Father figure - chapter 2 "The Father Figure" (TRAINING GONE WILD REWRITTEN)

Story by Buffy the lion on SoFurry

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#5 of Father Figure


[Just a little note before the story. This is chapter 2 of "father figure" but it's completely rewritten because the original chapter 2 was terribly written. So I sat down and rewrote the entire Chapter 2 from scratch with a brand new story. I hope you enjoy this one more than the previous "chapter 2"]

It's a beautiful Saturday morning as Jim opens his eyes from a deep slumber. He slowly turns around to look at his alarm clock, 10:15...

Jim's eyes grow wide with shock, "quarter past ten?" he loudly exclaims as he jumps out of bed. "Shit!" he says out loud as he exits his room. His mom isn't at home as always, she was up the whole night and probably left earlier as she's busy with her biggest case yet. Jim soon finds himself running from the house towards the mall. Bruce invited him for a day out to the amuzement park in the neighbouring town and he's late. Pretty soon, his phone rings.

"Hi there, it's Jim speaking" he says as he answers the phone.

"Hey Jimmy, it's Bruce. Where are you?"

"I'm on my way, I overslept" Jim says, still out of breath from running.

"Well, where are you now? I'll just pick you up there."

"I'm at the corner of Strews and walkabout avenue, not too far." Jim says.

"Okay, wait there. I'm on my way." Bruce says with a chuckle.

Soon afterwards the car stops besides Jim and he gets in. The car smells nice, other than the smell of medicine it normally has on Thursays.

"Hey, sorry I'm late. I kinda overslept" Jim apologizes yet again.

"No problem, I understand." Bruce says with a smile as he takes a left turn.

"Thanks, Fun-Fetch Amuzement Park here we come!" Jim shouts in excitement.

He suddenly stops to think, it's only been two weeks since he started training with Bruce and he's already more cheerful. It's like Bruce is the father that he never had, the hole inside of him feels filled up when they're together. Secretly, he considers him as his dad.

"So, how's school?" Bruce asks, desperately trying to break the sudden silence in the car.

"I'm doing good. Got 78% for Geography the other day." Jim answers.

"Wow, that's great. I'm glad you're doing better." Bruce says as they exit the town.

"Yeah, it feels good too. Especially when someone recognizes good grades, you know." Jim continues.

They don't talk much throughout the rest of the drive, in fact the rest of the drive is quite short, and soon the car pulls in at the parking lot of Fun-Fetch Amuzement park.

"Well, here we are." Bruce says as the two lions get out of the car.

"Yeah, we sure are" Jim replies as he looks upwards to the big sign at the entrance.

The inside of the park is awesome. Rollercoasters, games, bumper cars, ghost tunnels and much more. Clowns and fire-breathing gymnasts walk around entertaining everyone they pass.

"Where do we start?" Bruce asks.

Jim thinks for a moment, "How about the Terror Track?" he says, smiling gleefully.

"The terror track? You do know that it's the scariest rollercoaster here, right?" Bruce asks, he seems a bit worried.

"Oh, come on scaredy cat" Jim teases.

"Fine, but don't come crying to me when you wet your pants." Bruce teases back.

Not too long after, they stand in front of the colossal Terror Track. The huge purple rollercoaster towers up high in front of them as the line grows shorter. Most just turn around near the front of the line and only a few brave it. Pretty soon, they're at the front of the line. Bruce lets out a loud gulp as they the operator comes by to lock them inside their seats.

"No turning back now." Jim says as he looks at the track before them, his eyes grow wide with angst.

"Remind me why I agreed to sit at the front with you?" Bruce asks, as he feels his heart climbing up his throat.

The rollercoaster suddenly jerks forward as the mechanism starts to move the carts forward, a few carts back a girl already starts to scream. Both Jim and Bruce share a quick chuckle, but the chuckles soon becomes looks of fear as the carts move up a steep angle. At the top they move around a small curve and then suddenly the carts plummet down to earth at what seems to be the speed of light. Then it suddenly changes it's direction upwards and before they know it it flies through a loop before it goes up a small curve, then it speeds back down in a clockwise direction and takes a few wide turns. Slowly the carts enter the same spot where they began and the ride is over.

"Woah, what a ride!" Jim shouts as he and Bruce stumble off the platform.

"Damn, that was rough. Remember me not to go on that contraption again." Bruce replies.

The rest of the day is fun filled with games from "Spin and win" to "Skittles", food like hot dogs and candy floss and a whole lot of fun rides.

As the sun sets, they head back to the car, talking about all the stuff they did and soon the car exits the parking lot.

"You know, out of all the things we did today, the rollercoaster must have been the best." Bruce says as they exit the town.

"Yeah, it was definitely the highlight of the day." Jim says.

