Weak Flesh - Chapter 1

Story by TirTheWolf on SoFurry

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First of all I want to thank Cygil (

@cygil

at Furaffinity) so much for giving me my first commission and boosting my self-confidence! I really hope he, and you all, like this story, and that there will be many more!

Part 2


Weak Flesh - Chapter 1

"Pathetic." A loud huff echoed through the dark cave. Multiple screens, constructed of odd metals illuminated the cave slightly in a green light. In the middle of the cave, a large round platform suspended from the cavern ceiling, on which a black creature, the source of the huff, was stomping around with its hooves, deep in thought. Next to it was a large screen, seemingly the main console.

The creature, which was at least eight foot in size, wore a mostly black armor that accentuated its strong muscles. The only burst of colour on the beast was a yellow mane of hair with a blue dash across the middle, as well as a tail of similar colours, and a pair of glowing blue wings that potruded from its back resembling leafs of a tree.

"The main intelligent species of this planet is so pathetically oblivious. Soon we can put our plan into motion. What a fantastic endless source of energy they will prove." The beast seemed to be talking to himself, as no one was around, however the other members of its species did hear what he had to say due to their mental connection. They acknowledged its words, filling its mind with cackling, from which the beast could not hold back a grin of its own.

"Now for the best part." The massive eight foot beast licked its lips, "Time to see just how deviant these creatures can be." It turned back towards the main console. "Bring it to me."

On the console was the image of a man with details in large red letters written next to it.

Name: Luke Fraser

Sex: Male

Age: 24

Rank: Citizen

Nutritional potential: Maximum

Apart from this information, a satellite image of his current location could be seen. With his gaze fixed on the satellite image, the massive beast gave of a satisfied breath of air. "Now."

Luke was staring out of the window of the bus into the stormy city streets, pondering about this odd day he was living through. It was three in the afternoon and usually he would have been still at work until five, but when the head of IT came into his office, he got told to take the rest of the day off. He did not complain, you take what you are given, but it was the first time such a thing happened since he started working there two years ago. Apart from this, on his way to the office he noticed two very peculiar men sitting right behind him dressed all in black, not talking a single word and sitting there as if frozen in time. These people were sitting on the seats right behind him again on his way home.

He tried to ignore them however, and shrugged his worries off as him being a bit paranoid after a stressful week. After all, coincidences happen, and why would anyone be following him of all people. He was not very good at the job he was doing, he did not have any relationship, and he never did a single illegal thing in his life apart from smoking the occasional joint, which would hardly warrant someone following him.

His stop was coming up so Luke rose from his seat to press the stop button, eyeing the men behind him. They did not look at him and just continued staring ahead. The bus came to a halt and Luke got off, throwing back a last look through the window at the two men. Still no reaction from them. He breathed out, releasing some of his tension.

After a short five-minute walk on the sidewalk, he reached his small apartment and unlocked his door. Given that he had a lot of time left on his half-free day, Luke decided to relax with some video games. As he put down his bag next to the door and walked through the corridor into his living room, he felt that something was off. He could not quite put his hand on what that was, but he felt queasy. He had a look at his open room kitchen. Everything was at its right place. Scanning his living room, everything also felt like when he left in the morning.

Filled with a slight amount of paranoia, he had a look through his bedroom and bathroom too, both of which also showed no sign of change.

"Why am I so on edge today?" He checked himself in the mirror. "God you look terrible. You got to do something about those eye bags." He flicked of the light.

He went back to the living room, picking up a beer from the kitchen on his way, and let his body sink into the saggy couch. He popped open the beer and took a large swig.

"Time to get these nerves back under control." He took the remote lying on the couch, turned the TV on, and switched it to his console output.

After several hours of gaming, and a few more beer, leaving him light-headed, it was time for Luke to catch some sleep. He contemplated on having a drunk jerk-off session before bed, but the beer left Luke not only to not care about dental hygiene, nor skin care, but also too lazy to jerk off. He got up from the sofa, knocking over some beer bottles and just dragged himself onto his bed, falling face first onto his soft and inviting matress. He fell asleep without a worry, right there and then.

