How Do I Look? - Commission for Papapatooie

Story by TheGreatJaceyGee on SoFurry

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Quill and Gabe visit a new outlet on the mall that specializes in sexy clothing. Quill tries a particular revealing outfit, and consequently puts Gabe in the mood~

Commission for Papapatooie on Twitter. Featuring his boyfriend and trappn_in_japan, also on Twitter.


Gabe was sitting on a bench in the dressing rooms in front of a row of booths with black curtains. He was a cat, covered mostly in fluffy fur that was a creamy brown color except where his face, underbelly, and forearms turned into a soft white. He was incredibly tall, making the regular sized chair he sat on look childish. His head was hung over his phone as he browsed the internet aimlessly, scrolling through memes and shitposts that, at the most, earned a snort through the nose. A silky mop of golden hair hung over his bright blue eyes which reflected the rectangular screen of his phone. His legs were crossed and his cheek was propped up on his fist. It was a position he had been in for the past several minutes as he waited.

Behind the curtain of the booth right in front of him was his boyfriend, Quill, currently trying on some new outfits. They were at an outlet store, one that specialized in sexy lingerie and risque clothing. Unsurprisingly, it had caught Quill's attention like a spider web. Him and Gabe were walking through the mall, looking to find a gift for their friend's upcoming birthday. Quill was a tall and slender monkey with neon green fur. He was slim from the waist up, a figure he kept on display by wearing tight crop top shirts. Everything beneath that was far more robust. His hips blew outwards to create a plush pair of haunches and huggable thighs, another feature he made visible by wearing shorts that only just came below the bottom swell of his ass. His prehensile monkey tail was long and slender, hanging out behind him casually. He was a sharp contrast to the towering Gabe who was dressed in a baggy hoodie and jeans. Quill saw the store, and his arm launched out to snag Gabe's, jerking him to a halt.

"Hey!" Gabe snapped, nearly spilling the drink in his hand. He looked over and saw Quill's excited expression. His long, green arm was outstretched towards the store, his hairless hand pointing almost accusingly.

"Look!" Quill hooted. "That new place opened!" Essential was the name of it. The logo was in bright, white letters above the entrance, bordered by what looked like fake black granite.

"Yeah, I see it." Gabe pulled his arm away. "Wanna go there later?"

"Later?" It may as well have been an insult. "I wanna go there now!" His grip on Gabe's arm tightened, emphasizing his urgent need to dress like a slut. "C'mon. We can just look inside. We don't have to buy anything."

Gabe knew what that meant. A 'look inside' would lead to Quill seeing something he liked, then another, then maybe another, and hey, another wouldn't hurt. A quick look inside would end in them spending way more money than they had ever intended. He sincerely doubted that there was anything in there that they could buy for their friend. Going in there was a bad idea, Gabe knew it.

But he couldn't say no.

"Fine," Gabe sighed. "But no more than 20 minutes. We're here for a gift, not-" He was cut off by an abrupt tug on his arm, yoinking him towards the store so fast that he nearly toppled over. They made it inside, and Quill came to an abrupt stop. Gabe stumbled to a stop and just saved his drink from spilling across the carpet floor. He stood up and saw the awestruck look on Quill's face. Before him was an expansive display of lewd and revealing outfits, either folded neatly on shelves or worn by porcelain mannequins. It was such an overly sultry presentation that Quill's mind threatened to overload itself. The question hung in his mind: Where to start?

Gabe's arm was thankfully out of Quill's grasp once he thrust himself into the store for his first few looks. It wasn't long before he had gathered an armful of outfits, each one a varying degree of revealing. Gabe followed him around, not getting much of a chance to look at each outfit and wonder how it looked on Quill before he moved on to snag another one. Quill even threw an outfit at him and insisted that Gabe try it on. That wasn't going to happen. Gabe hoped Quill would forget about it after being so stimulated by the hunt for more clothes, and he did. They hadn't been in the store for seven minutes before Quill rushed off to the changing room where Gabe waited for him now.

Quill ended up taking longer picking which outfit to put on than he did going through the store. Once again, with so many options in front of him, his mind blanked out. He considered calling Gabe into the booth to help him pick one out first, but he didn't want to ruin the surprise factor when he saw him in it. It came down to the ultimate decider. Eenie-Meenie-Miney-Mo. With that childish rhyme ringing through his mind and his lips wording it silently, he bounced his fingers between the outfits he had laid out. The rhyme came to a stop, and so did his finger. The decision had been made.

