Welcome to the Neighboorhood, Prelude to Yiff
"i doubt that talking could help," william said. dante unfolded his leg and then leaned forward.
Rogue Wind - The Arctic Goddess
'sounds like the liquor talking.' 'yeah, it probably is. all right, stop with the ears for a moment so i can lie down on this thing.' reliath stopped playing around with nathan's ears 'why don't you sleep on the bed?'
Rogue Wind - The Vixen
All the time he would hear hauvin and arguln talking about 'the good old days' back when they'd raid merchant ships, pillage small towns, and fight off the navy. these days they never did any of those things.
Poem #84: Once Said
Well, this is my first dialogue poem. it's kind of more of a rough draft, and i may change things later, depending on my mood. just got in the mood to write something, and this is what came from it. please comment and tell me what you think!
Rogue Wind - The Four Cities
The one conversation which popped up the most besides books though was probably about having a child and what age they should have one.
Rogue Wind - The Nobles
I guess the only other thing i have to add is that i feel a tad guilty at times on how anything i write is heavy in dialogue and lacking everywhere else.
Death from the Shadows - Chapter 5
CHAPTER FIVEMuch like Abegail, Nyeusi did not get a lot of sleep. He would doze off every now and then though it was always broken up by dreams that would force him awake. In the times between his dozing off, many memories came to mind, memories he had...
Death from the Shadows - Chapter 4
CHAPTER FOURAbegail didn't get much sleep after her call to Dave. Too much adrenaline, and admittedly her nerves were starting to get to her as well. While she wants this information, she wants to get this panther. There is a part of the back of her...
Death from the Shadows - Chapter 3
The voice on the other end of the phone clears his throat, before speaking. "abegail, what the hell are you doing calling me? it's not even three o'clock in the morning, and i have a meeting later this morning.
The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue
Nothing is happening other than talking; also known as: talking heads syndrome.
Greenhorn
But disconnected dialogue is fast. and horse is horny. "you cook a good meal, greenhorn." "thanks, laco. best you ever had, right?" "you think you somehow cooked the best meal i ever had on your very first ride out, kid?
Getting Back; Chapter 2
"got myself a living, breathing, walking, living, talking, squeezing, living, walking, breathing..." there wasn't even any syncopation... "dad, can i..." "no", came the blunt voice from the other room.