Spirit and the Little Merman Final Part

Story by Nate the Great1 on SoFurry

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Here's another RP done by me and user bahamut0271 from Discord.

And now, we have peace for everyone, though Spirit still has a few things that he needs closure with that he needs to come clear with Como

Spirit, Dawn and Rain belong to Dreamworks

Story based on Hans Christian Anderson's The Little Mermaid


Spirit and the Little Merman Final Part

Como smiled and giggled as he kissed Spirit deeply. "Spirit... What if I told you that father gave me something that would help you breathe underwater?" he asked as he held up a necklace with a seahorse pendant.

"Really? That would let me breathe underwater?" He asked as they went to the beach.

Como smiled and nodded. "And would allow you your own tail if you like," said Como, "All you have to do is step into the water and tap the pendent three times.”

He grinned. "Let's try it." He chuckled taking the pendant.

Como smiled as he stripped naked and dove into the water then emerged in his mer form.

Spirit stripped and then dove in tapping the pendant three times causing a black and gold tail to take shape instead of his legs. “Whoa!"

"You look even more hotter this way," said Como as he swam up to his lover, "Happy anniversary.”

"Mmm happy anniversary baby." Spirit smiled and kissed him deeply underwater.

They both swam and kissed as their tails touched and then Como led Spirit downward to what appeared to be a coral reef. It was all so colorful and almost like another world. "Remarkable, isn't it?" asked Como looking back.

"It's the second most beautiful thing I've ever seen." Spirit smiled and looked at Como.

"And I want to show you something else," said Como as he led Spirit over to the side to a hidden grotto where he kept most of his treasures from the sunken ships. "This is where I spent most of my time," said Como swimming around the shelves of land dweller objects. "Oh, I remember this. This was my favorite find," said Como as he held up the fork, "Nigel said it was called a 'Gellaf'. Let's just say I was still learning a lot about the surface back then.”

Spirit chuckled as he remembers what Como had done with the forks up above when they met. "Hehe yes, you've learned a whole lot more.”

"I did... And I learned how to love... Ever since I first saw you," said Como snuggling into Spirit's arms.

Spirit smiled happily holding his husband. "And you helped teach me how to love again.”

Como closed his eyes and they both drifted down to the bottom while they kissed and cuddled.

Spirit sighed happily holding his husband and kissing him.

The merman could feel his stallion's cock emerge and poking at the slit in his tail. "Ready to breed your little merman?" asked Como softly.

Spirit grinned and nodded. "Mm how do we do it?”

"Well, you can press your cock inside my cock slit," said Como smiling as he revealed his slit to the stallion above him.

Spirit smiled and slowly slid it inside moaning in pleasure.

Como moaned as he hugged his seahorse lover and kissed him deeply. "Even in this form... Your cock feels huge," moaned Como softly.

"Mmm and you feel just as tight as that first night we had." He moaned and kissed back deeply.

"Our first time... I thought you were under drunken influence at first, but now I know your heart is true," said Como softly.

Spirit nodded and thrusted in all the way and moaning in joy.

Como whimpered as he hugged Spirit when he felt his insides open up and slicken from each thrust.

"Mmm yes baby..." He moaned happily and began to thrust gently.

"Oh... Cum inside me," moaned Como softly as he could feel Spirit's cock rubbing against his.

"Mmm yes, you ready for another kid?" He moans happily and thrusted faster.

"I am," said Como softly moaning and hugging Spirit, "With you, I always am... You're my world and life forever more.”

"Mmm good." He smiled and kissed him deeply as with a final thrust he began to cum hard inside his husband.

Como moaned as he felt his womb fill up with cum again and he came as well kissing Spirit deeply.

Spirit moaned happily as he pumped a gallon of cum into him.

"I love you, Spirit," moaned Como, "I love you so much!" He whimpered as he felt some of the stallion's cum leaking out in tiny white clouds all around the slit.

"Mmm and I love you Como, more than anything," he panted happily and hugged him tightly.

Como smiled as he snuggled into his lover's embrace as they lay in their afterglow. "Happy anniversary, my love," he said softly to the stallion.

"Mmm happy anniversary baby." Spirit sighed happily.

Upon arrival back to the surface, they saw Dawn on the shore kissing the sea king. She was in a two piece swim suit that she hadn't worn in years and it still looked good on her. "What's going on here?" asked Como chuckling as they saw their sons return.

Spirit smirked at this as well. The king smiled and showed the pearl necklace he had given to Dawn. "She said yes.”

Como gasped and smiled as he ran up and hugged them both. "I'm so happy for you both," he said and turned to his father with a smirk, "Looks like I may have rubbed off on you after all, huh?”

