Broken 3: A New Land and a New Guard
My eyes nearly jumped out of my skull as I recognized the dark blue uniform with it's various emblems and a large golden badge on the wearer's chest. The wearer on display stood after thanking me and gave me a full view of his form. He was a rather...
The Sorrowful Peacock: Collared Birdie
In the year 3015, The lush planet of Panos had finally absolved themselves of slavery, by introducing a intricate and fair legal system know as Pet **. ** Under this legal system fur, scale, and feathered races were all made equal in the eyes of the...
Broken Chapter 2: The Cum-Cat in the Festering Lands
I am a person that believes the only way to get better at something is to practice. So using this logic, If I want _Broken _to be a better story, then I have to write more chapters for it. As always I love critiques so please feel free to comment...
Broken Chapter 1: Pet Republished and Edited
Finally ,with a lot of critiquing and tons of advice from the community here, I am finally able to republish this story and feel proud of it. i got it edited by a nice honest "Gnollish Storm Paladin in Mimic-hide armor", his words not mine. He helped...