He took a deep breath. "Here we go."

Gabe was just about to put his phone down and ask Quill if everything was OK when the curtains whipped aside. Quill stepped out, decked in his slutty getup. It was a three piece outfit consisting of stockings, leather briefs, and a woefully small top that only just came down below his pecs. It was all black, the material shining in the dim dressing room light. The stockings squeezed his thighs tightly, overflowing the flesh around the upper rim. The briefs clung to his hips, leaving nothing to the imagination. Gabe could see the outline of his manhood bulging out obstreperously. His smooth stomach was bare up to the top which had a heart shaped opening. A fishnet pattern was stretched over his chest where Gabe could see his nipples. More fishnet connected the top to the sleeves which were dotted down its length with shiny gold buttons.

He held his arms out, presenting himself. "So? What do you think?"

Gabe kept silent. He stared at Quill, barely conveying much thought or feeling. He had totally forgotten about the phone in his hand, as well as the friend for whom they were searching a gift, or even why they had come to the outlet in the first place. All he knew was that there was a very ravishing monkey in front of him, one that was making him awfully excited.

Gabe's cat tail flicked behind him. He coiled it behind his back, hiding it from Quill. It went kerfluff, a telltale sign of his arousal. Gabe gulped. "Y-yeah. Looks pretty good on you."

"You think?" Quill twisted his hips, showing off his perfectly contoured ass. "Not too gaudy? These thigh-highs are like rubber bands on my thighs. I might move up a size."

Gabe licked his lips. Keep it together. He stood up and stepped up for a closer look. Quill looked sexy, he didn't need to elaborate much further about that. But, that didn't mean he wasn't allowed to inspect it more thoroughly. Gabe twirled his finger. "Spin around. Let me see." Quill spun once, giving Gabe an even better idea of how he looked. He still wanted more, much more. He pushed Quill by the chest, towards the booth. "Get back. Let's look at you in the mirror."

"O-Oh... OK!"

They both entered the booth. Gabe closed the curtain behind him. He turned Quill around to face the mirror hanging on the wall. Quill had seen himself wearing that outfit in it earlier, but having a tall, hunky man stand behind him let him appreciate it more. Yeah, he was pretty sexy. Gabe standing right behind him, laying his chin on the top of Quill's head made it even sexier. Gabe laid his paws on Quill's tummy. "I think you look gorgeous, but it's up to you. You want it?"

Quill noticed how fluffed up Gabe's tail was as it rose up from behind him like a curious cobra. Quill's own tail did a little shimmy and flick. He bit his lip. "Yeah, I think I do, if you like it so much."

Gabe looked at Quill's reflection and smiled deviously. "Don't worry. I do~" One of Gabe's paw slid down his belly and cupped his scrotum, still hidden behind the snug cling of Quill's brief's. His other paw ascended to Quill's chest where a single index finger found his nipple and circled it gently. Gabe closed his eyes and gently kissed the softness of Quill's neck.

Quill's eyes lit up as a deep red blossomed on his cheeks. A shiver like a swarm of razors jittered through his skin, erecting his fur. His nipple stiffened on Gabe's finger. The first throb of excitement struck his package as Gabe gently fondled it. Quill chuckled nervously. "Ahah... What are you doing?"

Gabe pecked the side of his neck. He pulled Quill in closer, colliding Quill's cushiony behind with Gabe's groin, currently humming with arousal. "What I want~" Quill murred. And he continued to do so at his leisure, making love to Quill's body by massaging his manhood and thumbing his nipple. More heat burned on Quill's face as he felt the arrogant jut of Gabe's manhood against his butt. Another shiver rolled through him, right down his belly and into his puckering tailhole.

"And... Ahh... What might that be~?" Quill asked, knowing the answer.

Gabe's lips lifted to his ear. "How about fucking you in this booth?"

Quill started to shake. His already tight briefs shrank as his cock started getting hard. He could feel Gabe doing the same as he started dry-humping him. "I... I don't know about that." Already he was breathing through his mouth. Is it getting hot in here?