"Oh hush you." He laughed and hugged his son in return. Spirit smiled and hugged his mom. "I'm glad we both found happiness again.”

"Perhaps we might give it another go at having some seafoals," said Dawn blushing.

"Hehe good luck." He grinned.

Como smiled and looked to Spirit pulling him into the hug. "Wait till Jamie and Dusk hear about it... Looks like there might be a double wedding," he said and told his father and Dawn about how they found the two boys mated to each other.

Dawn was shocked by this but said it was alright if they were alright with it.

"We are," said Como, "Somehow, I knew those two would be much closer than brothers eventually.”

Spirit nodded. "Mhmm I'm just glad we've all found happiness now.”

"Indeed... And I couldn't have found mine if I hadn't met you," said Como kissing Spirit lightly on the lips.

"Mmm same here." Spirit replied as he returned the kiss.

"Perhaps we could have some fun with our sons too?" whispered Como into Spirit's ear as they walked back to their house.

Spirit chuckled and shook his head. "No let's leave them be. Besides, I don't like sharing." He smirked and slapped his husband's ass.

"Feel up for some shower fun then?" asked Como as they walked through the door and started stripping where they were.

"Mhmm." He grinned and walked into the shower with him after stripping.

Como smiled as he stood there under the water still looking as slim and handsome as the day Spirit first saw him on the beach.

Spirit smirked and kissed him deeply. "Mmm how do you want it?”

"I want to be in your arms always," said Como as he looked up at the stallion as the water ran down both their bodies and Como gently brushed some of Spirit's mane out of the stallion's face.

Spirit smiled and picked Como up and kissed him deeply as his hard cock rubbed up against Como’s asshole.

"Spirit... Is it painful for you to talk about Rain?" asked Como softly, "I know I've never met her, but what was she like?”

"Mmm she was a wonderful mare, she was so beautiful." He sighed softly as he focused on Rain at that moment causing him to stop what he was doing.

Como lay his head on Spirit's chest. "How did you two meet?" he asked.

"Can we talk about this later love? I'm uh kinda in the mood…."

"Of course," said Como, "I'm sorry. It's just... You've been avoiding the question for some time... Does it hurt?”

"A little…"

"I'm sorry," said Como lowering his head and hugging Spirit, "It's just I only wish to know more in order to honor her.”

Spirit nodded and hugged Como tightly. "I understand…"

"But please... Won't you tell me how you first met... Just this once... for me?" asked Como as he cupped Spirit's cheek, "It's been nearly 21 years now.”

"Fine..." He said setting Como down as the mood had gone.

Como snuggled with Spirit, knowing that this was more important than a lustful moment. This was a moment of closure and compassion.

He shut off the shower. "Let's dry off first.”

Como nodded and then dried off as they went to bed and got ready for the story.

Spirit dried off and went to the bed to lay down for the moment to tell it.

"So... Tell me everything, my love," said Como softly, "From the beginning.”

"Well, the way me and her met was when we were very young...we met in elementary school and I guess that's when we fell for each other too...though I didn't know she did until much later.”

-30 years ago-

Rain was in high school and she was making her way to class with some books in her arms and she was just getting to class when she heard her name being called.

Her best friend Spirit was running to catch up to her carrying his bag over his shoulder. "Hey Rain wait up!" He called though tripped over his own foot and went skidding across the floor toward ending at her hooves.

Rain giggled. "Yes, Spirit?" she asked looking at the tall colt who had clearly been working out a lot.

Spirit blushed deeply as he felt so embarrassed. He quickly got up and brushed himself off. "Hehe well I was wondering if you wanted to walk to class together?" He asked her. Just looking at her made his heart beat faster.

"Well, that's very nice of you, but I just arrived at my next class," she said pointing to the door next to her, "But I'd be honored if you could open the door for me.”

He blushed deeper and opened it up for her. "Hehe well alright, so did you still wanna come to my place later and study? I'll get my mom to order us pizza." He promised.

Rain smiled. "I'd love that," she said and gave the colt a kiss on the cheek.

Spirits eyes brighter even more and he shivered at her kiss gaining a goofy grin.

Later after school, Rain was waiting for Spirit to walk her to his place. "Where could he be?" she thought as she sat on a bench and waited.

Spirit had just finished his shower after football practice and was racing to meet Rain. "Shit shit shit! Why did that have to go on so long?!" He groaned as he was pulling his shirt on. Doing so blinded him as he actually ran right past Rain and into the flagpole beside the bench. "Ow!" He groaned falling on his back.

