Commission: The Vampire

Story by Sci the cheetah on SoFurry

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#1 of Story Commissions

A young wolf-deer hybrid has her dream of being with a vampire come true.

Commission story for http://www.furaffinity.net/user/icednero/

Written by myself.


Nero blushed as she heard the soft hiss in her ear. "W-What do you want from me?" she asked, her breath showing in the cold air as the cheetah gently pressed her back to the wall.

"I hunger," he told her softly, his paws slowly reaching out to grab her by the waist. "I've been longing for your blood for so long."

"Please, I don't..." The hybrid couldn't even bring herself to finish that sentence as she felt his tongue on her neck. It was so warm and inviting and sent a shiver down her spine. "I can't."

"You can," he said to her as he looked into her eyes. "You can't tell me you haven't been wanting this, my sweet."

She couldn't help but look deep into his eyes, falling into their hypnotic gaze. Though to be fair, she wasn't even sure he was using any hypnosis. He was right. She had read so many books about vampires, watched all of the movies and television shows. She wanted this. "Take me," she whispered as she leaned in, holding him tight as she pressed her nose against his chest.

"You willing to give in so easily," the cheetah said as he wrapped his arms.

"Sir Scitheon, we have been talking for weeks," she responded. "I've known from the start what you were."

"And what do you expect from this?" he asked as his fangs gently rubbed over her skin.

"I am yours for the taking. I give myself to you completely. My life is in your paws," she said softly as her paws rubbed over his chest.

He grinned as he took a step back and held out his arm. "Then come with me," he said to her.

She looked at him for a moment before slowly grabbing his arm and holding it tight, his warmth fighting the cold that surrounded them. "Where are we going?"

"My apartment," he told her as they exited the alley. He chuckled at her confused look. "You didn't think I lived in a castle or anything, did you?"

"Would have been nice," she said as they walked down the street.

"Castles don't have heat in the winter," he reminded her as he wrapped his arm around her and held her close.

"Speaking of heat, how do you have body heat?" she asked him.

"Vampires aren't what you would expect. Not all of the rumors about us are true," he said to her. "While we do live a lot longer than most, we aren't dead."

"I guess I should be thankful for that," she reminded herself.

The two walked about five blocks before they stopped at her apartment building. "I thought you were bringing me back to your apartment," she said to him.

"I am. This is where I live," he told her.

Her cheeks grew red. How could she have not known they lived in the same building? She didn't say anything more as they walked in. As they stepped into the elevator, she could only hope he wouldn't hit the third floor. Luckily, they were heading to the top floor, the seventh.

"Are you afraid of heights?" he asked her.

"A little bit," she admitted to him.

"Well, don't you worry. While vampires cannot fly, we can levitate very well," he told her as he pressed his nose into her neck. It was as though he could smell her blood through her skin and it sent another shiver down her spine.

"Will you turn me into a vampire?" she asked as the doors opened and they stepped into the hallway.

"Is that what you want?" he asked her.

"I don't know," Nero admitted. "It has crossed my mind."

He chuckled a bit as he opened the door to his vast apartment. "If it is what you want, then I will," Scitheon told her, the cheetah's tail twitching a bit as he closed the door. He stepped into the kitchen and poured two glasses of wine. "Here. To calm the nerves and to warm you."

She smiled as she took the glass and took a sip. She looked up at him, inches away as he sipped the wine as well. The wolf-deer hybrid smiled as she set the glass down on the counter and leaned up to press her lips to his. His glass clinked as he set it on the counter next to hers and wrapped his arms around her.

His breath was hot on her lips as her breasts pressed against his chest. She could feel his tongue glide along her lower lip and she opened her muzzle for him. She let her own tongue glide out and rub over his fangs as they kissed. He broke the kiss for a moment to start unbuttoning her blouse. She thought about how they had met in a bookstore and he had quickly entranced her with his words. All the little coffee meetings they'd had at night leading up to this moment. She let her thoughts distract her from her nerves as a moment later, he slid her top off, revealing that she wasn't wearing a bra underneath.