"I do. You're too hot in that little outfit. I can't help myself." His paw slid down Quill's waistband. The tips of his fingers found the underside of his cock which he began to rub. "Feeling how hard you're getting, I don't think you can either."

Gabe was right. The continuous press of Gabe's cock fueled it even more than his delicate touch. Soon he was at full staff, bulging his briefs out with a solid log of hot meat. It throbbed at Gabe's touch, letting free a tiny drip of precum. Quill whimpered. "Stop. You'll ruin it. We'll be forced to buy it."

Gabe laughed. "Oh, don't worry. If it makes you look this good, we're definitely buying it." Gabe pulled his paw off of Quill's rod and turned him around forcefully. He kissed his lips deeply, eyes closed, tongue on the attack. That melted whatever resistance was left in Quill. His eyes rolled into his head upon closing. He wrapped his arms around Gabe's shoulders and sparred his tongue with his. Their erections grinded on another, earning more drips of precum out of Quill and the first from Gabe. Gabe reached down and copped himself a double pawful of sweet, fluffy, monkey haunch. That got a tweet out of Quill whose monkey tail shot upwards and began to sway.

They made out for some time. The smack of their lips as well as the occasional murr of delight echoed within those confined walls. It made both of their ears twitch. Daring as Gabe was, he was still conscious of any potential eavesdroppers. He broke the kiss, leaving Quill gasping. He silenced him with the press of his index finger to his lips. "Shhhhhh... Be a good boy and stay quiet. We don't want anyone hearing us, do we?" Quill gulped and shook his head. The allure of Gabe's cock had made him forget where they were. "Didn't think so. Try and stay quiet. Think you can do that?"

Quill wasn't so sure, not when it came to Gabe. That wasn't enough to deter him. His loins were on fire, and Gabe was the one who had to put them out. He nodded. "Yeah, I can do that."

"Great, now be an even better boy and get on your knees. Help me out of these pants."

Quill fought back a childish smile. "Y-yeah~" He came down to his knees in front of him, getting eye level with his belt line. Gabe's hoodie hung way below his crotch. Gabe did him the favor of pulling it up for him, revealing the growing mound that was stretching Gabe's jeans. Another shiver of excitement for Quill. He pushed his face right into that bulge, flattening it. It was incredibly hot. He could feel the steady pulse of Gabe's heart. He nuzzled it sweetly, urging it to grow bigger. It did, slowly pushing Quill's face back as if to remind him of what he had to do. Quill pulled back and unbuckled the belt, popped the button, and pulled down the fly. Gabe's pants didn't offer much resistance on the way down; they were a few sizes too big.

Of course, they had to be big in order to accommodate Gabe's extraordinarily large cock.

Ballooning his compression shorts to a cartoonish degree already, Gabe's penis was a shocking contrast compared to virtually every other feature he had. Quill pulled the shorts down, freeing it so that it could assume its full glory. Though Gabe was a cat, his manhood was equine in shape and size. His cock was a fat brown cylinder of reproductive power, swimming with thick veins from head to hilt. His scrotum was an equally insane organ, hanging heavily and carrying with them a very obnoxious pair of balls.

Quill had fallen in love with it a long time ago, and that passion hadn't died out in the slightest. He was lucky that it was attached to the sweetest man he knew, lest it be the death of him. Quill had become an expert at servicing it. He stroked it with both of his hands, looking up at Gabe with a coy smile. "You're really gonna make me blow you? In here?"

"I'm not forcing you to do anything. You're the one rubbing my dick like that."

"You're the one that started rubbing and kissing on me."

"Yeah, and you're the one who dressed up like a whore."

Quill giggled. "Yeah, you're right."

"I know I'm right. Now get to work."

Quill closed his eyes and gave the tip a tiny kiss. Precum was bleeding out of the slit steadily. Its cumbersome and raunchy taste sat in his mouth like a dumbbell. It made his nipples harder and his face hotter. He held Gabe's balls as he opened his mouth and swallowed that gargantuan girth. "Ulp." His lips held on tight. His tongue slithered wherever he could reach. Down his head came, hardly reaching the halfway point before he was forced to stop by the sharp gag of his throat. He backed off and came back down, beginning his process of pleasing Gabe as well as indulging himself. "Mmmm... Mmmm... Mmmm~"

Gabe breathed through his mouth and rested his paw on Quill's scalp. "Aw, yeah. That's nice." He played with his hair as it moved back and forth. His balls felt luxurious within Quill's hold, not to mention the delight of having his massive member being suckled so devoutly. He looked down and saw the look of pleasure on Quill's face, one that resembled his own. "Having fun down there?"

