Sweet Revenge part 2
#2 of Sweet Revenge
The second part of sweet revenge please tell me how I'm doing so far and point out any spelling errors.
Ugghh....What happened... Marcus groaned as he woke up. Holy shit he muttered as the last few minutes came crashing back. I can't believe it I'm alive.... I'M ALIVE!!! He yelled then immediately regreted it. Great broken ribs...wonderfull. Just then he realised that he could barely move his left leg. Broken leg too shit this is going to hurt. Might as well sit up quickly he thought. Agghhh Sweet mother that fucking hurt! As the echo's of his scream faded away and he was sitting up he took stock of his other injuries. Cuts and bruise's I can deal with them later. First things first find a stick or something so I can walk to wherever my car is. As he looked around he saw a likely looking stick that he could use as a crude crutch. As he crawled towards it he heard voices in the distance. Oh god let that be humans he thought as the voices got closer. Just then the ground started to shake and the voices stopped. Please don't see me Marcus whispered as the shakeing got more distinct. Just as he was about to try to make a run for it he realised the voices had started again and were coming from his left and up. As he looked up he saw two macros above the tree line. Wait I recognize her he said to himself as the the 80 foot vixen loomed above him. As she was standing there he looked to his right and saw the other macro. Yep I'm so dead he thought to himself as he looked at the 70 foot greyhound next to the fox. Where did you say you smelled it the vixen said. Over here somewere but the winds picking up I can't smell it anymore it replied. Damn that sucks..ugghh I wish I hadn't kicked it I haven't tasted a micro for weeks! Yeah well let's go home I have an idea of how to get somemore. How? I have a friend who lives close to a micro city. *sigh* Fine I'll wait til Monday but no later. Stop your bitching its not gonna take that long the dog said as they walked away. As they left Marcus started towards the road. He started thinking to himself. If there's macros here then Westwood's gone.... That means my family...is dead.... Marcus had spent to much time in the Marines to entertain any thoughts of anyone living after a macro attack. I'll see them pay for this every last fucking of them I swear they'll pay.