At first his dreams where his usual, horny escapes into his dark sexual fantasies-filled world. Having no partner, this was his place to live out sucking huge cocks dry, and being abused by hard, cum-dripping dicks. Images of litres of cum, pain, dominance, piss, and many, many cocks of all sizes flashed through his mind. However soon after, odd dreams started to fill his mind instead. He heard screams as well as inhuman sounds, clicking, like those of insects, amplified to almost deafening volume. He could not see anything in these dreams but he felt a coldness, as if drowning in the ocean, but his body suspended in space, as if floating freely. His dreams did not last long and he woke up abruptly.

The first thing he noticed, was the lack of air. He tried to draw a deep breath but his mouth was only met with a thick, almost gelatine-like liquid. As for his vision, all he could see was a blurry mix of green and light blue, and his eyes could not adjust as if underwater. All he could make out was a green, net-like structure a few inches from his body. It almost looked like a plant in which he was encased. He tried to move his hands, but they were stuck behind his back and the resistance of his liquid cage proved too strong.

As the liquid started to push down his throat, he began to panic. He tried to scream, but no sound left his mouth. He was going to die, without knowing how or where, just drowning in some cage like an animal. He could feel how the liquid reached his lungs, filling them. His vision grew even blurier and darker. In a few seconds it was going to be over and he was going to see what the afterlife actually looked like. He tried to accept that fact, but his panic was still fighting. Then his consciousness went.

His dreams returned. Maybe this was simply a nightmare and he now entered the next one. He heard the inhuman sounds again, chittering. They grew louder and louder, then suddenly stopped. He could feel vibrations as if something massive was moving around. He also could see vague green lights, and a massive shadow crossing the lights. Then there was a laugh, resembling almost a human one, but deeper and almost diabolical. The laugh cut off and darkness and silence returned.

He did not know exactly how much time passed, but he knew he was not having nightmares. He was also certain that at least multiple days must have passed, with him being imprisoned in some kind of purgatory. Maybe this is what the afterlife is like? Maybe I will be stuck in this for the rest of eternity now? Panic started to set in once more as these thoughts invaded his mind. As he started to feel the desperation build up inside, he could make out a light. It was faint, but having been incased in complete darkness, he immediately could make it out. The light was approaching his prison and soon engulfed all of it.

In an instant something cut through the front of his encasing, and the liquid started to rush out, sweeping him along. He got flushed onto bare stone floor, lying there completely naked. As his eyes finally adjusted again to his surrounding he could see that he was indeed in a massive cave. His arms free from the resistance of the liquid, he propped himself up from the ground and tried to stand. He struggled to do so and could feel that his muscles were not as strong as they used to. He realised he might have been in his prison much longer than he initially thought.

He finally looked at the light, trying to make out its source, however he was too blinded by it and only saw a shadow of about seven foot in size which seemed to be holding the light. The shadow approached him further with loud taps from the liquid it waded through. Standing right in front of Luke, he saw that the creature had hooves and looked almost dragon-like. As he finally got to make out the creature holding the light, it moved behind him.

"Walk."

Luke shuddered. A deep voice echoed from the creature through the cave. The voice was inhumanly deep. He recognised it from one of his nightmares, which confirmed his suspicions that they were no nightmares after all and that he must have been in a sort of comatose state. Still frozen in place, he suddenly felt an electric shock run through his upper-back. Luke screamed out in pain, echoing through the cave. This was quickly followed by the smell of burnt flesh.

"Walk."

The creature pushed him forward,and Luke did not want to get shocked again. From the small cave in which he was there was only a single exit. He complied and walked towards it. They wandered through a tunnel for a couple of minutes, in complete silence as Luke was too afraid, and too confused, to say anything. The tunnel, as well as his initial cave all looked incredibly clean, considering they seem to be natural cave formations, so Luke wondered if this creature lived here and kept it clean. Luke could soon make out light from an other, more spacious cavern. The creature behind him stopped but pushed him forward, urging him to continue. Luke entered what looked almost like a throne room.