"Mmm-hmm."

"I can tell. So am I."

"Mmmm..."

"God, you're so beautiful when you do that."

"Mm-mmm."

"Yeah, I could look at you all day."

"Mmmm~"

Quill kept going, maintaining a steady rhythm and depth. He focused on pleasing himself as much as he did Gabe. His cock was a magnificent pillar of throbbing muscles, incredible weight, and musky precum. His own penis shuddered inside of his briefs, demanding attention. His face contorted as he felt that urge escalate. He couldn't stand it. His mouth came off of Gabe's pole. Connecting it to Quill's O-shaped lips were several strands of saliva. He stroked him some more. "Ah... Do you think... Do you think you can fuck me? Right now?" His face reflected his desperate need.

Gabe's balls felt like lead. He had been on the edge of popping before Quill had come off. "Ahh... Yeah. I'm gonna do that. You should hear yourself. You sound like a real slut."

"Because I am. This outfit has got me going crazy."

"You sure that's not my cock?"

"No, I'm not."

"Me neither. Get up." Quill stood up. "Turn around. Bend over on the wall."

Quill did as he was told, facing his ass to him and leaning forward so that he was up to the wall. He looked back at Gabe saucily and cocked his tail up for a full uncensored view of his butt. He made a feminine sway of the hips. "Come on. Fill me up~"

Once again, Gabe couldn't say no. He pulled his hoodie and shirt off, leaving him naked. He stepped up to his lover and stuck his fingers down the top of Quill's briefs. Down they went until Gabe got a nice view of that bombastic bubble butt. He grabbed one buttock and pulled it aside. There was Quill's tailhole. Beneath it was where his balls hung like a pair of overly ripe fruit. His cock hung in front of them, dripping precum. "You're excited," Gabe said.

"You have no idea~"

"No, I don't think I do." Gabe grabbed his cock and laid it on Quill's crevice. Quill hummed with delight. He rolled his ass up and down that glorious shaft, hot dogging it. More and more precum ebbed out, landing on Quill's lower back. Gabe had had enough. He gripped Quill's hips firmly and made him stop. "Here I come. You want it?"

Quill gulped. He was so fucking horny that it hurt. "Yes... Please..."

"Alright. Here it is." He grabbed the middle of his shaft and aimed it at Quill's tail hole. Hot, dense flesh collided with taut, wrinkled muscle, making Quill gasp. Firmly but slowly, Gabe pushed forward, applying pressure and gaping it. Wider and wider it went until finally it met that punishing girth and enveloped the head.

"Ahh~ Hahhh..." Already Quill's legs were shaking. His knees knocked together.

"Hush. I haven't even started." He kept going forward. He slid deeper and deeper, laying claim to Quill's tight, velvet insides. "Ohhhhh, yeah. That's right. Huhhh... That's good."

Quill vocalized his agreement. The pleasure was like a heat lamp of joy as he felt Gabe's wonderful piston glide past his prostate, triggering yet another heave of precum from his cock. His chest rose and fell rapidly. He wanted to moan, but he knew he had to keep quiet. That was going to prove to be a challenge, especially once Gabe started to fuck him for real. Gabe pressed his fat balls to the back of Quill's before pulling back and thrusting forward again. That started a series of deep, hefty thrusts that made sure to utilize all of his tremendous length. Quill more than appreciated it, biting back moans and trembling like a leaf against the wall.

He whispered sharply. "Ohhh... Oh God... Huh... Yes..."

Gabe bit his lip. He was fighting back the urge to fuck harder, but the slap of balls on ass was as much of a giveaway as moaning. He gathered his discipline and kept the cadence even. "Ahh... You feel great... God... We should do this more often... Whew..."

Quill managed to laugh through the hushed moans. "No... Too dangerous... Mmm... Hahah... Ahhh... Ohhh..."

"Maybe... But I'm gonna make you wear that outfit at every chance I get, understand? Hah..."

"Mmmm, yes~" Quill purred, saying his approval rather than answering Gabe's question.