Rain gasped when she heard the clang and rushed over to Spirit looking worried. "Are you okay?" she asked as she lay his head on her lap.

Looking up Spirit blushed and gulped. "Y-yeah...I'm fine....just...feeling like an idiot..." He sighed as he stared up at the beautiful face of his best friend and love interest.

Rain giggled. "You silly goose," she said brushing his hair out of his face, "Come on. It's time we got you home.”

"Y-yeah okay..." He gulped and stood up slowly and grabbing his bag. He then had to pull down his shirt though it Rain still had a chance to see his six pack before he did.

"How did practice go?" asked Rain as they both walked back to Spirit's house. It was a Friday night and Rain was known for sleeping over at Spirit's house.

"It went great. Coach says my throws are getting so good that now he needs to really get the others to run farther just to catch it." He says smiling as he also offered to carry her stuff for her.

"That's good," said Rain before she coughed. Even though she tried to be tough, she had very fragile health that made it difficult to do things.

"You okay Rain? We can stop and rest if you want." Spirit said very worried for her as he gently took her hand to help steady her.

"I'm alright," she said, "I keep forgetting how far your place is.”

"Well is there anything I can do to help make it easier?" He asked her then remember a game they did as kids. He then moved his bag to his front and kneels down holding his hands backwards. "I could give you a piggyback ride?" He smiled.

Rain smiled. "Sure," she said as she climbed onto Spirit's back.

Spirit smiled and stood as he held onto her thick thighs with his hands causing him to blush a bit more. He then shook it off and starts to walk to his home.

He sighed and nodded. "Rain I've really liked you for so long...i...I never knew how to tell you because I was scared you'd reject me…"

"I would never reject you," said Rain cupping the stallion's cheek, "I really like you too.”

Spirits eyes widened as he stared into her eyes. "Y-you do?”

Rain smiled and nodded, "I do.”

Spirit smiled at that then taking a moment of bravery quickly kissed her on the lips softly.

Rain froze but then cupped his face and kissed him back.

Spirit shivered and closed his eyes as he continued to kiss her.

"Wanna take me to the shower?" she asked softly.

He blushed deeply. “I-isn't that a little fast?”

"Says the guy who has a bulge in his pants," said Rain smirking.

"Y-yeah but...wouldn't you want something more romantic?”

"What could be more romantic than having you take care of me?" asked Rain softly.

"Yeah but..." He gulped blushing even more. "I have a perfectly good bed upstairs…"

"Okay, which ever you're most comfortable," said Rain as she snuggled up to the colt.

Spirit gulped and hugged her slowly as he began to relax. Her natural scent making him shiver.

"Shall we?" she asked softly as she reached down to feel his six-pack.

He nodded and stood up reaching out for her hand. "Are you sure about this?”

"I'm very sure," she said.

He nodded and then led her upstairs to his small bedroom that held a twin sized bed.

Rain smiled and cupped Spirit's face kissing him.

Spirit returned the kiss pulling Rain in close. His strong arms wrapping around her.

Rain moaned in the kiss trying her best to strip Spirit's shirt off him.

Spirit smiled then thought of a way to maybe impress her. Gently he pulled her back and then pulled his shirt off easily letting her see his well toned body.

"You're so hot," she said kissing his pecs before moving back to his lips.

He blushed. "Well, your turn...." He told her as he actually really wanted to see her without a shirt.

Rain smiled as she removed her blouse and revealed some supple breasts being held in place by her bra.

He gulped at the sight and his larger bulge showed indeed enjoyed it.

Rain smiled as she then freed her bra and her breasts were in plain view.

Seeing her beautiful breasts pop out like that caused a tearing sound to come from his pants. His cock had torn through his boxers but not his shorts but the bulge indeed showed that it was a strain. "Oh wow…"

Rain smiled as she knelt down to remove both shorts and boxers and began to gently stroke the stallion cock before her and licked along the sides.

Spirit moaned in joy as heavy amounts of pre leaked from the tip. "Mmm Rain...h-how do you know what to do?”

"Well... Let's just say I paid attention to biology class," she said before taking the whole cock into her mouth.

He gasped groaning out as he leaned against his bedroom wall. "Oh fuck..." He panted as his cock throbbed in her mouth.

She kept her mouth on it sucking every last drop that came out of that cock.

He grunted and soon began to erupt long thick ropes of salty musky cum into her waiting mouth. "Mmm Rain!”

She managed to gulp some down before gasping for air panting heavily.

Shuddering Spirit looked down at him. A new glow in his eyes. Slowly he lifted her up. "Your turn." He whispered and laid her on his bed and slowly pulled her own shorts off.

"Do you like what you see?" asked Rain as she spread her legs apart for Spirit.

