A Harsh Role Revision

Story by AstroSecant on SoFurry

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I fully expect that this one might not be everyone’s thing. It goes a bit harsher than most stories I write, though it’s not like mutilation or anything. Truthfully, I have a, ah, situational thing for pain play - definitely not an ‘always’ kink, and there’s enough ways that it can go bad that I don’t tend to seek out stories like that much, but in the right environment it can do the trick. This is probably the edge of where my zone of comfort would be - my usual preference is little to no physical mark, just the sensations, but the story led this direction and it was just dancing towards the edge without going over.

WARNING! EXTREME CONTENT AHEAD: This story contains moderate violence during sex including mentions of blood, which is definitely enough to earn the red border. Otherwise, it contains sexual acts between three males, size difference, rough sex, domination/submission, mind control, drugging/poisoning, and unanticipated revenge.


“You okay, Unger?"

“...Yeah, I'm fine. Just getting one of those nagging feelings in my head again." The Nidoking sighed a bit. “Nerves, you know...not sure if everything's right, want to be ready in case things go south."

Fermin nodded in understanding. “Thanks for being so alert...I know it must get hard on you."

“A bit, but it's worth it. Last thing I want is for you to get hurt. I still remember when we got caught up in that stampede of Bouffalant...scariest moment of my life, trying to keep you protected there, with all those hooves and horns and hellacious hairdos rushing at us."

“You were so brave, covering me like that and not letting them get through to me...I was worried about all the hits you took during that, I thought you might not ever fully recover." Fermin bowed his head. “I wish I could be that strong sometimes, so you wouldn't have to worry over me so much."

“No one could ask you to be as strong as a Nidoking, for sure. You're doing fine. I mean, the problem is never YOU, it's just...assholes that like to give you trouble."

“Like Elmac, right?"

“Yeah, like Elmac. That one is trouble in spades. But I'd know if it was him around. Even if somehow he did have the ability to be stealthy, I know his breathing and heartbeat sounds."

Fermin giggled a bit. “Those ears of yours are another thing I envy."

“Don't. They're useful, but...let's just say, the moment you bang them on a tree branch, you'll wish you never had them."

“I guess I'll take your word for it. You've been worried about Elmac, haven't you?"

Unger sighed again. “I wish I didn't HAVE to be. But you heard what he said at the end of that last battle."

“Mm, yeah. 'You'll regret ever humiliating me,' 'I'll make you wish you'd never been born,' those sorts of things...Honestly, I'd think being that sore of a loser would be more embarrassing than anything I could ever do, especially when it was kind of a fluke victory."

Very much so, in Unger's eyes, and he would know considering he was the victor. He had no business being so...Elmac had been a pill ever since he and Fermin had first crossed paths, a good while back. The other trainer was haughty and boastful, and a bit of a bully, and Fermin had immediately gotten on his bad side by telling him to go away and trying to help out a trainer that Elmac had recently beaten. He'd taken that as an attack and told Fermin he would show him who was stronger someday...and about a week ago, that alleged someday came around, as Elmac had brought half a dozen people around to witness his revenge.

A revenge which never materialized, but only by luck. Unger was fairly certain that the Magnezone was meaning to do a Magnet Rise, but his Earth Power had beaten him to the punch. The Azumarill was clearly supposed to take advantage of his Water weakness, but he'd gotten a lucky critical shot with his Sludge Bomb. And then there was the Kadabra...that one had nearly beaten him, almost certainly would have if not for sheer dumb luck. Lost in confusion and with nothing to lose, Unger had launched into a haphazard Megahorn attack, barely even aiming with the way his head was spinning...despite his clumsiness and the Kadabra's speed, he'd somehow scored a direct hit and one-shot the Psychic-type.

He was certainly happy he won, but Unger didn't really have much to celebrate. Not when the furious Elmac, his ego scoured by the laughter of his audience and the abject failure of his attack, had hurled much sharper threats of revenge at Fermin. Not just payback, but punishment, and he sounded like he had painful, nasty intentions for that. He was definitely on edge since then - they had gone out on their own after that, and the Nidoking was all too aware of how vulnerable a position they could be in. He was only one mon, and if the dipshit decided not to play fair, he could be easily overwhelmed, leaving no defense for Fermin…

Thankfully he had the ears to hear most things coming a mile away, or more. But that meant he could hear lots of things, most of which were immaterial. He had taken to picking up on Elmac's bio-signs, so he could listen for those in particular, but if he hired someone or something like that, Unger might not be able to tell that from the background noise. So he had to be extra vigilant.

