The Red Star: Chapter 2
Yeah, I'm switching back to third person cuz' it's better. Lol. This is the second installment of a story I'm writing, it's tight. It's kind of rushed but I still think it's better than my first. I need to rush cuz I'm heading to Utah for a week and I...
The Red Star: Chapter 1
This is my first story, so keep that in mind, and grade accordingly as long as it's no "A for effort" Bullshit. I'm gonna use stories from experiences/fantasies so it's in the third person to make it more believable. I want real crits, stuff that I...