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Pain. That was the first sensation. It flashed for but a moment but it was certainly memorable. Next came nausea, hot flashes, then cold flashes. Finally awareness came to him as the beep of a heart monitor came through the haze. The weight of an...
More Tainted Love
* * * I woke up screaming. It happened again; the third time this week and it was only wednesday. Well, technically Thursday now that it was 2AM. This damn dream just will not leave me alone. it has been 10 years since I was rescued but still it...
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Sam was waiting in the medical bay when the other Kor'Ran started to file in. None of them looked too happy so Sam had to guess as to what Troy told them to get them here. One was even rubbing his eyes like he had just woken up. She had to admit, those...
New Beginnings
Sam's ship was looming over them now as they shuttled into the hangar. Sam couldn't help but chuckle at the other Kor'Ran staring and looking around the massive bay. You could fit several large starships in the belly of this beast and that wasn't even...
The Lost One: The Queen
Queen Arlan, the second strongest being in the known universe, had never felt so insulted in her long life. There was no way this young Kor'Ran could be her child. She made two eggs and only one hatched 15,000 years ago. Maza did not know enough of the...
The Lost One: Hunt
The Kor'Ran. They were not supposed to exist. By all accounts, their parent races were not supposed to be capable of breeding. Yet, here stood over 40 of them, each wearing a sneer that would make any woman want to scrub her skin off. There was one,...
The Lost One: Run Away
He flew until the sun was low on the horizon. Everything had felt like a dream induced by some really good drugs. A dream that was suddenly very real. Everything came crashing down for Sam as he reigned in his mind. Lacy had been the one who...
The Lost One: Changes
Okay so i am rewriting my story. i'm going to leave up the original chapters for now and i would love to get any input as to which seems better: plot, style or anything else. any comments are appreciated as always and i hope you enjoy the read! ...
The Lost One: Return
Sam looked out over the city from the peak of a mountain. It's been five years since seeing this town. Five years of traveling, learning, hiding. Much had changed for Sam's views in religion, politics and even her own sexuality. She came to grips...
The Lost One: the Kor'Ran
It took the better part of a month but Sam finally got all of the women home. She reflected on it and realized that most of the trouble she had was specifically in convincing the systems she was entering that she was not there for war purposes. In hind...
The Lost One: Taxi
A small crowd started to gather inside the control room. Many of the women were curious as to why the alarms began going off and some of them were in a panic. It didn't help much when they got there and looked out the window to see a grouping of ships...
First Meeting
As if this guy wasn't creepy enough, he was wearing a Sigil of Baphomet proudly around his neck. Raine wanted to strangle the guy with the chord for following her around all day. Again. She just wanted to get through school without attracting the...