"There you are. Finally I'll get to see you." At the far end of the hall, on top of a set of low stairs on a throne cast from a single piece of rock, Luke could make out another beast. This one was slightly larger, and, just like the previous one, looked like a dragon. On its head it had yellow and blue hair, standing out in the dark cave, as well as a long and bushy tail of similar colours. It had an air of superiority about itself as it moved towards to Luke.

"You must have so many questions. But don't worry, you'll get all your answers over the next weeks."

Weeks?! Luke felt fear rise in him. He was a prisoner of these beasts and they were not planning on releasing him soon, or even, ever.

"Why me? What do you plan to do with me? I have done nothing wrong!" Luke finally yelled out.

"Oh no, you have done everything right, that is why you are here and no one else." The creature was now just a couple of feet away from him and stopped.

"You see, we observed you, and you are such an interesting specimen."

Luke immediately had images of the people in the bus in his head.

"Observe? But everyone would immediately spot you outside!"

The beast gave off a deep and hellish laugh.

"Oh but we have our ways. And yes, you are right, those two human figures were some of my people indeed."

Confusion mixed in with Lukes fear. Luke did not mention those people, how could he know?

"You will learn soon enough." Another smirk flashed on the beasts face.

"As for my introducing, I am Regal. But you will not speak that name. To you, its master." The beast stepped up in front of Lukes face, which barely reached to the beasts belly.

"Now I do have a present for you." Regal took out a little ring from one of his pockets and as he squeezed it, it increased in size. It had now the size if a bracelet. "Hold still if you want to live."

Luke was to scared to move either way and held his breath, closing his eyes.

Regals massive hands moved down to the human, reaching between his legs. Instinctively, Luke took a step back. Regal was quicker, and his hand reached Lukes ball-sack before he could get away enough. The ring jumped onto it and shrank, now sitting at the base of his balls as a thin band. Luke could not feel any difference and was just happy that it did not hurt.

"You will need to learn to obey better." With a quick swipe, Regals hand hit the side of Lukes face, sending him flying five feet and knocking him prone. The entire right side of his face was swollen in an instant, and grew blue.

"You humans are made of such weak flesh. But do not worry, I will not destroy you, as long as you obey. And you will soon enough."

Luke lay on the ground, trying to regain some strength. The ringing in his ear was deafening, and the pain was excruciating. His lip was bust open and blood was dripping on the stone floor.

"Clean that."

Luke heard what was said, but he did not understand why. He was still just sitting there, trying to understand the situation. Regal approached quickly with his hooves clacking on the ground.

"I will not repeat myself!"

His massive hand grabbed Lukes head and pressed it against the stone, exactly where his little pool of blood formed. The pain of his swollen face being pressed against the hard floor was nearly too much to bear for Luke.

"Use your tongue, slave! Now!"

Luke could not deal any longer with the pain, so his tongue slipped out of his mouth. He pushes it against the stone, slowly slithering it through his already dried blood. The taste of iron and dirt invaded his mouth. Regals grip loosened.

"Good, good. See, that wasn't so difficult? Just enjoy being able to live all your deviant fantasies. Here, nobody will judge you." He stood back up. "Now, that was your first lesson. Time for you to recover and come back for more after that."

As soon as Regal finished his sentence, the creature that brought Luke here from his initial cave entered. It bowed deeply to Regal and then hurried towards Luke who was still licking his blood. It picked him up by the neck putting him back on his feet, the urged him towards the tunnel Luke initially entered the hall from. As they walked through the tunnel once more, millions of thoughts flashed through Luke's head. Why was this Regal so brutal to him? What was their goal with this? And what was that ring around his balls? He worried he was never going to get the answers to any of his questions.

As they entered the cave, Luke noticed how everything was cleaned up. The liquid was gone, as was his broken prison. Instead he now saw a green egg, about human sized, standing where he was imprisoned before. The creature behind him pushed Luke towards the egg.

"Sleep."