It was worth it, though, to make sure Fermin was all right.

“I really hope that we just don't have to deal with him anymore. I want to focus on other things." Fermin laid against Unger, minding the barbs on his hide. “Like trying to figure out what I want to be. Man...I wish it was easier to figure stuff like that out."

“You're young, still. You'll find your place, I'm sure of it. It'll just take time, and perhaps some catalyst. Who knows, maybe it'll come to you rather than you going to it."

“Things are rarely that easy. But maybe. Would I recognize it if it came, though?"

“Well, maybe you will and maybe you won't. But I'll help you if I think it might be a good prospect, I'll try to point it out to you."

Fermin nodded, rubbing against Unger. “Thanks...I feel like sometimes I rely on you too much. Sometimes get the feeling like you're the one in charge, and I'm the one that follows behind...not that there's anything wrong with that, I guess."

“I wouldn't worry about that, you do more than enough." Unger put an arm around Fermin. “Let's get some sleep."


In the middle of the night, Unger's eyes snapped open. He didn't know what was going on, but he knew something was wrong. He could feel it in his body...something was messing with him. He couldn't see what, couldn't make it out from sounds, only knew that he couldn't move of his own volition.

“Ah…" He heard Fermin's voice next to him. The human was shifting, looking mildly strained, leaning into Unger harder. He could feel the human pushing against his side, dangerously close to poisonous points on his body...he wanted to move Fermin away, but the only thing that happened was his arm held the human tighter, giving him more contact. He felt some of his barbs bend and flex...it was hard to tell if they were jabbing into Fermin or not, but he hoped not. The human's shirt was providing a buffer, though, that might help…

And then he felt his other arm move, against his will. His eyes widened as he saw his claw take hold of Fermin's shirt, in an aggressive manner, and then yank hard on it...his strength easily tore the thin fabric, and he pulled the garment away and tossed it into the fire, ensuring bare skin contact against Fermin. Again his arm held tight, and he was sure this time he felt his barbs embed in Fermin's skin, injecting poison in him...he tried to stop the flow, but again his body refused to behave.

“What the fuck is going on? Come out and show yourself!"

No response, but he could SWEAR he felt amusement in his head...it had to be a fucking Psychic. Nothing else could cause this. But he was pretty helpless against it, it was a natural weakness he had and even though he was trying to fight it it felt like he wasn’t making any progress. Certainly not when he pulled Fermin towards him, against his body, and tore away his shorts and boxers, sending them to burn as well. Now Fermin’s slender body was exposed, his slim frame very meager against the Nidoking’s broad, muscular one...and Unger could both see and smell his arousal, in the form of a rather minute hard-on between his legs.

“S-stop doing this! Come out, you…”

Now he was certain he heard a laugh, or if not heard then it was in his head. His arm finally let go of Fermin, and the human slowly pulled away from him, like he was in a daze; Unger could see several red punctures which had the remnants of purple fluid around them, confirming what he feared. Even more frightening, though, was a sudden spike in his OWN arousal...which shouldn't have been there period, especially not this strong. His own dick was pushing out of his slit, getting longer and thicker, the barbs on his own shaft protruding dangerously. It was a massive contrast to Fermin's, pointed at the tip and barbs dotting the length all the way down, and when it came to size, it vastly outclassed the human's in length and girth, threefold or fourfold in each dimension.

Unger was able to stand up now, panting heavily as hormones coursed through his body. As he did, the form of a Kadabra appeared in front of them, floating in the air and looking down at them malevolently. His heart nearly stopped. “You!"

“You recognize me. Hm, and here I thought only your horn would have noticed." Of course it had to be him - Elmac's Kadabra, Unger was pretty sure he remembered his name as Rahdi. But he still didn't hear Elmac...which meant the Kadabra was the only one here, probably sent by the human to cause trouble. He wouldn't have known Rahdi's life signs, heck the last battle was the first time he'd met Rahdi. And he knew Rahdi was strong, he'd felt those attacks…

“What...what do you want? Did you come here for Elmac's revenge?"

The Kadabra snorted derisively. “He'd probably wish he'd thought of that. No, this is for me." With a slight wave of his hand, Unger felt a buzz in his cock, and grimaced - that asshole was definitely not fighting fair, lust was the hardest thing for a Nidoking to fight off. “You're going to do what I want...and what I want is for you to fuck that human."

“Ngh...wh-why...should I...do that?"

“Because...if you don’t, I’ll simply close his throat and make him suffocate.” That got Unger’s attention - the Pokémon could do that, for sure, it wouldn’t even be that hard. “So if you care about his survival, you’ll do as I say.”

