexual undertones, unwilling vore with uncertain fatality, and lots of burping and farting.

~2400 words.

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"Oh man, I'm absolutely stuffed. I definitely shouldn't have eaten that last sandwich."

Jake the pig groaned in discomfort as he rubbed his obscenely bloated belly, while his friend Matt, also a pig, grinned at him.

"I told you, you should've given up earlier," said Matt. "You had no chance against me."

"But you'd eaten so much even before we began our contest! Just... how?!"

"I just have a big stomach, bro."

"Yeah, I can see that."

Jake stared at his friend, still in disbelief. Both pigs had eaten and drank a lot of food during their improvised eating contest and also before that, and as a result both of them were completely stuffed. Jake knew that Matt had a huge appetite, but he'd never seen his friend eat so much in such a short time, and he still looked like he could keep going.

Matt walked towards Jake, who was sitting on the grass, and put his huge belly in front of his face in a teasing manner. "It was obvious I'd win, look how fat I am."

"I know."

"Put your hand here. Feel it churning all that food."

"What? No!"

"Come on, Jake, don't be a sore loser! Just a little rub!"

Jake sighed and placed his hand on Matt's enormous gut just to see if he'd shut up and let him digest all that food in peace. His friend couldn't stop laughing.

"Okay, that's enough," said Jake after giving his friend's belly a few pats. "Ugh, I'm so fucking full..."

Jake was pretty fat too, and his stomach could certainly hold far more food than the average person, but unlike Matt, he already seemed to have reached his limit. He let out a loud burp that made him feel just a little better.

"BUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRPPP!!!!!!!!!!"

"Dude, that's gross."

"Shut up. I can barely move."

"Well, just stay there then, it's not like you'd have to go anywhere. Our tent is right here, and it'll get dark soon."

"What if I need to go to the bathroom? I drank a lot of beer."

"Bro, stop complaining, you'll be fine soon. But now that you mention it, I think I'll go to the bathroom myself."

Matt turned around and started walking towards the forest nearby.

"Wait, Matt!"

"What? Too scared to be alone in the_wild_?" said Matt in a mocking tone.

"Ugh, whatever. Just go. Don't take too long."

Matt laughed and left towards the forest while Jake remained sitting on the floor, groaning and rubbing his round belly. Not like he could do much else.

But time passed, Matt still didn't come back, and Jake started to get worried. "Just what might be taking him so long?" he said to himself.

It was just then that he heard the first scream. A wordless scream of sheer terror. The second one clearly called his name. "JAAAAAAAAAAAKE!!!!!!!!!!!"

"Matt? What... what's happening?" Trembling, and with a huge effort, the pig managed to get up and hurried as fast as he could towards the source of the screams. "Ugh. I swear if this is a joke you'll pay for this!"

Another scream pierced the air. "HEEEELP!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!"

Jake was pretty sure at that point that it wasn't a prank. Matt's voice sounded genuinely desperate, and for the first time Matt started to worry about just _why_was his friend screaming for help in the first place. It didn't take long for him to find out.

There was a... thing. A creature. An aberration. He didn't know what to call it. He'd never seen something like that before. Hell, he didn't even know something like this existed. It was as big as a truck, and at first Jake thought that it looked like a gigantic feral dog, which also happened to be dripping a weird dark sludge from its slimy skin. It had a disproportionally long neck that ended in a lizard-like snout, and it had no visible eyes. It had big, webbed paws... and Matt was pinned under one of them.

"Jake, you came! Help me please, I'm begging you!" screamed Matt, with tears forming in his eyes.

Jake pondered for a single second if there was any point in trying to save his friend or if he should escape while he still could, but that proved to be too much. The monster extended his long neck and grabbed Jake by his shirt, dragging him towards its remaining front paw and pinning him under it just like it'd done to Matt.

"I'm sorry..." was the only thing Jake could think of saying as he saw Matt's expression of absolute despair.

The monster had Jake completely immobilized below its paw. It pressed him hard against the forest floor, making the pig groan in discomfort as his full belly was compressed. By the sounds Matt was making, Jake could guess that his friend was in a similar situation. Another loud sound followed soon.

"PRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRT."

"Did you... did you just fart, dude?!" said Jake.

"Shut up!" replied Matt.

"And you were calling me gross just because of a little burp back then..."

"Jake, now is definitely not the time to be worrying about that!!"

Indeed. But what else was there to do? Jake still didn't understand the monster's intentions. It could've easily killed them both already, yet it hadn't done that for some reason. The monster started kneading Jake's body like a cat, making his fat belly wobble. It brought its eyeless head near Jake and sniffed him. The pig trembled in fear, and let out a loud fart, even louder than Matt's.

"PPPPPPPRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRT!!!!!!!!!!"

"For fuck's sake!!" screamed Matt, his voice breaking.

The monster then turned its long neck towards Matt and sniffed him too. Jake took this moment to look at his friend. He was certainly terrified, and having the creature's mouth so close to him didn't seem to help. It was just then that Jake noticed that his friend had his pants down. His small cock and balls were barely visible under his extremely fat belly. The monster moved its snout next to Matt's crotch and sniffed harder.

"Go away... please go away!!"

But the monster didn't go away. Instead, it opened its mouth and stuck out a huge, drooling black tongue, which soon started licking Matt's crotch. The pig squealed in fear and squirmed trying to get out of the monster's hold, but it was useless, it had him completely restrained. The creature then ripped Matt's shirt as it moved its tongue towards the pig's belly, covering him with copious amounts of extremely viscous saliva.

Matt moaned and squirmed as the monster licked his belly button, and Jake couldn't help but notice that, somehow, his friend was apparently getting aroused by the whole thing, as his little cock seemed to be getting slightly bigger.

The monster kept licking Matt while using its paw to finish undressing him, until the pig was fully naked. It slurped on Matt's fat moobs, making him groan. Jake watched as his friend hopelessly tried to kick against the creature, who barely seemed to notice his struggles.

Soon Matt was completely covered by the slimy saliva, and his struggles seemed to be getting weaker. While still holding the pig firm under its paw, the monster moved its maw towards Matt's feet, and after giving them a few licks, it put both of them inside its jaws.

"No... no... nononononoNONONO!!!!!!!!"

But no matter how much Matt screamed, the monster didn't care at all, and kept introducing the pig's legs inside its cavernous mouth. Meanwhile, Jake could only watch, speechless, as his friend was getting devoured.

"Jake... help me please... JAKE!!!!!!!" cried Matt.

Even if he didn't feel as tired as he did, Jake doubted he could've done anything to help his friend. Or even himself. "I... I can't, bro. I'm sorry..."

The monster already had Matt's legs completely inside its mouth, and spent more time than necessary savoring the pig's crotch and ass before it resumed swallowing. But it soon stopped again. It had reached Matt's belly, which was so huge that it didn't seem to fit inside the monster's mouth.

Matt suddenly started laughing. "It can't eat me! My belly is so big that it can't fit inside its mouth! We might still have a chance!"

"But... what if it bites down?"

"It doesn't seem to have any teeth! Jake! We might... just... ugh..."

The monster didn't seem like it'd give up so easily. With half the pig already in its mouth, it used its paw to push Matt against its throat. And slowly but surely, Matt's huge, flabby belly started entering the monster's jaws, and the pig's short-lived relief turned back to desperation.

"This... this can't be happening! It's impossible!"

As much as it hurt to see his friend get eaten, Jake couldn't help but feel a little relieved, because that meant that he still could have a chance to survive. If the monster decided that Matt was too big to eat, then surely it'd try with Jake next, who was just a little less fat. Jake felt terrible as he thought it, but if one of them had to get eaten by this bizarre monster, he'd rather it be Matt. Maybe he'd have a chance to escape when the monster was full with his friend.

"Jake... please..."