Luke was once more confused but stepped towards the egg. As he did, with a loud slurping sound, it opened up. Luke stopped and looked back at the creature, which raised its machine that gave him the electric shock previously. Luke walked even closer, and as he did, the egg opened even further. He stepped inside, and as soon as he did, the egg zipped close. He now realised this was exactly what his previous prison was like. He tried to open the egg and break free, but the material felt like metal, unbreakable to him. He noticed how fairly rapidly, a liquid started to fill the egg. The same liquid that he was incased in previously. He panicked more and more and started screaming.

"Let me out, let me out! Please I beg you, everything but this again! Please!"

No reply, and the light that the creature was carrying departed too. The liquid now reached Lukes head. He took a deep breath, but as soon as he ran out, he could not fight the liquid flooding his mouth and nose. Soon after fighting for breath, his vision went dark, and so did his consciousness.

Again, dreams entered his minds. But they were different this time. He dreamed of Regal. The creature commanded him to kneel in front of him and open his mouth. The beast then released a torrent of piss into his mouth, immediately pushing his gargantuan cock down his throat. Piss was streaming into Lukes stomach as he could feel his own cock become erect from the abuse. He wanted more and did not want the stream to stop. His dream then morphed into a different scene. Regal was lying on the ground choking Luke, while Luke was riding his meat. He was impaled, and it felt as if his insides were being destroyed, but he enjoyed it, again seeing his own cock bounce up and down in a rock-hard state.

He continued through countless other dreams just like this and began to lose track of the number of them. He simply welcomed the positive interlude in contrast to what he experienced outside. As he dreamed of satisfying Regals massive cock again and again, he could feel something change in his mind. He wanted to be released from his cocoon and see Regal in front of him again. As soon as he thought of this, he could see a light approach him again. His prison was cut open once more.

The creature walked Luke through the tunnel once more. Luke could feel a beard on his chin which was not there when he first arrived here, as well as his face having fully recovered. The fear of how long he has already been here started to rise up, but he soon subdued this, as he just wanted to see Regal. He walked into the hall once more.

"I hope you enjoyed your rest? You got the best room." Regals laugh echoed through the hall. Luke started walking towards Regal who was completely naked this time. His all-black skin was contrasted by a huge green horse-like cock hanging down to his knees. As Luke came within a few feet of Regal, his massive right hand wrapped around Lukes throat, leaving just enough leeway to allow him to barely breath. He raised Luke off the ground.

"There there. Lets not rush things." On of Regals fingers loosened and moved over Lukes mouth. His finger was as nearly as big as Lukes cock. Luke felt ashamed by this.

"Open."

Luke did not have time to think about what Regal meant, and running out of patience Regal forced his finger into Lukes mouth. Luke accepted his captors will and without any second thought started sucking on the finger. It tasted like dried sweat and piss, as if Regal just released himself and paid no heed to keep himself clean. Luke was confused. Why was he immediately so willing? Why did he enjoy this so much.

"You grow willing even quicker than I expected. Pathetic." Regal started fucking Lukes mouth with his finger, laughing loudly.

Luke could feel blood rush into his cock. He should have felt embarrassment, but he did not. He should have felt afraid of his captor, but he did not. He did not understand what was happening, but he surrendered himself fully to the enjoyment of sucking on this massive dirty finger and his captor calling him pathetic as he did so just lead to Luke becoming even more eager.

"Yesss, surrender. No fear, no hate, just lust and submission." Regal brought his face close to Luke. His blue eyes were scanning Lukes face, his mouth grinning with pleasure from seeing this human so submissive.

Lukes mind was filled with pleasure, and he needed to release that. As he was suspended in mid-air, he moved his hand to his now fully erect cock. He started stroking it quickly, as he could feel his orgasm nearing. But it never came. No matter how much he jerked his meat, it always felt as if his orgasm was just about to happen, never doing so. Regal laughed into Lukes face, the hot breath hitting his face.

"Did you already forget about that little present I gave you?" He pointed to Lukes balls. "You will have to first convince me that you are my pet. My slave. My toy."

He pulled out his finger, leaving strands of saliva hanging from Lukes mouth. Lukes mouth was agape. He wanted more.

"Turn around. Lets see how... receptive you are." Luke obeyed.

