She Shook Me Cold

Story by CaptainDood122 on SoFurry

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Synopsis: May and her husband return from a winter walk and decide to warm up together. (~2,100 words)

I wrote this story for my friend LockheedMartini. You may remember him as the one who drew me a series of sketches a while ago. I decided to write him a story about his Deer woman, May.

You can find his post HERE!

The title is based on a David Bowie song.


Deep in a Midwestern home sat a placid living room empty of life. Although it had many signs people lived in it, the tranquil emptiness and lack of noise from any residents left it feeling like a recently deceased creature still warm to the touch. The room itself would have been called cozy by an optimist and cramped by anyone else. There was enough room for a couch and a television facing it. The rest of the house's space was used for the kitchen and a hallway that likely contained a bathroom and bedroom or two. Overall, the home was large enough for a small family who was comfortable being close at all times. It was littered with personal touches like trophies from school games or pictures of the occupants. A series of clickclickclick sounds rumbled through the front doorknob until it twisted open, and a blast of light reflected off a landscape of snow and into the house. Two disparate figures shuffled in and kicked the snow off their feet. The shorter man wore heavy boots that he took off and laid on a plastic mat while his much larger partner shuffled her hooves on another mat to kick off the alabaster powder.

“Hey Will, I don't mean to be a bother, but this jacket is too much for me."

William turned around and looked up at his wife. Thanks to her stilt-like legs, the Doe stood a few heads taller than him.

“What do you mean? It's freezing out there and you needed a jacket."

May rolled her eyes, then unzipped the jacket in question. Immediately, a wave of heat emanated out of her coat and blasted Will's senses. He could smell her powerful odor from where he stood, and felt the heat produced by her body caress his skin. Her zipper glided down at an achingly slow pace and revealed the rest of her body to him. Underneath the artificial material, May wore an ill-fitting sports bra soaked in her sweat and clinging tightly to her fur. Will could see the indents of her nipples and the lack of coverage beneath her breasts that left anyone shorter than her staring into her cleavage.

“See what I mean?" she flipped the jacket off and hung it on a nearby coat hanger. “This is why I don't wear Human clothes during winter, dummy. It's all light dresses and thin fabric for me."

“I thought deer didn't sweat."

“Well, this one does!"

Will turned his head away from his wife and crossed his arms. Noticing this, May studied him. His cheeks had turned red and she picked up the familiar smell of arousal emanating from him.

“It must have been my tits stuck in this tiny thing. What the hell, I'm up for some dancing tonight."

May motioned for him to follow and sat him down on the couch. Next, she strode behind it toward the kitchen. Along the way, she dropped her pants onto the floor and walked to the refrigerator with only a small pair of panties covering her lower region. The undergarments fared worse than the bra and were practically drenched in her post-workout sweat. Paying this no mind, May grabbed a can of beer from the refrigerator, popped it open, and made her way back to the front of the couch where she sat next to her nervous husband. Her long arm draped itself across the top of the couch and past the diminutive man.

“What's wrong? You've touched them before." she teased, thrusting her chest forward and stretching the sodden material taut against her pert breasts. The fabric barely covered her nipples and left the entire underside of her chest exposed.

Scooting closer, Will leaned into her and planted his face next to her armpit. His arm stretched behind her and fell downward, allowing him to cup a small portion of her massive ass. May flinched when he squeezed which forced her closer to him. She waited for the inevitable grab at her chest but was surprised when he instead nuzzled her armpit and began enthusiastically sniffing it.

“Wh- I thought Humans didn't smell pheromones." she joked.

“Well, this one does!" Will responded between gasps.

May could see his erection peeking through his shorts. He was incredibly hard just from getting a deep whiff of her. She hadn't even started on her can of beer and the whole scenario was making her sweat for different reasons. It wouldn't be the first time she indulged one of Will's peculiar fetishes. She reflected on their sordid and extensive love life: That time she used his face as a seat cushion for hours, their many attempts at fucking in the shower, or any of the times they would initiate sex around the house at the drop of a hat. This felt like an extension of those moments.

“I spoil you too much, don't I?" she said, focusing on the sensation of his nose running up and down her fur. “I knew something was up when I started letting you play with my hooves."

Rather than respond, her lover sat upon his knees and presented his stiff member to her. Without a word, May placed her beer can on the ground next to the couch and stood up. Will froze on the couch and watched her while she peeled the minuscule sports bra off her body, then threw it on the ground with a whap like a wet towel. Next, she slid the panties off her hips, their dampness forcing them to roll up into a bunch as they made their way past her thick thighs. When she finished, she used one of her hooves to throw them away from her and present her nude form.

“Your turn."

That was all he needed. Will bounced off the couch and began frantically disrobing what little clothing he had kept on. Once his shorts were off and May got a look at him, she simply lifted her arm straight up and presented herself. Will immediately strode up to her and dove face-first into her armpit, latching onto her in a hug and barely managing to reach his arms around her waist. While he attempted to drown in her sweaty pit, May felt his erection glide under the shelf of her ass cheek. Will used her single cheek, modest for her but generous for him, to get off while he huffed her scent.

