One Last Chance

Story by Dark_Hearted_Wolf on SoFurry

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Okay so here it is, my entry in Skatelian's and Picklessauce69's starcrossed writing contest. Here is a link to the journal describing it. https://www.sofurry.com/view/864447

And here is the story that my piece is continuing. https://www.sofurry.com/view/869246

This is a first for me as I have never written anything quite like this but I will say it was a fun experience. Also I want to give a quick apology to Skate and Pickles for going over the word limit. It sits at 3,235 words but originally was at around 3,475 so I did some editing but I didn't know what else to take out or modify without making things seem off. I wanted to make it a story as well as erotica and I just got carried away with it. So sorry guys for going over but I do hope you enjoy and thanks for hosting this contest!


"A-a wish?" Squeaked the snow leopard as his thoughts began racing almost as fast as his heart at the sound of Jackie's soft, seductive voice.

"Yea silly" she said with a giggle, "A wish you know? When you see a shooting star you make a wish.". Tim chastised himself again for letting that little detail about shooting stars slip his mind.

"I-I don't know w-what I want" Tim said even though he knew exactly what he wanted. He pictured himself and Jackie as characters in his story. Just the thought of being able to get behind her....to feel her warm, wet sex dripping her sweet juice on his shaft. To feel those large, soft, breasts with taught nipples. Those fantasies along the view of her beautiful green eyes looking into his, was enough to drive him wild.

Quickly he felt his cock stiffen in his pants, just as Jackie snuggled closer to him. In the process her leg brushed against his groin. Tim found himself feeling extremely anxious and fearful. "Oh crap, please tell me she didn't feel anything." However....

"Hmmmm? What's this down here?" Jackie said as she slid her hands slowly down his body to his crotch. Drawing her face closer to his, "Tim....what exactly...did you wish for?" She said in a soft tone while she slowly started rubbing at his bulge. "I-I can't t-tell you because t-then it wouldn't come t-true." Tim said as he tried to regain his composure, even though the lusty beauty in his arms was making it challenging as she began to tighten her grip on his swelled member.

"Aww but I think in this case you're wish may just come true" She said with a wink and a soft moan in pure ecstasy at feeling his pre-cum soak through his pants. "Please...tell me"

"I u-umm wished that we were...together and uhh...." Tim found himself beginning to freeze mentally and his voice began to follow. Jackie could have guessed at what he was going to say but she wanted to hear it. "Aww that sounds so sweet. What would we be doing....together?"

As badly as he wanted to tell her Tim found himself at a loss for words. He wanted to express his desire to take her in a way that he couldn't imagine even in his wildest fantasies. But his inexperience with women held him back in a sort of nervous limbo. He didn't want to scare her off with his virginity but at the same time he wanted to take the beauty in front of him and make her his. However, fear began to grip his mind even more. "I..I...." The snow leopard started to speak but quickly lost his words. He looked away from her.

"Tim what's wrong?" she said as she started to slow down. "Is it something I did?" Now Jackie had begun to experience doubt of her own as she found herself confused as to why Tim had begun to shy away from her. She had stopped rubbing his bulge which only made Tim a little more anxious.

"Oh n-no Jackie not at all, it's j-just....I-I'm...." said Tim as he hesitated to expose his virginity to her. However he didn't even have to finish his sentence. A light seemed to go on in Jackie's head "He's a virgin!" This highly skilled erotica author was actually a virgin! "So that explains why he's been so jittery all day"

This made Jackie even hungrier in her lust as she had a thing for virgins. She could never figure out what it was that made them so exciting. Maybe it was their shy, awkward yet cute nature or maybe it was the fact that they seemed to be more passionate than guys who had already had some experience. "They always seem so eager to please once they calm down" she had once thought to herself. But this one was going to be a bit tougher by the looks of it.

"What is it Tim?" she said trying to prod him to expose his "secret" in the hopes that admitting it would calm him down.

"I-I'm a virgin....." Tim said as he began to blush with embarrassment and feelings of shame. "And now here's where she calls me a loser, goodbye college social life, who'd have thought it would end during my freshman year?" Tim thought to himself. "It's just like high school all over again."

His experiences flooded into his mind. The few encounters he had with women had ended in painful awkwardness which shattered his confidence, not to mention his dignity. Coming from a small school, he found that news traveled fast and he was the target of everyone's jokes and cruelty, including those girls he had tried with. This was a big part of why he started writing erotica while putting distance between him and his peers. It offered an escape from reality and allowed him to create a world where he felt at peace.

Now it seemed like he was about to repeat the whole cycle. It frustrated him that he couldn't get over his awkwardness when it came to sex but at this point all he could think about was getting out of the situation and figuring out how to endure the next four years of hell.

"I-I gotta go....I'm s-sorry Jackie" He stammered as he began to crawl out of the sleeping bag. It felt overwhelming to not take off in a mad dash to just get away but he didn't want to wake the others up. Even though he managed to calmly walk off he felt like he was on the verge of collapsing.