His mind was like a blank slate and all of his thoughts of worries were quickly brushed aside the moment they arose in his mind. Suddenly he felt a sharp pain from his behind rising through his whole body. Regals fat finger forced itself into his ass, unprepared, only lubed by what little saliva Luke left behind.

"Seems like you should have sucked my finger a bit better. Well now you have to pay for your disappointing performance." Another laugh echoed through the hall.

"N... no, please." Luke whispered.

"You dare deny me again!? Did you not learn your lesson?"

Luke immediately regretted his speaking up. Regal rammed his finger as deep into Luke as he could. He could feel his asshole being ripped open, blood streaming out. He cried in immense pain, nearly losing consciousness.

"Yesss! Scream and bleed for your insolence. Your blood will maybe make for better lube!" Regal did not stop laughing.

"Now move! Show me how much you want my finger inside of you!"

As tears were streaming down his face, Luke realised he did not want to find out what punishment he would receive from disobeying this. So he started forcing his ass down on Regals finger, pain rushing his mind, screaming out, echoing through the hall. As he did, Regal opposed his movement, forcing the finger even deeper. As his tears started dripping on the ground, Regal ravaged his ass for what felt like an eternity. Lukes ass soon became numb from pain, and he simply could not continue. He pulled himself off of Regals fat finger, collapsing to the ground into a pool of tears, sweat, and blood.

"We will have to train that some more." Regal swiped his hands off on Lukes ass, covering it in blood. "Disgusting creature."

As Lukes consciousness faded, only being left with pain, he could see the other creature entering the hall and dragging him into his cocoon room.

More dreams filled his mind. They became increasingly extreme, involving choking on Regals cock, having his ass torn apart by Regals fist, and having his genitals stomped on by Regals heavy hoof. After what felt like mere hours, he was released once more.

Now barely more than a mindless zombje, Luke ignored his usual guide and dragged himself into the hall. He collapsed onto his knees several feet in front of Regal.

"You look like you fully accepted your destiny?" A large grin on Regals face appeared.

Without a second thought, Luke replied, "Yes, master."

"Good, slave. Now come here and lick the sweat off my balls, and maybe you will be allowed to release."

On his knees, Luke dragged himself up the stairs and started to get his tongue to work on his masters massive balls. The sack was nearly as big as Lukes head and sweat was dripping from it as if Regal just exercised for hours. The musk emanating from it was overpowering, invading Lukes nose and forcing his cock to immediately become erect.

"Good. Lick it dry."

Mindlessly, Luke was licking away for at least an hour, his tongue soon becoming numb. Then finally Regal, who was not even erect yet, forced his face in front of the slit of his penis. It was massive, even in comparison to his cock.

"Clean." And so Luke did, licking up dried piss from inside Regals cock.

Suddenly Luke could feel his balls being freed.

"Release yourself. But with your mouth."

Not even thinking twice, Luke rolled himself over, right in front of Regals hooves, forcing his hips up in the air. His erect cock was now dangling over him, merely an inch away. He tried to reach it with his tongue, but could barely touch the tip.

"Let me help you, pet." With that, Regal forced Lukes hip towards his face.

It felt as if his back might break any second, but he did not mind. The tip of his cock was finally in his mouth and he started sucking hard, enjoying it, pleasure forcing him to forget the pain of his back.

"Look at you disgustingly deviant creature letting your lust consume you."

With that, mere seconds after starting, Lukes cock exploded into his mouth, releasing more cum than he ever thought possible. He did not let a single drop escape and his mind nearly went dark as he kept releasing himself.

As the last drop left his cock he unrolled himself laying flat in front of Regal.

"I am glad to see how receptive your species is. But we will need to speed this process up further going forth, so that my plan will come to fruition more rapidly. You will have so many toys to compete with. But I think even next to all of them, you are the most deviant. That is, after all, why you are here." Regal looked down at Luke and spit into his face. Luke lapped it up with delight in an instant, panting from exhaustion.

"Now clean me slave." With that Regal put one of his hooves on Lukes face, and the other on his cock, massaging it lightly. Luke started to lick again and did not stop for many hours.