The scent of her arousal slammed Spirits senses like a truck. He was rock hard once again as he leaned down sniffing it. Slowly he pulled her soaking wet panties aside to see her slit. "Mmm your so wet Rain...hehe your panties are ruined you know…"

Rain looked away. "Stop it," she said, "I can't help it. I'm a girl.”

"I didn't say it was a bad thing..." He smiled and then slowly gave her pussy a lick. Tasting how sweet she was made him lick again and again moaning at the taste.

Rain shuddered and gasped as she felt herself becoming deflowered, "Sp-Spirit... It's my first time," she said softly.

"I'll be gentle don't worry." He whispered licking again.

"I love you," she said bringing his head closer so she could kiss him.

He moved up happily kissing her in return climbing into bed next to her. He then reached under his pillow pulling out a condom.

"Where did you get that?" she asked looking at the condom with surprise.

"My mom got them for me just in case I ever did invite a girl over..." He blushed deeply and slowly unwrapped it.

Rain smirked. "Well, you stallion studs do have a reputation," she teased.

He blushed again and smiled. "Good thing I have this then right?" He asked and then began to slide it over his thick cock.

Rain whimpered in anticipation on what was to come. "Spirit... I've only dreamed of doing this with you," she said.

"Me too Rain. I've always wanted you." He smiled as he moved over her and rubbed his covered cock against her pussy slowly to lube the condom.

The mare whimpered as some of her juices began leaking from her clit and onto the tip of the condom.

"Are you ready?" He asked looking deep into her eyes.

"Yes," said Rain softly, "For you, the answer is always yes.”

Smiling spirit leaned in kissing her deeply as he slowly pushed into her.

Rain whimpered as the cock opened her up and it sent a bolt of both pain and pleasure into her.

Keeping it slow Spirit continued to push into her. "Mmm Rain...your so tight…."

"And you're so big," she whimpered and panted heavily.

Spirit stopped at halfway so she could get used to his size.

Rain was whimpering and she had tears in her eyes as she looked up at Spirit but she felt his lips on hers and she hugged his neck.

Spirit hugged her back and kissed her cheek. He didn't want to hurt Rain so he stayed still till she got used to his size. "Just tell me when your ready." He whispered.

Rain nodded as she nuzzled her face against Spirit's and whispered, "I'm ready.”

Spirit nodded and pressed deeper inside her moaning as he did. Even with the condom acting as a barrier it still felt so warm and tight.

"Oh... Spirit," she moaned softly hugging her true love.

"Mmm Rain I love you..." He moaned happily sinking all the way in as his cock kissed her cervix, the very entrance where if his seed entered then he'd definitely put a baby inside her.

"I love you too.... And I want to have a family with you," she said softly as she cupped Spirit's cheek looking up at his soft brown eyes.

Spirit stared back into Rains blue eyes and panted as he thrusted. "Mmm not yet...maybe one day…"

Rain nodded as she kissed Spirit deeply as she could feel her insides grow wetter.

Spirit grunted as he felt himself growing closer and began to thrust faster.

Rain whimpered as her inner walls grew tighter and tighter by the minute.

"Mmm rain...I'm gonna cum..." He moaned as he held her tightly and thrusted even faster.

"Yes... Cum inside me!" she moaned hugging Spirit's neck.

With a final thrust Spirit began to cum inside the condom filling like a balloon. Thankfully it was specially designed for stallions so that not a single drop escaped.

Rain whimpered and then her juices began to squirt around Spirit's cock and she let out a loud cry before laying back down on the bed panting.

Spirit collapsed on top of her laying his head next to hers. "Oh wow..." He panted as he shuddered.

"That was... Good," she panted as she watched Spirit pull his cock out with the condom.

As he did so the tip of the condom was filled to the brim with his cum and he smiled. "That felt amazing…you're amazing…"

"And I can't wait to have your foals someday," she said smiling. The years passed and both Spirit and Rain stood at the altar as they were announced husband and wife and they kissed deeply.

Another 4 years passed where Spirit was sitting next to Rain’s hospital bed holding her hand and crying. "I...I don't know how to go on without you Rain..."

"Don't worry, Spirit," she said softly, "You have Jamie to look after... And I will always watch over you both. You are brave and kind, Spirit. And if you ever feel lonely, always remember that love will find a way.”

Spirit cried even more and kissed her hand. "I'll never forget you...I'll always love you Rain…"

"And I love you too," she said as Dawn and Jamie came in. Rain smiled as she caressed her son gently.

Jamie hugged his mother tightly not fully understanding what was happening.

