Fragments; Dthana T'Kaltyae Saga
#5 of Dthana T'Kaltyae Saga
This is a story continuation of a story I am rewriting since I've improved my writing style. (now it is harder to get lost and my grammar makes more sense). It seems from a professor's comment to me upon trying to take her English class to improve my grammar she said, you don't have any problems with; dialogue, romantic scenes, action scenes, creative writing, plot, sub plots, story line plot twists, descriptive writing and character study that everyone else does so I'm going to drop you from my class because you are too smart.
I'm hoping I have no problem with sex or depraved scenes either perhaps one of you will give me a good synopsis critique upon my latest effort?!
This starts off with the story of the Squirrel pilot that was taken aboard Dthana's pirate crew-ship in a rescue and his experiences to portray his personality. I am in the process of re-writing the entire Dthana saga. I will delete Bang as i titled the story in the beginning. eventually i will draw a graphic novel of the entire story.
This story has multiple themes it has blood and gore in it, plus romance and love.
This is a chapter in a saga i am rewritting, normally the latest chapter goes in order this one will be chapter 12, but it is the first one in my new writing style and I wanted to see if I am doing better. So Furry is more of a writer's site than Fur Affinity is and i was hoping it would get more exposure. I am hoping my grammar is greatly improved since according to an English Professor I have none of the problems other writers find so difficult to overcome.