"Yeah. I thought so. Mmph..."

They went on for some time, biting back moans and withholding the normal amount of energy they put behind their ruts. Regardless of their reduced vigor, they felt their pleasures growing towards the climax. They felt it nearly in unison, their bodies were so in sync. "Ahh... Yeah, I'm gonna cum really soon. Huhhh..."

Quill's voice was still subdued, but shrill like a girl's. "Nnn... Me too! Oh God... Huhhhhh... Yes... Yes~!"

"Yeah... I'm gonna... Hohhh... Yeah... I'm cumming... I'm-!" His orgasm cut him off rudely, scrunching his face and releasing an explosive shot of cum. "Hhhuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhh~!" The long undermuscle of his cock throbbed and pulsed mightily as ropes of his thickish seed came spurting out of him, filling and covering every inch of Quill's quivering insides.

Quill had an orgasm of his own, one that shredded his thighs, buttocks, and belly with raw delight. White hot euphoria scorched his penis as his own cum came spitting out, dousing the wall in front of him. The first genuine moan was ready to escape him, but Gabe was there to clamp his paw over his mouth, silencing him. Gabe held on tight, burying his bloodred face into Quill's shoulder while trying to stay quiet too.

Their climaxes came to a close, leaving the two lovers panting and beginning to sweat. Gabe pulled out with an uncomfortably loud thhhhhp! A disgustingly fat wad of his nut came glopping out of Quill's hole, gaped into a fleshy O. To his dismay, much of it landed on his briefs, still clinging to his knees loyally. Gabe stroked his cock, letting out what few globs of cum still remained in his shaft. "Wow. That was great. Don't you think?"

Quill couldn't think much of anything. The flesh of his legs shook and wobbled as every muscle down from his tummy felt like liquid rubber. He slowly slid down the wall, whimpering and mewing pathetically. Eventually he hit the ground and slumped down on his back. His penis drooped and his jaw was slack. He looked finished.

Too bad Gabe wasn't. He rubbed his semi-limp cock, ready for it to get hard again. "That looked like it felt pretty good. Mind returning the favor for me?" He didn't wait for an answer. He sat down cross legged next to Quill and grabbed his penis. He started rubbing it, enticing it towards another erection. "Come on. We're not done yet. Think you can spare me another shot?"

Quill blinked and looked up to see what he was doing. A serious ache stabbed down his penis as it stiffened in Gabe's paw. "Oh geez. I dunno."

"Well, let's find out." Quill's member got fully hard before Gabe's, but that didn't matter. What Gabe was about to do would speed things up. He stood up and placed his feet astride Quill's hips. He squatted down, hovering his semi-limp cock over Quill's tummy and his ass over his groin. He grabbed Quill's penis and aimed it at his tail hole. "Now let's have some real fun~" He descended on that column and impaled himself. "Ohh~" He came down inch by inch until his tailhole coddled the base lovingly. Gabe took a deep breath. His cock bounced upon him flexing it. By pure reflex, Quill lifted his hands to stop it from bopping his stomach. He caught it with one hand. With equal instinct, he started to stroke it. Gabe hummed thankfully. "Oh yeah. This is nice."

Quill had to agree once Gabe started riding him. Quill was never the skilled top, but Gabe more than made up for it in being a very adept power bottom. Up and down his ass went on Quill's cock. Gabe humped, rolled, and grinded his hips in perfect sequence with his riding. Soon it was him struggling to hold back his moans. Quill watched as the pleasure contorted his face. "Ohhh... Quill~"

It was Quill's turn to make him hush up. He held on to Gabe's hips, covered in wondrously soft fur. "Careful, now. Don't wanna alert anyone. Ooh~"

Gabe giggled. "Mmm... No promises~" His penis hit its zenith again, jutting out with its impressive stature right over Quill's midriff. Precum came dribbling out in droves, fueled by Quill's stroking. It soaked on Quill's tummy, though he certainly didn't mind. The pleasure coming back around his loins more or less blinded him to all other sensations that weren't Gabe's ass or voice. He heard the chant of his name. "Quill... Quill... Quill~" That chorus grew more frantic once yet another orgasm approached them. Gabe went faster. The fluidity of his rolls went down in quality. He was about to cum, that much was obvious. Quill wasn't far behind. His voice joined Gabe's. He said his name too.