"It's as though you were hoping for this tonight," he said to her. Her cheeks grew red at the statement as she opened her muzzle, trying to find the right words. "It's okay. I was, too."

She just smiled and started to undo his buttons as she kissed him again. Once they were both shirtless, he pushed her back until she was laying on the couch, his body lying over hers. He then leaned in, his breath hot on her neck as he gave her neck another lick. "Do it," she whispered.

Scitheon's tail twitched at hearing the request and he sunk his teeth in, causing her to shudder. Her blood was so sweet. He could hear her tail trying to swish back and forth on the couch as he sucked the blood from her neck. She gripped him tight as his paw slid up to grope her right breast. He loved the feeling of it in his paw as he drank his fill, but not wanting to drain her completely, he stopped and kissed her, some of her blood still on his lips as she licked over them.

The cheetah felt her paws undoing his pants and, a moment later, he was sliding them off. Her pants quickly followed and the two of them could now feel their hot bodies directly against each. His shaft was throbbing hard, and her pussy lips were quite wet and waiting. But neither made any move towards each other just yet.

Slowly, Nero broke the kiss and looked up at him. "This has always been a dream of mine," she admitted to him.

"I know," he said to her. He looked directly into her eyes and she could feel his mind seeping into hers. "You are mine forever. My meal, my lover, my pet."

The thoughts were being pushed into her mind and while she knew most would resist, she gladly accepted them. She hadn't even realized that her body was still tense as she found it quickly relaxing against the couch. Her body felt so hot as she needed him inside her. She slowly reached down and rubbed over his shaft. Her eyes glanced down as she felt over it.

"You're a hybrid, too?" she asked him as she looked back into his eyes, wanting to feel more of his mind in hers.

"I am," he said as he felt her paw gliding over both his barbs and his knot which had already started to grow at the attention. "What is it that you want, my pet?"

"Fuck me," she begged as she pressed his tip to her entrance.

He panted a bit as he pushed into her, their bodies becoming one as he took her. Every thrust sent a shiver down her spine as his knot slapped her lips, begging to tie her. Her tight passage squeezed over him as he was rough with her. Her voice was loud as she moaned out, joining his grunts and groans as they sang a chorus of making love. He switched them around halfway through, having her ride him. His claws dug into her skin, each cut in her skin causing her to moan out more.

Finally, she pushed down completely, taking in his knot. The cheetah moaned out as his knot swelled, tying them together as he filled her up, her belly swelling slightly from the sheer amount. His claws dug into her until his orgasm finally subsided and she collapsed on him.

"Damn," she said to him.

"Someone like it rough?" he asked her with a chuckle.

"Only with you," she chuckled in response. "Though all of these cuts are going to be hard to explain at work."

Scitheon bit his paw and held it up to her muzzle, blood licking from the two puncture wounds. "Drink. It won't turn you fully, but it'll speed up the healing."

She blushed and gave his paw a lick. "And if I did want to be a vampire?" she asked him.

"There is something I have to admit to you," he said to her. "I am not a real vampire. Yes, I am right now, but I used my science to make myself this way."

"Science?" she asked him, a confused look on her muzzle.

"I am a mad scientist by trade. This was an experiment that went very right," he admitted.

"So, you could make me one whenever I wanted?" she asked.

"Yes. Though it is very reversible, as well," he told her. "I am sorry for ly..."

She stopped him with a kiss, to which he returned. "It's okay. You made my dream come true," she said to him. "Just let me know when you're ready for more."

With that she grunted and slipped off him, his knot having deflated a bit. He watched as she slipped into his bedroom. He stayed lying there for a moment before he finally got up and followed her in. They spent the rest of the evening trying every position possible, both of their bodies torn up from the others' claws and teeth as they ravaged each other.

Finally, as dawn broke, Nero watched him sleep, smiling as she rested her head on his chest, deciding that she'd decide what she wanted when she awoke. For now, she had the best night of her life and she wanted to remember it as such.