"Mommy has to go, Jamie," she said softly, "I want you to remember to always have courage and be kind. Will you do that for me?”

Jamie nodded. "Y-yes mommy…"

"I must go very soon, my dear," she said softly, "Please forgive me for leaving you.”

He cried and hugged her tighter. "Please don't go mommy..." Spirit cried but slowly took his son and hugged him against him.

"Remember that I will always love you," said Rain softly as she wanted to hold Jamie and Spirit one last time.

Her husband and Jamie both hugged Rain tightly.

Rain had one single tear in her eye as she held them close before she closed her eyes whispering, "I love you." Then she lay back never to wake again.

-Back in the present-

Spirit had begun to cry and held Como tightly.

Como hugged Spirit stroking his back. "I'm sorry," he said, "It must've been hard for you both. I was told that my mother died giving birth to me... It broke my father's heart to lose her and that's why he always told me to be careful.”

"I've always remembered all the good she did...I've always wanted to keep doing good..”

Soon, Como too had tears as he buried his face into Spirit's chest sobbing. "What have I done? I wanted to bring you joy this night, but instead I brought you sorrow and grief. Forgive me," he whimpered.

“No Como it's fine....I should have told you that long ago..." He sighed.

"I love you, Spirit," said Como, "Even though I'm not Rain, I'm just happy you accepted me for who I am: a little merman who loves you.”

"And I love you Como, I know you’re not Rain. I'm glad I did meet you and fell in love with you." He sighed and hugged Como tightly.

Como closed his eyes as he kissed Spirit. This kiss wasn't out of lust like so many times before, but it was out of love for his stallion as their cocks grew hard again.

Spirit returned the kiss happily as he held Como tightly. "I love you...." He sighed.

"I love you too," said Como softly as he crawled above Spirit and then lowered himself onto the stallion's hard cock. Ever so slowly, he lowered himself further down upon the hard shaft.

Spirit gasped moaning softly and closing his eyes.

Como moaned softly as he felt his cock throb and he placed his hands on Spirit's chest as he leaned down to kiss the stallion.

Spirit returned the kiss moaning as he held Como’s hips and helped bounce him up and down.

Como whimpered as he went up and down with his own cock bouncing along with him.

"Mmm Como..." He moaned and hugged him tightly as he thrusted up.

The human hugged the stallion kissing him deeply as he felt close to climax. "I love you," he whimpered, "I love you so much.”

"Mmm I love you too..." He grunted hugging tightly as he rolled them so he was now on top of Como and thrusting down into him quickly.

Como panted as he could feel himself growing closer to climax. "I'm gonna cum!" he cried out.

"Mmm me too! Here it comes!" He cried out before burying himself deep inside Como and cumming hard.

The flow of cum caused Como to also cum and it splattered all over his chest. He pulled Spirit down for a long, deep kiss.

Spirit happily kissed him deeply as he held Como tightly.

When they both fell asleep, Spirit began dreaming and in the dream, Rain appeared before him. "Hello, my love," she said with a warm smile.

"Rain?" Spirit asked in shock and quickly ran to her.

She hugged him and kissed his lips. "I came to see how you and Jamie were holding up... And looks like you've held up well," she said, "I knew I made the right choice of guiding Como to you... Even if he didn't realize it.”

"Wait you helped guide Como to me?" He gasped and kissed her return as he held her. "I've missed you so much…"

"I've always been looking after you, Spirit," she said, "Even when I passed away, I was always watching over you.”

He sighed and held her tightly. "I still love you Rain, I always will.”

"And I love you," she said hugging Spirit, "And now, you have someone who loves you just as much as I do. That is the reason I sent you to Como.”

He nodded sighing. "Thank you for that. And now our son also has love as well.”

"I know," chuckled Rain, "True, I wasn't expecting him to fall in love with his brother, but if he's happy, I'm happy.”

"As am I...I wish you could have been here more though..." He sighed.

"But I am here... In your heart," she said placing a hand on his chest, "Even though we are apart, I will always be with you.”

He nodded and kissed her deeply. "I know. I wish I had confess my love to you earlier too though.”

"I know," she said caressing his face and kissing him in return, "But we can't hold onto our past pains forever. You have a husband and a family who love and need you. Live for them, my darling.”

He nodded and smiled as he slowly let her go. "I know and I will.”

"Just know I will always love and watch over you, Spirit," she said, "I love you, dearest.”

"And I love you my sweet Rain.”

She smiled and slowly backed away into a bright light and that was when the stallion woke up next to Como, who was still asleep.

Spirit sighed but then smiled and hugged Como close as he closed his eyes and went back to sleep happy to have a wonderful family.

The End