All's Fair - Part 1
Foreword This is my first novel. I'd like to note that a lot of things change later on in the story because I didn't plan this all out in advance and that there are a lot of plot holes (stuff like how 'insane' my protagonist is - he started...
All's Fair - Part 22
**Part 22** A slight, cold breeze off of the sea ruffled my fur as I sat quietly in the leaves at the small cemetery, knees pulled up to my chest. It smelled like another storm would be rolling in tonight. Summer had ended quite abruptly at the end...
All's Fair - Part 16
I hope you all enjoy reading this. By all means, please comment and critique; I love feedback. Nick is bisexual, and the story has some homosexual content. Don't read if that bothers you etc. Thanks! - Xi **All's Fair - Part...
All's Fair - Part 12
I hope you all enjoy. By all means, please comment; I love feedback. Nick is bisexual, and the story has some homosexual content. Don't read if that bothers you etc. Thanks! - Xi **All's Fair - Part 12** The icy sidewalk...
All's Fair - Part 17
I've reworked/moved most of the conversation with Dan and Halo from Part 16 to the beginning of this one. Thanks once again to [Tank Jaeger](%5C) for that suggestion. Anyway. Nick's bi, so read at your own risk. Feel free to comment/critique/any other...
All's Fair - Part 19b
1. I guess I should quit trying to make promises about when I'll post, because it doesn't work at all. I sincerely apologize. Also, thank you so much to everyone who's stuck with me thus far; you've been wonderful. 2. I've retouched Part 19a. You...
All's Fair - Part 2
This story contains homo/bisexuality (implied more than explicit) and violence, so consider yourself warned. I know this needs work. Please comment with your thoughts and especially constructive criticism so that I can keep improving my...
All's Fair - Part 14
I hope you all enjoy reading this. By all means, please comment and critique; I love feedback. Nick is bisexual, and the story has some homosexual content. Don't read if that bothers you etc. Thanks! - Xi **All's Fair - Part...
All's Fair - Part 6
The story's main character is bi, so don't read if you don't want to. As ever, your thoughts and criticism are welcome so that I can get better. Is it believable? Did something in my writing style bug you? Should I have more/less of...
All's Fair - Part 10
Umm... yeah. I had a HORRIBLE time writing this chapter. It's short and late because I have absolutely NO CLUE how to write the next part. As always, I'm happy for feedback and criticism (prefferably constructive, but honesty is more...
All's Fair - Part 13
I hope you all enjoy. By all means, please comment; I love feedback. If you don't like it, please let me know, preferably with an explanation; ditto if you do :). Nick is bisexual, and the story has some homosexual content. ...
All's Fair - Part 7
The story's main character is bi, so don't read if you don't want to. As ever, your thoughts and criticism are welcome so that I can get better. Are things moving too slow? Do I have enough detail? Are the characters fun and/or believable?...