“Fuck...you…” There was no hope for it - he wasn’t even controlling Unger with his powers now, just his words. But the threat was too real, and he was helpless to stop it - he knew he’d never have the chance to attack with the Kadabra focused squarely on him, there wasn’t going to be a lucky Megahorn this time. He stepped over to Fermin, taking hold of him and bending him over...to add insult to injury, he heard a soft gasp from Fermin, one of lust rather than terror, that bastard was making him sound like he wanted this.

“Don't go easy on him. Fuck him like the bitch he is, and you know your body thinks he is."

Oh, he was going to make the Kadabra PAY for this...it wasn't Fermin's fault he was smaller, he was a little late in his maturation cycle but he would fill out. He severely wanted to tell the Kadabra off, but he couldn't...not when he knew what was on the line. I'm sorry, Fermin, I'll make sure I make it up to you somehow… he thought in frustration as he pressed the tip of his cock against the human's tight ass, closed his eyes, and rammed into the hilt.

His first wish was that it didn't feel so goddamn GOOD. It had been a rather long while since his dick had taken any tight hole, and the Kadabra was certainly messing with him, and...well, whatever the case, the jolt of pleasure he felt, that encouraged him to continue, was another problem with all this. And his second wish was that Fermin's voice would have at least had some kind of sign of protest, something that might try to discourage him further, rather than the cry of bliss he did give off. It wasn't like he wanted to rape Fermin, but he especially didn't want any reason to think it was okay!

He tried to hold himself back a bit, but his body betrayed him, and within a few thrusts he was powering in roughly, fucking Fermin with the wild energy that Nidokings were known for, especially for their...well, bitches. Especially with the human clenching down on him, crying out for him, playing the part of the bitch so profusely…

And then Rahdi's voice cut in. “Dig your claws into him. Make sure to get some nice poison through them as you claw him."

That was too far! WAY too far! But...again, what choice did he have? If he refused, maybe the Kadabra would strangle him while they were fucking...with an angry growl, he brought his claws out and dragged them along Fermin's chest. He could feel them going through...and couldn't have been more shocked when Fermin cried out euphorically, and clamped down on him harder. There was no way...he rapidly felt around for the wounds, not knowing how severe they were, but what he felt rapidly closed up. He's...he's using Recover on Fermin?

“Sounds like your bitch loves that," Rahdi said tauntingly. “Best keep it up, wouldn't want to leave him...unsatisfied."

“You fucking savage…" Unger reluctantly kept following the command, trying to keep the damage from ever getting too severe. “What's your fucking angle? What's Elmac trying to get out of this? Why's he so pissed at Fermin?"

“I don't know, and I don't really care." Rahdi's voice suddenly got darker. “I have nothing more to do with him. After you humiliated myself and him, he kicked me off his team. Released me and said I was worthless and useless, that if I couldn't pull my weight then I wasn't worth his time."

That wasn't at all what Unger expected to hear...nor what he WANTED to hear. A pissed-off psychic was as dangerous as a pissed-off dragon, and even harder to placate - one no longer bound to a trainer had no outside control to answer to. “Y-you...he's...what?"

“Oh, trust me...I left him with a very potent parting shot. Wanted to make sure he lived to regret it, but still very much regret it. But since you're the ones who made it happen, I wanted payback on you two as well...and I feel like sticking around."

“You-! What makes you think we'll let you after this?"

Rahdi chuckled evilly. “Oh, come now...you think it’s going to be YOUR choice? I think I’m the one calling the shots here. And the bitch isn’t worthy to decide anything...he should be thankful I’m letting him serve his master properly. And get those claws working.”

“Fucker...what’s the matter with you?” Once again the Nidoking gouged into the human’s skin, leaving furrows that rapidly closed up and got another shaky moan out of Fermin.

“What? He likes it. Can't you hear him moaning? Don't blame me that the bitch is a kinky little shit. Relax, I'm not going to let you kill him - I didn't decide to claim him just to let him go THAT easily."

Unger snarled darkly, furious at his own helplessness as much as at the sadistic Kadabra. He'd have to do something...maybe he wouldn't be able to tonight, but he'd have to come up with something, to ensure he could break the Kadabra's hold and ensure that his bitch would...his bitch would...his BITCH

Oh, that fucker.