Jackie was no better herself. "What have I done" she quietly said to herself as her thoughts were racing over what had just happened. Normally she was able to get guys to ease into it and make it a romantic night but this was very different. She didn't know whether to remain in the sleeping bag in the hopes that Tim would come back or follow him and try to figure out how to fix this.

She decided to wait for Tim to come back as she figured that following him would make him more uncomfortable. A half hour had passed and she began to worry as Tim had not come back yet and even though the field was illuminated with moonlight, the woods were pitch dark and easy to get lost in. The thought of Tim lost out there forced Jackie out of the bag to find him. However she noticed that he took his phone so maybe she could see the light to find him easier.

Jackie set off into the park, hoping to make things right.

Tim had been walking for a while trying to accept what he expected to happen at the end of the class trip. "I'll just try to distance myself from everybody, make it seem like I'm busy. Yea that should work". But he knew what was coming.

An hour and a half had passed when he decided to sit at a bench that was shadowed in the trees but still open enough to see the field from where he was sitting so he didn't have to worry about finding his way back; that is if he ever decided to. For now the only thing he wanted to do was dive back into his fantasy world and pulled out his phone.

But he couldn't write anything. He wanted to write something, anything that would help take his mind off of what had happened in the sleeping bag. Nothing came to mind. "Damn it why do I always do this? I literally had her right there just waiting for me to make a move. I'm pathetic." Tim had begun to vocalize his thoughts into an angry monologue. "My one chance to finally turn things around and I fucking blew it. It's even worse that I blew it with Jackie, the one girl that I want in my life. I wouldn't be surprised if she never speaks to me again." He sounded bitter.

"I just want to tell her how I feel, how she isn't like the other girls, how she is very beautiful and sweet and seems like an amazing girl. I want to be able to tell her how much I want her and that I will do anything to make her mine and now it's too late" He was on the verge of losing it.

A voice snapped him out of it.... "You're wrong" Jackie had stepped out from behind a tree. He quickly turned around to see her standing there. He had the sudden urge to just bolt away but something kept him rooted to the spot. "J-J-Jackie! H-How long have you been s-standing there?" He managed to stutter out before Jackie was standing right next to him, with a smile on her face. "Long enough" she sat down next to him.

"Tim it's not too late and what you just said was wonderful and it warms my heart to know how you feel for me. I've never heard those words come out of anyone's mouth about me before." She said as her smile grew and her eyes became misty.

"R-really Jackie?" Tim was taken aback. This wonderful girl, who has had boyfriends in the past, was getting teary-eyed at the young virgin's words. "I've never made anyone, let alone a girl, do this before" He thought to himself as he began to wonder if this was even real.

"Really Tim, every other guy I have ever been with has said that they cared but none ever seemed to show emotion, none seemed to back up their words with actions or feelings." Jackie at this point had a couple of tears running down her face, but she still kept her smile.

"But I left you alone in the sleeping bag.....how can that be considered caring?" Tim asked as he kept trying to convince himself that this was not a dream. "And I told you about my....secret"

"Tim it doesn't matter if you're a virgin. Yes it was odd when you left the sleeping bag but I could tell something was upsetting you. After hearing your words I finally understand. You don't have to be afraid anymore" Jackie said as she reached for Tim's hand and tenderly held it. "Whatever happened in the past stays there, it doesn't make me think any less of you. What I see now is a caring soul full of love and compassion.

"W-well..." Tim began as he started to regain his composure. "Maybe we c-could continue what w-we started earlier..." He held his breath.

Jackie slid closer to him, her eyes held a new sense of lust. "That sounds wonderful Tim, but you have to promise me something"

"What is it Jackie?" He said as he wiped away the remnants of her tears. She reached up and gently touched his cheek "Stay calm, and don't worry about a thing." She said with a wink as her hand slid down his cheek....his neck and chest...and inched closer and closer to his groin.

He felt his heart skip a beat at her touch. But this time he was determined to not let his thoughts get the better of him. Tim took a good look at Jackie's face, the way her eyes glistened in the specks of moonlight that came through the trees, the way her smile gave off a sense of happiness as well as revealing the lust built up inside her. He couldn't resist the urge any longer and leaned in to kiss those soft, sexy lips.

Jackie moaned into his kiss. She could feel his pants begin to bulge as his cock became hard. But then she had an even bigger surprise than his kiss, Jackie felt Tim's hand begin to explore her body as well. He gently brushed against the side of her face and then through her hair. Their kiss became even more passionate as he began to trace his hand down towards her chest.

"Just as I imagined" Tim thought as he gently squeezed her soft, full breast. He alternated between rubbing her aroused nipples through her shirt and gently massaging her breast and brought his other hand to do the same to her other one to give them his full attention. Jackie's moaning intensified at his touch which sent a wave of pleasure over her. She unzipped Tim's pants and reached in to let his full length out. At a hard 7 inches, she was more than pleased.

