[QC-01] Bayou Bulge
Art - Foxra
Writing/Olfrin - runa216
Commissioner/Vale - roamingshadow
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In this story, Vale the Croconaga is testing out her new enchanted (Voodoo, basically) doll with Olfrin, a fellow scholar with interest in such magics!
Bayou Bulge
Vale was anticipating a fantastic evening when she slithered her way into the Tav-Piroque, a local pub on the shores of the marshland she called her home. The Croconaga had been practicing her enchantment skills on an effigy of herself - a doll made of fabric and infused with her scales - and she wanted to see if her spells had worked properly and she would experience the same things that the doll would endure. After poking it gently with some needles and rubbing its cloaca, she was reasonably certain that her enchantment had taken hold in the object, but the only way to be sure was to test it out on a third party, since her own mind and magic couldn't influence it.
She knew she needed to find another who was both strong looking and willing to experiment if she was to properly test out the enchanted effigy. That could mean one who was willing to do anything for sexual pleasure, or it could mean finding one who seemed intelligent enough to have a natural curiosity that would drive him.
After closing the door behind her, Vale felt her spirits drooping as she could only see drunken fools and slutty females, at least at first. Patient and willing to put in the work needed, she ordered a drink of honeyed ale and a thick meaty steak - medium rare, of course - without any of the appetizers. As a carnivore she had no interest in potato or asparagus, just the meat.
During her meal she glanced around, surveying every new patron and wayward vagrant that came and went to see if any were lucky enough to fit her needs. Eventually, as her meal came to completion, she saw a very tall and muscular looking creature with sleek, two-shaded gray skin accented by yellow highlights walk in, book in hand and adorned only by a tribal skirt and sash. He looked to be a hybrid of dolphin and shark, but she couldn't be sure.
That curiosity drove her to toss the last of her meal in her maw and meet him before he sat down. Though he seemed apprehensive at first - clearly eager to just sit down to enjoy some food - his eyes seemed to light up when she started talking about her experimentation and what it meant for him. He still ordered a meal and ate it at his leisure, but he kept with her the whole time, eager to join her afterward.
Upon consuming his meal, he wiped his dolphin-like beak clean like a gentleman and stood tall, helping to escort Vale out of the pub, eager to enjoy himself with her in the most sensual of ways. Within steps of the door after they exited, he turned to her and grinned, showing his sharp teeth, extending a hand for her to shake. "The name is Olfrin, by the way."
"Vale." She responded, then turned to slither her way down the shores. "Follow me, please."
Olfrin did as instructed, his long legs keeping stride with her slithering pace. The mud of the bayou was slightly sticky and made his steps sink in past the toes, but he didn't let that bother him. Instead, he focused on the experimentation she had in mind. "So tell me more about what it is that you plan on doing to me, Vale. You explained it a bit while I was eating, but I presume there were too many fools there to truly tell me what was up. I can respect that, but I'd love to hear more."
Vale had intended to keep much of the experiment to herself, as part of her tests would include a blind test subject who couldn't alter the results by trying to influence them, but Olfrin seemed to be perceptive and intelligent enough to be as keen on finding results as she. With that in mind, Vale pulled out the effigy from her satchel and showed it to him. "This here doll, it represents me."
He gently plucked it from her hands to look it over, lightly squeezing it and poking at its belly. "I can see that. You did a damn fine job on it, from what I can tell. A spittin' image, if I do say so myself. But my question is more about its purpose. You already explained that you had manifested an effigy, but to what effect? Are you planning on sacrificing it to the gods in order to give me the virility of a titan? How is that supposed to work? I like the thought, but I don't think the Gods work that way."
She chuckled at him, twitching her body and tail as his fingertips touched and pinched at the effigy. "Nothing like that. I have been working on perfecting a spell that would make it so that anything that happens to that doll will also happen to me, for good or for ill."
Olfrin flicked his tongue gently as his gills flared out. "Really, now? I've heard of such enchantments but I've never actually seen it in action before. Tell me, do you feel this?" He cradled the doll in his palm, belly down as he trailed a single claw down its spine from the base of her neck to the tip of her tail.
As expected, a visible shiver surged through her body as the thick scales along her back tensed up perfectly in line with the touch of his claw. After he gave her tail a pinch, urging her to tug at it and coil in a ball near him, she glared at him, eyes narrowed and sinister. "It seems so." She admitted, arms crossed over her chest. I do hope that you don't take advantage of that."