It was like the word had been stricken from his brain, the one he wanted to use and should have used...he couldn't find himself associating anything with Fermin other than 'bitch' or similar words. And others were creeping in...for him, Master, Alpha...and even worse, he was getting the same sense for Rahdi! He tried to wrest out of that, but it wasn't working...apart from the Kadabra's raw power versus his vulnerability, his mind was also clouded by lust, which was making the idea of being the master to a bitch more desirable. And Fermin fit the mold, physically and mentally...wasn't he just saying that it seemed like Unger was in charge? No...no, he had to try to keep that out of his head…

Whether it was the stress or the dominance taking over, his next round of clawing through Fermin's skin was quicker and more forceful. And then he heard it the loud cry that rang in his ears, the sound and scent of fresh, weak seed being released...Fermin was cumming, from his claws abusing him like that! He couldn't understand...Rahdi must have been messing with him badly, but how could something so violent arouse him like that? Unless he really was that kind of bitch...but no, no, it had to be the damn psychic, he couldn't let himself fall into the trap of believing any of it…but Fermin's squealing under him, his clamping down on the Nidoking's cock, getting his insides speared on his barbs and more poison in his system, was driving the feral part of his mind crazy. It wasn't going to be long before he released as well...

“Heh...look at those weak spurts. Truly fit for a bitch.” Unger clenched his jaw as the Kadabra’s words cut through the air. “But I think he can get bitchier…I’ve heard a little rumor about Nidokings. They have a nice little mix of toxins that can, ah, influence a human’s form, make them more of a proper omega and keep them in prime bitch mode for good. What do you know, I have a nice chance to put that in action here…”

“Ngh...d-don’t...you…” Unger couldn’t even get the words out before he felt the odd churning in his cock and balls, his body being coerced into collecting the deviant cocktail for delivery into Fermin. This was wrong, he couldn’t do this, he couldn’t allow this to be done to his bitch, even as he could imagine the slender human squirming on his cock, desperate for more attention from his master...he couldn’t make him stay like this, a pretty, tiny-dicked omega that would be perfectly suited for servicing Pokémon, eager and happy in his role, with him as the master and having dictated the role over his body…

In an instant, the betrayal was complete. He let out a roar, his claws dug through Fermin’s skin as he unloaded his noxious seed into the human bitch. Load after load of poisonous fluid forcefully deposited into Fermin’s body, rapidly absorbed into him, his body rapidly getting thinner, weaker, slightly smaller, and his cock and balls shrinking to half their size, locking him into a weak omega state for good. And he couldn’t even find it in himself to feel a lick of shame over it...especially not with the way Fermin was moaning over it, like he was feeling himself get locked in and was loving it just as much. Struggling to feel bad, and part of him was wondering why...Fermin loved it, didn’t he? And he wanted to make Fermin happy, right? And it wasn’t like he was doing anything that was really hurting him, not with Rahdi healing it all…

Speaking of, the Kadabra had floated over to them, and was settling in front of Fermin's face. His own cock was out, tapered and smooth, with a thick base grading to a thinner tip…Unger couldn't help but notice that even the tip was almost as thick as Fermin's tiny dick, and its length was over thrice what the human bitch was now packing. He was pressing it up against Fermin's face with an evil grin...it was very clear what he wanted. And oddly, though he didn't feel any psychic control on his mind anymore...he didn't have any desire to stop it. No...not even that...he wanted Fermin to suck the Kadabra off. He didn't know why...but maybe it had to do with his still-throbbing dick buried in the human's backside…

He started humping again, squelches coming from his seed as he bucked back into the human, no longer holding back his claws. The furrows seemed to heal even faster now that his restraint was lowered, and he wasn't really worrying about the poison anymore either, since he wasn't really noticing anything that bad coming from it. And his eyes were watching Fermin's head as the human opened his mouth and started to lick and suck at Rahdi's tapered cock. A hum of pleasure came from the Kadabra as he held Fermin's head close to his shaft, encouraging the treatment...and Fermin was replying as a proper bitch should, eagerly working it without a hint of reservation, while he continued to moan from the rough rutting he was getting in his rear.

“Yeah...see, this isn't so bad," Rahdi muttered quietly, more than loud enough for Unger's ears though. And he didn't really have the wherewithal to argue. His cock sank in hard and fast, the barbs leaking poison and jabbing it in whenever Fermin clamped down on him. It felt like the harder he thrust, the more Fermin tried to cling to him, encouraging him more and more even without words. He was feeling less and less inhibited as the lust bubbled through him, overtaking him more fully.

