Stop.. please!
Just a few quick notes! This is my first story in a very, very long time. This one contains no real "Erotic" content (Only a very graphic description of a naked girl) but that will be introduced later, when i feel like it, hahaha! Anyways, i would like some serious feedback on this first part of the story, i will probably finish this in a second chapter, but its not really material for a long series. Anyways, leave feedback, the second chapter will by up sometime in the near future. Also, as a warning, this series circles around two people who are both twelve.______________________________________________________
Just moment ago, it had all seemed like such a fabulous idea! They had it all planned, and the plan certainly worked out well, just hide in the lockers, and wait. Zack, or Zap, as most of his friends, or rather, fellow students called him, and a few boys from his class had snuck off before the lesson was over, to hide in the girls dressing room, and wait for them to finish their gym class and come out to shower. For the boy, who was new to the sudden concept of puberty, it was all great, the almost religious fantasies of looking at a naked girl had indeed troubled the kid for quite some time, and the magazines his dad hid in the box underneath his bed was just not the same, the woman there were all so.. overwhelming, to say the least. But now, Zap had not just agreed because he wanted to see naked girl, no, what was making his palms all sweaty was the thought of seeing one particular girl naked. Nikki was the sweetest, cutest and most adorable little bunny around, and Zap, a sort of clumsy out-of-place golden retriever had a soft spot for her. Now, curiosity was one thing, but in the mind of a twelve years old boy, the curiosity was more of an obsession, and he could never seem to stop thinking about her.
Now, squeezed inside a lock with two boys he barely knew, Jake and Robert, things were a little bit awkward. Zap wasn't the most popular guy in class, that would probably be Robert. Robert was a strong, cool cheetah, always wearing the right clothes, even his bloody underpants were expensive! No surprise that everybody liked Robert, and Zap would never dare refuse any offer Robert made, in the simple hope of just receiving a tiny bit of the attention he got. Jake was as stupid as Robert was smart, he was no more than a typical sidekick, not very sharp, but he was indeed one of the best at seemingly all sports. Both of them had girlfriends, whereas Zap barely talked to any girls at all, he usually got all red and clumsy whenever he got any attention, especially when Nikki was right in front of him he had a bad habit of walking straight into closed doors, or falling down from chairs. As embarrassed as he would get, her cute giggles were like a reward, an angel singing on his shoulder.
Now, things were getting very awkward. Zack looked down at his watch, the girls, shouldn't they have been here by now? Something seemed amiss, but he couldn't figure out what.
Much to his surprise Robert and Jake started to snicker, what on earth was going on? The answer to that was soon to be discovered. Suddenly Zack felt a set of four strong hands pushing him out of the locker, and with a loud thud he went face down on the floor. The sound of Jake and Robert's loud laughter as they ran from the room, was soon to be replaced by the thundering of almost 30 girls, running into the locker room. They were all laughing, most of the still wearing their sport clothes, a few their underwear, and the ones from the swimteam were still in their swimsuits. They all seemed to gather around Zack, obviously prepared and ready for him being there!
"Zap! You perv! You dog! Sneaking in on us, are you?" A girl from his class squealed, her fake fury ruined by the obvious amusement in her voice, and most of the other girls were also laughing their lungs out.
"N-no! I-I swear'hhggnn!" Zack tried, but was violently interrupted by a foot on his mouth, muffling his voice.
"Do you know what we do to pervy boys, sneaking in on the girls like this?" Another girl snickered at him in a voice that dripped of some sort of sadistic amusement.
"Off with his pants! Off with his pants!" The crowd of girls started to shout, stomping, a few grabbing his arms and legs, attempting to restrain him and keep him down.
Zack squirmed violently, squealing as he did his best to fight the girls and break free, but it seemed there were just too many of them! A few, wearing nothing but towels grabbed a showerhead and started spraying at him, drenching him while other girls were tearing at his clothes. He cried out, panicking, embarrassed, trying to get away. He reached out, fumbling, grabbing hold of the only thing he could find, pulling at it. As whatever he was holding on to seemed to be pulled from whatever had held it, he slowly opened his eyes.