"Now why would I take advantage of you in such a vulnerable situation? I've been keen on learning this sort of magic for years now, and I'd be honored to have you teach me. If it works, then we will have proven it to be real and not a myth, and that is something that interests me greatly. Sort of hard to gain your trust if I, say, snapped this thing's neck, isn't it?"
His words put a deep sense of unease within her, so she extended her hand to ask for the effigy back. "We can pick up on this more when we get back to my home, for now I think it would be better if I had the doll."
Olfrin went to give it to her, but stopped mid-motion to look at the anatomically correct cloaca where her body and tail met. "Oh, what's this?" He joked, pulling his hand away from her. "Was this what you had intended for me to utilize to bolster my virility? Very interesting, if so." While looking directly into her eyes, he wrapped his fingers around the doll while prodding at the genital slit with one claw, gently prying it open to reveal the soft pink flesh inside. As his digits pressed at the toy's cloaca, Vale's back end squirmed and tensed up, tail curling in delight.
"Maybe." She grunted, holding back both a moan and a laugh. She found it amusing that Olfrin had so easily seen through her ruse, but she wasn't going to bother lying or downplaying the truth of the matter. Instead she simply shrugged and turned from him, slithering down the shores of the marsh between fallen logs and patches of tall grass poking through the water's surface.
Olfrin truly was no fool, and could see through her playful teasing as the flirtation it was. He chose not to follow her, but instead slip his finger up inside the doll itself, relishing the soft squishiness of its insides massaging his digits as he sloshes his fingertip from side to side. His invasion of the effigy forced her to stop in place, instinctively lifting her tail to expose her plump, partially gaped open cloaca to him, a noticeable bulge forming in her belly. "Seems it works, doesn't it?" He mused as he pulled his tribal skirt and sash off, tossing the garments on a log nearby.
Vale turned and slithered her way back to him, struggling to not let the girth in the toy - and subsequently her - impact her movement. "You're doing it wrong." She said to him, rearing up so that she was at eye level with the aquatic hybrid. She gently pulled on the doll, using it to stroke is finger a few times as her eyes twitched in delight. "This is how you're supposed to do it." She then pulled the toy off his finger and reached down to is groin with her other hand, rubbing at his slit to coax his cock from its depths, revealing a tapered length that curled at the tip to show it's prehensile nature.
"Oh, I'm pretty sure I was doing it right; it's called foreplay, darling." He countered, cradling her hand to bring the doll back up to his lips, allowing him to slide his tongue out and into the toy, appendage writhing in waves to pleasure it as his cock grew in her hand. When he pulled his tongue back into his maw, he smiled a toothy grin at her and stepped into her, wrapping his member around her wrist to moisten her with his lubricant before letting go. While she was still in close to him, he pressed the juicy cloaca of the toy against his cock tip, gently easing it onto him like a condom.
She grunted and curled her tail behind her, arching up over her back like a scorpion as a subtle bulge made its way down her form. The croconaga raised her upper body to press her chest to his, easing him onto his back while her tail end wrapped in a figure eight around his ankles and lower legs. "Is that good enough for you?" She asked, grabbing the doll to help ease it deeper onto his cock.
Before long, the peculiarly malleable toy had come to nearly cover his entire length from the narrow tip to the thick base. The look on Olfrin's face was that of surprise more than anything else as he saw her form gently widen the deeper his cock delved into the toy. Perhaps it was his physical desires, or perhaps it was his desire for knowledge, but he couldn't help himself from wrapping his hand around the doll and forcing it deeper onto his prehensile member, forcing its cloaca to spread open farther to accommodate him as his tip was most of the way through the toy.
"That's not what I meant." She said, as she pulled her tail up closer to him, exposing her ventral opening as her walls writhed and undulated in waves. "I want you in me, to feel what it's like to have my magic working you as well as my body. Plus, I'll get better data that way."
Olfrin seemed a little put off by her return to talk of data collection in the heat of the moment, but he didn't let that affect him one bit as he grabbed her tail and forced her cloaca to cover his member - effigy and all - before starting to thrust. Vale smiled broadly as he grinded his hips up under the base of her tail, slowly falling onto her back in the mud as her tail end curled and wrapped around his hips and fins. Her powerful naga half gave him a nice coil all while forcing herself to swallow up much of his length, squeezing around him both naturally and through the help of the doll-condom.
"Isn't this a whole lot more fun?" She asked, grinning up at him from the shores of the bog. "Isn't this far more sensual than just the condom?"
