Pop. Pop. Crackle. I lay by the glowing hearth, flames dancing in front of me. Sounds of water tap, tap, along the roof and windows. It is so easy to fall asleep these days. The gentle crackling of fire, rhythmic taps of rain on the roof, the...
A Lot of Commas, Alcohol, Cabin, Clean, Dream, First Person, Food, Ice, Male, Sleep, Snow, imagery
[4](%5c) so here, i put a lot of commas in the sentence because edward is pretty much out of breath from the wrestling; his heart is racing and he's got the butterflies. so it's like the sentence is panting too.
Anal, Dark, Docking, Dragons Lair Contest 2, First Person, First Time, Kissing, M/M, Male, Movie Theater, Oral, Snow Leopard, Tiger, Violence (Not In Yiff)