Fermin was actively bobbing on the Kadabra's staff now, letting Rahdi bury it in his throat and slurping on whatever parts weren't embedded inside at a given moment. Unger was actually enjoying the sight of it, now grinning like the dominant creature he was at the idea of the human bitch being spitroasted. He started pushing Fermin into the psychic's crotch, helping to force that dick into his throat as he stretched the human's ass, giving him all he could handle and all he wanted. His lecherous growls were starting to get louder as he raked his claws along that chest and stomach, leaving streaks of poison wherever they didn't embed. Blood was mingled with those streaks, not a ton of it but enough to be very obvious.

He felt Fermin shake again, shudder and clench down on him, saw his grip on Rahdi tighten as he came again, forced into another orgasm from the violent and domineering treatment. His moans were muffled by Kadabra cock, but Unger could hear them clearly, as sodden with euphoria as he'd ever heard come from Fermin...he didn't just seem to love this, he seemed to love it more than anything he'd ever loved before. He wanted to be overpowered, to be used by his masters…

It was too much for Unger, he roared loudly as he unleashed another load of thick, toxic seed into Fermin's insides. The powerful masculine fluid tinged with his cocktail, making good and sure that Fermin's lockdown remained permanent and helping to make sure his chemicals would be especially attractive to the human...not at all imposed by Rahdi this time, it was all his doing, and he no longer cared, not now. Not when he'd been given no reason to.

Rahdi came shortly after, grunting and groaning as he pumped his own healthy load of jizz into Fermin's mouth and throat. Wiping his resistance to Rahdi's psychic intrusions, not that it seemed he had far to go, the way Fermin was sucking and swallowing down everything...he continued to buck into the human's face until he'd exhausted his load, before pulling out and dragging the leaky tip across Fermin's face. Not to be outdone, Unger did the same, jerking himself out and spurting the last few shots he had onto Fermin's ass, painting it with his mark.

It was a sight to behold, and Unger was far from done. He was still horny, would be for a while thanks to being pent up...and he had an eager and willing bitch ready to help him out. By the time the night was done, he'd be nice and sated, oh yes…


Unger awoke to another erection and a cracking sound. Blinking into the morning sun, he tilted his head up just in time to see a Kadabra levitating a Poké Ball in the air in front of him. Unger's Poké Ball, it had to be. “Hey...whaddaya think you're doing?"

“Exactly what I want," came the smug reply. Grunting, Unger pushed himself to his feet, but before he could do anything, the ball shattered in the air, and Rahdi let the pieces fall. Unger felt it through his body just the tiniest bit as the connection was broken.

“The hell was that for?"

“He's our bitch now. He doesn't deserve a tool that could give him power over you. You're the one with power over him."

Unger growled, hands balling into fists. “Look, just because you fucked with my head yesterday doesn't mean you get to have your way! Maybe you made me screw him up, maybe I got lost in the fucking haze, but I'm still pissed at you for making me do that and making him sound like he enjoyed it!" Rahdi snorted and laughed, further riling the Nidoking. “What the hell's so funny?!"

“Quite a lot, really. You acting all big and tough and defensive now when you were more into being the alpha last night than I was, for one. And for two...I never mind-controlled Fermin. Not once."

That stopped Unger cold. “You're...you're lying. You have to be."

“Do I? Does it really surprise you that much that the bitch might just have been a fully willing participant in all this? Do you think it was just my sadistic tendencies that were getting me to tell you to claw and bite him, to make him a wimpy little underdeveloped human bitch for all time...or did it cross your mind that maybe I was just relaying the things HE wanted?"??Unger sputtered, lost in confusion. It couldn't be true, could it? He had to have played with Fermin's head...he couldn't have hidden those desires from Unger that completely, could he have? And then he took a sharp breath inward when he felt a tongue start to lick his cock...he looked down, and Fermin was looking back up at him, meekly, shyly, but with a smile. “It's true...I wanted it all, my big strong Master...I want you to use me like this...I enjoy it so much...and it feels right to me, it's always felt right...you said that the right thing might find me, didn't you?"

The Nidoking couldn't really respond with anything except a growling moan as the pleasure started to course through him again...a different sort of awakening from the one he'd just had, and just as unstoppable. Maybe it was true, or maybe it wasn't...Rahdi might have been controlling him right then and there to say those things, or Fermin might have been totally genuine about it, or maybe it was a mix of the two...at this point, did it really matter? The changes had been fixed in place, he was on top in every sense now, Fermin would be the way he would be regardless...maybe the best he could do now was be the best master he could be to his bitch. And Rahdi...well, he'd just have to get used to the Kadabra, because Fermin seemed not to mind him at all. Especially the way he wiggled his rump as Rahdi took position behind him, hot-dogging his cock along that cleft…

Maybe he'd just...believe the thing that would make it all turn out for the best.