It was as if hours passed, staring at the snow-white fluffy feet, the soft fur still not completely dry. His eyes slowly ventured upwards, all the way to a set of knee's, pressed together, and up further, following the soft curves of a set of well trained thigh's, and a few moments later, his gaze rested on a slit. His throat was dry, he was anxious, quite sure he knew the girl whom he was staring between the legs, but he couldn't keep his eyes from moving upwards still, watching her hips sway ever so slightly, like a straw of grass in the wind. They had not yet widened all that much, the girl also having only just reached puberty, but they made her look unbelievably cute, at least Zack thought so. His eyes found her bellybutton, just underneath her arms, crossed and locked just below a pair of the most sweet little puffy breasts one could ever imagine, as if they'd tried to catch the towel, now laying as a dark blue halo around her feet. They were small and perky, and two cute bright pink nipples poked from the fur, apparently hardened from the sudden chill. Slowly, following her neck, her beautifully curved lips, carved by a god, and her nose, slightly turned upwards in a funny way, that made her look even sweeter. Her cheeks were glowing red as he finally found her eyes. Nikki stared back at him, blushing as much as he did, but.. Her eyes, it was almost like she was looking at him, like, really looking back into his eyes. But the moment ended, she bent down and took the towel, easily pulling it from Zack's hand, and she started slowly backing away, looking almost terrified back at Zack. He wanted to tell her how sorry he was, he really did! He was about to shout at her, but was silenced by a towel pressed to his face, and a hand dragging him to his feet and pulling him from the room.
Zack lay on his bed, on the front even, his butt still burning from the brutal spanking he'd received as a fitting punishment for his little adventure. He had wanted to tell on Robert and Jake, but he figured that being a snitch would do him no good, besides, that barely bothered him anyway. The only thing on his mind right now was Nikki. That look in her eyes as she backed off and disappeared, it felt as though he'd swallowed glowing hot charcoal, he was too depressed and sad to even cry about it, he just hugged his pillow, wondering if he even wanted to live on now, with no hopes of ever talking to her at all. He felt so terrible, and it was getting late before he finally felt asleep, only to relieve the experience in slow motion in his dreams.
The next day wasn't any better, actually, probably even worse after what had happened the day before. Even the teachers seemed to be mocking him, considering him no more than a perverted horny early-teenage dog. He felt even more terrible as everybody would point fingers and laugh at him in every single break along the day.
"Beware of Zap! He might rape you!"
"Shut your curtains or Zap might stare into your bedroom all night!"
"You're such a pig Zap! Eww!"
Everyone, even the older grades seemed to know him all of a sudden, but this was not really the sort of attention he'd wanted. This wasn't the attention anyone would want though, unless something was severely wrong with you.
At the end of the day he had done everything he could to just catch a glimpse of Nikki, wanting to tell her how sorry he was. Actually, after telling his mother what had happened, however awkward it had been, she had just giggled and told him that it was very normal behavior for boys his age, being curios about girls and all. He'd told her how he felt about Nikki, and she had given him a ring before he went to bed, telling him to give it to her whenever he had the chance, and it surely had seen like the best solution, but one thing was considering it, tracking down Nikki was going to be much tougher than he thought.
Finally as they were getting out of the main building, some few still shouting at him, he managed to catch a glimpse of that snow white fur. He ran for it, taking the ring from a pocket in his jacket, clutching it in his hand, his palms sweaty. Finally he did catch up to her, just outside the gates.
"Nikki! N-nikki waih- Pff, wait please!" He called out jogging the last few feet, catching his breath.
Nikki's ears twitched and she eventually halted, turning around, looking as if she felt sort of awkward.
"Z-Zap, wh-what.. What do you want?" She asked, her voice low, looking around nervously.
"Nikki, i.. Uhm.. Ye-yesterday i-i.. It wasn't..-" The blushing boy was interrupted by a group of students behind him.
"Nikki? Is Zap stalking you now?" They asked, grinning and snickering.
"Cant you just.. Leave us al-" "Yes!" A nervous voice called out behind him. "He's totally stalking me! He just wont leave me alone!" She said, something about the worry in her voice that seemed off, like she didn't really believe what she was saying.
Zack didn't even hear what the other said, he had turned around again, looking at Nikki, his mouth partially open, as if he wanted to defend himself, but no, not as much as a 'Huh?' left his lips, he only stood there staring at her, at this girl now avoiding his eyes, looking downwards. He felt as though the world came crashing down, she just couldn't be serious, could she? No.. Just no.. Not like this. Her cast one last look at her, tears welling up in his eyes as he ran, not in any particular direction, he just ran.
She bit her lower lip, looking at him as he went, her mouth opening in a mute gasp, regretting what she had said. The other seemed to have lost interest and left Nikki to feel bad on her own. She stood there, fidgeting a little, before a twinkle on the ground caught her attention. Exactly were Zack had just been, there was now a little silver ring with a heart shaped sapphire in it, blue, like her favorite color. He must've dropped it, she thought, but why did he even.. Oh god.. No.. She felt her stomach turn, a tear trickling down her cheek, feeling so incredibly bad, but not about him, she was utterly disgusted by herself, what had she done?