“J-Jeez, you're really into this." the Doe gasped and staggered a bit at his touch. She wasn't very ticklish, but being assaulted like this was affecting her. "It feels good though, keep huffing!"

His desperate movement translated to sporadic groping across her body. His hand roamed up to her breasts and where he glided his fingers across her sweat-soaked fur. Three fingers explored the space under her chest where a majority of her sweat pooled. Will's fingers were slick with her fluids as he cupped her considerable breasts and hefted them around. May almost felt overwhelmed by the three-pronged attack but had enough clarity to worry about him.

“He's been in there for a while. My hair gets really long down there, but can you blame me? Trimming it is pointless when it just grows back in a week!"

Taking the initiative, May lightly pushed her husband off her for a second. Will looked betrayed for a moment, but when May opened her arms and invited him into a generous hug he smiled and ran face-first into her. The Doe scooped him up and squeezed his head between her sweaty breasts. She grabbed his ass with one hand and angled his hips until his cock slid perfectly between her thighs. Will began thrusting into her thighs and grabbed onto her hips for support, each slow plunge of his hips forcing her to carefully try and stay balanced on her slender legs.

Their rhythm started slowly at first, but gradually picked up in speed. Every movement was punctuated by a gasp or grunt and the loud clapping of their hips colliding. Their collective sweat and precum mixed until May's crotch was soaked and Will's face was drenched in her. It didn't help that he was practically being crushed against her chest the entire time. He continued to fuck her thighs, each plap plap plap of their lovemaking spurning them on to move faster and faster. May used her free hand to reach below and grab the tip of his erection while he continued to pump between her. She traced her fingers along the underside of his cock and moved him along while he moved.

Finally, Will let out a grunt and came between her thighs and into her hand. His legs shook and he almost fell over, but May held him up between her breasts with one arm. May herself was throbbing from their dance, but she was still not satisfied. She brought her sticky hand to her face and sniffed his emission before giving it a taste.

“Hmm, very salty. Perfect."

May looked down at her lover who still leaned against her for support. “You still taste good, sweetheart."

Their awkward position did not last forever. May escorted them back to the couch where she dropped him against the back and lay in front of him with her back to him. Will immediately picked up on her intentions and snaked his hand between her legs where he began toying with her lower lips. First, he teased the outside of her lips by brushing his fingers up and down them. He had to comb through a dense layer of hair that accumulated around her crotch. It was thicker than anywhere on her body and was slick with their collective sweat and cum. Then, he slipped his fingers inside her pussy which elicited a gasp from above. May lifted her leg to give him easier access to her and lifted her arm above her head to stretch. Taking advantage of her new position, Will dove into her armpit and began huffing her like before.

“Alright alright! If you get to smell my pit for your sick fantasy th-" another finger slipped in and May let out a strong gasp. “AAAAaaaa… Th-then I get to practice some of mine."

Her Human lover kept at it, probing inside of her and experimenting to find the right spots to hit. He played her like an instrument: poking and prodding different parts of her to make her produce the right notes. May brought her arm around his head and kept him locked tight to her pit. He could barely breathe under her grip. Will, however, did not struggle to escape. Her headlock merely motivated him to work harder with added time pressure. Will's erection grew again while they lay on the couch thanks to his position against the back, and May's ass rubbed across his lap while she built up a rhythm with his fingers.

Finally, May quivered in his grasp and cried out in sharp ecstasy. She violently squeezed Will's head under her arm, and his fingers still thrust deep inside her were clamped down on by her inner walls. A few heavy breaths passed through her while she recovered from the ordeal. She simply laid there on the couch and slowed her breathing, ignoring her partner who was still stuck in her armpit struggling to breathe. May was ready to pass out right there, but she was shocked awake by a sensation of liquid coating the fur on her glutes. Quickly letting Will free from her pit revealed a red-faced man gasping for air.

“Holy shit, did you cum from smelling my pit? That's hot."

Will coughed a few times, then sat up and composed himself. “Well, you did rub your ass against me a bit."

“Still, that's hot. Hold on, I've got a great idea!"

The Doe stood up off the couch, cum and sweat trailing down her legs as gravity took hold of them. Her gaunt limbs carried her out of the room toward the hallway that led to their bedroom. Will sat up properly on the couch and waited with bated breath for his wife to return. After what seemed like a few minutes of listening to her rummage through things, May arrived with her plunder hanging in her hand. Will almost jumped off the couch in shock.

“Holy fuck…"

Hanging from a single finger was a strap-on fitted for someone her size. The apparatus itself, however, was ludicrously huge. It took the shape of a horse and it was too long and thick to ever fit inside of him. Its pink exterior taunted him from across the room.

“Ready?" May put her other hand on her hip. “We can start with my fingers and work our way to this."