He laughed back and wrapped both of his arms around the base of her tail, forcing her cloaca to slide down his shaft as her tail tip poked and wagged happily against his belly. He possessed a swimmer's body, so while he was thick, he was abnormally strong even when compared to the serpentine body of a croconaga's back end. "Of course!" He countered, slowly picking up his pace to pound at her vent, using his whole body in waves to accentuate the sensuality between them.
Vale had some thoughts in her mind about telling him not to be gentle and that she wanted to see just how far he was willing to go, but the harder her squeezed at the base of her tail and the stronger he kept slamming his hips against her, the more clear it became that he didn't need her encouragement. Instead, she just laid her head back on a nearby rock and hugged it to anchor herself between it and Olfrin as she felt the throb of his cock swelling inside her thanks not only to his vigor but the magic of the effigy that was placed atop his tendril-like member. She basked in the traditional mating he offered her, but was especially fond of the way his cock tip wagged and wiggled about inside the doll, giving her a full-bodied sensation of sexual pleasure from vent to belly.
"You like that, do you?" He asked as he clenched his groin, forcing his member to swell and the tip to curl up inside the effigy, the shifting of his length actually causing a visible bulge in her actual body. Pleased with himself, he increased his pace and worked her up until her ventral scales were sopping wet and splashing with her arousal, oozing her serpentine fluids between them. The added lubricant moistened his already-smooth skin, allowing him to more sensually grind up against her as her scales rubbed against him, the rough ridges caressing his sleek belly and his own rough shark-like skin.
This didn't halt him one bit, in fact it only urged him forth to keep at her without and reprieve. Though not initially what she had expected from one of his type, she was pleasantly surprised at just how much endurance he possessed. She had expected from a half-phin creature to buck and cum, much like a stallion, but he just kept going! His hips never stopped grinding and thrusting, his body moving in sultry motions as though he were swimming in a race as their tails entwined with another. His powerful hands kept at her tail base, squeezing tight to keep her in place as he carried on.
Vale got back up to her elbows and smiled at him, quavering a bit as if she couldn't decide whether she wanted him to keep going or finish up. Her distraction seemed to work on him, as he locked eyes with her and gave one last final thrust as his dexterous cock tip pulsated and waved about inside her, spraying the inside of the doll with copious jets of his seed.
Almost instantly, her belly expanded and grew before her very eyes, quadrupling in girth to bloat her to a near comical level. She felt a tenseness and heat throughout her entire body as her scales stretched and distended to give her a bulge like no other.
Deep inside the toy, Olfrin's cock was spurting stream after stream of his essence into her, the curl of his cock tip keeping the effigy from popping off, thus continuing to inflate the doll - and consequently her - full of cum, yet he didn't stop! He kept thrusting and twitching his member, further stimulating her vastly oversensitive depths with his wiggling member, sloshing about in his own cum captured in the toy's body.
"W-wow!" She crooned, struggling to not move her body too much as she felt both bloated and inflated with the sloshing of what seemed like a barrel or two full of seed. The substantial ejaculate in the effigy emulated the bloat to scale, making her look like she swallowed a cow, if not for the way her belly scales and length jiggled with every touch. "I admit I wasn't expecting that much from you!"
Olfrin slowly pulled out of her vent with the bloated condom of a toy still dangling off the tip of his member, shifting to his feet as he stood over her while his member started to retreat. He pinched the opening of the effigy's cloaca and pulled it off his member, trapping the seed inside. "Do you want this for anything?" He asked, glancing sidelong at the doll with a look of approval on his face.
Her tail end squiggled and curled in on itself, muscles clenching around her vent to hold back the cum that wasn't there. "I guess you can let it out now, if you'd like." She managed to squeeze out through grunts, trying her best to maintain control of herself. "I think I proved that it works."
"Very well." He acknowledged with a subtle bow of his head. He then dumped the doll upside down, letting his seed fall to the mud and soak in with the rest of the water.
In response, Vale's body shriveled and deflated back to its proper form, feeling empty and loose and sloppy with her walls still giving off the sensation of being coated in the seed of her exotic partner. After he stepped off her body, leaning down to give her the doll back, she finally let out a long exhalation having just realized that she had been holding her breath ever since his ejaculation had filled her to the brim.
"Th-thank you." She accepted the doll, squeezing it gently to force the mess out of it. "I don't suppose you would be interested in coming back to my hut to help me out with my notes, would you? I'd be honored to see what more, uh, data I can extract from your specimen."
Olfrin smiled. "Sounds like a lot of fun to me. Let's go."