Against all odds, the monster had managed to fit all of Matt's belly inside its mouth, and only his head remained outside, his eyes full of tears. Jake watched in disbelief as his friend's face sunk into the monster's throat and the creature finally managed to close its jaws again and focused on swallowing the huge, fat pig. The big bulge Matt made in the monster's neck descended slowly until it finally settled into the creature's belly.

The monster panted in apparent relief, having finally fulfilled its greedy goal of swallowing such big prey, then let out a huge blast of air in a loud burp that made the surrounding trees tremble.

"BLEEAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"Wow..."

The creature turned its head towards Jake, still pinned under its paw.

"That was a loud one, big guy. Or girl. Or whatever you are. Now... you'll let me go, right? I mean, you already ate a very fat pig, I don't think you have room for another one."

Even without eyes, the monster had a curious, almost playful expression. Maybe... maybe he still had a chance.

The monster moved its snout even closer and licked Jake's face, covering him in saliva.

"You... you just want to play, right? You're very... friendly..."

Another lick. And another burp right on Jake's face.

"Ughhhh..."

The creature kept licking Jake, while ripping his shirt with its paws just like it'd done to Matt minutes earlier. It kneaded on Jake's full belly for a while before it started licking it very enthusiastically. As the black tongue covered him in drool, Jake felt whatever strength he still had left in him starting to vanish at an alarming rate.

"Don't... be so rough, please. I ate a lot..."

Jake wasn't sure what to expect at that point. His only hope was that the monster would get bored and let him go after toying with him for a while. But with the way it seemed to be tasting him, it seemed very likely that the creature intended to eat him too after all. Not like he could do anything, as the monster's saliva seemed to have some sort of numbing effect on his body.

The monster spent a good while licking Jake's sensitive belly button, making him groan uncomfortably, and then moved its tongue upwards to the pig's belly and moobs once again, and finally to his face.

That was it. He was going to get eaten.

He closed his eyes. "Just... make it quick..."

As if it understood Jake's request, the monster engulfed the pig's head with its slimy mouth in one swift movement. But rather than feeling any kind of relief, Jake was overcome with terror as he faced his inevitable destiny towards the monster's pulsing throat.

The monster started swallowing immediately and Jake screamed into the abyss. He wanted to kick, he wanted to struggle. Anything so he wouldn't go down so easily. But he couldn't. His body refused to listen to him, even as the monster let go its grip on him to remove his pants. The only thing that made it just a little difficult for the monster to eat the now naked pig was his fat belly full of food.

The creature raised its long neck, putting Jake upside-down, but even with the help of gravity, the pig's belly was stuck in the monster's mouth. Evidently frustrated, the monster started pressing on the pig's plump ass, trying to push his prey inside. The pressure made Jake let out an extremely long and loud fart.

"PPPPPPPPPRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRFFFFFFFFFFFTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Everything was easier after that. The monster kept swallowing and pushing Jake's ass, and the pig slowly started descending through its tight throat. The monster took a moment to liberally lick Jake's crotch, and despite his best efforts, the pig couldn't help but get a bit aroused by the monster's treatment. Until it continued swallowing.

After a while, Jake reached a slightly more spacious room, which he assumed was the monster's stomach. He couldn't move, so he just waited until his whole body was unceremoniously deposited in the wet, hot chamber. Surprisingly, the stomach walls seemed to emit a faint light that let him see his surroundings. Namely, his friend Matt, unconscious. More specifically, Matt's fat ass.

It was extremely cramped, and having his face pressed against his friend's asshole didn't really help. The liquid in the stomach felt similar to the monster's saliva. It didn't seem to be burning him, at least not yet. And as terrified as he was, he couldn't help but start to feel dizzy and tired.

Jake tried to move away from Matt's pudgy ass, but in doing so he only managed to get a fart from his unconscious friend, right on his face.

"For fuck's sake, Matt!" he cried. "You're so fucking fat and gross!"

He knew that going camping with Matt was a bad idea. If only he'd stayed at home playing videogames, he wouldn't have ended up in a monster's stomach with his face planted between Matt's butt checks.

Not like that mattered anyway. With his belly full and inside a full belly, Jake fell asleep, his and his friend's fates uncertain.