Once again the conversation grows silent, but after a few minutes, the silence is broken by a loud bursting sound from the engine followed by a huge amount of steam bursting from the hood.

"What the hell?" Bruce says out loud as he pulls to the side of the road.

They jump out and take a look at the engine.

"Great, a waterpipe burst. Get my cellphone in the car and call your mom, tell her you'll be a little late and that I'll drop you off in front of your house." Bruce says.

Jim climbs into the car and calls his mom, telling her he'll be home a little later.

"Well, what did she say?" Bruce asks as Jim emerges from the car.

"She seems okay with it, she should understand" Jim replies.

"Good, we're going to be here for a while." Bruce says as takes the phone from Jim.

Bruce calls someone over the phone, standing some distance from the car and Jim. Jim turns around to look at the engine, boiling water still leaks from the pipe.

"It's going to be hours before roadside assistance gets here." Bruce says as he lets out a sigh.

"Why? It's a fifteen minute drive?" Jim replies.

"That's service for you these days. They don't care about the service anymore, just the damn money you have to pay them." Bruce replies.

Seconds turn into minutes and minutes turn into hours, four hours later, they still sit outside in the dark with no assistance.

"Call your mom again. Tell her that you're okay and that we'll be sleeping at a motel or something. We're not too far from a small motel, we can spend the night there and worry about the car tomorrow. Tell her I'm sorry for this." Bruce mentions.

"Sure, it's good." Jim says as he takes the phone from Bruce.

"Hey mom, it's me and I'm okay. We're still waiting for roadside assistance so we're just going to sleep over at this little motel not far from here. I'll be home tomorrow, I promise." Jim says and he closes the call, her phone was on voicemail.

"Come on, we have to go." Bruce says and he exits the car along with Jim.

Slowly they walk along the side of the road with nothing but a flashlight, the light from the motel gleaming in he near distance. The side of the road is rockier than it looks, especially when it's dark. Every now and again one of them bumps a toe against a rock and soon it turns into a game about who bumps his toes the least.

The inside of the motel is small, and soon they enter their small room. The interior decoration of the room is terrible, dark red curtains cover the windows ledged into the dull white wall. There's a single doorless arch leading to the bathroom with a shower and toilet and back inside the main room stands one double bed with a single tv.

"Ah damn, only one bed.I guess I'll just sleep on the floor." Bruce mentions.

"No, that's not necessary. We're both hetrosexual males with nothing to hide, right?" Jim says.

"Well, if you're sure, then I guess we could both sleep in one bed." Bruce replies. Then he remembers the day he gave Jim the shot, he remembers Jim teenage ass flashes through his mind. He starts to feel uncomfortable but he can't back out now, Jim might notice something...

"I'm going to shower" Bruce says, breaking the silence that swept throught the room.

"Yeah, I'm going to go to bed. It's been a long day." Jim replies.

Jim and Bruce part ways. Jim sits down on the bed, the damn thing is hard and lets out a loud squeek as he sits down. He takes off his shirt and folds it up so he can wear it the next day. He gently tubs over his furry, muscled chest with his paw before lying down on the bed, making it utter a loud squeek once again.

Inside the shower, Bruce lathers up his big muscled body with soap. He gently washes his furry upper body, taking in all the pleasure he possibly can. He takes his huge cock in his paw and stares at it. It doesn't matter how horny he is right now, he can't jack off in the same place as Jim. On the other hand, he can't go to sleep in the same bed as Jim without having jacked off. He musters up all his will power and rinses off his cock and then the rest of his body. He gets out of the shower and puts his underpants back on, then he enters the room again. Jim is already lying in bed, under the blankets.

"I hope you don't mind me sleeping in my underpants. I hate sleeping with Jeans on." Bruce mentions.

"Nah, it's okay. I'm doing hte same." Jim says.

Bruce shuts off the light and climbs into the bed next to Jim. He has never felt this uncomfortable before, yet he can't keep his curiosity to himself.

"Jim, while we're here now, would you like to talk to me about anything?" Bruce asks.

"Like what?" Jim replies.

"I don't know. Anything." Bruce says as he turns on his back, tucking his arms behind his head.

"Well, there is this girl at school that I like and I don't know how to talk to her. What do I do?" Jim asks.

"Just be yourself, if you pretend to be someone you're not, it's not going to work out. Trust me, I can talk from experience." Bruce says.

"You were married?" Jim asks, sitting up in bed.

"Yes, we got devorced about ten years ago." Bruce says. Jim can hear the sadness in his voice.

"I'm sorry to hear that" Jim says, still sitting up straight in bed.

He glances over to Bruce. The moonlight shines on Bruce, he looks so sad. Suddenly Jim looks at Bruce with a different perspective, the moonlight makes him strangely attractive.