"Mmmm...He's just full of surprises today..." She thought as she began to stroke him off. Tim then began to slide his hands underneath her shirt to feel her bare tits. With no bra he had easy access to the brown pendulums that were topped off with firm nipples. The young wolf had begun to gently bite at Tim's lower lip. Then she began to move to his cheek, then his neck. Shivers ran down his spine when he felt Jackie gently nibble at him, it made him massage her breasts even more intensely as he began pinching her nipples.

"Ahhh....mmmm, yes Tim squeeze me harder" Jackie moaned as the snow leopard began to twist and pull. Tim then took the opportunity to get in some neck kissing of his own which sent chills through her body. Tim slowly lifted her shirt to which the cold air made Jackie's nipples sting with pleasure. He then began to kiss down her chest and began to suckle at her breasts.

"Ohhh....that feels so good..." she said as Tim sucked and nibbled on her breasts eager to please. Jackie had also begun to pick up the pace on stroking his member, stopping only to wet her hand with spit to make his cock nice and lubricated.

Suddenly Tim stopped suckling "Oh shh..." he was cut off, lost for words at the orgasm that was about to burst from his twitching balls. "Yes baby... come for me...." Jackie said as his cock began to twitch. She quickly got down on her knees and engulfed his shaft eager to accept his seed. She felt Tim convulse with pleasure as he shot copious amounts of cum down her throat. She swallowed down every ounce and then continued to suck him off.

Tim felt his eyes roll back as pleasure overwhelmed him. He glanced down to see Jackie's eyes looking up at him. They held a seductive gaze that showed her willingness to let him take her in any way he wanted. "Ahhh....J-Jackie that feels amazing, l-let me return the favor" He said as the urge to taste her sex came over him.

She giggled and stood up, slowly undressing in front of him. Tim got a great look of her body with brown fur covering all except the white of her belly. She wiggled out of her pants to reveal that she didn't wear panties. "How do you want me stud?" she said as she lay back on the bench and spread her legs to give him a full view of her wet and needy sex.

Tim had also stripped and got down to savor her taste. He gave her a quick clit lick which made her jump. The snow leopard began to bury his face into her pussy, sucking at her clit and thrashing his tongue about. Jackie could only squeal in pure ecstasy at feeling him tongue-fuck her and reached down to grip his hair and pulled him closer. "Oh god yes!!!" she screamed out as she felt her climax building. Tim kept up his relentless assault on her clit, excited to sample her sweet juices. Suddenly she began to shake and squeezed his head in her legs as she came.

"T-Tim that was....wonderful" she sighed as she started to come down from her orgasm. But Jackie wasn't done; she needed his hard, throbbing cock inside her. "Take me now!" she demanded. Tim was more than happy to oblige as he got on top of her with his dick inches from her pussy. He slowly slid inside her warm, cozy sex. It made him want to cum right there but he held back, trying to give Jackie his all.

Jackie let out a sigh as his length penetrated deep inside her. "Oh god....you're so...huge" she said enjoying every last inch. He slowly began sliding his cock in and out of her in rhythmic motions. She began to move her hips to sync with his movements, letting him fuck her but also trying to take control. Even though she enjoyed being gentle with him, she wanted to assert some dominance. When he pulled out to keep from bursting too soon, she quickly got up and climbed on top of him. Jackie turned to give him a great view of her curvy ass and squatted down on top of his cock. She started off slow and gently slid up and down his shaft but in no time began to ride him hard. Tim couldn't believe the view he had of her sexy ass bouncing up and down on his cock. Her sexy moans were like music to his ears as she rode him. He was in nirvana.

They were locked in this for several minutes until Jackie then let out a scream as she began to feel another orgasm coming on. However she wasn't the only one, Tim felt his balls twitch as his imminent climax. "I-I'm gonna come!" he blurted out. Jackie got off him quickly and stroked him off while rubbing his head on her soft tits. He couldn't hold back anymore and let another burst of cum out all over her tits. Jackie milked him until he was completely spent and then gave the tip of his dick a kiss.

Tim lay back on the bench, exhausted but satisfied. Jackie curled up next to him and he wrapped his arms around her. "Tim..." She said. "Yes Jackie?"

"That was amazing...you were wonderful" she said as she looked into his clear blue eyes. She saw no fear anymore, no sense of doubt. Only a sense of peace and happiness at finally experiencing something everyone yearns for. Care and affection, and she was happy to have found someone who would give it back in kind.

"Jackie...can you do something for me?" he asked as he found his voice again. "Anything Tim" she said.

"Stay with me....Be mine for as long as possible." He said seizing the opportunity he had been waiting for. Jackie could barely contain her excitement as she embraced him and said "Yes!!"

They shared another passionate kiss, happiness swelling in their hearts. They both got dressed realizing that it would be morning soon and they still needed sleep and set off for bed, hand in hand, the moon and stars still illuminating the field guiding them to their site. Tim and Jackie crawled back into the sleeping bag and she cuddled up next to him. He embraced his new found love as they kissed and wished each other goodnight.

The snow leopard admired the girl who had fallen asleep in his arms, then looked up at the starry sky.

"This is a second chance I won't blow. I promise" he said to himself as he drifted off to sleep, eager to see what the future had in store for the young couple.