"Ahh... Gabe. Huhhh! Gabe! Gabe!"

Their voices reached a harmony just in time for a mutually triggered climax. Quill exploded inside of Gabe, triggering Gabe's orgasm and making his muscles seize and clench, milking Quill even further. Quill was the lucky recipient of a huge shot of cum right across the chest and neck, marking him with several fat pearls of nectarine love. They bit back their voices just short of a howl. They weren't totally quiet, but they weren't anywhere close to the volume that would've represented the explosive level of ecstasy they felt.

It all faded away soon enough, and Gabe toppled forward. They both panted hard. Sweat had broken out across their bodies. The booth absolutely reeked of their sexual product. Gabe blindly kissed around Quill's face. Quill did the same. "Oh God... Quill, that was amazing..."

"Yeah. It was. Oh my God. That was great."

"You know, I'm glad we came here now."

"Hehe... Me too."

"I think getting a gift can wait."

"Yeah."

"I just can't until the next time I pound you in that little outfit~"

"Mmmm, me nei-" Quill's eyes widened. His heart plummeted. The outfit. He shoved Gabe upright. He looked down at himself and saw the horror show. Cum was smeared and squashed across his chest. More of it was drying on the briefs and leaking out of his ass. The carpeted floor had it the worst. Even more was streaked on the wall. "Oh no. Oh no. Oh nonnononnonnonoonnnnononnononono." He sat up and pushed Gabe all the way off of him.

"Hey! Ow! Calm down!"

He couldn't. They had left the booth and the outfit an absolute atrocity. He darted around the booth, trying to piece together a plan. "Oh God! Oh shit! It's everywhere! It's on the suit! It fucking reeks!"

Gabe scratched his head. Yeah, things were pretty bad. "I guess we gotta clean this up. Looks like that outfit is ours now. Shit. How are we gonna clean this up?" He looked down at his hanging horse cock. A drop of cum fell from his slit, landing on Quill's t-shirt which was unfortunate enough to be crumpled right between his feet. Gabe cringed. "Well... Looks like we found our sponge."

Quill came to a stop and saw what had happened. He gave him a bemused stare. "You're kidding me."

Gabe shrugged. "Sorry."

Quill sighed and dragged his paws down his face. "Just help me clean this shit up."

* * *

Sophia was manning the register that morning. She was a Shiba Inu, dressed in a short black dress beneath a pink blazer that hugged her curvy figure. Her hair was dyed a similar color, cropped over to cover one eye and hanging down to her shoulder. A ring hung from her nose. She stood at the register behind the desk, waiting for a customer to come in. The day had been pretty slow, not demanding much action.

But it was an interesting one.

She hovered over the computer with a smirk on her face. She was restocking the shelves when she thought she heard what sounded like an argument coming out of the dressing room. She closed in to hear better, not to eavesdrop, but to make sure nothing too bad was going on. She leaned her head in and tilted her ears. No, there was no argument. Quite the opposite, in fact. She clamped her paw over her mouth to fight back laughter. Thank God her manager was out that day. He would've lost his shit.

She hastily finished restocking and made her way back to the register, allowing the two boys to have their fun for however long as they needed to. Soon enough the two of them came out. The taller cat was supporting the monkey who walked stiffly and was wearing one of the outfits he had picked up. It all but confirmed what she had heard. She had to purse her lips to keep herself from laughing. They made it to the desk looking like a pair of soldiers coming out of battle. Their fur was ratty and wild. Their faces were a thin shade of pink. Quill stood upright, but looked like he could topple over at any moment. Sophia's nose twitched as a familiar smell wafted across it. She couldn't fight her smile anymore.

"Did you two find what you were looking for?"

"Yeah," Gabe said. He slid a tag over to her. "We'll be buying this."

She nodded and rang them up. "You two boys have a nice day~ I hope you enjoyed your time here." The two men just smiled and nodded. They turned to leave. Sophia noticed a small plip of white on the monkey's cheek. "Um, I think you missed a spot."

The cat saw what she was looking at. "Oh. Thanks." He licked it up, making the monkey jerk and blush hard.

"I hate you..." Quill hissed.

"Yeah, I hate you too~"

They then left the store. It was once she couldn't see them anymore that Sophia finally broke down laughing.

THE END