"Bruce, can I ask another question?" Jim asks as he still finds himself staring at the middle aged male lion next to him, his muscles curving in the moonlight.

"Sure, fire away" Bruce replies, but he isn't prepared for what's to follow.

"When you were about my age, did you ever... Did you ever think about how it would be to have sex with another male?" Jim asks, ashamedly.

Bruce is stunned, he never would expect Jim to ask something this private.

"Uhm, not that I can remember... Do you?" Bruce asks as he too sits up in bed.

Jim looks down, feeling a little ashamed, "Sometimes. I just want to try it once to see what it's like."

Images of Jim's ass flashes through Bruce's mind yet again.

"Well, if you do it one day, do it with someone you trust, not just anybody. Even though it would be an experement, your first time having sex should be special." Bruce advises, but is once again not prepared for what's about to follow.

"I trust you." Jim mentions. Bruce's whole body freezes, the teenager just asked him to have sex?

"Jim, I'm not sure we should..." Bruce starts, but is interrupted by Jim.

"Please Bruce, you're the only one I can trust with this." Jim pleads

Bruce looks over to Jim, "On one condition, it changes nothing about our friendship" he says.

"I promise it won't" Jim confirms as he gets up and sits on Bruce's stomach. He gently rubs his paws over Bruce's huge pecs and the side of his body, up his arms and around his face.

He bends over and licks Bruce's nipples, Bruce throws back his head, "Oh, that felt good." he says and Jim continues to do it. Bruce lifts up his arms and caresses Jim's upper body, moving from his shoulders to his pecs, form his pecs to the side of his upper body and then to his ass. He gently squeezes Jim's ass cheeks while Jim still tries to lick his nipples.

They both stop. Jim allows Bruce to take off his underpants, showing his cock glistening in the moonlight. Bruce was never into dicks, but this is different, he feels attracted to it, he wants to lick it, he wants to suck it, he wants to taste the juices that gets released from it.

"Come closer." Bruce invites Jim closer to his head. He takes Jim's now stiff cock in his paw and gives it a single lick. Jim gasps as a rush like he never felt before fills his body, he feels his cock pulsate as the cum shoots out in strings all over Bruce's face and into his mouth. Bruce grabs Jim's cock and quickly shoves it into his mouth, sucking him off as he continues to cum, swallowing every drop of lion juice he can. Jim finally stops cumming and removes his semi hard shaft from Bruce's mouth, he runs it down Bruce's neck and chest, down his stomach, over his cock still in his underpants and finally his cock reaches the matrass.

Bruce still tries to get the salty taste from his mouth when he feels his underpants being taken off. He feels Jim's mouth wrap around his cock and he starts to feel as Jim sucks on his delicously huge cock. Feelings of pleasure he can't describe fills his body as Jim's mouth moves along his shaft, his tongue wrapping around his shaft and giving his head a bit of extra attention as he pulls out. Jim leaves Bruce's cock and starts licking his balls gently, sending wave after wave of pleasure through Bruce's huge muscled body. Jim sits up straight and looks Bruce straight in the eyes. He takes Bruce's cock in his paw and aligns it with his ass. He gently sits down on Bruce's cock as it slides into his tight lion hole.

Bruce moans as he feels his cock rub against Jim's tight inner walls as Jim starts to move up and down. It hurts like hell, but Jim likes it, he moves faster and faster with every upward thrust, almost sending Bruce over the edge, but Bruce stops him just in time.

"What's wrong did I hurt you?" Jim asks worried as he pants.

"No, no, I just don't want to cum inside you. I want to cum all over you." Bruce says and they change positions. Jim lies down on his back, and Bruce positions him above Jim, letting his cock hang above Jim's pecs.

Jim takes Bruce's cock in his paw and starts jacking him off. He goes gently at first, but the moans of the older lion makes him excited, causing him to jack Bruce off faster and faster with each stroke, sending Bruce over the edge. String after string of hot lion jizz shoot from Bruce's huge cock as Jim continues to jack it off, making sure that every drop escapes so Bruce can finish the job by licking him clean. Soon after the deed is done, and Bruce licks the last of his cum from Jim's nipple.

"Wow, that was... awesome." Bruce says as he falls down on the bed next to Jim.

"Yeah, it was fantastic." Jim says.

They snuggle in each others arms for a while and both fall into a deep slumber...


Well, that's chapter 2 rewritten. I hope you like it more than the previous disastrous chapter.

All comments, questions and suggestions are more than welcome! Your honesty from the last chapter made me rethink the story in a possible new direction which is a very good thing. I thank you all!

Please be as honest with this one too. I hope you enjoyed it. :)