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Some critiscm or some form of... Guidence? Would be great; I'm just blindly hoping to get better at this writing thing, so some comments or tips would be great. Enjoy... Chapter 15: A Cold Loss. Rain silently fell, lightly pelting the land...
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**Luna and Thief Chapter 17: Resonating Ruminations** While small shards of sunlit cheery trees had peered amongst the forest floor below, Logan, Trevor and Rebecca continued onward through the thick woods. Logan went to check his compass again while...
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**Luna and Thief The Orange Isle's Chapter Nineteen: A Quiet Day** If time slowed to a tread when everything went to hell, then Seo wondered if being stuck in a blaze of mid-day sun - without any knowledge of time - had been a slice of...
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**Luna and Thief The Orange Isle's Chapter Sixteen: Bonds** She was never fond of snow. It always drained now, when she had been younger - Seo knew snow had been a wondrous thing. **_The first time she saw anything like it, she...
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**Luna and Thief The Orange Isle's Chapter Fifteen: Promises** _"Yeah, like that. Keep your arms to your side; move your body into it."_ The voice had fluttered in no different than springtime sun-rays across a vague-green lawn. _"Just like...
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**Luna and Thief: The Orange Isles Chapter Ten: Ferocity** _Water... Water... How do you make that, Esi? There's something more to you then you've shown._ His fingers coursed and graced a keyboard with a desperate amount of speed as his...
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**Luna and Thief: The Orange Isles Chapter Nine: Two Steps Behind.** There was something off about the cage. The Pikachu knew that for sure, as he sat with all sorts of noise around him. Gentle noise... while this large Arcanine had laid down...
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**Luna and Thief: The Orange Isles Chapter Six: A Step Ahead** Valencia Island. A place that left Absol's heart to gently beat as her paws pushed down into the ship deck below her. The numb, expressive grain ran against her tough leather paw...
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**Luna and Thief: The Orange Isles Chapter Five: A Quiet Night.** It had been that restlessness that got to him. Thief had been awake the whole time; everyone had only listened to Griffin talk from outside. He was quiet, alongside the night...
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**Luna and Thief: The Orange Isles Chapter Four: A Somber Veil** The static had driven him nuts over the last hour, just the silently obnoxious crackle of the feed just barely connecting to him; growls here and there filled his ears before a...
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**Luna and Thief: The Orange Isles Chapter Three: Sparks and Fangs** Naval Island, Seo knew it well - the sizeable mountainous volcano which overlooked the entirety of the island from every angle. **_She knew that home had hardly been a step...
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**Luna and Thief: The Orange Isles Chapter Two: Beyond Dead Eyes** Dawn shattered the horizon while Griffin had already been awake, dressed, and held a thermos in his hands. He just stared out at the trainer village in silence and gingerly drank in...